内容正文:
应用文写作训练
一、 信函
写作套路:
首段:自我介绍(日常寒暄)+写信背景(了解到困扰、通知的具体信息、活动情况、得到好消息,遇到困难)+写信目的(提出建议、通知、邀请、感谢、求助)
中间段:围绕要点写作
注意点:避免遗漏要点,必要时增加细节,使用逻辑词,句式多变, 恰当的时态和语态
尾段:重提主题+表达祝愿、期待、等待回复
1)建议信
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
范文:
Dear Worried,
I am Jamie, editor of the HEART-TO-HEART column in our school English newspaper. Learning from your letter that your study and life are being affected by losing temper recently, I am writing to share with you my personal suggestions and perspectives.
Bearing so much academic pressure, you tend to lose temper, which is quite a normal thing for teenagers like you. Consequently, there is no need to worry about it. In my opinion, first of all, you should talk with your close frineds, from whom you might get spiritual comfort. Additonally, to relieve your physical and mental stress, not noly should you keep regular exercise, but also you should listen to some soft music.
In a word, I sincerely hope that my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you and hope you recover soon.
Yours Sincerely
Lihua
2)告知信
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.内容:学习唐诗;
3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
范文:
Dear Leslie,
How is everything going with you lately? Learning from your last letter that you are curious about the arrangement for the next class, I am writing to inform you of the specific details.
First, the next class will take place at the student center on June 10th, which is convenient for both of us. What's more, as you have expected, Tang Poems are the main topic for the next class. Not only can you expand your Chinese vocabulary, but also you can expose yourself to traditional Chinese culture in the process. Finally, to have a better understanding, you are advised to learn about the history of Tang Dynasty in advance.
Any further question is expected and I stick to the belief that you will definitely enjoy a meaningful and entertaining class.
Yours Sincerely
Lihua
3)邀请信
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;
2.活动安排;
3.欢迎Allen表演节目
范文:
Dear Allen,
How is everything going with you lately?Learning that a music festival will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
First, the music festival will be held from June 10th to June 14th, lasting for 5days, which is convenient for most students. Furthermore, in this festival, not only can you hear our school music club sing popular songs,but also you can admire classical Chinese opera given by local bands. Finally, I highly recommend that you participate in this meaningful and entertaining activity and give your own performance, which will help you make more friends and relieve mental pressure.
I sincerely hope you will accept my invitation,and I am looking forward to your arrival.
Yours Sincerely
Lihua
4)求助信
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导,邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going with you lately? Learning that you may have spare time recently, I am writing to ask for your generous help.
In order to enrich our extra-curricular life, my classmates and I adapted a short English play from an article in our textbook days ago, which tells the story of a man's experiences and feelings when traveling in Britain. However,considering it is our first attempt at this formal writing, we are afraid that there may be careless mistakes in word usage and format.Consequently,I wonder whether it is convenient for you to meet us and offer some necessary suggestions at the student center at 2 pm this Friday.
I will appreciate it if you could lend me a hand and I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours Sincerely
Lihua
二、演讲稿
写作套路:
首段:自我介绍+表达荣幸+表明主题
中间段:注意点:避免遗漏要点,必要时增加细节,使用逻辑词,句式多变, 恰当的时态和语态
尾段:表达祝愿、期待、感谢
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);
2.谈谈收获与感想;
3.表达祝愿与期望。
范文:
Dear all,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. Representing all the fellow students in our school, I feel privileged to address the speech in front of everyone to share with you my personal experiences and reflections.
First,not only did we actively involve ourselves in learning activities and sports games, but also we exchanged our thoughts on school life and art. Second,without your generous and patient help, we would never have improved our English nor increased our knowledge about the English culture.
I sincerely hope you will have a safe journey home,and we are looking forward to keeping in close touch with you.
三 通知
写作套路:
首段:打招呼+通知内容
中间段:注意点:避免遗漏要点,必要时增加细节,使用逻辑词,句式多变, 恰当的时态和语态
尾段:表达期待
你受学生会的委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知请大家观看一部英文短片 Growing together, 内容包括:
1.短片的内容:学校的发展;
2.谈谈收获与感想;
3.表达祝愿与期望。
范文 :
Boys and girls, may I have your attention,please? The Student Union intends to invite all the students to enjoy a short English video named Growing Together.
First, the video will briefly introduce the development history of our school. Not only will you learn about the critical moments from some old photos, but also you will have the chance to hear life stories from important persons who made contributions to our school. Additionally, the video is arranged to be shown in Room 101,Teaching Building from 8 am to 10 am this Friday. Any comments or suggestions on this short video are expected.
I sincerely hope you will enjoy a good time. For further details, please contact us.
The Student Union
记叙文
写作套路:
首段 :人物 (事件)简介 ,时间地点人物 + 个人感受
中间段:1.
2. 注意点:避免遗漏要点,必要时增加细节,使用逻辑词,句式多变, 恰当的时态和语态
尾段:升华主题
一 征文投稿--写人
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因;
范文:
Among the many people who have caused a positive influence on me, my favorite one is Miss Li, my teacher, patient and considerate, always wearing a pair of glasses.Strict as she is sometimes, she taught me knowledge and wisdom about growth.
In the first year of high school,so challenging to me was English that I almost gave up after struggling for a long time. Then, it was she who helped me with my problems.Not only did she share with me efficient learning approaches, but also she helped me develop a good learning habit. Finally,I had a keen interest in English,making continuous progress.
If it hadn't been for the guidence she gave me, I would never have made huge progress nor led fulfilling high school years that were meaningful and entertaining.
二 征文投稿--写事
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受吧
范文:
Last weekend, my class went to a picking activity on the farm.Tired as we were, we felt satisfied and overjoyed.
Bathed in warm sunshine and located in the east of the city,the farm is big enough to contain various fruit trees. Picking the fruit alone at the beginning, we wasted much time and the process was going slowly. At that time,it was advised that we should work in a team, in which case, we could improve the efficiency by our efforts. As a consequence, not only did we finish the task soon, but also we made new friends.
If it hadn't been for this activity, we would never have realized the importance of team spirit.
三 新闻稿
假如你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参加人员:
2.跑步路线,从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响
范文 :
Last Sunday, our school launched a Cross-Country Running Race in which many of us participated. Tired/ Exhausted as we were, we felt rather satisfied and overjoyed.
The participants were mainly students from our school, each of whom had a great passion for physical fitness programs. The route, covering a long distance of 5 kilometers, started from the school gate to the foot of the South Mountain.Many of us appreciated this activity and expected more in the future. Not only did we make more friends, but also we relieved our mental pressure.
If it hadn't been for this Cross-Country Running Race, I would never have realized the importance of perseverance.
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