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第二节(满分 25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。
As a doctor, I am also expert in communicating with patients. Patients trust me and would like to share their stories with me. Of course, I prefer to be their listeners, sharing their difficulty, worry,fear as well as struggle. I clearly remember an experience that began the journey of being a listener to my patients.
Ten years ago, I was a medical student in a university. It happened when I was busy gathering data(资料)for my graduation paper on The Most Important Communication Skills to Patients.
On a cold raining evening, I was in the ward(病房)searching for the final female patient, Mrs. Green, to complete my paper. Holding a patient questionnaire, I walked towards her room. I didn't see any doctors or nurses; the ward was quiet. With the dim light, I could see heavy raindrops through the window.
She was lying on bed, still very weak, with no relatives around. I sat down on a chair next to her bed, and began to introduce myself politely. Luckily, she agreed with a nod. Soon she started talking about her story. She had three children in primary school, who were staying with a neighbour then. Her husband died a year ago and she was the only breadwinner of her family as a cleaner.
I had no idea how to comfort her. Looking into her eyes, I tried my best to remember the communication skills that I had learned earlier. But still my mind was blank. I regretted not paying more attention. I could do nothing but hold her hands, while listening to her quietly. Suddenly I realized she might not expect any reply from me. My listening alone was enough. Our conversation lasted for about 50 minutes. I could feel her difficulty, her worry, her fear as well as her struggle. Finally, she let go of my hand, with a sincere thank you. I stood up, covered her with a blanket, and waved goodbye.
注意:1.续写词数应为100左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few days later, I returned to see Mrs. Green.
Step 1. 引导问题:
1. What is the theme of the passage?
(Listening makes a difference)
2. How to highlight such a topic?
(Mrs. Green became better because of listening and this experience also shaped me.)
Step 2. 语言组织
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这一次,她靠在床上的枕头上坐得很直,看起来稍微强壮了一点,虽然仍然有些苍白。
This time she ____________________________________in bed, looking a little stronger, though still pale.
KEY ACTION: COMMUNICATION & LISTENING
感谢:①当她看到我时,脸上露出了光彩,微微一笑。“再次感谢你几天前的倾听,”她轻声说道,向我投来感激的目光。
When she saw me,___________________ and _________________ appeared. "Thank you again for your listening several days earlier," she said ___________ and ____________________.
再次交流:②我再次坐在她身旁,我们开始交谈,不仅仅是关于她的病情,还聊到了她的生活和她面临的挑战。
I sat down beside her _______, and we began to talk, _____________ about her condition ______ about her life and the challenges she was facing.
再次交流我的变化:③这一次,我意识到我的角色不是提供解决方案,而是陪伴她,提供一个她可以毫无保留地表达自己感受的空间。
This time, I realized that my role wasn’t to offer solutions, but to be there for her, providing a space __________ she could ____________________________.
Theme:
在那一刻,我真正理解了倾听的力量。有时候,不是正确的言语起到作用,而是那份陪伴才真正重要。
At that moment, I truly understood the power of listening. ; sometimes, ____________
_______________________________________________________.
(锦上添花句:当我那天离开她的房间时,我明白了这次经历不仅塑造了我作为医生的身份,更塑造了我作为一个能够提供关怀与同情的人。
As I left her room that day, I knew that this experience had __________ me, not just as a doctor, but as someone who could offer more than medical care—someone who could _____________.)
答案
LINK Sentence
This time she was sitting upright against the pillows in bed, looking a little stronger, though still pale.
KEY ACTION: COMMUNICATION & LISTENING
感谢:①When she saw me, her face lit up and a faint smile appeared. "Thank you for your listening several days earlier," she said softly and shot me a grateful look.
再次交流:②I sat down beside her again, and we began to talk, not just about her condition but about her life and the challenges she was facing.
再次交流我的变化:③This time, I realized that my role wasn’t to offer solutions, but to be there for her, providing a space where she could express her feelings without judgment.
Theme:
At that moment, I truly understood the power of listening. It wasn’t always the right words that mattered; sometimes, it was just being present that made a difference.
(锦上添花句:As I left her room that day, I knew that this experience had shaped me, not just as a doctor, but as someone who could offer more than medical care—someone who could offer compassion.)
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