读后续写--用诗歌点亮希望：我为母亲参赛记 讲义 -江苏省如皋市2024-2025学年高三上学期教学质量调研(二)英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My father was a trader who was known for his honesty and wisdom. He was different from all other men in our village. He valued education and I was one of the very few girls who received education though my family wasn’t well off then. I loved learning new things as a girl and my favourite day of a week was Thursday, for I would sit beside my grandfather who would recite many poems by famous poets. My favourite poet of all was Lord Byron whose poems made me dive into another world of beauty. I loved the way he chooses words that can easily lift me up and make me forget everything around me. I imitated him and started writing poems by myself, I felt it was something I could continue doing for the rest of my life. With several years’ effort, I had written a stack of(一沓) poems. I found my heart in words and enjoyed writing, poems more and more. One day, while I was helping my grandfather milk the cow, I overheard our neighbours telling my father about a poetry competition, whose winner would get 3,000 pounds. That was good news! At that time my mother became very ill, and the doctor who diagnosed (诊断) her with a serious disease said her condition was growing worse and worse. He suggested that she should have an operation as soon as possible. Unfortunately, our financial state kept deteriorating (恶化); we didn’t have enough money for such an operation. I thought if I won the prize of this poetry competition, I could easily have the money for my mother’s surgery. Hearing my ambitious idea, my father expressed full support for it. So I took out all my poems that were put under my bed, selected one poem from them and registered for the competition. I could barely wait for the competition results. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 第一段：The big day came----my father and I went to the studio where the prize distribution was taking place. 第二段：Then we rushed to the hospital to deliver the great news to my mother. 文章大意 父亲是个诚实智慧的商人，重视教育，“我” 虽是女孩但也接受了教育。“我” 喜爱学习，最喜欢听祖父朗诵诗歌，尤其喜欢拜伦的诗，自己也开始写诗。母亲病重，家里没钱给她做手术，“我” 得知有个诗歌比赛，冠军奖金 3000 英镑，在父亲支持下参赛，期待结果。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：父亲支持 “我” 参赛，家里急需奖金给母亲治病。 回应：续写中可写比赛结果，如果获奖，就有钱给母亲治病；若没获奖，父亲可能会安慰 “我”。 · 伏笔：“我” 对比赛结果的期待。 回应：在第一段描述等待结果和公布结果时 “我” 的紧张与激动，以及结果对家庭的影响。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：紧张、期待、兴奋或失落。“我” 和父亲到达颁奖现场，心情紧张，等待结果时充满期待，得知结果后或因获奖而兴奋，或因未获奖而失落。 · 故事线：描述现场氛围，主持人宣布结果，若 “我” 获奖，描述领奖过程和周围人的祝贺；若未获奖，描述 “我” 的难过和父亲的安慰。 第二段 · 情感线：喜悦、希望。不管结果如何，把消息告诉母亲时，都希望她能感到欣慰和充满希望。 · 故事线：到达医院，告诉母亲比赛结果，如果获奖，说有希望治病了；若未获奖，说还有其他办法，一家人要坚强。 情感线 · 第一段：紧张（到达现场）、期待（等待结果）、兴奋 / 失落（得知结果） · 第二段：喜悦（好结果时）/ 安慰（坏结果时）、希望（对母亲病情） 故事线 · 第一段：参加诗歌比赛颁奖（等待和得知结果） · 第二段：将结果告知母亲 主旨升华句 1. In the face of difficulties, hope and love are the driving forces that keep us going.（面对困难时，希望和爱是让我们继续前行的动力。） 2. Sometimes, a dream can be a beam of light in the darkest hour of our family.（有时候，一个梦想可以成为我们家庭最黑暗时刻的一束光。） 3. Love for family can turn our passion into the power to overcome obstacles.（对家庭的爱可以将我们的热情转化为克服障碍的力量。） 4. When we fight for our loved ones, every effort counts, no matter the outcome.（当我们为所爱的人奋斗时，无论结果如何，每一份努力都有价值。） 5. A family's bond grows stronger in the pursuit of hope during hardships.（在艰难困苦中追求希望的过程中，家庭的纽带会变得更牢固。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: The big day came----my father and I went to the studio where the prize distribution was taking place. The place was filled with people. I was so nervous that my palms were sweating. When the host finally announced the winner, my heart almost stopped. It was me! I couldn't believe it. I walked onto the stage with trembling legs, and as I received the prize, the applause was deafening. My father had tears in his eyes. Paragraph 2: Then we rushed to the hospital to deliver the great news to my mother. When we told her, she smiled weakly but happily. She said she knew I could do it. The money meant hope for her recovery. We hugged each other, filled with joy and relief. At that moment, I felt the power of love and hope within our family. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: The big day came----my father and I went to the studio where the prize distribution was taking place. The atmosphere was tense. I could feel my heart pounding as the host began to announce the winner. But it wasn't me. I felt a sharp pang of disappointment. My father put his arm around me and said that I was still great. I tried to hold back my tears. Paragraph 2: Then we rushed to the hospital to deliver the great news to my mother. We told her that although I didn't win, we still had hope. We would find other ways to get the money for her operation. Mother's eyes were moist. She said she was proud of me. We held hands, determined to face the future together as a family. 读后续写参考答案 The big day came — my father and I went to the studio where the prize distribution was taking place. I never felt more anxious and nervous. The moment the man on stage announced me as the winner of the 3.000 pounds, I was filled with an incredible sense of excitement. As I made my way from the stage, I could see tears of joy in my dad’s eyes and I could feel how proud he was of me. “If only my mother were here to witness me receiving the award!” I thought. Then we rushed to the hospital to deliver the great news to my mother. Learning about the good news, she hugged me tightly. The operation afterwards went well and my mother’s condition got better and better. A deep sense of relief and satisfaction washed over me because I had made the right decision. Encouraged by my family, I have firmly resolved to pursue a professional career as a poet, devoting myself to writing more poems that bring joy and enrichment to others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$