2025届高考英语读后续写专题之人与物品类--爷爷的旧椅子:爱的传承与守护 讲义

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。                            Grandpa’s Old Chair     It was the annual cleaning day for the family. John and his mom were busy cleaning the house. They cleaned upstairs, downstairs, inside and outside until everything was spotless. Exhausted, they sank into the couch. Just then, John’s mom noticed an old chair that was faded (褪色的) and worn. That chair was for John’s grandpa, who had lived with them since John’s grandma had died. “John, come and help me.” John’s mom sprang (跳) to her feet. “We’ll take the chair outside. The garbage truck is picking up on our block tomorrow.”     As they attempted to move the chair, John’s grandpa made his way through the door. Seeing what was happening, he quickly tried to stop them. “No!” he protested. “You can’t take my chair.”     “But it’s so old...” John’s mom argued. “We’ll buy you a new one.”     “No,” he persisted, trying to push his chair back into place.     John’s mom finally let go of the chair and left the room. With a sigh of relief, the old man sank into his chair and closed his eyes.     “Grandpa, why won’t you let us get rid of the chair?” John asked.     “You don’t understand, John.” His grandpa shook his head and said, “I sat in this chair with your grandma right here when I asked her to marry me. And I sat in this chair the night your father was born. Many years later,” Grandpa’s voice broke, “I sat in this chair when the doctor called and told me that your grandma was ill. I was lost without her, but the chair gave me comfort and warmth.” The old man’s sadness seemed to grow as he recalled that fateful (重大的) day.     “I understand now.” John looked at his grandpa and said, “This is not just any old chair. It is more like a friend.”     “Yes,” he nodded. “We’ve gone through a lot together.”     However, that night, when John and his grandpa were asleep, John’s mom and dad carried the chair outside. It was a starless night. Spring had retreated and snow fell silently from the black sky and covered Grandpa’s chair in a blanket of white. 注意:续写词数应为150个左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next morning John was woken up by the garbage truck pulling up to the house. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing this, John’s mom looked at his grandpa and slowly walked towards him. ——————————————————————————— ________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 在家庭年度大扫除日,约翰和妈妈准备扔掉爷爷的旧椅子,爷爷极力阻拦,向约翰讲述了这把椅子承载着他和奶奶的珍贵回忆,以及在人生重要时刻椅子带给他的安慰。然而当晚,趁爷爷和约翰睡着,爸爸妈妈还是把椅子搬到了外面。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔:爷爷对椅子深厚的情感。 回应:续写中约翰试图阻止垃圾车运走椅子,强调椅子对爷爷的重要性。 · 伏笔:妈妈之前坚持扔掉椅子。 回应:妈妈听到爷爷的故事后态度转变,可能会把椅子搬回。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线:紧张、急切,担心椅子被垃圾车运走。 · 故事线:约翰醒来看到垃圾车,急忙跑去阻止,向垃圾清运工解释椅子对爷爷的特殊意义。 · 伏笔呼应:体现约翰对爷爷情感的理解和尊重。 第二段 · 情感线:愧疚、感动。 · 故事线:妈妈被爷爷的故事打动,意识到椅子的价值,向爷爷道歉并把椅子搬回。 · 主旨升华线:珍视有情感价值的物品,理解长辈的情感,亲情中的理解与包容。 情感线 · 紧张急切(约翰阻止垃圾车运走椅子) · 愧疚感动(妈妈的转变) 故事线 · 阻止运走(约翰保护椅子) · 情感转变(妈妈的行动) 主旨升华句 1. Every old object holds a story, a piece of our loved ones' hearts.(每一个旧物件都承载着一个故事,一份我们所爱之人的心意。) 2. We should respect the sentimental value of things that bind our family's memories.(我们应该尊重那些联结家庭记忆之物的情感价值。) 3. True understanding in a family is to cherish the treasures of our elders' hearts.(家庭中的真正理解是珍惜长辈心中的珍宝。) 4. Sometimes, an old chair isn't just furniture; it's a vessel of love and history.(有时候,一把旧椅子不只是家具,它是爱与历史的容器。) 5. In the embrace of family, we learn to value the intangible wealth of memories.(在家庭的怀抱中,我们学会珍视记忆这笔无形的财富。) 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: The next morning John was woken up by the garbage truck pulling up to the house. He jumped out of bed and rushed outside. “Stop! Don't take the chair!” he shouted. The garbage collectors looked at him in surprise. John explained how much the chair meant to his grandpa. His eyes were filled with desperation as he pleaded with them to leave the chair. Paragraph 2: Hearing this, John’s mom looked at his grandpa and slowly walked towards him. She said softly, “I'm sorry. I didn't understand.” She went outside with John and brought the chair back. Grandpa's eyes lit up with joy. From then on, the chair remained in its place, a symbol of love and family memories. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: The next morning John was woken up by the garbage truck pulling up to the house. Panic - stricken, he ran towards the truck, barefoot and in his pajamas. “That chair can't go!” he yelled. He told the workers about the chair's history, how it was filled with his grandpa's love and memories. Tears welled up in his eyes as he begged them to spare the chair. Paragraph 2: Hearing this, John’s mom looked at his grandpa and slowly walked towards him. She hugged him tightly and said, “I was wrong. We'll keep the chair forever.” She then went to the truck, retrieved the chair, and placed it back inside. The family gathered around the chair, realizing the true value of the memories it held. 参考答案     The next morning John was woken up by the garbage truck pulling up to the house. Drowsily looking out of the window, he spotted the garbage collectors carrying Grandpa’s chair onto the truck. Dashing downstairs, he was just in time to save it from being taken away. The noise drove Mum and Dad downstairs, who found it hard to understand what their son had done. John was patiently explaining to his confused parents what the old chair meant to Grandpa when the old man rushed out to desperately search for his “treasure”. Seeing the chair blanketed in snow and realizing what had happened, Grandpa gratefully held John into his arms. “Taking away my chair is taking away my life!” announced Grandpa in a trembling voice.     Hearing this, John’s mom looked at his grandpa and slowly walked towards him. She apologized for her stupid decision, adding that she and Dad had thought John’s frugal grandpa deserved a more decent and comfortable chair. She never expected their good intention to have hurt him so much. Overwhelmed by guilt, Mum and Dad brushed off the snow, carried the chair inside and had it fixed. After a narrow escape, the old chair with a new life stood where it used to be. Grandpa fondly touched every inch of the chair like a boy who had just recovered his favorite lost toy. His watery eyes twinkled with growing affection. What a tiger sniffing the rose in him! Outside, the sun was rising, the snow melting. Grandma in heaven must be deeply touched! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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