读后续写--圣诞小塑像：承载着对妈妈的感恩 讲义-江苏省盐城市2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was 13, I had an awareness that moms shoulder a lot of responsibility without a lot of reward. My mom was no exception. She brought us to Union Station to help us buy Christmas presents for each other-and for her. Because of Mom, my siblings（兄弟姐妹） and I would get to experience the joy of giving. I wanted to find her something special. The pleasant smell of chocolate reached my nose and I wanted to stay. Normally, when we came here, the candy makers were what I wanted to see most, but today I had a mission. So, we walked on. We explored many stores selling jewelry, purses, toys, clothing and treats, but nothing caught my eye. I just wanted something unique for Mom. I didn't know what, but I knew I would recognize it when I saw it. Meanwhile, I wondered even though she promised to not look while we went shopping, how would whatever I picked be a surprise? All of a sudden, there it was, the perfect gift for her! On one of the stands sat a figurine （小塑像）ofa lion and lamb lying down together. It would go well with a drawing of a similar scene Mom had hung on the wall. I had heard her talk about how long she had owned the picture and who had drawn it for her. I knew it was very special. I turned the figurine over to check the price and couldn’t believe my eyes. I could afford it! Mom didn't know it, but I had put some extra money in my pocket from babysitting the neighbor kids, so I had more money than what she had given me. But she was standing nearby. No way could I make the purchase without her knowing. A moment later, she noticed the very same figurine. I watched her eyes light up. She picked it up and turned it over. 注意: （1）续写词数应为150个左右; （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 第一段：Then she put it down disappointedly after seeing the price. 第二段：I placed it under the tree and settled in to wait for Christmas morning. 文章大意 13 岁时，“我” 意识到妈妈承担了很多责任却很少得到回报，妈妈带 “我们” 去联合车站买圣诞礼物，“我” 想给妈妈找个特别的礼物。一路上 “我” 看了很多商店都没找到心仪的，最后发现了一个和妈妈墙上挂的画场景相似的狮子和小羊的小塑像，“我” 能买得起，但妈妈在附近，没法悄悄买。后来妈妈也看到了这个小塑像，她拿起看了价格后又放下了。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：“我” 有给邻居看孩子攒下的额外钱。 回应：续写中可以用这笔钱买下小塑像。 · 伏笔：小塑像和妈妈墙上的画相似且对妈妈意义特殊。 回应：“我” 买下它作为给妈妈的礼物，体现礼物的珍贵。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：妈妈的失望，“我” 看到妈妈失望后的心疼和决心。 · 故事线：妈妈因价格贵放下小塑像，可能会说些遗憾的话，“我” 决定找机会回去买下它。 · 伏笔呼应：为 “我” 回去买小塑像做铺垫。 第二段 · 情感线：期待、兴奋。 · 故事线：把小塑像放在圣诞树下等待圣诞节早晨妈妈看到礼物的时刻。 · 主旨升华线：体现对妈妈的爱和感恩，礼物背后是对妈妈付出的回报。 情感线 · 失望（妈妈看到价格后的情绪） · 心疼、决心（“我” 看到妈妈失望后的情感和想法） · 期待、兴奋（等待圣诞节妈妈看到礼物时的心情） 故事线 · 放弃购买（妈妈因价格放下小塑像） · 决定购买（“我” 打算回去买） · 放置礼物（把小塑像放在树下等圣诞节） 主旨升华句 1. Love is not just a feeling, but also the action of giving the most precious gift.（爱不只是一种感觉，也是送出最珍贵礼物的行动。） 2. A small gift can hold great love when it's filled with gratitude.（当一个小礼物充满感激时，它能承载伟大的爱。） 3. The best presents are those that come from the heart to repay the selfless love of our mothers.（最好的礼物是那些发自内心来回报母亲无私之爱的礼物。） 4. In the gift for Mom, there lies our deep - rooted love and recognition of her sacrifice.（在给妈妈的礼物中，蕴含着我们对她牺牲的深爱和认可。） 5. A meaningful gift is a warm embrace to Mom's tired soul.（一个有意义的礼物是对妈妈疲惫灵魂的温暖拥抱。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: Then she put it down disappointedly after seeing the price. She said softly with a sigh, "It's really beautiful, but it's a bit too expensive." I could see the longing in her eyes despite her words. My heart ached at that moment. I made up my mind that I would come back later to buy it for her, as a surprise that she truly deserved. Paragraph 2: I placed it under the tree and settled in to wait for Christmas morning. Every day I passed by the tree, I could hardly contain my excitement at the thought of Mom's face when she opened the gift. It was more than just a figurine; it was a token of my love for her and my gratitude for all she had done. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: Then she put it down disappointedly after seeing the price. She murmured that it was lovely but cost too much. I saw the disappointment cloud her face. I pretended not to notice. Inside, I was determined to make this figurine hers. When she walked away to another store, I quickly went back, paid for it with my extra money, and hid it in my bag. Paragraph 2: I placed it under the tree and settled in to wait for Christmas morning. I felt a thrill of anticipation as I imagined her unwrapping it. This small statue was a symbol of our bond. I knew it would mean the world to her, just as she meant the world to me. I couldn't wait to see her eyes shine with joy. 读后续写参考答案： Then she put it down disappointedly after seeing the price. Letting out a sigh, she walked away, her eyes still lingering on it. I could tell how much she loved it but I knew she wouldn’t buy. Determined to give her a surprise, I waited until she was out of sight and quickly made the purchase. My heart beat fast as I thought about what a surprise this would be on Christmas morning. With the figurine in my bag, I went home with my family. I placed it under the tree and settled in to wait for Christmas morning. The day finally came. My siblings and I tore into the treats and treasures our parents had lovingly put inside stockings and brightly wrapped packages. Then we began presenting gifts to parents. When my mom unwrapped my gift, she recognized the figurine instantly, and her face lit up with surprise and joy. She turned to me and hugged me tightly with tears in her eyes. Seeing her happy made me realize the joy of giving. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$