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阅读下面材料，根据内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was a single parent of four small children, working at a minimum-wage job. Money was always tight, but we had a roof over our heads, food on the table, clothes on our backs, and if not a lot, always enough—compared to those who lost their jobs and are really having a tough time just to get by.     It was Christmas time, and although there wasn't money for a lot of gifts, we planned to celebrate,driving down town to see the Christmas lights, having special dinners with my friends, and decorating our rooms back home.     But the biggest excitement for the kids was the fun of Christmas shopping at a mall. They talked and planned for weeks ahead of time, asking each other what they wanted for Christmas. I dreaded it. I had saved $120 for presents to be shared by all five of us.     The big day came and we started out early.We had just arrived at the shopping mall when we saw a little girl pulling her father, a poorly-dressed man, into the mall happily. I gave each of my four kids a twenty dollar bill and reminded them to look for gifts they liked. Then everyone scattered happily.They had two hours to shop then we would meet back at the parking lot. Back in the car driving home, everyone was in high spirits, laughing and teasing each other with hints and clues about what they had bought. My younger daughter,Ginger, about eight years old, was unusually quiet. I noted she had only one small, flat bag with her after her precious shopping time. I could see enough through the plastic bag to tell that she had bought almost nothing, only fifty cents’ worth of candies! 注意：续写词数应为150左右；   第一段：“What did you do with that twenty dollar bill I gave you?” I was so angry. 第二段："I only had enough money left to buy some candies for us." Ginger continued with her head drooping. 文章大意 “我” 是四个孩子的单亲家长，收入微薄，但生活还算过得去。圣诞节到了，虽然没多少钱买礼物，但有一些庆祝计划。孩子们最期待的是去商场购物，“我” 拿出 120 美元让他们去买礼物。购物回来后，大家都兴高采烈，只有小女儿 Ginger 异常安静，她只买了价值 50 美分的糖果，“我” 很生气。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：看到一个穿着破旧的父亲和女儿走进商场，为后文 Ginger 的行为做铺垫。 回应：续写中揭示 Ginger 把钱给了那对父女。 · 伏笔：Ginger 异常安静且只买了很少的东西。 回应：通过对话解释她把钱给了更需要的人。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：“我” 从生气、疑惑到惊讶。 · 故事线：质问 Ginger 钱的去向，Ginger 可能表现出害怕或委屈，周围孩子的反应，引出 Ginger 的解释。 · 伏笔呼应：与前文 Ginger 的异常表现呼应，引出下文原因。 第二段 · 情感线：“我” 从震惊转为感动和骄傲。 · 故事线：Ginger 继续解释把钱给了在商场看到的那对父女，因为他们看起来更需要钱，“我” 对 Ginger 的行为表示认可和赞扬。 · 主旨升华线：体现善良、乐于助人的品质，即使自己不富裕也关心他人。 情感线 · 愤怒（“我” 开始对 Ginger 的行为不满） · 惊讶（听到 Ginger 的回答后的反应） · 感动（了解真相后的情感） · 骄傲（为 Ginger 的善良品质感到自豪） 故事线 · 质问（“我” 询问 Ginger 钱的去处） · 解释（Ginger 说出把钱给了他人） · 感动（“我” 被 Ginger 的善良打动） 主旨升华句 1. True kindness shines brightest in those who have little but give much.（真正的善良在那些拥有很少却付出很多的人身上闪耀得最耀眼。） 2. It's not how much we have, but how much we are willing to share that defines our wealth.（不是我们拥有多少，而是我们愿意分享多少定义了我们的财富。） 3. Kindness is a language that even the poorest can speak.（善良是一种即使最贫穷的人也能讲的语言。） 4. In the heart of giving, we find the true meaning of Christmas.（在给予的心中，我们找到了圣诞节的真正意义。） 5. A small act of kindness can be a great light in someone's dark world.（一个小小的善举可以成为某人黑暗世界中的一盏明灯。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: “What did you do with that twenty dollar bill I gave you?” I was so angry. Ginger looked at me with tear - filled eyes. She seemed scared and didn't answer immediately. The other kids also stopped their laughter and stared at her. After a moment of silence, she said in a low voice, “I didn't waste it.” I was even more puzzled and my anger grew. I demanded to know what she had done. Paragraph 2: "I only had enough money left to buy some candies for us." Ginger continued with her head drooping. “I saw that little girl and her father. They were so poor. They needed the money more than us. So I gave my money to them.” Hearing this, my heart melted. I was shocked by her kindness. I hugged her tightly, feeling proud of having such a wonderful daughter. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: “What did you do with that twenty dollar bill I gave you?” I was so angry. Ginger shrank back in her seat, her face turning pale. The car fell silent as the other children watched in surprise. “I...I...” she stammered. I glared at her, waiting for an answer. She took a deep breath and finally said, “I used it for something important.” Paragraph 2: "I only had enough money left to buy some candies for us." Ginger continued with her head drooping. “I saw the girl and her daddy. They didn't have much. I wanted to help them. So I gave them the money.” I was stunned. My anger vanished. Instead, a warm feeling filled my heart. I reached over and wiped the tears from her eyes. “You're amazing, Ginger,” I said, realizing that she had taught us all a lesson about true giving. 读后续写参考范文，仅供参考 “What did you do with that twenty dollar bill I gave you?” I was so angry. I wanted to yell at her but didn't say anything until we got home. I called her into my bedroom and closed the door, ready to be angry again when she explained to me, “Mom, I was looking around, thinking of what to buy for us, then I spotted the little girl we saw at the mall gate begging for Christmas gifts—a doll with clothes and a hairbrush from her father, who looked poor and out of work for a long time. So I paid for them at the checkout in advance without being noticed by them and asked the clerk to give them a surprise.” “I only had enough money left to buy some candies for us.” Ginger continued with her head drooping. “But we have so much and the little girl wouldn’t have anything without you. You did a great job, I'm proud of you.” I smiled at my daughter, patting her shoulder to comfort, never feeling so rich as I did that day. Indeed, we're not rich and twenty dollars is not a piece of cake for us, but my daughter's helpful act of kindness made the money well spent in a more meaningful way. The twenty dollar bill brought surprise and joy to the little girl, as well as candies and sweetness to us. Unwrapping the candy wrapper, I put a candy in my daughter's mouth, and I was also enjoying the sweetness of it. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$