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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The date had been circled on my calendar for months — Friday 30 December. Mum was coming to pick me up from university and bring me home for the New Year celebrations. I loved every second of university life, but I couldn’t wait to go home. There was nothing that made me happier than the thought of the celebrations with my family. Our small celebrations were the same every year. Mum, Dad, my younger brother Ollie and I all dressed up and created a special meal. Then we sat down to dinner and enjoyed it together, chatting happily. After that, we sat in front of the TV until bedtime. The call came at 10 am that Friday. I was dressed and packed. “We’re not going to make it,” my mum said, sounding upset on the phone. “Kent has been blanketed overnight, with up to 20cm falling in three hours. We’ ve crawled（缓行） as far as Detling, but they’ve closed the motorway. It’s already taken us two hours. There’s no way we can get to you.” “What am I going to do?” I was hopeless and sick with anxiety. My life was different from that of other students. Being disabled means everything has to be organized ahead of time — a sudden change of plan isn’t an option. Even though I had my carer to help me cook, wash and get into bed, I still missed the joy of our celebrations. Alone in my student bedroom, I was a bit frustrated. Suddenly a picture on the wall caught my attention. It was a picture of a family reunion filled with laughter, hugs, and delicious food. It reminded me of the power of connection and the importance of cherishing these moments. I decided to push aside my fears about how I would ever get home. Although I’d travelled with my family three times in my life, travelling independently using a wheelchair came with many challenges for me. I could imagine the difficulty of booking assistance at every train station, getting on and off the train... So I worked out a detailed plan, hoping everything would be fine. 注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Not long after that, a taxi took me to the railway station. ________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: A taxi, three trains, five hours and 140 miles later, I was finally home. _____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 “我” 一直期待着 12 月 30 日妈妈来大学接 “我” 回家过新年，因为每年的家庭庆祝活动都让 “我” 无比快乐。然而周五上午妈妈打来电话说因为大雪封路无法来接 “我” 了。“我” 原本很绝望焦虑，因为 “我” 是残疾人，生活需要提前安排，计划突然改变对 “我” 来说很困难。但看到墙上家庭团聚的照片后，“我” 决定克服恐惧，独自计划回家，尽管知道独自使用轮椅出行会有很多挑战。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：“我” 是残疾人，出行需要安排协助。 回应：续写中提到在火车站预订协助以及换乘火车等细节体现这一困难。 · 伏笔：大雪封路导致妈妈无法来接 “我”。 回应：续写中没有再强调天气问题，但 “我” 克服困难回家的情节暗示天气没有阻挡 “我”。 续写要点 第一段（Paragraph 1） · 情感线：从最初的紧张、担忧，到在去火车站途中逐渐坚定信心。 · 故事线：在出租车司机的帮助下到达火车站，和工作人员沟通预订协助，虽然过程有些麻烦，但依然按计划进行。 · 伏笔呼应：体现出独自出行面临的挑战，呼应前文提到的出行困难。 第二段（Paragraph 2） · 情感线：到家时的激动、兴奋和幸福。 · 故事线：经过长途跋涉终于到家，和家人团聚，看到家人惊讶又欣喜的表情。 · 主旨升华线：强调亲情的力量和面对困难的勇气，无论有多大困难都无法阻挡回家与家人团聚的心。 情感线 · 孤独无助（开始时因妈妈无法来接而感到绝望） · 鼓起勇气（看到照片后决定独自回家） · 紧张谨慎（在火车站和旅途中担心出现问题） · 激动兴奋（到家时与家人团聚的喜悦） 故事线 · 计划被打乱（妈妈因大雪封路无法来接） · 决定独自回家（受照片启发制定计划） · 前往火车站（乘坐出租车并在车站安排行程） · 艰难旅程（换乘火车） · 平安到家（和家人团聚） 主旨升华句 1. Family is the lighthouse in the storm, guiding us home no matter what.（家庭是暴风雨中的灯塔，无论如何都会指引我们回家。） 2. The love of family gives us the courage to overcome any obstacle on the way home.（家庭的爱给予我们克服回家路上任何障碍的勇气。） 3. In the journey of going home, difficulties fade away in the face of the warmth of family.（在回家的旅程中，面对家庭的温暖，困难都烟消云散。） 4. Home is where the heart is, and love makes the toughest journey worthwhile.（家是心之所在，爱让最艰难的旅程也变得有价值。） 5. The bond of family is so strong that it can break through all the barriers between us and home.（家庭的纽带如此强大，它可以冲破我们与家之间的所有障碍。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: Not long after that, a taxi took me to the railway station. I told the driver about my situation, and he was very kind, helping me get out of the taxi safely. At the station, I found the staff and explained my need for assistance. It took some time to sort everything out as there were forms to fill and arrangements to be made. But everyone was helpful. With the help of the station staff, I got onto the train smoothly. I felt a bit nervous during the journey, but the thought of seeing my family soon kept me going. Paragraph 2: A taxi, three trains, five hours and 140 miles later, I was finally home. When I knocked on the door, my family's expressions were a mix of shock and joy. Mum burst into tears and hugged me tightly. Ollie jumped up and down with excitement. Dad just smiled with relief. In that moment, I knew all the challenges I had overcome were worth it. Our family bond was stronger than any difficulty that tried to keep us apart. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: Not long after that, a taxi took me to the railway station. The driver was very patient, waiting as I got my wheelchair out. At the station, there were a few hiccups with the booking system for assistance, but the staff worked hard to get it sorted. I was wheeled onto the platform and onto the train. As the train pulled away, I felt a sense of achievement. I was on my way home, one step closer to my beloved family despite the odds. Paragraph 2: A taxi, three trains, five hours and 140 miles later, I was finally home. The moment I entered the house, a wave of warmth and love washed over me. Mum rushed to me, her eyes filled with tears. Dad's face lit up with a huge smile. Ollie hugged my legs. We didn't need words to express our happiness. This journey taught me that with determination and the pull of family love, I can overcome any obstacle. 参考答案 Paragraph 1: Not long after that, a taxi took me to the railway station. I was nervous as I entered the bustling station, but I knew there was no turning back. I found the assistance desk quickly and explained my journey plan. The staff were extremely helpful, making sure I got onto the right train with my wheelchair safely secured. During the ride, I watched the scenery pass by, my heart full of anticipation mixed with a tinge of worry about the next transfers. Paragraph 2: A taxi, three trains, five hours and 140 miles later, I was finally home. As I approached the front door, I could hear the familiar sounds of my family inside. When I opened the door, their faces went from shock to overwhelming joy. Mum rushed over and hugged me, crying with happiness. Dad patted my back with pride, and Ollie couldn't stop grinning. In that moment, I realized that the love of family can make any arduous journey meaningful, and that I am capable of achieving what seems impossible for the sake of home. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$