内容正文:
应用作文 — 活动&新闻报道类
定义:活动/新闻报道主要是介绍某一次最近校内或校外举行的活动/最近发生的一件事情,包括导语、 主体和结東语三部分。
时态:常用一般过去时。
结构:
Para 1(导语):交代活动/事件的目的、原因以及活动时间、地点、人物等相关信息(5W)。 Para 2 (主体):描写活动/事件的具体内容、过程。
Para3: (结束语)对活动/事件的评价、总结活动/事件的收获以及个人感想。
活动的名称
social practice社会实践
lecture讲座give\deliver
speech演讲deliver
graduation ceremony毕业典礼
English evening英语晚会
after-school activities课外活动
voluntary labor/work义务劳动
physical activities体育活动
sports meeting运动会
English speech contest英语演讲比赛
music festival音乐节
“举行”的表达
活动名称+be held/organized/scheduled/launched 某活动被举办/被组织/被安排/被发起
活动名称+ start/kick off 某活动开始于… 活动名称+take place 某活动发生于.
表达“参加”的短语:
take part in/get involved in/participate in
写作任务1
为了让学生近距离接近大自然,上周六你们班组织了一次春游踏青活动,请你写一篇文章报道此次活 动,内容包括:1.具体的活动安排;2.活动的意义;3.你的感受。
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一 、开头:活动目的\活动时间\地点的表达
1._________one's interest in 激发兴趣 2._________the beauty of 欣赏......的美
3._________one's horizons 拓宽视野 4._________one's confidence 增加自信
5._________one's body 强健体魄 6._________one's mind 陶冶情操
7._________one's understanding of深化理解 8._________one's skills in...加强,能力
9._________our campus life 丰富校园生活 10.enhance our _________提高自信
11._________the charm of 体会.......的魅力 12.impress sb _________a visual feast视觉盛宴
13.keep sb healthy_________身心健康 14._________an opportunity for us to do提供机会
15._________the friendship among us 推动友谊 16.promote _________ 推动传统文化
17._________one's heart 净化心灵 18._________of 提升意识
19._________ the importance of...提醒我们
答案:1.arise/stimulate/fuel 2.appreciate 3.broaden 4.boost/increase/enhance 5.strengthen 6.cultivate 7.deepen 8.enhance/strengthen 9.enrich 10.self-confidence 11.feel 12.with
13.mentally and physically 14.provide 15.boost/promote 16.traditional culture 17.purify 18.improve the awareness 19.remind
1 为丰富我们的校园生活, 一场校园文化节将于下周在我们学校举行,我很高兴邀请你参加。(邀 请信)
_____________ a cultural festival ___________ (hold)in our school next week.I am more than pleased to invite you to take part in it.
2.为提高我们的劳动意识,社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基地举行。(活动报道)
our awareness of labor,the social practice (organize)at the Gardening Base near our school last Friday.
3.上周日,为激发学生们更加重视体育锻炼,我们学校在操场上举行了一场激动人心的拔河比赛。
pay more attention to Physical exercise,an exciting tug of war was held on our on school playground last Sunday.
答案:1.In order to enrich/Aiming at enriching; held
2. In order to improve; was organized
3. In order to
春游活动写作实操:
开 头 1 :Spring is a good time for outing.Aiming to _(给我们一个 机会接触大自然,放松心情),our class had a spring outing last Saturday/a spring outing was organised by our class last Saturday.
开头2: Last Sunday (witness)a spring outing organized by our class in Lianhua Mountain to (感受春天的魅力).
答案:1.provide us a chance to touch the nature
2.Witnessing
活动时间地点的表达
1.年 : 2019
2.月 : January/February,2019
3.月日: Oct.1,2019
4.年月日几点: halfpast eight on September 23,2019
5.年月日早中晚; Saturday morning/on the morning of September 15
6.从早上8点持续到晚点六点:last 8 am 6 pm
7. 特殊用法(无介词): this week/next year/last month/everyday
答案:1.in 2.in 3.on 4.at 5.on 6.from;to 7.不填
8.在校门口: the school gate
9.在体育馆/图书馆: the stadium/library
10.在操场: the playground
11.在大剧院/礼堂: the theater/school hall
12.在会议室/501教室: the conference room/in Room 501
13.在教学楼二楼: the second floorof the teaching
14.讲座是在上周五下午2点到5点在主楼大厅举行,持续了3个小时。
The lecture was held in the main hall 2pm to 5pm last Friday, (last)for about 3
hours.
答案:8.at 9.in 10.on 11.in/at 12.in 13.on 14.from;lasting
春游活动写作实操:
根据安排,我们早上八点在校门口集合然后一起坐大巴出发。
As scheduled,we gathered together and then set off by bus.
答案:at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate
二 、活动的具体内容/经过
On arriving,we / The activity began with../ 活动1+拓展
After that/following that,we moved on/continued to 活动2+拓展
Undoubtedly,the best part/highlight of that activity,was 活动3+拓展
春游活动写作实操:
正 文 :On arriving the destination—Lianhua Mountain,we (被欢 迎/吸引去各种有趣的活动), (range)from relaxing sightseeing enjoyable boating.Every played to their hearts' content.After that, we had great fun, (enjoy吃着大餐,跟同学聊天,唱歌). (毫无疑问, 最精彩得环节是)the final part---“exploring the beauty in Spring”,during which we took a great many
wonderful photos of the scenery in spring.
答案:were attracted by various/different kinds of activities; ranging; enjoying big meals, chatting with classmates and singing aloud; There was no doubt that/What was the most highlight part was that/The most highlight part was that
三、活动的意义或反响 整体评价+具体益处
1.It is surely a rewarding experience, which not only enables us to learn a lot that is beyond our textbooks but also promote the friendship among us.
2.The competition benefited us a lot.This activity proved to be a success./This activity turned out a huge success.Not only did it offer a wonderful opportunity for students to have a better understanding of English classics,but aroused our love for English culture.
3.All the teachers and students think highly of(高度评价)this activity.Not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but it was also of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally.
4._Exhausted as we were after a full-day's hard work(尽管我们在一天的工作后很累),I felt delighted and proud as I actively took part in it and I also strengthened my determination to do more voluntary work and I hope activities like this can be held more often in the future.
相关词汇:
1.feelings:exhausted but excited,delighted,relaxed.
2.activities:interesting,meaningful,rewarding,successful,beneficial,unforgettable.
3.what we got:friendship,teamwork,relaxation,fun.
4.重要的Significance: 有益的beneficial 有教育意义的educational
有指导意义的 instructional 愉快的enjoyable/pleasant 难忘的unforgettable/memorable
丰富的enriching 值得的 worthwhile 有意义的rewarding
有价值的valuable
春游活动写作实操:
1. 此次春游活动非常有的有趣且有意义,不仅丰富了我们的校园生活,还让我们意识到了亲近大自然是 很重要的。
The activity is .Not only our campus life,but also enabled us to realize
2.我希望我们班级能多开展像这样的活动,我又开始期待下一次的春游了。
答案:1. interesting and meaningful; can enrich
2.I hope that our class can organize more activities like this,and I began to look forward to the next spring outing.
写作任务2———强化框架意识
上周末你参加了学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1.活动过程;2.收获与感想
Last weekend, (为了)educate us more about daily biology/aimed at educating us more about daily biology(活动目的 ) a“Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”activity (由.组织)our Students' Union.
(活动以......开始)a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. (随后),we went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants,allowing us to have a closer contact with the plants around us._________________ (毫无疑问,最棒的环 节/最吸引我的是)we photographed,labeled plant species and then attached details ranging from their features to locations》
We ( 受 益 )this activity,We (不但)felt the extreme beauty of plants (而且)refreshed ourselves,both physically and mentally.I hope we can hold more activities like this in the future.
答案:in order to;organized by;After that;There was no doubt/The most fascinating part was that/What attracted me most was that; benefited from; not only;but also
写作任务2-----目的强化支撑句的写作
每年的3月22日是"世界水日"(World Water Day),上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年志愿者走 上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华,请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动目的;2. 活动内容;3.活动反响。
开头二选一: 拓展目的
1) (目的),a nonprofit publicity campaign about"World Water Day" (carry)out by the Student Union in People's Square last Sunday Morning.
2)Last Sunday Morning (witness)a nonprofit publicity campaign about World Water Day organized by the Student Union in People's Square,in order to (目的)
正文:列举个活动之后,需要拓展该活动(内容,意义,效果,感受等)
We began the activity by setting up exhibition boards (支撑句);Following that,some volunteers distributed leaflets and demonstrated ways of reducing,reusing and recycling water to passers-by, (支撑句).Undoubtedly,the best part of this activity was the speech given by our team leader, (支撑句).
结尾:用好not only..but also 倒装形式
The activity proved to be a huge success.Not only but also
课后练习:
1.【2020高考英语全国1卷书面表达】上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇 短文,介绍这次活动。
内容包括:1.农场情况;2.采摘过程;3.个人感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目己为你写好
My Weekend
参考答案:
My Weekend
Last weekend, I joined a picking activity with my classmates on a farm. The farm was vast and full of vitality. There were neat rows of fruit trees and vegetable patches.
When we started picking, we were excited. We picked apples. They hung on the branches like little red lanterns. We reached for the ripest ones and put them gently into our baskets. Some classmates also picked fresh cucumbers.
I had an amazing time during this activity. It made me feel the beauty of nature closely. I also learned more about where our food comes from. It was really an unforgettable and educational experience.
2. 【英语周报2023年度春季学期高一课标第58期高一英语下学期总复习二】假定你是李华,上周末 在你市中心公园参加了校学生会组织的环保志愿者活动。请给你校英语角写一篇文章,分享此次活动, 内容包括:1.活动内容:清扫垃圾、种树等;2. 自己的感受。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
参考答案:
Last weekend, I took part in an environmental protection volunteer activity organized by the school student union in the city - center park.
We had various tasks. Firstly, we cleaned up the rubbish scattered around the park, like plastic bottles and waste papers. Then, we planted some trees. We dug holes, put in the saplings and watered them carefully.
I felt really proud of myself during this activity. It was not only a great chance to contribute to the environment but also to raise public awareness of environmental protection. I believe our small efforts can make a big difference to our park and the whole city.
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