2025届高考英语读后续写专题之个人成长类---科学追求与家庭羁绊：我的博士之路 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。     From the busy and noisy classrooms of Thailand to the beautiful landscapes of New Zealand, my journey in pursuit of scientific discovery has been an exciting adventure, filled with passion, determination, and personal sacrifices.      Since childhood, I’ve been fascinated by the practical wonders of chemistry. It all started with a teacher who enthusiastically showed me how chemistry impacts our daily lives. His passion lit a fire in me, inspiring me to think about using science to solve big global problems like fuel shortages and climate change.      After earning a master’s degree in chemistry in my home country, I luckily landed a job as a chemistry teacher. But soon I realized though I loved teaching, I still wanted a career in academia. Getting a Ph.D. from an English-speaking country was crucial for my academic dream. But it wasn’t easy. For over ten years, I faced rejection after rejection trying to get into a Ph.D. program. Each rejection was tough, but I never gave up on my dream.      As time passed, I fell in love and married my partner, embarking on (开始) a journey mixed with laughter, tears, and warm and steady support. Years later, we joyfully welcomed two children into our lives, with their laughter echoing through the halls and filling our home with warmth. In my culture, where family comes first, every day is a witness to the pure joy and unbreakable bonds we share. So, the idea of leaving them for four years to study in another country was really hard. Even though studying abroad meant my wife would be shouldering the vast majority of the parenting for several years, she showed she always backed me in my choice. Finally, I made up my mind and applied for Ph.D. programs again.      Then, like a flash in the darkness, an opportunity arose — an invitation to study cutting-edge methods of hydrogen production at the well-known University of Otago in New Zealand. It was a dream come true, a chance to dig into research with global implications for sustainable energy solutions.  1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1: But with this opportunity came a heart-breaking difficulty of having a balance between home and study.__________________________________________________________  Paragraph 2: Completing my Ph.D. at the age of 40 was more than a milestone.__________________ 文章大意 文章讲述了作者从泰国到新西兰追求科学发现的历程。作者自幼对化学着迷，在本国获得化学硕士学位后成为化学老师，但为了学术梦想想攻读博士，却屡遭拒绝。后来成家有了孩子，在家庭与学业的抉择中挣扎，因为在其文化中家庭至上。但妻子的支持让他再次申请，最终收到新西兰奥塔哥大学研究制氢前沿方法的邀请。这是实现可持续能源解决方案的全球意义研究的梦想机会，但也面临着平衡家庭和学业的难题。 伏笔与回应 1. 伏笔：作者提到在本国多次被博士项目拒绝，这为后来获得新西兰大学邀请的来之不易做铺垫。回应：在续写中可体现出对这次机会的珍惜。 2. 伏笔：作者强调家庭在其文化中的重要性以及离开家人的艰难。回应：续写中可以描述在异国学习期间对家人的思念以及家人对他的支持给他带来的动力。 续写要点 第一段 · 要点：描述在平衡家庭和学业过程中的挣扎。比如，在学习压力大的时候，对家人的思念更甚，通过与家人的联系（如视频通话），看到家人的画面让他内心五味杂陈，但还是努力坚持学业。 第二段 · 要点：完成博士学业后的感慨和对未来的展望。包括对自己多年努力的总结，以及这次经历对家庭和自己梦想的意义，带着所学回国为解决全球问题贡献力量。 情感线 · 对科学的热爱和对学术梦想的执着追求贯穿始终，同时交织着对家庭深深的眷恋和因离开家人产生的愧疚之情。在经历挣扎后，最终以实现梦想的自豪和对家庭支持的感恩之情收尾。 故事线 · 从对化学的兴趣启蒙开始，经历学业挫折、组建家庭，到面临出国读博的艰难抉择，再到在新西兰求学时平衡家庭与学业，最后完成博士学业，准备为科学和家庭开启新征程。 主旨升华句 1. Dreams are like stars in the sky. Only with the courage to pursue them against all odds can we reach them.（梦想就像天空中的星星。只有有勇气克服一切困难去追求，我们才能实现它们。） 2. Family is the anchor that steadies us in the storm of life, and dreams are the sails that drive us forward.（家庭是在生活风暴中使我们稳定的锚，而梦想是推动我们前进的帆。） 3. The journey of chasing dreams may be filled with thorns, but the love and support from family make every step worthwhile.（追逐梦想的旅程可能布满荆棘，但来自家庭的爱和支持让每一步都有价值。） 4. Sacrifice and determination are the bricks that build the road to success, and love is the mortar that holds them together.（牺牲和决心是铺就成功之路的砖块，而爱是将它们黏合在一起的砂浆。） 5. In the pursuit of knowledge, the power of love within a family can be the strongest driving force.（在追求知识的过程中，家庭中的爱的力量可以成为最强大的驱动力。） 写作示范 示范一 Paragraph 1: But with this opportunity came a heart - breaking difficulty of having a balance between home and study. The time difference made communication with my family less frequent than I wished. During those lonely nights in the laboratory, I often stared at the family photo on my desk, my heart heavy with longing. Every research setback seemed magnified by the distance from my loved ones. But their love, like a lighthouse, always guided me through the darkness of self - doubt and homesickness. Paragraph 2: Completing my Ph.D. at the age of 40 was more than a milestone. It was a testament to the power of perseverance and the love of my family. Returning home, I felt a new sense of purpose. I was not only a husband and father but also a scientist ready to make a difference. I hoped my journey would inspire my children to follow their dreams, knowing that love and sacrifice can make any dream achievable. 示范二 Paragraph 1: But with this opportunity came a heart - breaking difficulty of having a balance between home and study. Living in a different time zone, I missed many of my children's important moments. When they shared their little joys and sorrows over the phone, I felt an acute sense of helplessness. The academic pressure was intense, yet the thought of my family waiting for me back home gave me the strength to keep going, reminding myself that this pain was temporary. Paragraph 2: Completing my Ph.D. at the age of 40 was more than a milestone. It was the realization of a long - cherished dream that had been fueled by countless rejections and sacrifices. I realized that I had not only achieved an academic goal but also grown as a person. I brought back not only knowledge but also the lessons of love and family values, ready to apply them to making the world a better place for future generations. 参考答案     But with this opportunity came a heart-breaking difficulty of having a balance between home and study.Venturing to a foreign land for further study proved to be a far greater ordeal than I had anticipated. Sleepless nights witnessed my homesickness. However, via the camera of the video call, my wife's affectionate gaze, soothing words and my kids giggles did heal me with warmth. Feeling blessed with a family to miss, I was more determined than ever to make the most of the hard-won opportunity. I overcame culture shocks and other challenges, transformed loneliness into solitude and buried myself in the academic research. While each day was long, the four years in New Zealand was short. I finally earned my degree as planned, taking pride in my little contribution to solving big global problems.     Completing my Ph.D at the age of 40 was more than a milestone. It was a reminder that opportunities and challenges are always twins.Through this brave choice, I taught my kids that pursuing your dream means stepping out of the comfort zone, for it is the challenging path that leads you to where you aspire to be. It was also a tribute to my unbreakable family bond. But for the support from my loved ones, especially my irreplaceable soulmate, I couldn’t have made it. “Love doesn’t lie in gazing at each other, but in looking in the same direction.” ---My wife's philosophy of love served as my beacon. With the same goal, physical distance drew our souls even closer, sometimes making absence sweet. Looking back, I’m always grateful for this bittersweet journey.  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$