读后续写：好友搬家跟我告别课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

Speaker: Lily Continuation Writing -- 和好友告别 Tonny and Danial were twins and had been my next door neighbours since I was five years old. Not only did we go to the same school, but our evenings and weekends were spent together too. It was like we were inseparable. I never felt that I needed any friends other than them. Unexpectedly, one evening their parents shared the news of them moving to another country. I was shocked to realise that now we will never be together. I started recalling all the good times we had spent together, such as playing in the school breaks, the play dates, the tricks we played and all the fun things we did. Was it all going to end? When we had been through so many highs and lows together, shared secrets and supported each other through thick and thin, their moving away felt like a part of me was being ripped away（猛力撕开）. The news of their departure（离开） left me feeling empty and lost. I was thinking about the biggest change that I was going to face in a few days. It was a difficult pill to swallow, but I knew I must move on. Though it wasn’t easy at first, I was trying my level best to beat the mental pain I was in. After hearing the news, every day felt like a struggle, the school didn’t feel the same; the lunch breaks had no purpose. Soon there would be no one to compare the test marks with, homework remarks would not excite me like before, and so on. I couldn’t help but feel lost and alone already. Paragraph 1 Seeing my condition, my family advised me to make the most of the time that was left before they moved.__________________ _____________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 When the departure day came, saying goodbye wasn’t easy.____ ___________________________________________________ Seeing my condition, my family advised me to make the most of the time that was left before they moved. When the departure day came, saying goodbye wasn’t easy. 过渡句1：我对父母建议的反应。 我”听从了父母的建议，充分利用最后的时间和双胞胎一起去做了很多之前一直想做的事情，创造了美好的回忆。 侧重写分别时的场景和相互承诺保持联系。 点题：尽管我们天各一方，但我们的友情不会因为距离而褪色。 情节+ 细节+ 过渡词 第一段： 情节：我”听从了父母的建议，充分利用最后的时间和双胞胎一起去做了很多之前一直想做的事情，创造了美好的回忆。 细节：“我”的心理活动。 我们一起做的具体事情——如自行车骑行；野炊；看电影等。并且拍照留念。 情节+ 细节+ 过渡词 第二段： 情节：离别的场景和相互承诺保持联系。 2. 点题句：尽管天各一方，但我们的友情不会因为距离而褪色。（海内存知己，天涯若比邻） 细节：我们几人的情感、神态、动作和语言描写（如落泪，哽咽，拥抱、拍肩等） 高分表达 My lips trembled, and words failed me. 我嘴唇发颤，说不出话来。 I felt my heart torn at the very thought of not being able to see them as often as I used to. 一想到不能像以前那样经常见到他们，我的心就碎了。 The memories we created toghther would sustain us through the separation. 我们一起创造的记忆会支撑我们度过分离。 It’s comforting to know that the memories and love we have for each other will always remain in our hearts. 令人欣慰的是，我们的回忆和对彼此的爱将永远留在我们的心中。 Distance can never keep our hearts apart. 距离永远无法将我们的心分开。 参考范文 Para1: Miserable as I was, I knew what they said was right.Thus, putting aside my grief, I started to hang out with them in all my spare time, trying my best to make our last moments enjoyble and unforgettble. We made a list of all the things that we wanted to do together and realized them one by one. We went on a bike trip, had a BBQ in our yards and watched a Batman movie together. I knew all these would become our shared memories in the days to come. And the photos we took during these activites were a vivid proof of our friendship. Para 2: I felt my heart torn at the very thought of not being able to see them as often as I used to. Obviously it was hard for them too. Staring at each other, our lips trembled as if so many words would pour down but all escaped. Finally, we hugged each other tightly with tears rolling down, promising that we would always stay in touch no matter how far we were from each other. Our parents also reminded us that we could share photos of our activities, which relived a bit our pain of departure. Saying goodbye was difficult, but I realized that distance could never keep true friends’ hearts apart. 参考范文 THANKS 读后续写 $$