读后续写——帮助他人类 讲义-2025届高三英语一轮复习

续写原文 At 13 years old, Donna was kind and adventurous.' She went with her parents to visit her grandmother who lived in a small town. Near that small town was a huge forest just 30 kilometers away, where they decided to hike. While exploring the forest, Donna started to wander (漫步) without realizing she was walking too far away from her parents. By the time she realized she was lost, it started to rain. She ran under the trees before discovering a cave where she decided to rest. Right after she entered, a man's voice said, “Who are you? This is my cave.” Donna jumped, surprised by the sudden voice. She turned around and saw a man in his 30s staring (盯着看) right at her. She started to walk back towards the exit until the voice said again,“Don't worry. You don't have to be scared (害怕的). I won't hurt you.” The man handed some berries to Donna, and then started to light a fire. “What's your name? Why do you live in a cave?” Donna asked curiously. “I don't know my name ...” the man said. “I was lost in the forest. I couldn't remember what had happened, and I didn't have any form of identification with me.” After a couple more minutes of eating and talking, Donna suddenly heard footsteps coming. “Donna?” someone called out. Donna realized it was her parents looking for her. “Dad! Over here!” she said from inside the cave. Donna's parents immediately rushed over. Donna explained what had happened and asked her parents to help the man. The man explained, “I don't know where to go. All I have in this small bag is a photo of this woman. I don' t know who she was,but the signature (签名) at the bottom reads ‘Lucy Watkins.'” The group left the forest and took the man to their home. There, they gave him a fresh set of clothes and a place to shower and sleep comfortably. While the man was in the bathroom, Donna's parents searched for a woman named Lucy Watkins on the internet. Luckily, they found a woman on Facebook with the same name and she looked exactly like the woman in the photo. Donna's parents immediately decided to message the woman.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The woman on the other end of the line cried out._____________ 文本分析： 主题与情节发展 1.主旨 文章主旨是关于善良勇敢的 13 岁女孩 Donna 在森林中迷路后遇到一位失忆男子，在被父母找到后，他们帮助男子寻找身份线索，最终有望使男子与亲人团聚的故事，体现了善良和乐于助人会带来美好的结果。 故事梗概 故事围绕 13 岁善良且爱冒险的 Donna 展开。她与父母在小镇附近森林徒步时迷路，躲进洞穴遇到一个失忆的陌生男子，男子仅有的物品是一张有 “Lucy Watkins” 签名的女人照片。Donna 父母将男子带回家并准备帮助他寻找身份线索。 2. 人物分析 Donna：勇敢好奇。在森林中迷路后没有过度惊慌，面对陌生男子能保持一定的镇定并和他交流。善良有同情心，在获救后请求父母帮助男子。 陌生男子：失忆且无助，在森林中迷失不知自己身份，但对 Donna 没有恶意，还与她分享浆果并生火取暖。 Donna 父母：疼爱孩子，在 Donna 失踪后积极寻找。富有爱心和乐于助人，把陌生男子带回家并给予帮助，还积极在网上搜索线索。 3. 情节发展与续写方向分析 目前情节发展到 Donna 父母在网上找到一位同名且相貌相似的 Lucy Watkins 并准备联系她。续写部分可以从以下几个方向展开： 从女人角度：女人可能是男子的亲人，比如妻子、姐妹等，她在接到消息后的反应可能是激动、惊喜、不敢相信等。可以描述她与男子之间的过往故事，比如他们是如何失散的，以及对男子失踪的这些年的经历猜测。 从男子角度：当他洗完澡出来后面对可能知晓自己身份的情况，他的心情可能是紧张、期待的。他可能会与 Lucy Watkins 有一些互动，比如回忆起一些与她相关的片段。 从 Donna 一家角度：他们促成了这次可能的团聚，会为男子感到高兴，也会对整个事件有更多的感慨，比如对命运的奇妙安排等。 4. 语言特点分析 文本语言简洁明了，以叙述为主。使用了一些简单的动作描写（如 “Donna jumped”“rushed over” 等）和对话来推动情节发展，易于理解，符合青少年冒险故事的风格。在续写时也应保持这种简洁流畅的语言风格，使故事连贯自然 续写范文1 Donna's parents immediately decided to message the woman. They carefully explained the situation, attaching a photo of the man they had taken. After a few minutes of waiting nervously, the woman on the other end of the line cried out. She said that the man was her long - lost brother. He had disappeared during a camping trip in the forest years ago. Everyone had given up hope of finding him. She was overjoyed and said she would come over right away. When she arrived, the man recognized her immediately. His memories started to flood back. He hugged his sister tightly, tears streaming down his face. Donna and her parents watched the heartwarming reunion, feeling proud that they had helped bring a family back together. 续写范文2 Donna's parents immediately decided to message the woman. They described the man's appearance and the situation in detail. Soon, the woman on the other end of the line cried out. She said she had been searching for this man for so long. He was her husband who had vanished during an exploration in the forest a decade ago. She couldn't believe he was found. She rushed to Donna's home. When the man saw her, there was a glint of recognition in his eyes. They embraced, and the woman told him about their past. The man slowly regained some of his memories. Donna and her parents were deeply touched by the reunion, realizing they had witnessed a miracle. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$