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Unit 1
Reading for Writing
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A. I know what the problem is.
Pre-writing: More sentence expressions
- I am (very) glad to hear that...
You wrote that ...
接收信息
- I am sorry to hear /know that...
- Learning that you can't/have trouble in(doing sth) ...
很抱歉你
遇到...问题
很高兴听
到...消息
宾语从句
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B. I understand how you feel.
表示理解
I understand
quite well that...
事件+引发的感情
(焦虑、兴奋)
E.g.
I understand quite well that you feel lonely when your partener spends a lot of time playing computer games.you.
angry, confused, upset, disappointed, annoyed, lonely, helpless, tired...
宾语从句
宾语从句
Pre-writing: More expressions
我非常能理解当你同伴花大把时间玩电脑游戏时你很孤单。
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给出建议:
较易1. You had better do sth
2. How/ what about doing sth?
3. Why not do sth?
4. It’s a good idea for sb. to do sth
5. It’s adj.(important, necessary,beneficial, helpful) for sb to do sth
更高级:
-I strongly suggest/advise/recommend that you (should) do...because/because of...建议(+原因)
-I consider it's a good idea that...because...
-In my opinion /From my point of view, it is wise that/to do... 建议(+原因)
-If I were you, I would...
- When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that... 当谈到这种情况,我想建议...
D. I think my advice will help.
Reading for the organisation
表示希望
I am sure he will...
-I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be (of use=helpful) / (of benefit= beneficial) to you.
(If there is more I can do to help, please let me know).
-I hope you will find these suggestions/ recommendations helpful/ useful/ practical.
- I will be more than delighted if you can take my suggestions/recommendations into account
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Greeting
Body
Signature
三段论
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
问候 顶格
主体三段都先空两格
落款右对齐
⚠️
表明写作目的,自己感同身受
提出建议并阐述理由
表示祝愿、期望
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Unit 2 Travelling Around
Reading for Writing
Opening greetings
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I'm extremely glad to know everything in your new school life goes well.
Thank you for contacting me about your travel plan.
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I’m extremely pleased to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.
Opening greetings: reply to the email + writing purpose
Writing Guidance
►Write your plans clearly:
place + reasons/activities
Use the present continuous tense.
I’m going to pay a visit to 地方, where the combination of modern vibes and historical charm is just unbeatable!(现代气息与历史魅力的结合是无与伦比的) / the combination of tradition and modernity is unbearable
We feel the combination of tradition and modernity(现代性)
I’ve heard that/ It’s said that 地方is a must-visit place for history lovers.
I'm looking forward to visit 地方 , which is amazing
I'm planning to visit 地方 because it’s an amazing sight.
I can’t wait to/ I intend to try a wide variety of delicious food there.
Apart form its natural beauty, ... is also known for its rich cultural heritage(文化遗产) /delicious cuisine
In summary, 地方 is a city that attracts visitors with its natural beauty, rich history and delicious cuisine(菜肴).
The travel plan for the trip
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Final thoughts
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In my opinion, travel can not only enrich our knowledge but also broaden our horizons. I’m sure/ I believe you’ll enjoy travelling as well. Look forward to your early reply.
I guess that's all for now. I'll write again and send you photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday?
Unit 3 Sports and Fitness
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Reading for Writing
Reading:Para. 1 more sentence expressions
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说明问题
Problem
I worried about…
In the past I was…
I used to do/be…
Recently I have been concerned about…
What bothered me was that…
Reading:Para.2 more sentence expressions
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说明转折点和采取某种方式Changes
I read an article that told me that…
… recommended that…
Instead of doing… I would do…
Rather than…,I …
I tried to do the following things.
Reading:Para.3 more sentence expressions
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介绍现状
Results
By …,I became both happier and healthier.
At present, not only am I healthier than before, but also I become happier.
Thanks to my effort , I …
说明问题:
I worried about+ n/doing
I used to +动词原形, but it’s unhealthy.
I always wanted to +动词原形, but I failed.
2. 如何解决问题/做出改变+原因:
After +doing(在看了什么书/听谁说了什么之后等), I began to change.
Then I started+ doing instead of +doing sth, because….
Instead of +doing sth, I would +动词原形, because….
Rather than +doing sth, I+v-ed , because….
I could still +动词原形, but I would +动词原形, because…
3.总结结果,提出希望:
Finally/ As a result, I stopped doing sth and began to do sth
By being positive about myself, I became happier and healthier.
At first
but
Then
For examples
Finally
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