读后续写--篮球的魔力:父子的暖心时光与困境中的希望 讲义-湖北省武汉市部分重点中学 2024-2025学年高二上学期期中联考英语试卷

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The sky had gone dark, and Dad wasn’t home yet. He worked all day gardening for private houses. In Georgia, that meant endless work to do. Mom told us to wait for Dad so that we could eat together. Even when Dad didn’t get home until after eight or eight thirty, I didn’t mind. A few years ago, Dad bought me a backboard and hoop and installed a tall metal pole on the side of the driveway so we could have our own basketball court. It was a court made of dirt and pebbles, but still, it was a fun place. I would shoot baskets in my spare time. Still, during the summer months, between part-time jobs delivering newspapers, helping Dad cutting lawns, we came pretty close to spending as much of the day as we could on the court. Dad taught me all sorts of shots-hook shots, foul shots, fade-away jumpers, shots from the comer, tried to send the ball through each other’s legs and passed it behind our backs. Each time I felt frustrated and depressed, Dad would invite me to join in a shot game. I didn’t know what it was about holding a ball and sending it into the air and waiting for it to drop into the hoop (圈) , but it felt like magic-All the problems of the world seemed to fade away, and I was the magician. Dad once told me he felt pretty much the same way while playing basketball. It was one of the things Dad and I shared-the magic in basketball. Lately, though, it didn’t seem like Dad saw a lot of magic in his job. When he came home each night, it was earlier than when he usually arrived home. I could perceive something different. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With the financial crisis spreading, most of his customers lost their jobs. ___________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I bounce-passed the ball to him, and Dad caught it naturally. ______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 爸爸在佐治亚州做园艺工作,经常很晚回家。几年前爸爸给 “我” 安装了一个简陋但好玩的篮球场。“我” 在空闲时间会在那里打球,爸爸教 “我” 各种投篮技巧。篮球有一种魔力,能让 “我” 的烦恼消失。但最近爸爸回家比往常早,感觉他对工作没了热情,因为金融危机,他的很多客户都失业了。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔:爸爸工作受金融危机影响,以及篮球对父子二人的特殊意义。 · 回应:续写中通过篮球缓解爸爸的压力,重新找回对生活的热情。 续写要点 第一段(With the financial crisis spreading, most of his customers lost their jobs.) · 情感线:从担忧爸爸的工作到希望能帮助他缓解压力。 · 故事线:讲述爸爸工作机会减少,心情低落,“我” 想让他重新感受篮球的魔力来缓解压力。 · 续写示例:With the financial crisis spreading, most of his customers lost their jobs. So Dad had less work to do. He was really down. I knew he was worried about providing for the family. I thought about the magic of basketball that always cheered me up. Maybe it could work for Dad too. I decided to invite him to play with me tonight. 第二段(I bounce - passed the ball to him, and Dad caught it naturally.) · 情感线:父子情感升温,重拾快乐和希望。 · 故事线:父子在球场上互动,爸爸逐渐恢复活力,重新感受到篮球的魔力。 · 续写示例:I bounce - passed the ball to him, and Dad caught it naturally. As he dribbled the ball, I could see a glimmer of the old spark in his eyes. We started playing, passing, shooting. Dad's movements became more energetic. The magic of basketball was working. It was bringing back the joy and hope between us, making us forget the hard times for a while. 主旨升华句 1. Basketball is not only a sport but also a bond that can heal our hearts in tough times.(篮球不仅是一项运动,更是在艰难时刻能治愈我们心灵的纽带。) 2. In the game of basketball, we find the strength to face difficulties with our loved ones.(在篮球比赛中,我们找到了和所爱之人一起面对困难的力量。) 3. The magic of basketball lies in its ability to rekindle hope during the darkest hours.(篮球的魔力在于它能在最黑暗的时刻重燃希望。) 4. When life gets tough, the shared love for basketball can bring light back into our lives.(当生活艰难时,对篮球的共同热爱能让我们的生活重见光明。) 5. Basketball, like a magic wand, waves away the gloom and restores the warmth between father and son.(篮球就像一根魔杖,驱散阴霾,恢复父子间的温暖。) 写作示范 第一篇 第一段:With the financial crisis spreading, most of his customers lost their jobs. Dad's workload decreased drastically. He seemed tired and lost his usual enthusiasm. I knew how much he loved his job and seeing him like this pained me. I remembered how basketball always lifted our spirits. I hoped it could do the same for Dad now. I prepared the basketball and waited for him to come home. 第二段:I bounce - passed the ball to him, and Dad caught it naturally. He smiled a little. We started playing. As we played, Dad's movements became more fluid. The joy of the game filled his face. The magic of basketball was bringing back the Dad I knew. We laughed and played, forgetting the outside world's troubles for a moment. 第二篇 第一段:With the financial crisis spreading, most of his customers lost their jobs. Business was really bad for Dad. He spent more time at home, looking worried. I felt sad for him. But I knew that our basketball court held a special power. It had always been a place of joy and escape for us. I thought it was time to share that magic with Dad again to lift his spirits. 第二段:I bounce - passed the ball to him, and Dad caught it naturally. At first, he was a bit hesitant, but as he started moving with the ball, his energy returned. We played hard, with each shot and pass reigniting the connection between us. The magic of basketball made Dad's eyes shine again, reminding us that even in hard times, there are always things to cherish. 参考答案 With the financial crisis spreading, most of his customers lost their jobs. So did Dad as a matter of course, a wave of helplessness washing over him. He dragged himself back home with heavy steps. At the sight of the worried expression on his face, I fell apart inside. What could I do to stop him sinking into a dark abyss? The ball held in my hands sparked like an inspiration. “Want to join in a shot game, Dad?” I asked, knowing how much he loved basketball and thinking maybe it might cheer him up. “Sure,” he said, opening his eyes and smiling a weary smile. I bounce-passed the ball to him, and Dad caught it naturally. He held the ball in both hands between his knees, broke through my defence skillfully, and shot at the basket. It was perfectly measured so that the ball dropped clearly through the hoop. “Whoa, what a shot!” I cheered and clapped. Dad’s long-lost smile finally came back, with his face glowing brilliantly like sunshine. Magically, it was shooting baskets with me that helped him forget his worries in job for a short time and it was the warmth of family that revived him through hardship. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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