内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During my high school years, I was part of the school band, a group that was not just about music but also about good-fellowship (友情) and shared experiences. We had a special event each year: the music festival at a well-known theme park. It was an opportunity for us to showcase our talents and enjoy the pleasure of the park. To make this event meaningful, we organized a fundraising campaign, selling chocolate bars throughout our community. It was a simple plan but one that required us to connect with our neighbors and ask for their support. There were always heart-warming encounters.
One sunny afternoon, I approached a neighbor’s home. The lady who answered the door greeted me with a smile and, after hearing about our cause, she decided to support us by purchasing several bars.
As we were nearing the end, the lady’s little girl, who was about three or four years old and had been watching our action, ran out. The little girl came back with a bill in her hand, a little dirt on it. She was eager to give it to me and said, “I want to be like Mom and support you.” The lady was surprised and said it was saved by the girl herself. Her lovely face and eager eyes made it hard for me to say no. I tried to explain to her that her mother was already buying some chocolate, but she was determined. Neither her mother nor I could dissuade (劝阻) her from her newfound task of handing me the dollar bill. I knew that I couldn’t put her mother in a position to buy more chocolate than she had originally intended. I couldn’t accept the little girl’s money.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段:Suddenly, inspiration struck!
第二段:The little girl’s eyes widened with joy as she grasped the bill and the chocolate bar.
文章大意
高中时学校乐队为参加主题公园音乐节而在社区售卖巧克力棒筹款。一次,在向一位邻居推销时,邻居女士买了一些巧克力棒,她三四岁的小女儿拿着一张有点脏的钞票跑出来也要支持,她很坚决,而 “我” 不想让她母亲因她而多买巧克力,也不能接受小女孩的钱。
几处伏笔及在续写中的回应
· 伏笔:小女孩的坚持和 “我” 的两难处境。
· 回应:续写中 “我” 想到办法解决这个问题。
续写要点
第一段(Suddenly, inspiration struck!)
· 情感线:从纠结转为想出办法的轻松。
· 故事线:“我” 拿出一根巧克力棒送给小女孩,告诉她这是对她热心支持的感谢,不用她的钱。
· 续写示例:Suddenly, inspiration struck! I reached into my bag and pulled out one of the chocolate bars. I handed it to the little girl with a big smile and said, “Sweetie, this one is for you. It's a special gift for your kindness and eagerness to help. You don't need to give me the money.”
第二段(The little girl’s eyes widened with joy as she grasped the bill and the chocolate bar.)
· 情感线:小女孩的快乐和母亲的欣慰。
· 故事线:小女孩高兴地拿着巧克力棒和钱,母亲感谢 “我” 的处理方式,“我” 感受到温暖。
· 续写示例:The little girl’s eyes widened with joy as she grasped the bill and the chocolate bar. She hugged me tightly and thanked me. Her mother also smiled gratefully at me. As I left, I felt a warm glow inside. This simple act of kindness had made the fundraising even more special.
主旨升华句
1. Kindness can turn a difficult situation into a beautiful memory.(善良能将困难的局面变成美好的回忆。)
2. In the face of innocence and kindness, there are always better solutions.(面对纯真和善良,总有更好的解决办法。)
3. A small act of love can bring great warmth in fundraising activities.(一个小小的爱心举动能在筹款活动中带来巨大的温暖。)
4. True generosity lies in respecting and handling the kindness of every heart.(真正的慷慨在于尊重和处理每一颗心灵的善意。)
5. When we cherish the kindness of children, we find the real meaning of fundraising.(当我们珍惜孩子的善意时,我们找到了筹款的真正意义。)
写作示范
第一篇
第一段:Suddenly, inspiration struck! I crouched down to the little girl's level and told her that her support was the most precious thing. I took out a small notebook from my bag and wrote a big “Thank You” on it. Then I gave it to her as a special token. I said this was a reward for her kindness and she could keep her money.
第二段:The little girl’s eyes widened with joy as she grasped the bill and the chocolate bar. She showed the notebook to her mom with pride. The mother thanked me for my thoughtfulness. I left their home with a heart full of warmth, realizing that in this fundraising process, these little acts of kindness were what made it truly remarkable.
第二篇
第一段:Suddenly, inspiration struck! I told the little girl that she could use her money to buy a chocolate bar from me another time. For now, I would give her a chocolate bar on credit. I wrote her name on a piece of paper and put it in my bag. I said when she had more money in the future, she could come to me.
第二段:The little girl’s eyes widened with joy as she grasped the bill and the chocolate bar. She nodded her head vigorously. The mother was touched by the scene. I walked away feeling that our fundraising was not just about getting money but also about these beautiful interactions that made our community closer.
One possible version:
Suddenly, inspiration struck! With a quick look at the mother, I decided to take a more playful approach. I changed my attitude and accepted the dollar bill from the little girl, expressing my heartfelt thanks for her generosity. I gave her a chocolate bar, then quickly reached into my pocket, pulled out another bill, and handed it to her. I smiled and said, “Here’s your change!”
The little girl’s eyes widened with joy as she grasped the bill and the chocolate bar. She was completely satisfied with the deal and believed that she had truly contributed to our fundraising efforts. With a cheerful wave, she ran back into the house, likely to return the dollar to its hiding place or to find a new one to continue her charitable work. The brief meeting left all of us with smiles on our faces.
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