辽宁省沈阳市郊联体2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题英语作文讲解课件

Writing 高三上期中应用文+读后续写 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom,发来电子邮件说他刚报了一个汉语班。请你就怎样学好汉语提些建议： 1.对他报汉语班的看法； 2.至少提两条学习建议； 3.欢迎他到中国来学汉语。 回复-建议-邀请 一、对汉语班的看法（回复）+建议开头（建议） 二、两条学习建议（建议） 欢迎他到中国来学汉语（邀请） 三、期盼（建议/邀请） 1. 坚持练习 2. 培养兴趣：音乐、小说 一、对汉语班的看法（回复）+建议开头（建议） 1.I am more than pleased to have received your letter/email, saying that.. 我很高兴收到来信，得知... 我很高兴收到来信，得知你已经参加了汉语班。 I am more than pleased to have received your email, saying that you have attended a Chinese language lesson. 一、对汉语班的看法（回复）+建议开头（建议） 2.Regarding how to..., I will try to offer some practical suggestions here. 关于如何做...，我会在此尽量提出一些实用的建议。关于如何学好中文，我会在此尽量提出一些实用的建议 Regarding how to learn Chinese well, I will try to offer some practical suggestions here. 二、两条学习建议（建议） 1.It would be a wise choice if you... 如果你...是明智的选择。 首先，如果你坚持每天练习中文是明智的选择。 To start with, it would be a wise choice if you stick to practicing it routinely. 二、两条学习建议（建议） 2. 此外，You’d better +V原... -你最好... 此外，你最好培养中文学习的兴趣，比如听音乐、看小说和电影。 Moreover，You’d better create the interest of Chinese learning, ranging from listening to music, reading novels to watching films. 二、欢迎他到中国来学汉语（邀请） 3. 在我看来，语言环境对新学习者来说是重要的。 Personally, the language environment is vital for new learners. 4. I sincerely long for your attendance. 我真诚地渴望你能来。 因此，我真诚地渴望你能来中国。 So I sincerely long for your attendance in China. 三、期盼（建议/邀请） 1. Hope my suggestions will be of some benefit to you. 希望我的建议对你有益。 I am more than pleased to have received your email, saying that you have attended a Chinese language lesson. Regarding how to learn Chinese well, I will try to offer some practical suggestions here. To start with, it would be a wise choice if you stick to practicing it routinely. Moreover, You’d better create the interest of Chinese learning, ranging from listening to music, reading novels to watching films. Personally, the language environment is vital for new learners. So I sincerely long for your attendance in China. Hope my suggestions will be of some benefit to you. /100 “No, little girl You can't get in without the money." Jeffrey, the bus driver, told a little girl who wanted to get on the bus but only had a few pennies. She must have been around seven years old, and he wasn't in the mood to deal with unaccompanied children that day. “please, sir. I want to visit my grandmother," the little girl begged. “Then go ask your parents for the money and come back next time," Jeffrey replied and gestured with his hand for the girl to get out She finally left the bus with her shoulders lowered. Jeffrey saw her sit down at the bus stop and drove off. He finished his route and went home for the lunch, greeting his wile, Greta, and sitting down on the couch to rest When he browsed his Facebook posts, an image caught his attention.A picture was shared of the little girl he had just turned away a few hours earlier. The word"'Missing" was written on top of the image. He learned that the girl had disappeared a day ago.and her parents were desperately trying to find her. “Dear! What have I done?" he asked himself, standing up and going to the front door. When Greta asked where he was going, Jeffrey said, “Greta! Quick! Call 91l and this number, showing her the picture of the girl. “I saw this girl at a bus stop earlier, and I turned her away because she didn't have enough money. I'm going to find her, but please make those calls. Having told her where the bus stop was, he went out. Jeffrey rushed to his car, speeding to the bus stop. Hopefully, the girl was smart enough to stay in one place. He couldn't believe how careless he had been earlier. She was a little girl all alone. As he drove to the bus stop, Jeffrey vowed to be more careful in the future, especially when it came to children. 连接第一段首句 连接第二段首句 连接第二段首句 引出结局（正能量） Paragraph 1: Finally, Jefrey saw a tiny figure sitting on the bench at the spot. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the police and another car approached. 心情转变：焦虑疲惫---宽慰 陪伴等待警察 下车的是？父母、祖母---重聚 经常帮助他人 1st paragraph 1.心情转变：焦虑疲惫---宽慰 4. 陪伴等待警察 2nd paragraph 1. 下车的是？父母、祖母 4. 结局：帮助他人 2. 询问女孩：为什么独自出门--语言、动作 3. 回复原因情绪，伤心难过--语言、情绪 2. 重聚场面：拥抱--动作 3. 悔不当初 P1 1.心情转变：焦虑疲惫---宽慰 J的焦虑和疲惫耗尽了，取而代之的是宽慰。 Jeffrey’s concern and tiredness faded away and was replaced with relief. one’s +n.1+ faded/ drained away and was replaced with+n.2. 某人的情绪1耗尽了，取而代之的是情绪2--P11 P1 2. 询问女孩：为什么独自出门--语言、动作 J 坐在长凳上，问小女孩为什么独自出来？ 两个动作，非谓语 Sitting on the bench, he asked the girl why she had left home alone. P1 3. 女孩回复：祖母的生日，父母上班没在家。 “我准备去看望祖母，给她一个惊喜，因为今天是她的生日。”小女孩说，“父母因为上班没在家。” 注意时态 “ I would visit grandmother for a surpris as today is her birthday,” the girl replied, “ my parents weren’t at home because they were at work.” “------,”某人 said, “----.”语言描写P15 P1 3. 回复原因情绪，伤心难过--语言、情绪 从她的声音判断，很明显陷入了悲伤之中。 Judging from her voice, it was evident that she was trapped in sadness. Judging from one’s voice/ eyes/ expression/ behavior, it was evident that sb. was trapped in +n. 从某人的声音/眼神/表情/行为判断，很明显某人陷入了...之中。情绪描写-名词句式P11 P1 4. 陪伴等待警察 意识到女孩独自可能有危险，J决定和她一起等待警察。 Having realized that she might be in danger alone, Jeffrey was determined to wait the police with her. Having realized..., sb. was determined to do 意识到...，某人决定... 情节描写-发奋图强P4 P2 1. 父母和祖母下车，小女孩飞奔过去 父母和祖母紧张地下了车，小女孩尽可能快的跑向他们。 Her parents and grandmother getting out of the car with anxiety, the little girl ran to them as fast as her little legs could carry her. (With)... doing/done, 主句, doing... 多个动作的发出者不一致时 动作面-P7 We ran across ... as fast as our little legs could carry us. 我们尽我们所能地快跑过... 动作-腿P9 P2 2. 重聚场面：拥抱--动作 女孩投入家人的怀抱，紧紧地拥抱着他们。 She threw herself into the families’ arms and hugged them tightly. A throw (threw) oneself into B’s arms and hug (hugged) them tightly. A投入B的怀抱，紧紧地拥抱着他们。动作手臂-P8 P2 3. 悔不当初 尽管他们非常感激J，但是J心想，“如果我没有赶小女孩下车就好了。” Despite they thanked Jeffrey, he thought to himself, “If only I had not turned the girl away.” sb. thought to oneself, “If only I had (not) done...” (虚拟)某人心想，“如果我（没有）...”情节-P 3 P24. 结局：帮助他人 后来，为了避免悲剧，J经常帮助坐车缺钱的人，并且关注单独一人的小孩。 From then on, Jeffrey always helped anyone who was short of the money for the bus and watched out for alone kids to avoid the tragedy. Finally, Jefrey saw a tiny figure sitting on the bench at the spot. Jeffrey’s concern and tiredness faded away and was replaced with relief. Sitting on the bench, he asked the girl why she had left home alone. “I would visit grandmother for a surprise as today is her birthday,”the girl replied,“ my parents weren’t at home because they were at work.”Judging from her voice, it was evident that she was trapped in sadness. Having realized that she might be in danger alone, Jeffrey was determined to wait the police with her. A few minutes later, the police and another car approached. Her parents and grandmother getting out of the car with anxiety, the little girl ran to them as fast as her little legs could carry her. She threw herself into the families’ arms and hugged them tightly. Despite they thanked Jeffrey, he thought to himself, “If only I had not turned the girl away.”From then on, Jeffrey always helped anyone who was short of the money for the bus and watched out for alone kids to avoid the tragedy./167 $$