应用文写作--在校园无人售货超市购物：感受与改进提议 讲义-江苏省扬州市2024-2025学年高三上学期期中测试英语试题

应用文写作 假定你是李华，学生会近期在校园里开办了无人售货超市(Unmanned Supermarket)，请向英文校刊 Campus Lie栏目投稿分享购物体验。 内容包括:1. 购物的过程和感受:2. 改进无人售货超市的建议。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Shopping at Our Unmanned Supermarket _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作分析 · 结构分析：文章整体结构清晰，分为两部分。开头先描述购物体验，接着提出改进建议，最后总结对超市的整体评价。 · 内容分析 · 购物过程和感受部分：简洁明了地阐述了进入超市（扫描二维码）、挑选商品（商品摆放整齐）和付款（自助收银扫描条码）的流程，并用 “exciting”“quick and convenient”“sense of independence” 等词汇突出积极的购物体验。 · 建议部分：从商品信息、购物工具和支付系统三个方面提出建议，具有一定的合理性和针对性，且都是基于校园无人售货超市的使用场景。 · 语言分析：语言表达流畅自然，使用了一些简单的连接词如 “first”“however”“besides” 使文章层次分明，词汇和句式较为简单，符合一般投稿分享的风格，易于读者理解。 高分句型 Process and feelings of shopping 1. When entering the unmanned supermarket, the neatly arranged shelves filled with a wide variety of goods come into view first, and this visual impact makes me feel excited. 2. The process of scanning the QR code at the entrance is very convenient, just like opening a door to a new shopping world. 3. When wandering among the shelves to pick goods, the quiet environment allows me to focus on comparing different brands and types of items. 4. Picking up the goods to check the production date and ingredient list and other information, the feeling of independent shopping is great. There is no salesperson around, and I'm completely in charge. 5. When I place the selected goods on the self - checkout counter, the process of scanning the barcodes of the goods gives a sense of technology. Each "beep" sound is like a small note in the shopping journey. 6. The lighting design of the unmanned supermarket is very reasonable, bright and soft, making the whole shopping environment warm and comfortable. 7. Seeing the prices of the goods clearly displayed on the screen and knowing my consumption situation clearly, this transparency is satisfying. 8. After completing the payment and walking out of the supermarket with the purchased goods, the easy and fast shopping experience makes me feel that a lot of time has been saved. 9. During the shopping process, if there are problems, you can check the operation guide beside, and this process of solving problems independently increases my sense of achievement. 10. Shopping in the unmanned supermarket, it seems that I am the master of this small shopping world. This unique experience makes me like shopping here more and more. Suggestions for improving the unmanned supermarket 1. A simple instructional video can be set up at the entrance of the supermarket to introduce the shopping process in more detail for first - time customers. 2. Add an out - of - stock reminder function for goods. For example, install indicator lights on the shelves, which light up when the goods are out of stock, facilitating timely restocking by staff and informing customers. 3. Improve the classification of goods. For example, add more specific classification labels on the shelves to enable customers to find the required goods faster. 4. Install air purification equipment to keep the air in the supermarket fresh and enhance the comfort of shopping. 5. Optimize the self - checkout system to reduce the occurrence of lagging or misidentifying barcodes and improve payment efficiency. 6. Set up an opinion feedback box or an online feedback channel in the supermarket to facilitate customers to report problems and suggestions in a timely manner. 7. For some easily damaged goods, such as fruits and eggs, set up more reasonable display methods and protective measures. 8. The display of goods can be adjusted regularly to maintain customers' freshness of shopping and increase their attention to the goods. 9. Equip the supermarket with some simple cleaning tools, such as rags, for customers to clean up after accidentally getting their hands dirty. 10. Provide some shopping bag recycling points to encourage environmentally - friendly shopping and keep the environment around the supermarket clean. 参考答案 Shopping at Our Unmanned Supermarket Shopping in the unmanned supermarket is an exciting new experience. First, I scan the QR code to enter. Inside, the goods are well - organized. I pick what I need and then pay at the self - checkout counter by scanning the item barcodes. It's quick and convenient, giving me a sense of independence. However, there are some areas for improvement. More detailed product information should be provided. Also, the supermarket can offer some small carts for big purchases. Besides, the payment system could be more user - friendly to avoid possible errors. Overall, it's a great addition to our campus. 下水文一 Shopping at Our Unmanned Supermarket The unmanned supermarket on campus has brought us a brand - new shopping experience. When I walked to the entrance, I simply scanned the code with my phone to get in. Once inside, the clean and bright environment made me feel comfortable. The shelves were stocked with a wide variety of goods, all neatly arranged and clearly labeled. I wandered around, freely selecting the snacks and daily necessities I wanted. When it was time to pay, the self - checkout process was a breeze. I just placed the items on the scanning area one by one, and the system quickly calculated the total cost. It was really efficient and I felt a great sense of novelty. Nevertheless, there are still some aspects that could be enhanced. For example, sometimes the scanning of certain barcodes doesn't work smoothly, so the scanning technology should be improved. Also, it would be better if there were more signs to guide customers to different product areas. In addition, providing some discount activities from time to time would be more attractive to students. Overall, this unmanned supermarket has great potential. 下水文二 Shopping at Our Unmanned Supermarket Shopping at the newly - opened unmanned supermarket on campus is quite an interesting affair. I entered by scanning the QR code with my mobile phone. The moment I stepped in, I was greeted by the orderly layout of the supermarket. The products were displayed in an appealing manner, making it easy for me to find what I was looking for. I picked up my favorite drinks and some stationery. The whole process of choosing items was very pleasant as there was no one to rush me. Then came the payment. The self - service payment machine was very user - friendly. I scanned the barcodes of the items and paid with my e - wallet. It was fast and convenient. However, I do have some suggestions for improvement. The supermarket could install more mirrors in the corners to make the space look larger. It would also be beneficial to set up a small rest area for tired shoppers. Moreover, the variety of products can be further expanded, especially some local specialty products. In general, this unmanned supermarket has added a lot of convenience to our campus life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$