内容正文:
第二部分 写作类别点拨
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类别一 写人叙事类记叙文
常见题目表述
①成长过程中有个懂你的人非常重要,如你的朋友、老师、父母等。校报英语专栏正在举行主题
为 “ KnowsMeBest”的征文活动,请根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示内容:
1.Whoknowsyoubest?
2.Whydoyouthinkhe/sheknowsyoubest?
3....
②某英文网站正在开展以“记好友,叙友情”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写
一篇短文投稿,介绍你最好的一位朋友,并叙述你们之间一段难忘的经历。
③每个人都有自己的闪光点,请以“MyShiningPoint”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。重
点介绍你的经历以及你的感悟。
④假定你是李平,请根据该邮件内容,用英语给Eric回复。
Hi,LiPing,
Youmentionedyourdreamjobinyourlastleter.Imrealyinterestedinit.Whydidyou
chooseit?What/Whoinfluencedyoutomakethedecision?Telmeyourexperience,please.Im
lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon!
Yours,
Eric
作文框架
开头:引入这个人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征(建议选取父母、朋友、老师等熟悉的
人物)
写作方式:①直接型:直接点明这个人物是谁。如:Imgladtosaysomethingaboutmybestfriend.
②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题,再点明这个人物。如:Duringtheprocessofgrowing,itis
veryimportanttohavesomeonewhoknowsus.Amongalthepeoplearoundme,Ithinknooneelsebut
myfatheristhespecialpersonwhoknowsmebest.
中间:你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when,what,how)
①建议写作角度:这个人物帮你成长的故事;这个人物身上的闪光点。
②需要注意的点:经历类应用一般过去时。
结尾:你的感悟/情感
高分模板
TheMost PersoninMyHeart
Tobehonest, isthemost personIveevermet.She/He (人物身
份+人物外貌特征:havearoundface,asoftvoice爥).Ithinkshe/heis becauseshe/heis
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always (描写人物性格的形容词:patient,kind,helpful爥).She/Helikes (人物
爱好:helpothers,colectstamps,takepartinvolunteeractivities爥).
OnceIwas (你遇到的麻烦:besick,failintheexam,havedificultyin+学科,cant
getalongwelwith爥),she/hetoldme (人物的行为:nottogiveup,nottoworyabout,
keepreadingaloud,talkto,helppeopleinneed爥).Thenshe/he (人物的行为:teachme
howto,askmeto,encouragemeto爥).Inaddition,she/he (人物的行为:givemeflowers,
books,givemehelpfulsuggestions,listentomepatiently爥)whenIwasintrouble.Ibecame/felt
(你的改变/感受:confident,moved,independent,helpful爥)becauseofher/him.
Asher/his ,Ihavelearnedthatnothingisimpossibleandweshouldhelpothers.(你的
感悟)IhopeIwilbeapersonlikeher/him.Ialsohopeshe/hewilcareforher/hisownhealth.
优秀范文记背
第一篇
MyFatherKnowsMeBest
Duringtheprocessofgrowing,itisveryimportanttohavesomeonewhoknowsus.Amongal
thepeoplearoundme,Ithinknooneelsebutmyfatheristhespecialpersonwhoknowsmebest.
Onspecialdays,likemybirthdays,myfatherisalwaysreadytogivemeabigsurprise.Heknows
exactlywhatIlikeandwhatIdontlike.Also,wheneverImeetwithanydificultyinmystudyor
feeldepressed,myfathermayreadmymindimmediately.Healwaystriestoshowmethewaystodo
rightthingsandencouragesmetofaceitbravely.
Myfatherhashelpedmegetthroughseveralhardtimes.Iamsurehewilleadmetoamorecolor
fulandwonderfulfuture.
第二篇
MyBestFriend
Imgladtosaysomethingaboutmybestfriend.HernameisAlice.Sheishelpfulandalwayshas
asweetsmileonherface.Sheisrealygoodatdancing.
Lastterm,therewasadancingfestivalinourschool.Webothsignedupforit,butIwasalitle
shyatfirstandafraidofdancinginfrontofalargecrowdofpeople.Sheencouragedmealotand
helpedmepracticethemoves.Together,wegaveaverysuccessfulperformance.
Iwilneverforgetthisexperience.
第三篇
MyShiningPoint
ImeetmanyexcelentpeopleeverydayandatthesametimeIalsofindmyselfrealygood.Ican
seetheworldwithkindeyes.IthinkIdontliketocomplain.Ifinditsoimportanttohaveapositive
atitude.
Lastmonth,IwaschosentoplayaroleinanEnglishshow.Itwasdificultformetomemorize
thelinesinsuchashorttime.However,Iregardeditasachalenge,whichwasalsoagood
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chancetoimprovemyspokenEnglish.SoImadeaneforttopractice.Finaly,Imadeitandre
ceivedhighpraise.
Infact,itismypositiveatitudethatbringsoutthebestinmealthetime.
第四篇
DearEric,
Thanksforyouremail.Imverygladtotelyousomethingaboutmydreamjob.Ihavedreamed
ofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisagreatprofessionandIenjoystaying
withchildren.Besides,Iwanttobeateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,myEng
lishteacher.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish,andinfluencesmealot.Istilrememberthatonce
IfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.Shecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodways
toimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Sincethen,Ihavemade
upmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobea
teacher,Iwilmakemoreefortstorealizemydream.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiPing
类别二 经历感受类记叙文
常见题目表述
①我们都收到过礼物,每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么,你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢?
对你来说,它有什么特殊的意义?请以“A/An Gift”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语
短文。
②互相帮助是一种美德,请结合下列思维导图,以“HelpingOthersMakesMe ”为题,写一
篇不少于80词的短文,谈谈自己的一次助人为乐的经历及感受。
③假如你是李辉,你校官网英文版块最近开设了一个 “MovingMoments”的栏目,现面向全校学生
征集稿件。请结合下面的征稿启事,用英语写一篇短文投稿,描述一个令你难忘的感人瞬间。
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