话题3 身心健康、安全与救护(贵阳2020)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作指导册（仁爱版 贵州专用）

话题写作指导册 第一部分 话题写作三阶指导 人与自我 chances to talk with others in English 话题一 写人叙事 4. As long as you work hard, your dream will be achieved one day. -阶 素材积累 5. In order to improve my listening skills, I plan to watch 1. David is a short and heavy old man with black hair and big English TV programs every weekend. eyes. 二阶 典例探究 2. Tina is more outgoing than me. That's why she likes sports 一、2.记叙文 3.一 4.一般过去时 and loves to make friends. 二、One of have much time to winning the competition 3. I know that she cares about me because she's always there never gave up very tired busy to practice at least to listen. spare/free time and won proud of success my skills 4. Reading books and newspapers is my favorite hobby that closer friendships face the difficulties has become a necessary part of my life. 三阶 写作实战 5. Although our math teacher is strict with us in class, she is Dear Peter. very kind to us after class. How is it going? I'm writing to invite you to the 二阶 典例探究 International Food Festival. We will hold it on the playground 一、1.记叙文 2.一 3.一般过去时 一般现在时 next Friday morning. There will be many different kinds of 二,last at started a whole new world was lost activities. like making delicious foods. We can also taste and new knowledge a lot of unforgettable experiences sell food here. I think the Food Festival can give us a way to 三阶:写作实战 develop good eating habits. Also, we can raise money, enjoy Dear Mr. Wang, many kinds of delicious foods and make our school life more I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of colorful. Come and have great fun with us during the some tour guides. I'd like to be one of them. I think I am Intemational Food Festival. suitable for the job. Looking forward to your early reply First of all. I am friendlv and patient. I am active in Yours. many activities. Besides, I can speak English well and have Li Hua won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am 话题三 身心健康、安全与救护 also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to 一阶 素材积累 foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the 1. We should try our best to protect ourselves and value our beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better lives. understand the life of the village. 2. It's necessary for us to eat some fruit every day I would be thankful if I could be given the chance 3. I think it is a good way to talk with our friends and that we Yours. can share our happiness and sadness with them. Li Hua 4. There are many waysto keep heathy, but Ithinkthe best 话题二 学校生活 way is to develop good eating habits. 一阶 素材积累 5. When we do exercise, we should make sure not to hurt 1. Of all the subjects. I like science best. ourselves. 2. We set up many clubs, such as the English Club, the 二阶 典例探究 Chess Club and the Art Club 一、1.说明文 2.一3.一般现在时 3. I prefer the English Club which can provide me with 二,is very important more attention to Here are healthy 贵州英语(课标版) 11 food bad for obey play football on the road when others. Thirdly, we can read more English novels and get along well with and Don't swim in the river. newspapers. It's good for us. Finally, we should keep a diary ask for help must every day and read some good passages. 三阶 写作实战 All in all, if we do more listening, speaking, reading How to Keep Healthy and writing, we will surely learn English well. Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep 话题五 促进中学生“五育并举” healthy? Here are some tips. 一阶 素材积累 Firstly, it is necessary to have healthy eating habits. We 1. It's important to clean our rooms, like cleaning up the should keep away from junk food. We had better eat more floor, making our beds and putting away our clothes. fruit and vegetables every day. Secondly, we should do 2. Exercising is a good way that can rest our brains and eyes. exercise for one hour a day in order to keep healthy. Thirdly, 3. The reason why we hold the traditional Chinese opera we should have a good living habit. We'd better go to bed activity is that we can learn more about traditional Chinese early and get up early every day. We should also keep our culture. mind healthy. We can relax ourselves when we are under 4. Running is a good way to reduce our pressure. great pressure from study, Besides, we should think of 5. We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves to show pleasant things and stay in a good mood. our care to them. Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health 二阶 典例探究 话题四 读书学习 一、2.记叙文 3.一 4.一般过去时 一般现在时 一阶 素材积累 二、makes me strong build up best short and thin 1. There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in running wanted to give up encouraged me with my our daily lives. father listening to music first prize an important part 2. The best way to improve your reading ability is to read stronger and stronger because let my brain help me more. 三阶:写作实战 3. Learning English is so helpful that it can help me get a lot How to Be a Responsible Student of information from around the world As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we 4. Remember to take notes of key points in class carefully. need to be responsible. What should we do? 5. Watching English films and listening to English songs are I think as good students, we should study hard and have two great ways to learn English. good learning habits. In class, we are supposed to listen to 二阶 典例探究 teachers carefully and be active in class. After school, we 一、2.二3.一般过去时 一般现在时 should finish our homework on time and do some reading. At 二,listened to the teacher carefully take notes in time home, it's necessary for us to share the housework. We can review do the dishes after dinner. Respecting parents is also 三阶 写作实战 important. In society, we ean do some volunteer work like The Best Ways to Learn English helping the elderly cross the road. Besides, we should be As the world is developing, English has become an nice to others and follow the rules important part of people's life. How can we learn it well? By doing these things, we can make our family and Here are some best ways. society better. Let's all be responsible and make a difference! Firstly, we should often listen to English songs, the 人与社会 tapes and English programs. It's also helpful for us to watch 话题六 English movies. Secondly, we should speak English with our 人际交往与团队合作 friends as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making 一阶 素材积累 mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we'll 1. In my opinion, friends are like stars which make our lives make. We'd better join the English club and practice with bright. 12 众相原创赋能中考　贵州英语 话题三　身心健康、安全与救护（贵阳２０２０） 【话题分析】 １．贵州近７年真题：２０２０年贵阳卷要求介绍良好的生活习惯。 ２．近３年全国中考写作角度：①谈论健康的重要性以及如何保持健康；②如何缓解压力；③如何保证 自身安全。 【教材单元链接】 人教版 仁爱版 七（上）Ｕｎｉｔ６食物（一） 七（下）Ｕｎｉｔ１０食物（二） 八（下）Ｕｎｉｔ１健康与急救 七（上）Ｕｎｉｔ３Ｔｏｐｉｃ３饮食与点餐 八（上）Ｕｎｉｔ１体育与运动 八（上）Ｕｎｉｔ２健康的生活习惯 八（下）Ｕｎｉｔ５Ｔｏｐｉｃ３Ｐ２３保持心理健康 八（下）Ｕｎｉｔ７Ｔｏｐｉｃ３Ｐ７７健康的饮食习惯 !"# $%&' 短语与搭配 １．ｌｏｏｋａｆｔｅｒ／ｔａｋｅｃａｒｅｏｆ照顾 ２．ｔａｋｅａｂｒｅａｋ休息 ３．ｋｅｅｐｓｂ．ｉｎｇｏｏｄｈｅａｌｔｈ某人保持身体健康 ４．ｂｅｇｏｏｄｆｏｒ对……有好处 ５．ｋｅｅｐａｂａｌａｎｃｅｄｄｉｅｔ保持均衡饮食 ６．ｄｏｍｏｒｅｅｘｅｒｃｉｓｅ多做锻炼 ７．ｐｈｙｓｉｃａｌａｎｄｍｅｎｔａｌｈｅａｌｔｈ身心健康 ８．ｉｎｄａｎｇｅｒ处于危险中 ９．ｓａｖｅｏｎｅｓｌｉｆｅ挽救某人的生命 １０．ｏｂｅｙｔｈｅｔｒａｆｉｃｒｕｌｅｓ遵守交规 １１．ｓｔａｙａｗａｙｆｒｏｍ远离…… １２．ｋｅｅｐｃａｌｍ保持冷静 １３．ａｓｋｓｂ．ｆｏｒｈｅｌｐ向某人求助 １４．ｂｅｃａｒｅｆｕｌｏｆ小心…… 【注：以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型／结构】 开头句 １．Ｎｏｗａｄａｙｓ，ｐｅｏｐｌｅｐａｙｍｕｃｈｍｏｒｅａｔｅｎｔｉｏｎｔｏ ｈｅａｌｔｈ．Ｉｔｉｓｎｅｃｅｓｓａｒｙｆｏｒｅｖｅｒｙｏｎｅｔｏｌｅａｒｎｓｏｍｅ ｗａｙｓｔｏｋｅｅｐｈｅａｌｔｈｙ． ２．Ｓｐｏｒｔｓａｒｅｏｆｇｒｅａｔｉｍｐｏｒｔａｎｃｅｆｏｒｕｓ．Ｔｈｅｙｃａｎ ｈｅｌｐｕｓｂｕｉｌｄｕｐｏｕｒｂｏｄｙａｎｄｂｅｃｏｍｅｈｅａｌｔｈｙ． ３．★Ｉｎｏｒｄｅｒｔｏｍａｋｅｕｓｇｒｏｗｕｐｓａｆｅｌｙ，ｏｕｒｓｃｈｏｏｌ ｈａｓｍａｄｅｍａｎｙｓａｆｅｔｙｒｕｌｅｓｆｏｒｕｓｔｏｆｏｌｏｗ． 中间句 健康 １．Ｙｏｕｄｂｅｔｅｒｅａｔｍｏｒｅｆｒｕｉｔａｎｄｖｅｇｅｔａｂｌｅｓｉｎｓｔｅａｄ ｏｆｊｕｎｋｆｏｏｄ． ２．Ｙｏｕｎｅｅｄｔｏｂｒｕｓｈｙｏｕｒｔｅｅｔｈａｆｔｅｒｅａｔｉｎｇｔｏｈａｖｅ ｇｏｏｄｔｅｅｔｈ．［人教七（下）Ｕ２Ｐ１２］ ３．Ｆｉｎａｌｙ，ａｗｏｎｄｅｒｆｕｌｆｏｏｔｂａｌｇａｍｅｏｆｔｅｎｍａｋｅｓ ｍｅｆｅｅｌｒｅｌａｘｅｄ，ｅｓｐｅｃｉａｌｙｗｈｅｎＩｆｅｅｌｓｔｒｅｓｓｅｄ． ４．★Ｊｕｎｋｆｏｏｄｓａｒｅｆｏｏｄｓｔｈａｔａｒｅｎｏｔｇｏｏｄｆｏｒ ｈｅａｌｔｈ．［仁爱八（下）Ｕ７Ｐ６４］ ５．★Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｎｏｔｏｎｌｙｅａｔｅｎｏｕｇｈｇｏｏｄ，ｈｅａｌｔｈｙ ｆｏｏｄｂｕｔａｌｓｏｅａｔｉｔｒｅｇｕｌａｒｌｙ．［仁爱八（下）Ｕ７ Ｐ７８］ ６．★Ｉｔｓｇｏｏｄｔｏｒｅｌａｘｂｙｗａｔｃｈｉｎｇｇａｍｅｓｈｏｗｓｏｒ ｓｕｒｆｉｎｇｔｈｅＩｎｔｅｒｎｅｔ，ｂｕｔＩｔｈｉｎｋｔｈｅｂｅｓｔｗａｙｉｓ ｔｈｒｏｕｇｈｅｘｅｒｃｉｓｅ． 安全 １．Ａｔｈｏｍｅ，ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｂｅｃａｒｅｆｕｌｗｉｔｈｆｉｒｅａｎｄ ｅｌｅｃｔｒｉｃｉｔｙ． ２．★Ｄｏｎｔｐｕｓｈｅａｃｈｏｔｈｅｒ，ｅｓｐｅｃｉａｌｙｗｈｅｎｗｅｇｏ ｕｐｓｔａｉｒｓｏｒｄｏｗｎｓｔａｉｒｓ． ３．★Ｂｅｓｉｄｅｓ，ｙｏｕｄｂｅｔｅｒｎｏｔｒｉｄｅｓｉｄｅｂｙｓｉｄｅ， ｏｒｙｏｕｍａｙｂｅｉｎｄａｎｇｅｒ． ４．★Ｉｔｓｎｅｃｅｓｓａｒｙｆｏｒｙｏｕｔｏｌｅａｒｎａｂｏｕｔｆｉｒｓｔａｉｄ． ［仁爱八（上）Ｕ２Ｐ４７                                                                    ］ ９ 　　众相原创 赋能中考 应对孤独、烦恼的建议 １．★Ｉｓｕｇｇｅｓｔｔｈａｔｙｏｕｓｈｏｕｌｄｔａｌｋｍｏｒｅａｂｏｕｔｙｏｕｒ ｐｒｏｂｌｅｍｓｗｉｔｈｙｏｕｒｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ． ２．★Ｉｔｈｉｎｋｙｏｕｓｈｏｕｌｄｊｏｉｎｓｏｍｅｃｌｕｂｓａｎｄｍａｋｅ ｍｏｒｅｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ． ３．★Ｆｉｎａｌｙ，ｗｅｍｕｓｔｇｅｔｏｎｗｅｌｗｉｔｈｏｔｈｅｒｓ．Ｉｔ ｃａｎｋｅｅｐｕｓｉｎａｇｏｏｄｍｏｏｄ． 结尾句 呼吁、表达期望 １．Ｉｈｏｐｅｙｏｕｗｉｌｇｅｔｗｅｌｓｏｏｎ．［仁爱八（上）Ｕ２ Ｐ２７］ ２．Ｆｏｌｏｗｔｈｅｄｏｃｔｏｒｓａｄｖｉｃｅ，ａｎｄｙｏｕｌｇｅｔｗｅｌ ｓｏｏｎ．［仁爱八（上）Ｕ２Ｐ３３］ ３．★Ａｌｉｎａｌ，ｐｌａｙｉｎｇｆｏｏｔｂａｌｉｓａｇｏｏｄｗａｙｔｏ ｂｕｉｌｄｕｐｍｙｂｏｄｙａｎｄｒｅｌａｘｍｙｓｅｌｆ． ４．★Ｔｈｅｓｅａｒｅｓｏｍｅｇｏｏｄｗａｙｓｔｏｋｅｅｐｈｅａｌｔｈｙ． Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｔｒｙｏｕｒｂｅｓｔｔｏｃａｒｅａｂｏｕｔｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ ｈｅａｌｔｈｆｏｒａｂｅｔｅｒｌｉｆｅ． 俗语谚语 １．Ｅａｒｌｙｔｏｂｅｄ，ｅａｒｌｙｔｏｒｉｓｅ．早睡早起。［仁爱八 （上）Ｕ２Ｐ５０］ ２．Ｈｅａｌｔｈｉｓｔｈｅｆｉｒｓｔｗｅａｌｔｈ．健康是第一财富。 ３．Ｈｅｗｈｏｈａｓｈｅａｌｔｈｈａｓｈｏｐｅ．拥有健康就拥有 希望。 ４．Ａｎａｐｐｌｅａｄａｙｋｅｅｐｓｔｈｅｄｏｃｔｏｒａｗａｙ．一天一 苹果，医生远离我。 使用上面句子中的高级句型／结构扩写或升格下 列句子 １．Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｐｒｏｔｅｃｔｏｕｒｓｅｌｖｅｓａｎｄｖａｌｕｅｏｕｒｌｉｖｅｓ． （用ｔｒｙｏｎｅｓｂｅｓｔｔｏｄｏｓｔｈ．升格句子） 　 　 ２．Ｅａｔｉｎｇｓｏｍｅｆｒｕｉｔｅｖｅｒｙｄａｙｉｓｎｅｃｅｓｓａｒｙ．（用Ｉｔｉｓ ＋ａｄｊ．＋ｆｏｒｓｂ．ｔｏｄｏｓｔｈ．升格句子） 　 　 ３．Ｉｔｈｉｎｋｉｔｉｓａｇｏｏｄｗａｙｔｏｔａｌｋｗｉｔｈｏｕｒｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ． （用ａｎｄ连接的并列句扩写句子，补充说明和 朋友聊天的好处） 　 　 　 ４．Ｔｈｅｒｅａｒｅｍａｎｙｗａｙｓｔｏｋｅｅｐｈｅａｌｔｈｙ．（用 ｂｕｔＩ ｔｈｉｎｋ扩写你认为保持健康的最佳方式） 　 　 　 ５．Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｍａｋｅｓｕｒｅｎｏｔｔｏｈｕｒｔｏｕｒｓｅｌｖｅｓ．（用 ｗｈｅｎ引导的时间状语从句扩写句子） 　                                                                          　 ("# )*+, 　　每年３月最后一周的星期一，是全国中小学生“安全教育日”。作为中学生的你平日里是怎样 进行安全防护的？请根据以下思维导图提示，以 “ＫｅｅｐＳａｆｅｔｙｉｎＭｉｎｄ”为题写一篇英文短文，分享 你在这方面的认识和做法。 ０１ 　贵州英语　 要求如下：１．短文必须包含思维导图中的相关信息，并再补充两个方面； ２．内容积极向上，不少于８０词； ３．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ＫｅｅｐＳａｆｅｔｙｉｎＭｉｎｄ 　 　 　 　 　 一、细审题 １．文体：介绍如何进行安全防护，是一篇　　　　； ２．人称：表达自己的想法，应用第　　　　人称； ３．时态：表达看法和建议，属于客观事实，应用　　　　　　　　。 二、搭框架、写要点 ＫｅｅｐＳａｆｅｔｙｉｎＭｉｎｄ 开头：引入话题 安全在我们的日常生活中是非常重要的。Ｓａｆｅｔｙ　　　　　　　　 ｉｎｏｕｒｄａｉｌｙｌｉｆｅ． 多注意 ｐａｙ　　　　　　　　 这里有一些建议。　　　　　　　　 ｓｏｍｅｓｕｇｇｅｓｔｉｏｎｓ． 中间：具体介绍如何安全防护、从哪几方面注意、应该怎么做以及这样做的原因 ①食品安全：吃健康的食物 ｅａｔ　　　　　　　　　　　拒绝吃垃圾食品 ｓａｙｎｏｔｏｊｕｎｋｆｏｏｄ 它对我们的健康有害。Ｉｔｉｓ　　　　　　　　 ｏｕｒｈｅａｌｔｈ． ②交通安全：遵守规则 　　　　 ｔｈｅｒｕｌｅｓ 不要在路上踢足球。Ｄｏｎｔ　　　　　　　　． ③运动安全： 在做体育锻炼时不要弄伤自己。Ｄｏｎｔｈｕｒｔｏｕｒｓｅｌｖｅｓ　　　　 ｄｏｉｎｇｐｈｙｓｉｃａｌｅｘｅｒｃｉｓｅ． 不要在河里游泳。　　　　　　　　 ④交友安全：交朋友时要小心 ｂｅｃａｒｅｆｕｌｔｏｍａｋｅｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ 与……相处融洽 　　　　　　　　　　不要伤害别人和自己 Ｄｏｎｔｈｕｒｔｏｔｈｅｒｓ　　　　 ｏｕｒｓｅｌｖｅｓ． 知道如何寻求帮助 ｋｎｏｗｈｏｗｔｏ　　　　　　　　 结尾：再次强调安全的重要性 简而言之，安全必须在第一位。Ｉｎｓｈｏｒｔ，ｓａｆｅｔｙ　　　　 ｃｏｍｅｆｉｒｓｔ． 三、遣词造句，连句成文 ＫｅｅｐＳａｆｅｔｙｉｎＭｉｎｄ Ｓａｆｅｔｙｉｓｖｅｒｙｉｍｐｏｒｔａｎｔｉｎｏｕｒｄａｉｌｙｌｉｆｅ．Ｗｅｍｕｓｔｐａｙｍｏｒｅａｔｅｎｔｉｏｎｔｏｉｔ．Ｂｕｔｈｏｗｃａｎｗｅｋｅｅｐ ｓａｆｅ？Ｈｅｒｅａｒｅｓｏｍｅｓｕｇｇｅｓｔｉｏｎｓ． Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｐａｙａｔｅｎｔｉｏｎｔｏｔｈｅｆｏｏｄｓａｆｅｔｙ．Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｅａｔｈｅａｌｔｈｙｆｏｏｄ．①　Ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｓａｙｎｏｔｏ １１ 　　众相原创 赋能中考 ｊｕｎｋｆｏｏｄ，ｗｈｉｃｈｉｓｂａｄｆｏｒｏｕｒｈｅａｌｔｈ．　 Ｔｒａｆｉｃｓａｆｅｔｙｉｓｅｖｅｒｙｂｏｄｙｓｂｕｓｉｎｅｓｓ．Ｗｅｍｕｓｔｏｂｅｙｔｈｅ ｒｕｌｅｓ．Ｄｏｎｔｐｌａｙｆｏｏｔｂａｌｏｎｔｈｅｒｏａｄ．Ｓｐｏｒｔｓｓａｆｅｔｙｉｓａｌｓｏｉｍｐｏｒｔａｎｔ．Ｄｏｎｔｈｕｒｔｏｕｒｓｅｌｖｅｓｗｈｅｎｄｏｉｎｇ ｐｈｙｓｉｃａｌｅｘｅｒｃｉｓｅ．Ｄｏｎｔｓｗｉｍｉｎｔｈｅｒｉｖｅｒ．Ｂｅｓｉｄｅｓ，ｗｅｓｈｏｕｌｄｂｅｃａｒｅｆｕｌｔｏｍａｋｅｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ，ｅｓｐｅｃｉａｌｙｎｅｔ ｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ．Ｌｅａｒｎｔｏｇｅｔａｌｏｎｇｗｅｌｗｉｔｈｏｕｒｃｌａｓｓｍａｔｅｓａｎｄｄｏｎｔｆｉｇｈｔ．Ｗｈａｔｓｍｏｒｅ，ｄｏｎｔｈｕｒｔｏｔｈｅｒｓａｎｄ ｄｏｎｔｈｕｒｔｏｕｒｓｅｌｖｅｓ．②　Ｉｔｓｖｅｒｙｉｍｐｏｒｔａｎｔｔｏｋｎｏｗｈｏｗｔｏａｓｋｆｏｒｈｅｌｐ．　 Ｉｎｓｈｏｒｔ，ｓａｆｅｔｙｍｕｓｔｃｏｍｅｆｉｒｓｔ． 点评：①处用ｗｈｉｃｈ引导的定语从句；②处用Ｉｔｓ＋ａｄｊ．＋ｔｏｄｏｓｔｈ．结构。 -"# ./01 　　美好生活，健康同行。如何丰富校园生活，促进同学们的身心健康？目前，你校英语网站 “ＶＯＩＣＥＯＦＴＥＥＮＳ”正在征集同学们的建议。请你根据下图提示，以“ＨｏｗｔｏＫｅｅｐＨｅａｌｔｈｙ”为题，用 英语写一篇短文投稿，分享你的建议。 要求如下：１．短文必须包含思维导图中的相关信息，并适当发挥； ２．内容积极向上，不少于８０词； ３．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ＨｏｗｔｏＫｅｅｐＨｅａｌｔｈｙ 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 ２１