内容正文:
话题写作指导册
第一部分
话题写作三阶指导
人与自我
chances to talk with others in English.
话题一写人叙事
4.As long as you work hard,your dream will be achieved one
day.
一阶素材积累
5.In order to improve my listening skills,I plan to watch
1.David is a short and heavy old man with black hair and big
English TV programs every weekend,
eyes.
二阶典例探究
2.Tina is more outgoing than me.That's why she likes sports
一、2.记叙文3.一
4.一股过去时
and loves to make friends.
One of have much time to winning the competition
3.I know that she cares about me because she's always there
never gave up very tired busy to practice at least
to listen.
spare/free time and won proud of success my skills
4.Reading books and newspapers is my favorite hobby that
closer friendships face the difficulties
has become a necessary part of my life.
三阶写作实战
5.Although our math teacher is strict with us in class.she is
Dear Peter,
very kind to us after class.
How is it going?I'm writing to invite you to the
二阶典例探究
International Food Festival.We will hold it on the playground
一、1.记叙文2.一3.一般过去时一股现在时
next Friday morning.There will be many different kinds of
二、last at started a whole new world was lost
activities,like making delicious foods.We can also taste and
new knowledge a lot of unforgettable experiences
sell food here.I think the Food Festival can give us a way to
三阶写作实战
develop good eating habits.Also,we can raise money,enjoy
Dear Mr.Wang,
many kinds of delicious foods and make our school life more
I am Li Hua.I am glad to know that you are in need of:
colorful.Come and have great fun with us during the
some tour guides.I'd like to be one of them.I think I am
Interational Food Festival.
suitable for the job.
Looking forward to your early reply!
First of all,I am friendly and patient.I am active in
Yours,
many activities.Besides,I can speak English well and have
Li Hua
won several prizes in English speaking competitions.I am
话题三
身心健康、安全与救护
also good at telling stories.So I can introduce local culture to
一阶素材积累
foreigners in English.Most importantly,I have visited the
1.We should try our best to protect ourselves and value our
beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better
lives.
understand the life of the village.
2.It's necessary for us to eat some fruit every day.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
3.I think it is a good way to talk with our friends and that we
Yours.
can share our happiness and sadness with them.
Li Hua
4.There are many ways to keep healthy,but I think the best
话题二学校生活
way is to develop good eating habits.
一阶素材积累
5.When we do exereise,we should make sure not to hurt
1.Of all the subjects,I like science best.
ourselves.
2.We set up many clubs,such as the English Club,the二阶典例探究
Chess Club and the Art Club.
一、1.说明文2.一3.一般现在时
3.I prefer the English Club which can provide me withis very important more attention to Here are healthy
贵州英语(课标版)11 贵州英语
话题二 学校生活
【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年真题:暂未考查过。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①介绍学校生活;②对学校的规章制度发表看法;③就某项比赛或活动
写一份通知。
【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七(下)Unit1加入社团、俱乐部
七(下)Unit11校园旅行
九(全)Unit14学校生活
七(下)Unit5学校日常
九(下)Unit6Topic3毕业活动
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短语与搭配
1.graduatefrom从……毕业
2.cometoanend即将结束
3.pass/failtheexam通过考试/未通过考试
4.setupsomeclubs成立一些俱乐部
5.jointhebasketbalclub加入篮球俱乐部
6.takeanactivepartin积极参加
7.diferentkindsofactivities不同种类的活动
8.haveagoodefecton对……有良好的影响
9.makefuluseof充分利用
10.makeprogress取得进步
11.geton/alongwelwithsb.和某人相处得好
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
开头句
1.OnSeptember21st,wehaveaschooltripinthe
afternoon.[人教七(上)U8P47]
2.LastAugust,ourclassdidsomethingveryspecial
onourschooltrip.[人教八(上)U1P8]
3.Howtimeflies!WelgraduatefromBeijingIn
ternationalSchoolthisweekend![仁爱九(下)
U6P43]
4.Wehavealkindsofafterclassactivitiesinour
school.
5.★Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolorful,
alkindsofclubshavebeensetup.Asforme,Id
liketosetupacookingclub.
中间句
学习与校园活动
1.Ilikehistoryverymuchbecauseitsinteresting.
[仁爱七(下)U5P19]
2.Wevisitedthesciencemuseumanditwasrealy
interesting.[人教七(下)U11P65]
3.Lastweekstalentshowinourclasswasagreat
success.
4.★Theharderyouwork,thebetergradesyou
wilget.
5.★Wehavesomeschoolactivities,suchasschool
trips,Englishcompetitionsandartfestivals.
6.★Ofalthesports,Ilikebasketbalbest.
7.★Iwonfirstplaceinthe800meterraceatthe
schoolsportsmeeting.
校园基础设施
1.Betweenthetwoteachingbuildingsisthe
teachersofice.
2.★ThereisabiglibraryinourschoolandIoften
readbookswithmyfriendsthere.
3.★TheplaceIlikemostinmyschoolistheplay
groundwhereIcandoexerciseandplayhappily
withmyclassmates.
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众相原创 赋能中考
学校规章制度
1.Studentsshouldweartheschooluniformsat
school.
2.Studentsarentalowedtobringmobilephonesto
theschool.
对新生提出关于校园生活的建议
1.Youdbetertakeanactivepartindiferentkindsof
activitiesandmakeyourschoollifemorecolorful.
2.★Agoodrelationshipbetweenteachersand
studentscanhelpyouimproveyourstudy.
结尾句
1.Alinal,itwasanexcitingday.[人教七(下)
U11P65]
2.Ithinktodaysschooltripwasterible.[人教七
(下)U11P65]
3.★EventhoughIamsadthatjuniorhighis
over,Ilookforwardtonewexperiencesinsenior
high![人教九(全)U14P112]
4.★Ifeelalitlesadbecausewehavetosaygood
bye.ButIwilrememberourfriendshipforever.
[仁爱九(下)U6P43]
5.★Aslongasyoufolowtheadviceabove,I
believeyouwilhaveacolorfulschoollife.
6.★Ifyoumakefuluseofyourfreetime,you
wilhaveawonderfulschoollifeandyouwil
learnalot.
使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下
列句子
1.Ilikesciencebest.(用of短语表明范围来升格
句子)
2.Wesetupmanyclubs.(用suchas列举俱乐部
的种类)
3.IprefertheEnglishClub.(用定语从句扩写该
俱乐部的特点)
4.Youworkhardandyourdreamwilbeachieved
oneday.(用aslongas引导的条件状语从句升
格句子)
5.IplantowatchEnglishTVprogramseveryweek
end.(用inorderto扩写句子,补充看英文电视
节目的目的)
("# )*+,
离别是“桃花潭水深千尺”的不舍,是“莫愁天下无知己”的期盼。在毕业匆匆的日子里,你们肯
定有许多关于学校的美好记忆。现21世纪英语网站正在举行以“MyBestMemoryof ”为题
的英语征文活动,请根据下面的思维导图,写一篇英语短文投稿。
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贵州英语
要求:1.用名词短语补全标题;
2.内容必须包括思维导图中的所有要点,可适当发挥,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
MyBestMemoryof
一、细审题
1.补全标题:用一个活动名称来补全标题;
2.文体:讲述关于学校的美好记忆,是一篇 ;
3.人称:主要使用第 人称;
4.时态:讲述过去发生的事情应用 。
二、搭框架、写要点
MyBestMemoryofaDancingCompetition
开头:引入话题,点明最美好的记忆是什么
最美好的一段记忆之一是舞蹈比赛。 mybestmemoriesisthedancingcompetition.
中间:具体讲述舞蹈比赛的过程
①时间:inGrade8
②发生了什么:
我没有太多的时间来好好准备。Ididnt getmyselfready.
我赢得比赛的机会很小。Ihadlitlechanceof .
③坚持的过程:
我从未放弃。I .
我很累。Iwas . 在我忙碌的日常学习之后 aftermy dailystudies
我仍然设法练习。Istilmanaged . 至少一小时 onehour
在我的空闲时间 inmy
④最后的结果:
我尽我所能,赢得了一个特别奖。Ididmybest aspecialprize.
结尾:你的感受和你的收获
为自己感到骄傲。Ifelt myself. 快乐与成功 pleasureand
培养我的技能 develop
和同学们建立更亲密的友谊 form withmyclassmates
面对困难的勇气 thecourageto
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众相原创 赋能中考
三、遣词造句,连句成文
MyBestMemoryofaDancingCompetition
Therearemanywonderfulmemoriesduringmyschoollife.Oneofmybestmemoriesisthedancing
competition.
IstilrememberitwasinGrade8.Atfirst,Ididnthavemuchtimetogetmyselfready.① It
seemedthatIhadlitlechanceofwinningthecompetition.
However,Inevergaveup.② ThoughIwastiredaftermybusydailystudies,Istilmanagedto
practiceforatleastonehourinmysparetime. Inthecompetition,Ididmybestandwonaspecial
prize.
Ifeltproudofmyself.Thisexperiencehasbroughtmepleasureandsuccess.③ Ihavenotonly
developedmyskils,butIhavealsoformedcloserfriendshipswithmyclassmates. ④ Themost
importantthingisthatIhavefoundthecouragetofacethedificulties.
点评:①处用Itseemedthat爥句型;②处用though引导的让步状语从句;③处用notonly爥 butalso爥
结构;④处用Themostimportantthingisthat爥句型。
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(2024贵阳二十八中二模)假如你是李华,你校将于下周五上午举办“国际美食节”活动。你打
算邀请Peter参加。请你结合以下图示,用英语给他写一封不少于80词的电子邮件,告诉他具体时
间、地点、活动安排以及活动的益处。
写作要求:
1.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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