2025年贵州中考英语二轮复习主题写作课件：主题3多彩、有意义的学校生活

主题3 主题3 多彩、有意义的学校生活 分析贵州近5年真题可知，2022年安顺中考书面表达以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，要求介绍“双减”后的课余生活安排及感受；2022年毕节中考书面表达以“A new subject will be carried out in school”为题，要求介绍对新课程方案的看法和建议；2022年六盘水中考书面表达以“Colorful Activities at School”为题，要求介绍“课后服务”期间参加的活动； 主题探究 2022年铜仁中考书面表达以“丰富的课外活动”为主题，要求分享学校的课外活动情况及体会；2021年毕节中考书面表达要求介绍暑期英语培训课程的选择、理由以及看法和建议。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知，此主题通常有以下命题角度：1.校园环境与设施；2.学校社团；3.校园活动；4.课后活动；5.对中学生活的回顾；6.对新生的建议。 角度1　校园环境与设施 1．school landscape 校园景观 2．school buildings 学校建筑 3．teaching facilities 教学设施 4．reading corners 阅读角 主题短语积累 角度2　学校社团 1．take up (尤指消遣)学着做；开始做 2．take place 举行 3．stand out 出色；杰出 4．aim to do sth. 旨在做某事 5．make friends 交朋友 6．teach sb. to do sth. 教某人做某事 7．enjoy great popularity 很受欢迎 8．join the club 加入社团/俱乐部 角度3　校园活动 1．a school trip 学校旅行 2．School Day 学校开放日 3．an art festival 艺术节 5．a book sale 图书义卖 6．a soccer game 足球比赛 7．take an active part in 积极参加 8． different kinds of activities 不同种类的活动 9． be ready to do sth. 准备做某事 10．do well in/be good at 擅长 11．win the first prize 赢得第一名 角度4　课后活动 1．extend an invitation 发出邀请 2．after-school activities 课余活动 3．music performances 音乐表演 4．outdoor exploration 户外探索 5．with the help of 在……的帮助下 6．learn from 从……中学习 7．have a wonderful time 度过美好时光 8．develop personal interests 发展个人兴趣 9. have a sense of achievement 有成就感 角度5　对中学生活的回顾 1．graduate from 从……毕业 2．come to an end 结束 3．graduation ceremony 毕业典礼 4．remember doing sth. 记得做过某事 5．look back at 回首 6．be thankful to 对……感激 角度6　对新生的建议 1．be full of hope 充满希望 2．be thirsty for knowledge 渴望知识 3．study regularly 定期学习 4．join study groups 加入学习小组 5．communicate bravely with others 勇敢地与他人交流 6．put sth. into practice 把……付诸实践 7．follow school rules 遵守学校规定 佳句赏析 ►校园环境与设施 1．The clean and tidy classrooms provide a comfortable space for us to study. 2．The sports field in our school is spacious and perfect for various sports activities.(高级词汇spacious adj.宽敞的) 3．The school dining hall offers a variety of delicious and nutritious food to keep us energetic throughout the day.(高级短语①a variety of各种各样的， 强调食物的多样性；②nutritious food营养食物) 佳句积累 佳句赏析 4．The library is a treasure house of knowledge, where we can explore the world of books. 5．The playground is always full of laughter and joy during breaks, making our school life more colorful. 佳句赏析 ►学校社团 1．I'm writing to invite you to join the Martial Arts Club in our school, which aims to develop our interest and improve our skills. 2．To spread traditional Chinese culture, our school recently set up a paper- cutting club.(To spread…为目的状语前置，突出目的) 3．Joining the English Club can not only help me enjoy my free time, but also allow me to make many new friends. 佳句赏析 4．You are welcome to join in the activities of this club if you are available this weekend.(if引导条件状语从句，说明了接受邀请的前提条件) 5．I'm sure you will learn more about Chinese culture through these activities in the club. 佳句赏析 ►校园活动(校园活动的意义、对校园活动的看法及建议) 1．There are many interesting activities that you can participate in this term in our school.(that引导定语从句，解释说明activities) 2．Thanks to the policy of “double reduction”， we have more time to do what we like at school. 3．Through school activities, I discovered my potential and grew more confidently.(高级词汇potential n. 潜能，潜力) 佳句赏析 4．I think taking part in school activities is a great way to break the monotony of classes and bring excitement to our school days.(高级词汇monotony n. 单调乏味) 5．In my opinion, campus activities should cover a wider range of interests to involve more students.(a wider range of 更广的范围) 佳句赏析 ►课后活动(课后活动的邀请、课后活动的内容及感受) 1．I'm excited to invite you to our after-school party. It'll be full of laughter and joy. Don't miss it! 2．In the after-school activity, we are going to have a painting competition. Everyone can express his creative thoughts freely. 3．The after-school activity made me feel so relaxed and happy that I forgot all about my stress from classes. 4．I really enjoyed the after-school club. It gave me a chance to learn new skills and make new friends. 佳句赏析 ►对中学生活的回顾 1．Looking back on my middle school life, it was a journey filled with challenges and growth.(以“Looking back on…” 开头，引起读者对过去经历的关注和好奇) 2．Mr. Brown guided me to do a lot better in science. He always took the time to explain things to me clearly whenever I couldn't understand anything. 佳句赏析 3．I still remember the exciting sports meeting in middle school, where we all cheered for our classmates and felt the power of unity.(where引导非限制性定语从句，对先行词sports meeting进行了补充) 4．We should be thankful to people in our lives who helped and supported us.(who引导定语从句，通过描述人物的具体行为，让感恩之情有了更充分的理由) 佳句赏析 ►对新生的建议 1．My dear friends in grade seven, enjoy your new journey in junior high school. I remember when I was in your shoes, I was both excited and nervous.(be in one's shoes站在某人的角度) 2．Don't be afraid to ask questions in class. I used to be shy, but I learned that it's the best way to understand the lessons clearly.(it's the best way to…突出方法的重要性) 佳句赏析 3．A friendly and respectful attitude will make your school life much more pleasant.(respectful attitude尊重的态度) 4．Make the best use of your three years in junior high school. It will pass quickly, and the memories you have will stay with you forever.(make the best use of充分利用) 句子仿写 1)学校图书馆为我们提供了各种各样有教育意义的书籍。[用短语a variety of仿写] _______________________________________________________________2)在美术课上，学生们总是充满了创造力和想象力。[用短语be full of仿写] _______________________________________________________________ The school library provides us with a variety of educational books. The students are always full of creativity and imagination during art classes. 句子仿写 3)这次教育活动旨在提高学生的环保意识。[用短语aim to do sth.仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4)如果你下周有空，你可以来参加这个培训中心的课程。[用if引导的条件状语从句仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This educational activity aims to raise students' awareness of environmental protection. You can come to attend the courses of this training center if you are/available next week. 句子仿写 5)我确信你会通过学校的这些俱乐部获得更多关于艺术和历史的知识。 [用I'm sure (that)句型仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6)今年在我们学校有很多令人兴奋的比赛，你可以参加。[用there be句型和定语从句仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm sure you will gain more knowledge about art and history through these clubs in the school. There are many exciting competitions that you can take part in this year in our school. 句子仿写 7)多亏了校园艺术节，我们在学校有更多展示才华的机会。[用短语thanks to仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8)放学后的足球比赛让我感到如此兴奋以至于我完全忘记了学习的压力。[用结构make sb. do sth.仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks to the school art festival, we have more chances to show our talents at school. The football match after school made me feel so excited that I forgot all about my pressure from studies. 句子仿写 9)每当我有不理解的东西时，她总是花时间给我清楚地解释。[用whenever引导的时间状语从句仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10)我们应该感激生活中关心和陪伴我们的朋友。[用who引导的定语从句仿写] _______________________________________________________________ She always took the time to explain things to me clearly whenever I couldn't understand anything. We should be thankful to friends in our lives who cared and companied us. 句子仿写 11)在课堂上不要害怕犯错，因为这是快速提高你自己的最好的方式。[用祈使句Don't…和句型It's the best way to…仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12)我希望所有新生都能充分利用机会，找到他们自己的方式取得很好的进步。[用短语make the best use of仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Don't be afraid to make mistakes in class because it's the best way to improve yourself quickly. I hope all of the freshmen can make the best use of opportunities to find their own ways to make progress well. [2024贵阳观山湖区二模]初中生活即将结束，三年中你一定有很多的回忆，请根据写作要求，以“My Memory about Junior High School”为标题写一篇不少于80词的短文。 真题剖析 写作要求： 1．用适当的形容词补全标题； 2．结合图文信息，并适当拓展内容； 3．文中不能出现个人真实信息。 空处缺少形容词，与学校记忆匹配的形容词有：unforgettable，happy，funny, beautiful，precious，unique，warm，… 【审题】 主题：初中生活的回忆 文体：________文 要点：导图中的3个问题即3个要点 ①具体阐述初中生活中的某段记忆 ②表达自己的感受 ③从中学到的东西 ④省略号为补充要点：对高中生活的展望 记叙 人称：第______人称 时态：要点①：以____________时为主； 要点②、③和④：以____________时为主； 一 一般过去 一般现在 【写作框架】 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 My _________ Memory about Junior High School How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is drawing to a close. ①I've spent a happy time here. I can't forget it. Happy 连句成篇 　②I once was a problem student. I was always late for school, listened to music and ate snacks in class. What's worse, I hardly ever finished my homework on time. Luckily, with the help of my teachers and classmates, things changed a lot. Now I behave well and study hard. I can almost finish my homework well. What's more, I get along well with others and I am always willing to offer help. ③I'm so thankful to the people around me and they make my school life happier. Through this experience, I also have learned that helping each other in study can make us progress together and live a more pleasant school life.(要点1：具体阐述初中生活的某段记忆；要点2：表达自己的感受；要点3：从中学到的东西) 连句成篇 ④The life in senior high school may be hard. But I believe that I'm brave enough to face the difficulties and I can try my best to overcome them.(补充要点：要点4：表达期望，展望高中生活) 句子升格 ①用that引导的定语从句合并两个句子： _______________________________________________________________ ②用结构“used to do sth.”升格句子： ______________________________________________________________ I can't forget the happy time that I've spent here. I used to be a problem student. 句子升格 ③用强调句，强调句中的“they”，升格句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ④用although引导的条件状语从句合并两个句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm so thankful to the people around me and it's they who make my school life happier. Although the life in senior high school is hard, I believe that I'm brave enough to face the difficulties and I can try my best to overcome them. 【誊写】 My ___________ Memory about Junior High School ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Happy How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is drawing to a close. I can't forget the happy time that I've spent here. I used to be a problem student. I was always late for school, listened to music and ate snacks in class. What's worse, I hardly ever finished my homework on time. Luckily, with the help of my teachers and classmates, things changed a lot. Now I behave well and study hard. I can almost finish my homework well. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What's more, I get along well with others and I am always willing to offer help. I'm so thankful to the people around me and it's they who make my school life happier. Through this experience, I also have learned that helping each other in study can make us progress together and live a more pleasant school life. Although the life in senior high school is hard, I believe that I'm brave enough to face the difficulties and I can try my best to overcome them. [2024贵阳南明区一模]作为青少年，我们都想拥有多姿多彩、健康快乐的校园生活。请根据下图提示信息，以“Having a School Life”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。 实战演练 写作要求： 1．补全标题； 2．内容须包含图中的所有信息； 3．适当表达自己的看法和感受。 Having a ____________ School Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Colorful I am a junior high school student. I am truly lucky to have a colorful and enjoyable school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The moment you enter this school, you will be greeted by a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there. In this school, we are living like a big family. Teachers here are not only as kind and caring as parents but also care a lot about our growth and development. Classmates get along well with one another, just like brothers and sisters who support and care for each other. We have a variety of clubs, such as dancing club, English club and sports club. I can freely choose what I am interested in. During the break, I often do exercise to keep in good health and stay energetic. I really cherish my school life. I am looking forward to creating more wonderful memories in the coming days. $$