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必修一
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Reading for Writing
As a teenager, what problems do you have in your daily life?
depression
puppy love
generation gap
Internet addiction
bullying
pressure of study
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help ?
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
Read for the format
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problem
advice
Who has a problem?
__________
What’s the problem?
______________
Who gives advice?
__________
What’s the advice?
1._________________
2._________________
3._________________
Chen Lei
Internet Addiction
Susan Luo
talk to your friend
try new hobbies
discuss the problem together
Writing Task
教学建议:阅读教材P18页建议信,处理基本内容。并思考建议信的语言特点。
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Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
Study the Organisation
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A letter of advice
How to write a letter of advice?
1. I know what the problem is.
2. I understand how you feel.
3. This is my advice and reason (s).
4. I think my advice will help.
点明问题
表示理解
提出建议
表达愿望
文章开头
文章主体段
文章结尾
应用文规范写作
首段
Learning that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online, I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
Learning that …, I understand quite well that you are/feel…. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
了解到…,我非常理解你感到…。我写信来给你一些有用的建议。
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建议信的开头(beginning)常用句式
After reading your letter, I am sorry to know that... .
Having read your letter, I am sorry to learn that... .
I’m sorry that you are having trouble/difficulty/problems with sth/in doing sth.
I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
You have asked me for my advice on... .
I am writing to express my views concerning...
I am writing to offer you some advice about...
I am writing to you for the purpose of... .
过渡句
Here are a few suggestions.
My suggestions are as follows.
It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice.
I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.
When it comes to such a situation, you’d better take immediate actions.
This problem will be more serious unless you take some effective measures.
Some effective measures must be taken to solve the problems. They can be listed as follows.
应用文规范写作
提建议的表达方式
1. Why don’t you do sth?/Why not do sth?为什么不做……
2. You’d better do… 你最好做……= You may as well(不妨) do ...
3. It couldn’t be better(再好不过) if you could ...
4. It would be beneficial(有利的) if you could ...
5. It’s advisable/wise(明智的)/reasonable(合理的) for sb to do...
6.I highly recommend that you (should)…
我强烈建议你…
7. If I were you, I would…如果我是你,我会…
8. It is suggested/recommended that you should…… 建议你……
过渡词
最后:last but not least,finally, at last, in the end,
其次,此外: besides, in addition, furthermore, moreover, what’s more...
首先,第一:first of all, to begin with, at first
应用文规范写作
结尾
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. (我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。)
Looking forward to seeing positive changes.(期待看到积极的变化。)
建议信的结尾(ending)常用句式
I have the confidence that your problems will be solved soon.
I am looking forward to your consideration about my suggestions.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into serious consideration.
I’ll be glad if my proposals are of great help to you.
I hope you will find these recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
I will be more than happy to see your improvements .
As the old saying goes,…… (俗话说,……)
8. The more you do…, the better you will do…
Dear …,
Learning that …, I understand quite well that you are/feel…. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
①First of all, it would be a good idea if you could…. This way, … ②Moreover,(/Besides,/Additionally,/Furthermore,) I highly recommend that you (should)….For example, … ③It is also advisable to ….
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to seeing positive changes.
All the best,
Li Hua
注意:中间段最多三个建议,且至少两个建议要有合逻辑的理由。
After-class assignment
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom是高一年级的学生,他进入高中后,不知道如何适应高中生活,感到很迷茫。请给他写一封建议信,要点如下:
1、多与同伴沟通;
2、培养合适的学习策略;
3、积极参与课外活动。
多与同伴沟通
exchange ideas with your classmates
培养合适的学习策略
develop suitable learning strategies
积极参与课外活动
take part in different extracurricular activities
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Dear Tom,
Knowing that you, as a freshman in high school, don't know how to adapt to high school life, I understand quite well that you feel confused. I'm writing to give you some useful advice.
First of all, it would be a good idea if you could be open-minded and exchange ideas with your classmates. This way, you can improve your communication skills and make more friends. Moreover, I highly recommend that you develop effective learning strategies. For example, set clear goals and make a study plan. This will help you stay organized. It is also advisable to take part in different extra-curricular activities. It could be joining a sports club or an art group. This will enrich your life and help you relax after stressful study.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to seeing positive changes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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