2025届高考一轮复习读后续写专项提高积累之 暖心励志类 爱心传递超市购物券 善良是发自心底的美 讲义

2025届江苏省苏州市高三上学期期中调研英语试题 第二节 (满分25分) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The line of customers snaked around the counter (柜台). There were just two more shopping days before Christmas, and most of the shoppers in line were in panic mode. One of those customers was my husband, Dale. Dale is one of those people who are the nononsense shoppers who depend on fast service because every minute counts as the countdown before Christmas continues. But the service here was anything but fast. The problem was the elderly lady at the front of the line, who kept talking happily to the salesgirl working at the cash register. “This sweater is for my granddaughter,” the lady explained. “She’s going to be a teacher, you know. And she’s doing very well. She has a very nice boyfriend who is an architectural technician. He’s just started a job with a good company, but you know, we haven’t seen any sign of a ring yet. Young people seem to wait so long these days. Why, I was married with one child and another one on the way when I was her age.” On and on she talked as she painstakingly counted out her change, unaware of the winding snake of customers behind her. When she finally zipped her purse shut and picked up her parcel, the clerk gestured to the man next in line. “Thank you, dearie.” She started to move slowly, checking the contents of her shopping bag. She was almost to the end of the counter when suddenly she turned back. “Oops! Excuse me, what’s this for?” she asked, holding up a piece of paper. “It’s a discount coupon (优惠券) that will give you 15 percent off your next purchase here at the store,” replied the salesgirl. “Well, thank you, my dear, but I won’t be needing this,” she beamed. “Here, you can use it right now!” she said, handing it to the man next in line. The man’s eyes widened, and he mumbled (嘟囔) a word of thanks as she walked to the door. 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 词左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then an amazing thing happened. By the time the coupon reached Dale, he felt like he was part of something special. 原文分析:红色定从/定语;蓝色宾从;黄色状从,只标连词;下划线标黄单词为需掌握积累单词;从句类会用斜体标注;需积累部分黑体加粗下划线;(定语从句1) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The line of customers snaked around the counter (柜台). There were just two more shopping days before Christmas, and most of the shoppers in line were in panic mode. One of those customers was my husband, Dale. Dale is one of those people who are the nononsense shoppers(定语从句) who depend on fast service(定语从句1) because every minute counts as the countdown(状从) before Christmas continues(状从). But the service here was anything but fast. The problem was the elderly lady at the front of the line, who kept talking happily to the salesgirl(定语从句) working at the cash register(非谓语动词短语做后置定语). “This sweater is for my granddaughter,” the lady explained. “She’s going to be a teacher, you know. And she’s doing very well. She has a very nice boyfriend who is an architectural technician(定语从句). He’s just started a job with a good company, but you know, we haven’t seen any sign of a ring yet. Young people seem to wait so long these days. Why, I was married with one child and another one on the way when I was her age(状从).” On and on she talked as she painstakingly counted out her change, unaware of the winding snake of customers behind her(状从). When she finally zipped her purse shut and picked up her parcel(状从), the clerk gestured to the man next in line. “Thank you, dearie.” She started to move slowly, checking the contents of her shopping bag(非谓语动词做后置定语). She was almost to the end of the counter when suddenly she turned back(状从). “Oops! Excuse me, what’s this for?” she asked, holding up a piece of paper(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). “It’s a discount coupon (优惠券) that will give you 15 percent off your next purchase here at the store(定语从句),” replied the salesgirl. “Well, thank you, my dear, but I won’t be needing this,” she beamed. “Here, you can use it right now!” she said, handing it to the man next in line(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). The man’s eyes widened, and he mumbled (嘟囔) a word of thanks as she walked to the door(状从). 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 词左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then an amazing thing happened. By the time the coupon reached Dale, he felt like he was part of something special. 一、文章中使用的高中语法现象分析 1. 定语从句 例子: *Dale is one of those people who are the nononsense shoppers...* 语法点: 定语从句修饰 *people*,*who* 引导从句并在从句中作主语。 例子: *She’s going to be a teacher, you know.* 语法点: 简单句中嵌入的非限制性定语从句。 2. 现在分词短语 例子: *The line of customers snaked around the counter.* 语法点: 现在分词短语作伴随状语,描述动作的动态。 3. 过去分词短语 例子: *unaware of the winding snake of customers behind her.* 语法点: 过去分词短语作后置定语修饰主语。 4. 省略和倒装 例子: *Here, you can use it right now!* 语法点: *Here* 位于句首引起部分倒装,用于突出语气。 5. 感叹句 例子: *Why, I was married with one child and another one on the way when I was her age!* 语法点: *Why* 表感叹,句式强调整体语气。 6. 情态动词 例子: *You can use it right now.* 语法点: *can* 表示许可或能力。 二、常见搭配及可积累语料 1. 描写购物情景 *snaked around the counter* 近义词: curled, wound 例句: The queue snaked around the ticket booth, showing the crowd’s eagerness. A long line snaked through the crowded marketplace. 2. 形容购物心情 *in panic mode* 近义词: anxious, flustered 反义词: calm, composed 例句: He was in panic mode when he realized he’d lost his wallet. Shoppers are often in panic mode right before the holidays. 3. 形容购物动作 *count down before Christmas* 近义词: approach, draw closer 例句: The children counted down eagerly before Christmas arrived. Every minute seemed to matter as the countdown began. 三、续写思路分析 1. 构思框架 转折点: 老奶奶的行为引发顾客的惊讶和感动。 高潮: 优惠券开始传递,大家互相赠予,形成温馨的场面。 结尾: Dale 感受到人性之美,内心被感染。 2. 提炼框架 情节起因: 老奶奶意外送出优惠券。 情感转变: 顾客从不耐烦到感动。 情节发展: 优惠券在顾客间传递,构建集体善意。 高潮结尾: Dale 深受感动,加入传递行列。 3. 实施要点 重点描写心理和动作变化:从不满到感动、参与。 插入情境描写,如拥挤的店铺、顾客的表情。 保持逻辑连贯,体现情感升华。 四、推荐描写语料 1. 动作描写 He clutched the coupon tightly in his hand, hesitant to pass it on. She reached out with a trembling hand, her eyes filled with gratitude. The coupon fluttered between hands, like a symbol of shared kindness. 2. 心理描写 A wave of warmth surged through his heart as he realized what was happening. Dale felt a tinge of guilt for his earlier impatience. The moment filled him with an inexplicable exhilaration, a reminder of the goodness in people. 3. 环境描写 The store buzzed with chatter and the occasional beep of cash registers. Holiday decorations hung from the ceiling, their soft glow adding warmth to the scene. Outside, the snow fell gently, muffling the usual chaos of the city.