内容正文:
24年11月昆明仁泽学校高二年级期中考应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校即将在期中考后举办本年度校园戏剧节,来自加拿大的交换生朋友Alice 对此很感兴趣,想来现场体验并感受中国传统戏剧的魅力。请你给她发一封邮件,告知戏剧节的相关安排。内容包括:
1. 邮件目的
2. 戏剧节的内容和意义
3. 戏剧节的时间和具体地点
4. 期待她的到来
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右:(2)请按如下格式在答纸的相应位置作。
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作文题解读
首先,这是一封典型的邀请邮件(invitation)。邀请的基本句式表达和邮件礼仪不是本次写作的难点。
这次写作的难点在于:“戏剧节的内容”。内容方面,提醒大家注意审题,注意看“中国传统戏剧”几个字。因此,现代剧比如话剧 (Modern Drama)、音乐剧 (Musical Theatre)、影视改编剧 (Film or TV Adaptations)、现代舞剧 (Modern Dance Drama) 等戏剧形式不在此列。考生应该专注于“传统”二字,需要提到比如:京剧 (Peking Opera) 、昆曲 (Kunqu Opera) 、黄梅戏 (Huangmei Opera) 、越剧 (Yue Opera) 以及豫剧 (Yu Opera)等戏剧形式。
至于“戏剧节的意义”就好办多了。大家只需要理解文化自信的必要性,抓住发邮件的契机传播中国文化,把活动目的往文化传承上靠一靠就行。
写作示范(121 words)
Dear Alice,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to invite you to our school's Annual Drama Festival, which will be held after the midterm exams. Since you're interested in Chinese traditional drama, this is a wonderful chance to experience its unique charm.
The festival will feature a variety of traditional Chinese performances, including Peking Opera and local Yunnan drama like Dian Opera, performed by our talented students. This event not only celebrates our cultural heritage but also helps foster a deeper appreciation for traditional arts among students and the community.
The festival is scheduled for November 25th at 2:00 PM in the school auditorium. I’m excited to share this cultural experience with you and look forward to seeing you there!
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作亮点
写作最大亮点是“本土化”(localization)的写作内容设定。他刻意提到了云南本土的“滇剧”(Yunnan drama, Dian Opera),这大大增加了文章的文化深度和地域特色,不仅紧扣了“中国传统戏剧”的主题,还展现了对地方文化的关注和理解,使文章更具个性,不容易给阅卷人留下“模版写作”的敷衍印象。
词汇和表达推荐
Chinese traditional drama (noun phrase) 中国传统戏剧
unique charm (noun phrase) 独特的魅力
feature (verb) 以……为特色
Dian Opera (noun) 滇剧
celebrate (verb) 庆祝
cultural heritage (noun phrase) 文化遗产
foster (verb) 培养
be scheduled for (verb phrase) 时间定于…
下水文一
Dear Alice,
I'm writing to tell you about the campus drama festival in our school.
This drama festival aims to promote Chinese traditional drama. There will be various performances, including classic Chinese opera like Beijing Opera and Kunqu Opera. You can enjoy beautiful costumes, unique singing styles, and fascinating stories. It's a great chance to experience the charm of Chinese traditional culture.
The festival will be held right after the mid - term exam. It starts at 2 pm on next Friday in the school hall.
I'm sure you'll love it. Looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours,
Li Hua
下水文二
Subject: Campus Drama Festival
Dear Alice,
I know you're interested in Chinese traditional drama, so I'm emailing you about our school's drama festival this year.
This festival is a significant event. It showcases different forms of Chinese traditional dramas, which combine acting, singing, dancing, and acrobatics. The performances will not only entertain but also educate us about Chinese history and values.
It'll take place at 7 pm on the Saturday after the mid - term exam in the school auditorium.
I hope you can come and have a wonderful time. I can't wait to enjoy the festival with you.
Best regards,
Li Hua
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