湖南省长沙市雅礼集团2024-2025学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题读后续写讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 When the tragedy struck me during the Depression (大萧条), my father did the only thing he could. The tragedy happened in the year 1933. I was only 6 years old when I was rushed to the hospital with two crushed feet. My parents were told I might never walk again. The accident happened when I was sitting in front of our house in Lowell, Massachusetts. I was playing in a puddle (水坑) after a rainstorm when I felt a huge weight on my feet. When I looked up, there was a car tire on my feet. I cried out, but the motor was running and no one could hear me over the engine. The driver had run across the street for a newspaper. When he got back to his car, he drove away — never knowing he had parked on my feet. Just about then, our neighbor’s son came home and saw me bent over my feet in pain. He immediately carried me home, and I remember thinking how tall and strong he was. An ambulance came, and I remained in the hospital for 3 weeks while my feet were “repaired”. When I returned home, I could hardly walk. I sat in our bay window and watched the children play on the street and longed to join them...but I couldn’t. I felt so left out despite my parents’ company. My parents were told that if I was ever to walk again, I’d need treatment, which in those days meant riding a tricycle (三轮车) to strengthen the muscle and eventually get my feet back into condition for walking. Our family couldn’t afford such an expensive thing. Times were tough during the Depression, and there were five mouths to feed, besides buying coal and wood for the stove. Dad couldn’t afford the bus fare and on cold winter days he walked 7 miles every day in his only winter coat to get to work. No, there was no money for a tricycle. I would be a disabled person all my life. Paragraph 1: Then one day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. Paragraph 2: It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. 文章大意 在大萧条时期，6 岁的 “我” 因被汽车轮胎碾压双脚而住院，出院后几乎无法走路。医生表示要想重新走路需要骑三轮车锻炼肌肉，但家境贫寒，父亲连坐公交的钱都没有，每天穿着唯一的冬衣走 7 英里去上班，根本买不起三轮车，“我” 以为自己要终生残疾，只能看着其他孩子玩耍，内心充满孤独和渴望。 几处伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔：家庭贫困无法购买三轮车，续写中父亲扛回三轮车回应。 · 伏笔：多年后才知道三轮车的来历，续写第二段讲述其来源。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：惊讶、激动、充满希望。 · 故事线：看到父亲扛着三轮车回来，“我” 意识到自己有了恢复行走的可能，父亲用行动给了 “我” 希望。 第二段 · 情感线：感动、感恩。 · 故事线：多年后得知父亲为了三轮车付出的艰辛，理解父亲深沉的爱。 主旨升华句 1. Love can break through the shackles of poverty. 2. In the face of difficulties, a father's love is like a lighthouse. 3. Father's love has the power to create miracles in the darkest times. 4. The sacrifice of parents is the cornerstone of our hope. 5. Love in hard times can be the most precious gift in life. 写作示范 第一篇 第一段： Then one day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. I couldn't believe my eyes. My heart raced with excitement. I rushed to the door as quickly as my weak feet would allow. Father's face was red with exertion, but he had a big smile when he saw me. That tricycle was like a ray of sunshine in the dark, bringing me the hope of walking again. 第二段： It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. He had worked extra hours for months, doing the toughest jobs. He even sold his precious watch. Every drop of his sweat and every sacrifice he made were for my chance to walk. I was deeply touched, realizing the depth of a father's love. 第二篇 第一段： Then one day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. I stared in disbelief, my eyes welling up with tears. It was as if a miracle was walking towards me. Father's steps were heavy but determined. When he placed the tricycle in front of me, I knew he had brought me the key to a new life, and hope filled my heart once again. 第二段： It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. He had borrowed money from every possible source, swallowing his pride. He had endured the hardships and the judgment of others. His love knew no bounds. It made me understand that in the most difficult times, love can move mountains and make the impossible possible. 【答案】Paragraph 1: Then one day, while sitting at my usual place in the window, I saw my father walking up the street carrying a tricycle on his shoulder. Was that true? I couldn’t believe my eyes. I opened the window and cried out, “Is that tricycle for me?” Having put down the tricycle, Dad told me that it belonged to me. “Ride the tricycle every day, and then you will be all right, my girl!” From then on, with my father’s company, I rode it every day to strengthen my muscle. Regardless of pain, I kept on practicing riding. Eventually I got my feet back into condition, and could walk normally! Paragraph 2: It was many years later before I learned where and how Dad had got the tricycle. My mother told me what happened on those cold winter days. In his only winter coat, he wandered around the hospital every day, begging the doctor to save my feet. Moved by my father, eventually the doctor asked the hospital to give my father a part time job to do. With the doctor’s help, my father got the job. Having worked day and night, eventually, he earned enough money to buy the tricycle. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$