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专题09应用文写作
(一)
(23-24高一上·江苏无锡·期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike来信想了解中国的春节,请你给他写封回信介绍这个节日。字数100词左右。要点如下:
1. 春节的由来及寓意;
2. 春节的庆祝活动;
3. 邀请他来中国欢度春节。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike
In your last letter, you mentioned that you want to know something about the Spring Festival. I am writing to tell you about it.
The Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”. Slightly different from that in the past, it is now given new meanings and regarded as a way for people to enjoy the reunion with their families, however far they live or work. On the New Year’s Eve, each family has its members gathered together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and eat a lot of delicious meals in the warmth of the family. Children can get lucky money in red envelop. People have a good time, holding opera performances and other celebrations.
I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Mike写一封信介绍中国春节,内容包括春节的由来及寓意、春节的庆祝活动并邀请他来中国欢度春节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
起初地:originally →initially
庆祝:celebrate →observe
美味的:delicious →tasty
精彩的:wonderful →excellent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On the New Year’s Eve, each family has its members gathered together.
拓展句:It is on the New Year’s Eve that each family has its members gathered together.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】People have a good time, holding opera performances and other celebrations.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
(二)
(23-24高一上·浙江杭州·期末)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“探访杭州的文化遗产”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 活动的过程;
2. 收获与感想。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Last weekend, we had the honor of participating in the “Exploring the Cultural Heritage of Hangzhou” event organized by our school's Student Union.
The event began with a brief introduction to the rich cultural history of Hangzhou, followed by a guided tour of some of the city's most famous cultural landmarks. We visited the West Lake, a beautiful natural landscape that has been a source of inspiration for generations of poets and artists. Next, we made our way to the Songcheng Scenic Area, where we explored the ancient streets and buildings that once thrived as a commercial hub. Walking through the narrow lanes, we could almost imagine the bustling market scene of the past. Later, we visited the Hangzhou Museum, where we learned more about the historical and cultural heritage of the city. The exhibits ranging from ancient pottery and calligraphy sets to traditional costumes and musical instruments provided a window into the rich tapestry of Hangzhou's history.
In conclusion, I would like to express my gratitude to the school student union for organizing such a meaningful event. I am looking forward to participating in more such cultural explorations in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,报道上周末参加的校学生会组织的“探访杭州的文化遗产”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
中心:hub → center
感恩:gratitude→thanks/appreciation
总之:in conclusion→ in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In conclusion, I would like to express my gratitude to the school student union for organizing such a meaningful event.
拓展句:In conclusion, I would like to express my gratitude to the school student union for organizing such a meaningful event, from which we benefited a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We visited the West Lake, a beautiful natural landscape that has been a source of inspiration for generations of poets and artists.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Later, we visited the Hangzhou Museum, where we learned more about the historical and cultural heritage of the city.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The exhibits ranging from ancient pottery and calligraphy sets to traditional costumes and musical instruments provided a window into the rich tapestry of Hangzhou's history.(运用了高级词汇range from…to…的现在分词形式作后置定语)
(三)
(23-24高一上·浙江宁波·期末)假定你是李华,你的朋友Jack最近写信向你求助,信中提到了自己最近染上了网瘾,请你写信告知他网瘾的危害,并提出一些建议。内容如下:
1. 说明网瘾的危害;
2. 提出建议。
网瘾 network addiction
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to the Internet. Not only does it ruin your health but it also affects your academic performance.
Here are my suggestions. Firstly, it is highly recommended to do some sports, which equips you with a strong body and iron will. Secondly, expanding your social network is worth trying. Socialize with like-minded friends and join in their activities regularly. As long as you feel life is full of fun and wonder, you will resist the temptation of network.
I do hope you will find my suggestions of some use. Best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给向自己求助的朋友Jack回信,告知他网瘾的危害,并为他提出戒除网瘾的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
毁掉:ruin→destroy, devastate
影响:affect→influence, impact
充满:be full of→be filled with
抵挡:resist→withstand
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Secondly, expanding your social network is worth trying. Socialize with like-minded friends and join in their activities regularly.
拓展句:Secondly, expanding your social network is worth trying, which means you can socialize with like-minded friends and join in their activities regularly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does it ruin your health but it also affects your academic performance. (运用了not only… but also…固定句型、not only置于句首引起的部分倒装句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, it is highly recommended to do some sports, which equips you with a strong body and iron will. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] As long as you feel life is full of fun and wonder, you will resist the temptation of network. (运用了as long as引导条件状语从句)
(四)
(23-24高一上·广东深圳·期末)假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Max最近发来邮件,谈到他学业压力大、饮食不规律的问题。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.表示关心;
2.提出建议;
3.给予鼓励。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Max,
I’m sorry to hear that you are experiencing academic stress and irregular eating habits.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Max,
I’m sorry to hear that you are experiencing academic stress and irregular eating habits. As a friend who really cares about your well-being, I want to offer a few suggestions that may help you feel better.
Firstly, create a balanced schedule. Set aside specific times for studying, resting and eating. Plan your meals in advance so that you can eat more regularly and healthily. In terms of studying, try breaking down your tasks into smaller parts to help prevent burnout. Additionally, don’t hesitate to seek support from your teachers or classmates if you’re struggling with any particular subjects.
Remember, Max, you are strong. I’m convinced that you can overcome these challenges and succeed in your studies!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作,你的英国朋友Max最近发来邮件,谈到他学业压力大、饮食不规律的问题,请你回复邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice/tip
具体的:specific→concrete
提前:in advance→ahead of time
此外:additionally→besides/in addition/furthermore/moreover
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m convinced that you can overcome these challenges and succeed in your studies!
拓展句:I hold the belief that you can conquer these obstacles and thrive in your studies!
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a friend who really cares about your well-being, I want to offer a few suggestions that may help you feel better. (运用了who和that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Plan your meals in advance so that you can eat more regularly and healthily. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
(五)
(23-24高一上·湖南株洲·期末)假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了一年一度的科技节活动,主题为“科技与未来”。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1. 科技节活动内容;
2. 你的感想。
参考词汇:水火箭 water rocket;信息素养大赛 information literacy competition
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I am writing to share with you our annual school’s Science Festival held last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I am writing to share with you our annual school’s Science Festival held last Friday. Nearly 200 students, selected from Grade 1 and Grade 2, competed with all their strength on the playground.
The festival was celebrated by holding various activities both indoors and outdoors, including armament model racing, water rocket launching and information literacy competition and so on, which has sparked students’ growing love for science and technology. What impressed me most was the armament model racing.
The festival was highly spoken of, because it not only brings merry laughter to the whole playground, but also reminds us of paying more attention to technological achievements like air drone and being a well-rounded person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,分享学校举办的科技节活动,需涵盖活动内容和个人感想两方面的内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
用全力:with all one’s strength→with all one’s might
各种各样的:various→a variety of, a wide range of
激发:spark→stimulate
注意:pay attention to→take notice of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nearly 200 students, selected from Grade 1 and Grade 2, competed with all their strength on the playground.
拓展句:Nearly 200 students, who were selected from Grade 1 and Grade 2, competed with all their strength on the playground.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The festival was celebrated by holding various activities both indoors and outdoors, including armament model racing, water rocket launching and information literacy competition and so on, which has sparkled students’ growing love for science and technology. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What impressed me most was the armament model racing. (运用了what引导主语从句)
(六)
(23-24高一上·湖北荆门·期末)假定你是李华, 你市将举办中国传统文化展(the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair),请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Sam 参加。内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.展会内容。
注意:
1.词数80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
Overwhelmed with excitement to know that the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair is scheduled to be held at the City Art Center this Friday afternoon, lasting from 2pm to 5pm, I can hardly wait to invite you to enjoy the activity.
The fair will focus on a variety of exhibitions related to traditional culture, such as ancient poetry, costumes, calligraphy and paintings. What it highlights are calligraphy and painting works from ancient to modern times. Through it, you will gain deeper insights into traditional Chinese culture.
Such a fantastic opportunity does it offer you that you can’t afford to miss it if you have any interest. An early reply will be appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华,请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Sam 参加你市将举办的中国传统文化展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋:excitement→thrill
与……相关:be related to→be connected with
传统的:traditional→conventional
获得:gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The fair will focus on a variety of exhibitions related to traditional culture, such as ancient poetry, costumes, calligraphy and paintings.
拓展句:The fair will focus on a variety of exhibitions related to traditional culture, which will include ancient poetry, costumes, calligraphy and paintings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What it highlights are calligraphy and painting works from ancient to modern times. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] Overwhelmed with excitement to know that the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair is scheduled to be held at the City Art Center this Friday afternoon, lasting from 2pm to 5pm, I can hardly wait to invite you to enjoy the activity. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
(七)
(23-24高一上·河南开封·期末)上周末你参加了学校举办的音乐节。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动的内容;
2. 收获与感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The School Music Festival
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【答案】One possible version:
The School Music Festival
Last Saturday, I attended the music festival held by our school. The event was filled with various performances, including singing, dancing, and playing musical instruments. The festival attracted many talented students who showed their skills and love for music. There were Chinese traditional music, country music and others that thrilled the audience.
It was definitely an exciting experience for me. And it reminded me of the importance of music in our lives. Music has the power to lift our spirits, bring us together, and express emotions that words cannot.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按照要求为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍上周末参加的学校举办的音乐节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出席:attend→ be present at
充满:be filled with→ be full of
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
有才能的:talented→ gifted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Saturday, I attended the music festival held by our school.
拓展句:Last Saturday, I attended the music festival which was held by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The festival attracted many talented students who showed their skills and love for music.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】There were Chinese traditional music, country music and others that thrilled the audience.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
(八)
(23-24高一上·江西宜春·期末)上周末,你校组织了“我是环保小卫士”活动,带领全体高一学生清扫了人民广场的垃圾。请根据下面的写作提示,为校英文报写一篇报道,记述这次活动。内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点和参加人员;
2.活动过程;
3.你的体会与感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We are the Little Environmental Guards
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【答案】We are the Little Environmental Guards
Last weekend, our school organized an activity called “We are the Little Environmental Guards” and led all high school freshmen to clean up the garbage in People’s Square.
We went to People’s Square to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly. We also preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection.
Protecting the ecological environment, in fact, is to ensure our own survival. I think this activity is meaningful, because it is a good chance for us to protect the planet we live on.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“上周末学校组织‘我是环保小卫士’活动,带领全体高一学生清扫了人民广场的垃圾”一事,按所给提示为校英文报写一篇报道,记述这次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organize→conduct
与……相关:related to→relevant to
保护:protection→preservation
实际上:in fact→as a matter of fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We also preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection.
拓展句:We also preached to the public about some knowledge and methods related to environmental protection, which received very good feedback.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We went to People’s Square to search for and collect the garbage that was thrown randomly. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I think this activity is meaningful, because it is a good chance for us to protect environment. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
(九)
(23-24高一上·江西九江·期末)假定你是李华,你和同学喜欢在周末一起去爬山,经常看到有人在山上捕鸟杀鸟,觉得有必要向当地的野生动物保护协会反映这一情况。请用英语写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 山上看到的情况;
2. 保护鸟类的原因;
3. 保护鸟类的措施。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to tell you the situation where some people are catching or even killing the lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area.
It is known that birds are human beings’ friends. They can catch pests of the plants for farmers and make our environment much livelier. So we should live harmoniously with them.
In order to protect birds from being caught or killed, we should widely spread the laws of animal protection. Besides, education and raising people’s awareness are effective measures.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一封信,向当地的野生动物保护协会反映有人在山上捕鸟杀鸟这一情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告知:tell→inform
众所周知:It is known that→As is known
和谐地:harmoniously→with harmony
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: It is known that birds are human beings’ friends.
拓展句:As we all know, birds are human beings’ friends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to tell you the situation where some people are catching or even killing the lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area.(由where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is known that birds are human beings’ friends.(由that引导的主语从句)
(十)
(23-24高一上·江西景德镇·期末)假定你是李华。你的外教Tanya计划春节到你的家乡景德镇旅游两天,想征询你的建议。 请你给她回一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 景点推荐及理由。
提示词:御窑厂 Imperial Kiln Museum, 古窑 ancient kiln porcelain factory
陶溪川 ceramic art avenue, Taoxichuan
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80字左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tanya,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tanya,
I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown Jingdezhen in the upcoming Spring Festival. The following are my suggestions for your two-day trip.
On the first day, after enjoying the local food I strongly recommend the Imperial Kiln Museum where archaeologists have been excavating a huge amount of porcelain relics since 1982. In the afternoon, it will be a great delight to visit the ancient kiln porcelain factory. In order to attract tourists, bands are often arranged there to play porcelain musical instruments. You can finish the day by enjoying a wonderful light show on the biggest porcelain bowl in the world in Changnanli. As for the following day, it’s definitely a wise choice for us to travel around Yaoli in Fuliang County, where you will be undoubtedly thrilled by its breathtaking natural beauty. In the evening, if time permits, we can go to the Internet-famous ceramic art avenue, Taoxichuan, to experience the rich artistic atmosphere and buy some exquisite ceramic artworks.
I wish you an enjoyable and worthwhile journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Tanya回一封电子邮件,向她推荐你的家乡景德镇的旅游景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
收到:receive→get
建议:suggestion→advice
欣赏:enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to attract tourists, bands are often arranged there to play porcelain musical instruments.
拓展句:Bands are often arranged there to play porcelain musical instruments, which aims to attract tourists.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the first day, after enjoying the local food I strongly recommend the Imperial Kiln Museum where archaeologists have been excavating a huge amount of porcelain relics since 1982. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown Jingdezhen in the upcoming Spring Festival. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
(十一)
(23-24高一上·安徽蚌埠·期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack写信告知你,他准备到成都旅游。请你回信介绍成都的情况,内容包括:
1. 概况:一千多万人口;2300多年历史;
2. 地位:四川省省会;西南地区的政治、经济和文化中心;
3. 名胜:武侯柯、青城山等;
4. 特色:火锅、小吃。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:政治politics 武侯祠Wuhou Temple 火锅hot pot
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m really glad that you’re coming to Chengdu. Now let me tell you something about it.
Chengdu has a long history of over 2,300 years, with a large population of more than 10 million. Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan Province, is the centre of politics, economy and culture in the southwest of China.
It’s really a very beautiful city. There are a lot of places of interest, such as Wuhou Temple and Qingcheng Mountain. Besides, the delicious hot pot and the local snacks are well-known both at home and abroad. Once you come here, you will never want to leave.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in Chengdu.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友介绍成都的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
美丽的:beautiful→gorgeous
此外:besides→what’s more
著名的:well-known→famous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan Province, is the centre of politics, economy and culture in the southwest of China.
拓展句:Chengdu, which is the capital city of Sichuan Province, is the centre of politics, economy and culture in the southwest of China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan Province, is the centre of politics, economy and culture in the southwest of China.(运用了同位语结构)
【高分句型2】Once you come here, you will never want to leave.(运用了once引导时间状语从句)
(十二)
(23-24高一上·安徽安庆·期末)假定你是李华,外教Felix对学校组织的研学活动很感兴趣。请你给他写封电子邮件介绍一下相关情况,内容包括:
1.时间和地点:
2.内容和意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Felix,
I’d like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Felix,
I’d like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
The activity took place at a nearby city last weekend. During the study tour, we had the chance to visit a variety of exhibitions and learn more about history and culture. We also attended some talks led by experts.
The study tour not only made us have a better understanding of the subjects we studied in class but also developed our thinking skills. It was a great experience that opened up our minds.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Felix写封电子邮件介绍学校组织的研学活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动:activity→event
机会:chance→opportunity
各种各样的:a variety of→various
培养:develop→foster
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school.
拓展句:I’d like to share with you a recent study tour, which was organized by our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] During the study tour, we had the chance to visit a variety of exhibitions and learn more about history and culture. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] It was a great experience that opened up our minds. (运用了that引导定语从句)
(十三)
(23-24高一上·北京西城·期末)假设你是高一学生李华,你们班这学期读了一本英文小说WONDER,你非常喜欢,想要把这本小说推荐给你的英国朋友Jim。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.故事梗概;
2.最喜欢的人物;
3.推荐理由。
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.开关和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:推荐recommend sth. to sb.; recommend sb. to do sth.
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Jim,
My class read an English novel called WONDER this semester. I like it very much. I’m writing to recommend you to read the novel by R.J.Palacio. It is a book full of love and hope.
It focuses on a boy named Auggie, who is born with a facial deformity and is still not understood or accepted after multiple surgeries. However, during his new school experience, he meets some real friends and people who are willing to accept him. My favorite character is Auggie whose body is weak but his spirit is strong. This book is not only a children’s literature, but also a book of revelation for readers of all ages, which makes one rethink what true beauty and courage are, and how to build true friendship in a world full of difference.
If you are interested, read the details!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Jim 写一封信,向他推荐一本英文小说WONDER,并陈述推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢: like →be fond of
推荐:recommend→ suggest/advise
聚焦于:focus on→concentrate on
充满:be full of →be filled with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句: I’m writing to recommend you to read the novel by R.J.Palacio. It is a book full of love and hope.
拓展句: I’m writing to recommend you to read the novel by R.J.Palacio, which is a book full of love and hope.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 However, during his new school experience, he meets some real friends and people who are willing to accept him. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】This book is not only a children’s literature, but also a book of revelation for readers of all ages, which makes one rethink what true beauty and courage are, and how to build true friendship in a world full of difference.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(十四)
(23-24高一上·北京昌平·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Sunshine Sports” and need any help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive manner so that students are interested in it. Besides, all kinds of forms of activities should be arranged. You can arrange some competitions in sports ranging from running, doing gymnastics, playing basketball, playing football and so on, which can make students help students keep fit. You can also carry out different physical education courses.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给正在策划以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动的Jim,写一封邮件,给他提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestions→advice
此外:Besides→In addition
各种各样的:all kinds of →various
等等:and so on→and the like
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.
拓展句:I hope that you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Sunshine Sports” and need any help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】You can arrange some competitions in sports ranging from running, doing gymnastics, playing basketball, playing football and so on, which can make students help students keep fit. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(十五)
(23-24高一上·天津河东·期末)假定你是李华,你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统文化很感兴趣,想要了解端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。包括以下要点:
(1)端午节的时间及起源;
(2)端午节的习俗;
(3)邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:端午节 Dragon Boat Festival 粽子 sticky rice dumpling
农历五月初五 the 5th day of the 5th lunar month
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I am thrilled to hear about your interest in Chinese traditional culture, especially the Dragon Boat Festival. I'm more than happy to share some insights into this important event with you.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month. This festival has been celebrated for over 2000 years and is deeply rooted in Chinese history. The most popular belief regarding its origin is to commemorate the death of Qu Yuan, an ancient poet who was known for his loyalty to his country.
One of the customs of the Dragon Boat Festival is the making and eating of sticky rice dumplings, or zongzi. Besides enjoying zongzi, people also participate in dragon boat races, hang wormwood leaves on their doors to repel insects and evil spirits, and drink realgar wine as a way to ward off diseases.
It would be a great opportunity for you to experience this unique aspect of Chinese culture. Looking forward to your reply!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封介绍信。要求考生以李华的身份,对你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统文化很感兴趣,想要了解端午节一事,写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
兴趣:interest → passion
高兴的:happy→ delighted
重要的:important→ significant
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:This festival has been celebrated for over 2000 years and is deeply rooted in Chinese history.
拓展句:This time-honored festival has been celebrated for more than 2000 years, with its origins deeply rooted in the rich Chinese history.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm more than happy to share some insights into this important event with you.(使用了动词不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】The most popular belief regarding its origin is to commemorate the death of Qu Yuan, an ancient poet who was known for his loyalty to his country.(使用了以poet为先行词、关系代词who为引导词的定语从句)
(十六)
(23-24高一上·上海徐汇·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in about 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
近日,学校正举办主题为“The person I admire”的征文大赛。假设你叫王海,请你写一篇短文, 介绍一位你敬佩的人,内容包括:
1. 描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点;
2. 阐述此人对你的影响。
(注意:文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。)
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【答案】范文
The Person I Admire
In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. He is a man of medium height with a bald head and a pair of sparkling blue eyes.
Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces. He faced a tough time in the recent economic downturn, yet he never lost hope. He used the opportunity to learn new skills and started his own small business.
His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The person I admire”为题写一篇短文,介绍一位敬佩的人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到:encounter→meet
非凡的:remarkable→extraordinary
机会:opportunity→chance
挫折:setback→frustration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Mr. Smith never gives up, regardless of the challenges he faces.
拓展句:Mr. Smith never gives up, no matter what challenges he faces.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In my life, I have encountered many remarkable individuals, but one person who particularly stands out is my neighbor, Mr. Smith. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] His story of perseverance is an inspiration to me, teaching me that setbacks are temporary and can be turned into opportunities. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
(十七)
(23-24高一上·上海嘉定·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in no less than 100 words according to the situation given.
假设你是王明,你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中,他发邮件给你,说他不喜欢旅游,宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件,告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中,你必须:
1. 指出李华的认识误区;
2. 结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。
注意:文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
I hope this email finds you well. I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling. While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.
Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons. Just think of the countless historical landmarks and cultural artifacts you encountered during your European trip. These experiences help us understand the world better and appreciate its diversity.
For instance, when you visited the Eiffel Tower, didn’t you feel a sense of wonder and excitement? That same feeling is what travel is all about. It’s about experiencing new things, meeting new people, and learning about different ways of life.
Moreover, travel is a great way to de-stress and recharge. Getting away from the familiar environment and routine can rejuvenate our minds and bodies. I know you mentioned you would rather stay at home and play games, but I believe the benefits of travel far outweigh the comforts of home.
I hope my words resonate with you, and maybe even inspire you to embrace travel more fully in the future. Remember, the world is a big place full of history, culture, and beauty waiting to be discovered.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中,他发邮件给你,说他不喜欢旅游,宁愿在家里玩游戏,要求考生给他回复一封邮件,告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达:express→show
欣赏:appreciate→admire
另外:moreover→furthermore
激励:inspire→encourage
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I was disappointed to read your recent email expressing your dislike for traveling.
拓展句:I was disappointed to read your recent email, which expressed your dislike for traveling.
【点睛】[高分句型1]While I understand your preference for staying at home and playing games, I want to shed some light on the value of travel.(while引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2]Travel is much more than just seeing new places; it’s an eye-opening experience that broadens our horizons.(that引导的定语从句)
(十八)
(23-24高一上·重庆长寿·期末)假设你是李华,你的好友Jason在学汉语时,遇到很大困难。因此,他写信向你征求如何学汉语的建议。请回信,内容包括:
1. 多看中文电影、多读中文故事和报纸;
2. 抓住每个机会练习,多说、多写。
注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数。
Dear Jason,
I’m writing to give you some suggestions about
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【答案】Dear Jason,
I’m writing to give you some suggestions about how to learn Chinese.
First of all, it is strongly recommended that you should try your best to watch Chinese movies more and read Chinese stories and newspapers which can make you get a better understanding of Chinese. What’s more, you can’t ignore the importance of making full use of every chance to practice, speak and write. Just as an old saying goes, practice makes perfect.
I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration without hesitation. And also I greatly believe that you’ll make great progress.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的好友Jason在学汉语时,遇到很大困难,要求考生给他回信,就如何学汉语提供建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
首先:first of all→to begin with
另外:what’s more→furthermore
机会:chance→opportunity
2. 句式拓展
简单句 变复合句
原句:I’m writing to give you some suggestions about how to learn Chinese.
拓展句:I’m writing to give you some suggestions, which are about how to learn Chinese.
【点睛】[高分句型1]First of all, it is strongly recommended that you should try your best to watch Chinese movies more and read Chinese stories and newspapers which can make you get a better understanding of Chinese.(that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration without hesitation.(省略that的宾语从句)
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(23-24高一上江苏无锡期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mk来信想了解中国的春节,请你给他写封
回信介绍这个节日。字数100词左右。要点如下:
1.春节的由来及寓意:
2.春节的庆祝活动:
3.邀请他来中国欢度春节。
Dear Mike,
Yours.
LiHua
(二)
(23-24高一上·浙江杭州期末)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“探访杭州的文化遗产活动。请为校英文
报写篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的过程:
2.收获与感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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(23-24高一上·浙江宁波期末)假定你是李华,你的朋友Jack最近写信向你求助,信中提到了自己最近染
上了网瘾,请你写信告知他网瘾的危害,并提出一些建议。内容如下:
1,说明网瘾的危害;
2.提出建议。
网瘾network addiction
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
(四)
(23-24高一上广东深圳期末)假定你是李华。你的英国朋友ax最近发来邮件,谈到他学业压力大、饮
食不规律的问趣。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1,表示关心:
2.提出建议:
3.给予鼓励。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Max,
I'm sorry to hear that you are experiencing academic stress and irregular eating habits.
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(23-24高一上湖南株洲期末)假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了一年一度的科技节活动,主题为“科技与
未来”。请你给英国朋友Chis写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1.科技节活动内容:
2.你的感想。
参考词汇:水火箭water rocket;信息素养大赛information literacy competition
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2开头、结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris
I am writing to share with you our annual school's Science Festival held last Friday
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(23-24高一上湖北荆门期末)假定你是李华,你市将举办中国传统文化展(he Traditional Chinese Culture
Far),请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Sam参加。内容包括:
1活动时间和地点;
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2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam.
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(23-24高一上河南开封期末)上周末你参加了学校举办的音乐节。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍
这次活动,内容包括:
1.活动的内容:
2收获与感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(23-24高一上江西宜春期末)上周末,你校组织了“我是环保小卫士”活动,带领全体高一学生清扫了人
民广场的垃圾。请根据下面的写作提示,为校英文报写一篇报道,记述这次活动。内容包括:
1活动时间、地点和参加人员:
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3你的体会与感受。
注意:1写作词数应为80左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(23-24高一上江西九江·期末)假定你是李华,你和同学喜欢在周末一起去爬山,经常看到有人在山上捕
鸟杀鸟,觉得有必要向当地的野生动物保护协会反映这一情况。请用英语写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.山上看到的情况:
2.保护鸟类的原因:
3.保护鸟类的措施。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam.
Yours,
Li Hua
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(23-24高一上·江西景德镇·期末)假定你是李华。你的外教Tya计划春节到你的家乡景德镇旅游两天,
想征询你的建议。请你给她回一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
1.写信月的:
2.景点推荐及理由。
提示词:御窑厂Imperial Kiln Museum,古?ancient kiln porcelain factory
溪川ceramic art avenue,Taoxichuan
注意:
1.写作词数应为80字左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tanya,
Yours sincerely.
LiHua
(十一)
(23-24高一上·安微蚌埠期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jak写信告知你,他准备到成都旅游。请你
回信介绍成都的情况,内容包括:
1.概况:一千多万人口;2300多年历史:
2地位:四川省省会:西南地区的政治、经济和文化中心:
3.名胜:武侯柯、青城山等;
4特色:火锅、小吃。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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3.开头和结尾己为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:政治politics武侯祠Wuhou Temple火锅hot pot
Dear Jack.
Yours.
LiHua
(十二)
(23-24高一上·安微安庆期末)假定你是李华,外教Flⅸ对学校组织的研学活动很感兴趣。请你给他写封
电子邮件介绍一下相关情况,内容包括:
1时间和地点:
2内容和意义。
注意:
1写作词数应为80左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Felix,
I'd like to share with you a recent study tour organized by our school
Best wishest
Yours.
Li Hua
(十三)
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(2324高一上北京西城期末)假设你是高一学生李华,你们班这学期读了一本英文小说WONDER,你非
常喜欢,想要把这本小说推荐给你的英国朋友m。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1故事梗概:
2最喜欢的人物:
3推荐理由。
注意:1词数不少于100;2开关和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:推荐recommend sth.tosb;recommend sb.to do sth
Dear Jim
(十四)
(23-24高一上·北京昌平,期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jm正在策划一次以“阳光
体有”为主趣的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1活动形式:
2活动内容。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim.
Yours,
Li Hua
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(23-24高一上·天津河东期末)假定你是李华,你的留学生同学Smi山对中国传统文化很感兴趣,想要了
解端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日一端午节。包括以下要点:
(1)端午节的时间及起源:
(2)端午节的习俗:
(3)邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
(3)开头己给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:端午节Dragon Boat Festival粽子sticky rice dumpling
农历五月初五he5 th day of the5 h lunar month
Dear Smith.
Yours,
LiHua
(十六)
(23-24高一上·上海徐汇-期末)Directions:Write an English composition in about80-l00 words according to the
instructions given below in Chinese
近日,学校正举办主题为“The person I admire'的征文大赛。假设你王海,请你写一篇短文,介绍一位你
放佩的人,内容包括:
1,描述此人的外貌特征和性格特点;
2.阐述此人对你的影响。
(注意:文中不得出现具体学校名称或人名。)
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(23-24高一上·上海嘉定·期末)Directions:Write an English composition in no less than100 words according to
the situation given.
假设你是王明,你的好友李华在暑假里与父母一起去了欧洲旅游。在旅途中,他发邮件给你,说他不喜欢
旅游,宁愿在家里玩游戏。回复李华一封邮件,告诉他旅游是非常有意义的。在邮件中,你必须:
1.指出李华的认识误区:
2.结合具体例子来说明旅游的好处。
注意:文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
(十八)
(23-24高一上·重庆长寿期末)假设你是李华,你的好友aso在学汉语时,遇到很大困难。因此,他写
信向你征求如何学汉语的建议。请回信,内容包括:
1.多看中文电影、多读中文故事和报纸:
2.抓住每个机会练习,多说、多写。
注意:1.词数80左右:2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数。
Dear Jason,
I'm writing to give you some suggestions about
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