2025届高三英语一轮复习应用文专题 活动类 新闻报道写作 评讲讲义

2025届高三作文训练(三）评讲讲义 第一节（满分15分）（广东省2025届8月八校联合检测） 假定你是校英文报的记者李华，上周五你校学生会在操场举办了一场跳蚤市场（a flea market）活动。请你为此写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1．活动目的和过程；2．活动反响和意义。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 试题研读 本篇书面表达要求以校英文报记者的身份写一篇新闻报道，介绍校学生会举办的一场跳蚤市场（a flea market）活动。 新闻报道一般包括四个部分：标题、导语、主体内容和结束语。标题要醒目、得体、生动；导语是新闻报道开头的第一段或第一句话，应简明扼要地概括事件；主体内容是新闻报道的主要部分，要具体介绍事件的时间、地点、人物和经过等；结束语通常是对全文内容概括性的总结或对这一事件的简要评论。新闻报道写作步骤为： 1. 明确主题，确定标题； 2. 导语引文，详述事件； 3. 总结全文，简略评论。 Step 1 审题 体裁 新闻报道 人称 第三人称 时态 一般过去时 写作目的 报道跳蚤市场活动。 要点 包括活动目的和过程；以及活动反响和意义。 Step 2谋篇布局 Main parts of a news report Para 1: 导语+活动目的 Para 2: 详细介绍活动过程 Para3: 活动反响和意义 Step 3 相关句型升级 Para1 Beginning :导语 1.上周五，我们学校的学生会在操场上组织了一个跳蚤市场，旨在推广可持续的生方式，培养学生的社区意识。（非谓语） Last Friday, the Student Union of our school organized a flea market on the playground, aiming to promote a sustainable lifestyle and foster a sense of community among students. 2.上周五，我校在操场举办了一场跳蚤市场活动，旨在通过学生间二手物品的交换与售卖，培养大家的环保意识，鼓励循环利用，同时为学生提供一个锻炼社交能力和理财意识的平台。（无灵主语） Last Friday witnessed a flea market organized by our school on the playground aimed at fostering students’ awareness of environmental protection, promoting recycling practices as well as providing a platform for students to exercise social skills and financial awareness through exchange and transaction of second-hand items.  3. 上周五，由学生会组织的跳蚤市场在学校操场上举行，旨在鼓励有效利用有限的资源，培养商业意识。 Last Friday, a flea market organized by the Students’ Union was held on the school playground, meant to encourage efficient utilization of the limited resources and foster business sense. 4. 上周五，我们学校的学生会在操场上组织了一个跳蚤市场，旨在鼓励资源回收和满足个人需求。 Last Friday, the Students’ Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground, with the purpose/intention/aim of encouraging resource recycling and meeting individual needs. Para 2 Body:详细介绍活动过程 1. 跳蚤市场在热情的人群中拉开了帷幕，学生们在摊位上摆好了各种各样的物品，从书籍到手工工艺品。 The flea market kicked off with an enthusiastic crowd, as students set up their stalls with a variety of items, from books to handmade crafts.. 2. 这个市场的特色是一系列的景点，包括抽奖、大排档和现场娱乐，增添了节日的气氛。 The market featured a range of attractions, including a raffle draw, food stalls, and live entertainment, which added to the festive atmosphere. 3. 活动现场，各式各样的摊位琳琅满目，从书籍文具到玩具饰品，每一件物品都承载着主人的故事与回忆。活动一经开启，便迅速吸引了全校师生的关注与参与,大家或淘选心仪之物，或展示自家“宝藏”。 The dazzling variety of stalls were on display, ranging from books and stationery to toys and ornaments, each item carrying its possessor's stories along with cherished memories. The instant the event kicked off, it enjoyed great popularity among the whole school, some selecting personal favorites, some exhibiting prized possessions. 4. 为期一天的年度活动吸引了广泛的关注。所有的摊位都被小贩占据，陈列着各种各样的物品，从二手学校用品到一些珍贵的手工艺品。 Lasting one whole day, the annual event attracted wide attention. All the stalls were occupied/taken by sellers, displaying items of all kinds, ranging from second-hand school supplies to some cherished handicraft products. 5. 沐浴在熙熙攘攘的商业氛围中，顾客们抢购了几乎所有的特价商品，以相对较低的价格买到了他们想要的东西。这是一个双赢的举措。 Bathed in the bustling commercial atmosphere, customers snapped up almost all the items on sale, getting what they desired at relatively low prices. It was a win-win initiative. 6. 跳蚤市场得到了买卖双方的热烈参与。许多学生利用这个机会清理他们的财产，同时赚取一些额外的收入。 The flea market gained enthusiastic participation from both sellers and buyers. Many students took the opportunity to clear their possessions while earning some extra income. Para 3 Ending:活动反响和意义 1. 该活动不仅是一场校园内的交易盛会，也是一种环保教育的实践，有助于建立一个更加和谐和绿色的校园。 The market not only served as a commercial endeavor but also functioned as a practice of eco-friendly education, contributing to the establishment of a more harmonious and green campus. 2. 跳蚤市场受到了大多数学生的欢迎，他们认为这是一个实践3R环保原则的黄金机会，也是一个社交和发展财商的平台。他们期待更多类似的活动。 The flea market was welcomed by most students, saying that it was a golden opportunity to practise the 3R principle of environmental protection and a platform to socialize and develop financial quotient (FQ). They expect more similar activities like this. 3总的来说，这次活动是成功的，不仅为学生们提供了一个交换物品的平台，而且还提高了环保意识。 Overall, the event was a success, which not only provided a platform for students to exchange goods but also promoted a sense of environmental awareness. 4、 它促进了减少、再利用和回收的概念，为更绿色的校园做出了贡献。此外，跳蚤市场为培养学生的沟通能力和团队合作提供了平台，提升了整体校园文化。 It promoted the concept of reducing, reusing, and recycling, contributing to a greener campus. Moreover, the flea market served as a platform to cultivate students' communication skills and teamwork, enhancing the overall campus culture. 5.跳蚤市场很受欢迎，学生们已经在期待下一届跳蚤市场，并讨论未来摊位的想法。 The flea market was a hit, with students already looking forward to the next edition and discussing ideas for their future stalls. Step 3 下水文 Last Friday witnessed a flea market orgnized by our school on the playground aiming at fostering students’ awareness of environmental protection, promoting recycling practices as well as providing a platform for students to exercise social skills and financial awareness through exchange and transaction of second-hand items.  The dazzling variety of stalls were on display, ranging from books and stationery to toys and ornaments, each item carrying its possessor's stories along with cherished memories. The instant the event kicked off, it enjoyed great popularity among the whole school, some selecting personal favorites, some exhibiting prized possessions. The market not only served as a commercial endeavor but also functioned as a practice of eco-friendly education, contributing to the establishment of a more harmonious and green campus. (124 words) 跳蚤市场活动 上周五，我校在操场举办了一场跳蚤市场活动，旨在通过学生间二手物品的交换与售卖，培养大家的环保意识，鼓励循环利用，同时为学生提供一个锻炼社交能力和理财意识的平台。 活动现场，各式各样的摊位琳琅满目，从书籍文具到玩具饰品，每一件物品都承载着主人的故事与回忆。活动一经开启，便迅速吸引了全校师生的关注与参与,大家或淘选心仪之物，或展示自家“宝藏”。 本次跳蚤市场不仅是一场校园内的交易盛会，更是一次环保教育的生动实践，，有助于建立一个更加和谐和绿色的校园。 下水文2 Last Friday, a flea market organized by the Students’ Union was held on the school playground, meant to encourage efficient utilization of the limited resources and foster business sense. Lasting one whole day, the annual event attracted wide attention. All the stalls were occupied/taken by sellers, displaying items of all kinds, ranging from second-hand school supplies to some cherished handicraft products. Bathed in the bustling commercial atmosphere, customers snapped up almost all the items on sale, getting what they desired at relatively low prices. It was a win-win initiative. The flea market was welcomed by most students, saying that it was a golden opportunity to practise the 3R principle of environmental protection and a platform to socialize and develop financial quotient (FQ). They expect more similar activities like this. 下水文3 Last Friday, the Students’ Union in our school organized a flea market on the playground, aiming to encourage resource recycling and meet individual needs. The event featured students selling various items, from books to handmade crafts, creating a lively marketplace atmosphere. The flea market gained enthusiastic participation from both sellers and buyers. Many students took the opportunity to clear their possessions while earning some extra income. Buyers found unique treasures and eco-friendly alternatives to new products, contributing to a greener lifestyle among students. Overall, the event was a success, which not only provided a platform for students to exchange goods but also promoted a sense of environmental awareness. ( 第 1 页 共 4 页 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$