06.写作文体-说明文(描述解析)-2025年中考英语一轮复习书面表达精讲精练(通用版)

06 写作文体-说明文(描述解析) ( 知识积累 ) 说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段，说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述，考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力。 策略1：人物类说明文突破技巧 人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语。 1.策略要点 内容要素：出生年月；主要经历；事迹成就；影响评价等。 叙述方法：一般按照时间顺序，从外形到性格，从一般经历到创造性的贡献，最后常有结论性的评语。 语言表达：说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等，因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动。 时态语态：说明文常用一般现在时。如果说明的是人物、事物过去或将来的情况，则要用过去或将来的有关时态。另外，由于说明文重点放在被说明的人物、事物上，故有些说明文被动语态的使用频率相对比较高。 2.语言储备 （1）常用词汇 1. 表示外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes, fat, good-looking, handsome, healthy, near-sighted, ordinary-looking, pretty, short, strong, tall, thin, with a big smile, white-haired, curly/ straight hair, medium height… 2. 表示性格特点：absent-minded, attractive, bad-tempered, bright, confident, friendly, generous, humorous, kind, kind-hearted, lazy, naughty, smart, warm-hearted, wise, outgoing, quiet… 3. 表示兴趣爱好：be good at, be interested in, be fond of, be pleased with, enjoy doing, expect to do, look forward to doing sth, put one’s heart into… 4. 表示经历事迹：become a member of the …, concentrate on doing sth, devote oneself to, encourage sb to do sth, fight for, have a good way of doing sth, make up one’s mind to do sth, try one’s best to do sth… 5. 表示他人评价：a model …, be considered as, be famous / known as, be regarded as, make great contributions to our country, set a good example to all of us… （2）常用句型 1. He/ She is really… 他/她真的是…… 2. He/ She looks like… 他/她看上去像…… 3. He used to be/ have … 他过去常常…… 4. Her favourite… is… 她最喜欢的……是…… 5. She is good at… 她擅长…… 策略2：事物类说明文突破技巧 事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识，使之理解客观世界，掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言，事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表、文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写说事物明文必须注意事实准确，表达清晰，条理清楚，层次分明，语言简练，用词准确。 1.策略要点 要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点： （1）抓住事物的特征 介绍事物，一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征，就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征，才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。 （2）遵循一定的顺序 介绍一件事物，目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等，因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物： （1）时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。 （2）空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。 （3）逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，由现象到本质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。 （3）运用恰当的语言 介绍事物，文字要力求简洁、明白、准确 2.语言储备 （1）常用词汇 1. 表示形状：round, square, long, tall, short, triangular(三角形的)… 2. 表示材料：wood, wool, cotton, metal, plastic, gold … 3. 表示特点：important, common, sweet, crispy, sour, salty, hard, soft, delicious, nice, fresh, pleasant, popular … （2）常用句型 1. It’s 400 meters long/ wide/ high. 它有400米长/宽/高。 2. The ruler is as long as that one. 这把尺子与那把一样长。 3. It’s made of/ from wood. 它是由木材做成的。 4. All that we can do is to ... 我们所能做的就是…… 5. It is quite clear that ... 十分清楚的是…… 6. There are some reasons for ... 关于……有以下理由。 ( 写作示例 ) 一、人物类说明文 1.模版示例 ( 介绍人物 典型事迹 作出评价 Can you...? Do you know...? He is called ... We all ... He often ... One day... Not only... but also... 引出人物 He is ... He was born... He graduated from... He likes... ) 2.写作示例 （2022·江西·统考中考真题）学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Personal information ●Age: 42 ●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province ●Hobby: sports 2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文） 3. Your plans ①________ ②________ … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【参考范文】 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 42-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much. Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up. To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off. Thank you! 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。 2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 二、事物类说明文 1.模版示例 模版1： （事物） is / lies （地理位置） . It has/ is （特征） . There are many places of interest here, for example, （景点介绍） . There are also many （人们的活动、风俗等） . I hope/ think （看法和感受） . 模版2： The table below shows that （说明问题或现象） . （数据） percent （现象一） . （数据） percent （现象二） . （数据） percent （现象三） . In my opinion （自己的观点或感受） . 2.写作示例 （2023·山东济南·统考中考真题）新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1.描述并评价调查结果； 2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 There are many practical learning activities in English class. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, our school club has made a survey on students’ favorite English class activities. Here are the results. Of the four activities mentioned, about one third of the students say presentation is their favorite. The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% of the students consider debate their favorite as they think it is challenging. As far as I am concerned, presentation is the most useful. On the one hand, I am able to learn a lot while preparing for it. On the other hand, it helps to improve my English speaking ability as well as communication skills. English class activities are important, so we had better make full use of them to make English learning more interesting and colorful. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果； 第二步，描述并评价调查结果； 第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由； 第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the number of……的数量 ②as far as就……而言 ③had better do sth.最好做某事 ④make full use of充分利用 [高分句型] ①Here are the results.(倒装句) ②The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句) ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·河南洛阳·二模）假如你是李华，是校报的一名记者。以下是上周你对全校学生最喜欢的运动的调查结果。请写一篇短文给校英文报投稿。 写作要求： 1)简述调查结果： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东菏泽·三模）如今边走路边玩手机的“低头族”随处可见。请你根据下列图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，谈谈使用手机的利弊及你的建议。 要求：1.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.必须包括上述图片信息，可适当发挥； 3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现考生本人的姓名、校名等。 参考词汇：看新闻 read news；交通事故 traffic accidents；影响学习 affect study；对眼睛/脖子有害 be bad for neck/eyes Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·吉林长春·三模）第21届中国（长春）国际汽车博览会将于2024年7月在长春举办，现招募志愿者。请你根据下面的要点用英文写一则不少于40词的招募启事。 要点： 1. 招募条件： (1)年龄在18-55周岁之间； (2)性格开朗，乐于助人； (3)擅长英语； (4)有志愿者工作经验。 2. 联系方式：auto-changchun2023@163.com 要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，简练得体。 Volunteers Wanted for Changchun International Auto Expo ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·吉林长春·一模）假如你是李华，昨天下午在学校图书馆丢一个黑色书包。书包上有个熊的图案。书包里有许多书和本，一个蓝色的文具盒和一串钥匙。联系电话：6679-8871。请你根据所给的信息，用英语写一则寻物启事。 要求：信息齐全，可以适当补充内容，不少于40词。 LOST________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 5．（2024·福建厦门·二模）假如你是陈鹭，交换生Eason是你的好朋友、他计划在暑期进行毕业旅行，他安排了一天时间在美丽的厦门度过。请你为他设计一条合理的地铁沿线的旅行路线(Line l or Line 2，二选一)，包含三个目的地及相关介绍(something to see/eat/enjoy, etc.)、并简要谈谈地铁沿线游的好处。 要求：80~120词左右。 提示：lie in坐落在；go sightseeing去观光；tourist attraction旅游胜地；advantage好处 注意： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名；文中地名如不会英文表达，可用拼音代替。 Dear Eason,   I’m really excited to know that you will come to Xiamen for your holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   I’m looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Chen Lu 6．（2024·内蒙古乌兰察布·二模）假设你是李华。你的好朋友 Peter正在参与筹备他们学校的“校园劳动日”活动，他写信向你征求创意。请你根据下列提示用英语给他写一封回信。 提示词语：clean up,  repair,  garden,  fun,  responsibility 提示问题：1. What activities would you like to suggest? 2. Why do you suggest so? 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Peter, I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假如你是李平，下周你在北京做交换生的美国笔友 Peter 要来哈尔滨旅游。请根据下面提示给他写一封信，并告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名文明游客。 写作要点： 1.欢迎他来哈尔滨。 2.介绍哈尔滨的情况： (1)地理位置：位于黑龙江省西南部； (2)天气状况：下周天气晴朗； (3)必去的地方：太阳岛；中央大街。 3.告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间如何做一名文明游客 (civilized tourist)。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词。 Dear Peter, How are you?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Ping 8．（2024·福建福州·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jason对学习八段锦 (Ba Duan Jin) 感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加你校举办的主题为“八段锦”的特色文化节活动。 Time July 7—12, 2024 Activities ●a talk on Ba Duan Jin ●the video Shaolin Temple ●practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements Dating back to Ming Dynasty Benefits of Ba Duan Jin help to relax, improve health, … 要求： 1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jason, I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Ba Duan Jin. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will come. Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）作为一名中学生，我们担负着弘扬中国传统文化的责任。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你根据提示内容写封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的端午节的情况。 要点提示： 1.节日时间及目的：农历的五月第五天，纪念 (in memory of) 诗人屈原。 2.喜欢原因：家人团聚，…… 3.庆祝方式：包粽子，…… 4.…… （1）短文必须包含提示中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：90~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat festival to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·福建·三模）“心中有规矩，行为定方圆。”假如你是李华，你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据以下提示，给她写一封email，词数80左右。 注意： 1. 可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Susan, Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school. _____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What rules do you have to follow? Yours Li Hua 11．（2024·江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。 注意： 1. 征文需包括以上三个要点； 2. 词数90左右； 3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。 提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 06 写作文体-说明文(描述解析) ( 知识积累 ) 说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段，说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述，考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力。 策略1：人物类说明文突破技巧 人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语。 1.策略要点 内容要素：出生年月；主要经历；事迹成就；影响评价等。 叙述方法：一般按照时间顺序，从外形到性格，从一般经历到创造性的贡献，最后常有结论性的评语。 语言表达：说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等，因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动。 时态语态：说明文常用一般现在时。如果说明的是人物、事物过去或将来的情况，则要用过去或将来的有关时态。另外，由于说明文重点放在被说明的人物、事物上，故有些说明文被动语态的使用频率相对比较高。 2.语言储备 （1）常用词汇 1. 表示外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes, fat, good-looking, handsome, healthy, near-sighted, ordinary-looking, pretty, short, strong, tall, thin, with a big smile, white-haired, curly/ straight hair, medium height… 2. 表示性格特点：absent-minded, attractive, bad-tempered, bright, confident, friendly, generous, humorous, kind, kind-hearted, lazy, naughty, smart, warm-hearted, wise, outgoing, quiet… 3. 表示兴趣爱好：be good at, be interested in, be fond of, be pleased with, enjoy doing, expect to do, look forward to doing sth, put one’s heart into… 4. 表示经历事迹：become a member of the …, concentrate on doing sth, devote oneself to, encourage sb to do sth, fight for, have a good way of doing sth, make up one’s mind to do sth, try one’s best to do sth… 5. 表示他人评价：a model …, be considered as, be famous / known as, be regarded as, make great contributions to our country, set a good example to all of us… （2）常用句型 1. He/ She is really… 他/她真的是…… 2. He/ She looks like… 他/她看上去像…… 3. He used to be/ have … 他过去常常…… 4. Her favourite… is… 她最喜欢的……是…… 5. She is good at… 她擅长…… 策略2：事物类说明文突破技巧 事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识，使之理解客观世界，掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言，事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表、文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写说事物明文必须注意事实准确，表达清晰，条理清楚，层次分明，语言简练，用词准确。 1.策略要点 要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点： （1）抓住事物的特征 介绍事物，一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征，就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征，才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。 （2）遵循一定的顺序 介绍一件事物，目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等，因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物： （1）时间顺序，即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。 （2）空间顺序，即按事物空间位置的顺序，由上至下，由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。 （3）逻辑顺序，即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明，如由概括到具体，由整体到部分，由现象到本质，由表及里，由原因到结果，由主要到次要，由特点到用途等。 （3）运用恰当的语言 介绍事物，文字要力求简洁、明白、准确 2.语言储备 （1）常用词汇 1. 表示形状：round, square, long, tall, short, triangular(三角形的)… 2. 表示材料：wood, wool, cotton, metal, plastic, gold … 3. 表示特点：important, common, sweet, crispy, sour, salty, hard, soft, delicious, nice, fresh, pleasant, popular … （2）常用句型 1. It’s 400 meters long/ wide/ high. 它有400米长/宽/高。 2. The ruler is as long as that one. 这把尺子与那把一样长。 3. It’s made of/ from wood. 它是由木材做成的。 4. All that we can do is to ... 我们所能做的就是…… 5. It is quite clear that ... 十分清楚的是…… 6. There are some reasons for ... 关于……有以下理由。 ( 写作示例 ) 一、人物类说明文 1.模版示例 ( 介绍人物 典型事迹 作出评价 Can you...? Do you know...? He is called ... We all ... He often ... One day... Not only... but also... 引出人物 He is ... He was born... He graduated from... He likes... ) 2.写作示例 （2022·江西·统考中考真题）学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Personal information ●Age: 42 ●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province ●Hobby: sports 2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文） 3. Your plans ①________ ②________ … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【参考范文】 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 42-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much. Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up. To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off. Thank you! 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。 2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 二、事物类说明文 1.模版示例 模版1： （事物） is / lies （地理位置） . It has/ is （特征） . There are many places of interest here, for example, （景点介绍） . There are also many （人们的活动、风俗等） . I hope/ think （看法和感受） . 模版2： The table below shows that （说明问题或现象） . （数据） percent （现象一） . （数据） percent （现象二） . （数据） percent （现象三） . In my opinion （自己的观点或感受） . 2.写作示例 （2023·山东济南·统考中考真题）新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括： 1.描述并评价调查结果； 2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 There are many practical learning activities in English class. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, our school club has made a survey on students’ favorite English class activities. Here are the results. Of the four activities mentioned, about one third of the students say presentation is their favorite. The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% of the students consider debate their favorite as they think it is challenging. As far as I am concerned, presentation is the most useful. On the one hand, I am able to learn a lot while preparing for it. On the other hand, it helps to improve my English speaking ability as well as communication skills. English class activities are important, so we had better make full use of them to make English learning more interesting and colorful. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果； 第二步，描述并评价调查结果； 第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由； 第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the number of……的数量 ②as far as就……而言 ③had better do sth.最好做某事 ④make full use of充分利用 [高分句型] ①Here are the results.(倒装句) ②The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句) ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·河南洛阳·二模）假如你是李华，是校报的一名记者。以下是上周你对全校学生最喜欢的运动的调查结果。请写一篇短文给校英文报投稿。 写作要求： 1)简述调查结果： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东菏泽·三模）如今边走路边玩手机的“低头族”随处可见。请你根据下列图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，谈谈使用手机的利弊及你的建议。 要求：1.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.必须包括上述图片信息，可适当发挥； 3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4.文中不得出现考生本人的姓名、校名等。 参考词汇：看新闻 read news；交通事故 traffic accidents；影响学习 affect study；对眼睛/脖子有害 be bad for neck/eyes Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·吉林长春·三模）第21届中国（长春）国际汽车博览会将于2024年7月在长春举办，现招募志愿者。请你根据下面的要点用英文写一则不少于40词的招募启事。 要点： 1. 招募条件： (1)年龄在18-55周岁之间； (2)性格开朗，乐于助人； (3)擅长英语； (4)有志愿者工作经验。 2. 联系方式：auto-changchun2023@163.com 要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，简练得体。 Volunteers Wanted for Changchun International Auto Expo ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·吉林长春·一模）假如你是李华，昨天下午在学校图书馆丢一个黑色书包。书包上有个熊的图案。书包里有许多书和本，一个蓝色的文具盒和一串钥匙。联系电话：6679-8871。请你根据所给的信息，用英语写一则寻物启事。 要求：信息齐全，可以适当补充内容，不少于40词。 LOST________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 5．（2024·福建厦门·二模）假如你是陈鹭，交换生Eason是你的好朋友、他计划在暑期进行毕业旅行，他安排了一天时间在美丽的厦门度过。请你为他设计一条合理的地铁沿线的旅行路线(Line l or Line 2，二选一)，包含三个目的地及相关介绍(something to see/eat/enjoy, etc.)、并简要谈谈地铁沿线游的好处。 要求：80~120词左右。 提示：lie in坐落在；go sightseeing去观光；tourist attraction旅游胜地；advantage好处 注意： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名；文中地名如不会英文表达，可用拼音代替。 Dear Eason,   I’m really excited to know that you will come to Xiamen for your holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   I’m looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Chen Lu 6．（2024·内蒙古乌兰察布·二模）假设你是李华。你的好朋友 Peter正在参与筹备他们学校的“校园劳动日”活动，他写信向你征求创意。请你根据下列提示用英语给他写一封回信。 提示词语：clean up,  repair,  garden,  fun,  responsibility 提示问题：1. What activities would you like to suggest? 2. Why do you suggest so? 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Peter, I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假如你是李平，下周你在北京做交换生的美国笔友 Peter 要来哈尔滨旅游。请根据下面提示给他写一封信，并告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名文明游客。 写作要点： 1.欢迎他来哈尔滨。 2.介绍哈尔滨的情况： (1)地理位置：位于黑龙江省西南部； (2)天气状况：下周天气晴朗； (3)必去的地方：太阳岛；中央大街。 3.告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间如何做一名文明游客 (civilized tourist)。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词。 Dear Peter, How are you?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Ping 8．（2024·福建福州·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jason对学习八段锦 (Ba Duan Jin) 感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加你校举办的主题为“八段锦”的特色文化节活动。 Time July 7—12, 2024 Activities ●a talk on Ba Duan Jin ●the video Shaolin Temple ●practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements Dating back to Ming Dynasty Benefits of Ba Duan Jin help to relax, improve health, … 要求： 1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jason, I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Ba Duan Jin. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will come. Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）作为一名中学生，我们担负着弘扬中国传统文化的责任。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你根据提示内容写封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的端午节的情况。 要点提示： 1.节日时间及目的：农历的五月第五天，纪念 (in memory of) 诗人屈原。 2.喜欢原因：家人团聚，…… 3.庆祝方式：包粽子，…… 4.…… （1）短文必须包含提示中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：90~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat festival to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·福建·三模）“心中有规矩，行为定方圆。”假如你是李华，你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据以下提示，给她写一封email，词数80左右。 注意： 1. 可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Susan, Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school. _____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What rules do you have to follow? Yours Li Hua 11．（2024·江苏徐州·中考真题）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为“A famous person in the history of Xuzhou”的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。 注意： 1. 征文需包括以上三个要点； 2. 词数90左右； 3. 征文中不得泄露个人信息。 提示词:苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Last week I did a survey on students’ favorite sports. The result shows that basketball is the most popular among students. Besides, 28% of students like running best. There are 21% of students whose favorite sport is table tennis and only 17% of students enjoy playing football. As we know, sports play an important role in keeping us healthy. What’s more, they can bring us a lot of fun in daily life. Last but not least, playing sports with classmates can help us develop team spirit. Therefore, I call on every student to do sports regularly. Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给图片完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简述调查结果； 第二步，介绍运动的好处； 第三步，书写结语，号召学生们做运动。 [亮点词汇] ①do a survey on…对……进行调查 ②play an important role发挥重要作用 ③daily life日常生活 ④last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ⑤team spirit团队精神 ⑥keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life.(倒装句) 2． Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life. We can use mobile phones to do many things such like reading news, listening music, watching video. But if we don’t use it in a proper way, we will get truly hurt. Nowadays, many people play mobile phones while walking so that they don’t pay attention to traffic condition. It will cause heavy traffic accidents. And if you spend a lot of time playing your mobile phones, your study will get affected. Besides, it’s bad for your necks and eyes by playing mobile phones for a long time. I think mobile phone will be a good tool as long as we make good use of it. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应该注意所给提示的图片，不要遗漏重要信息，注意大小写 和标点符号，适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] ①表明写作意图。手机可以拿来做很多事并引出下文； ②具体阐述写作内容。通过介绍过度使用手机的坏处来表达作者观点； ③书写结语。只要我们好好利用手机，它会是一个很好的工具。 [亮点词汇] ①pay attention to 集中注意力于某物 ②make good use of 好好利用 [高分句型] And if you spend a lot of time playing your mobile phones, your study will get affected. (条件状语从句) 3． Volunteers Wanted for Changchun International Auto Expo To hold Changchun International Auto Expo, we want some volunteers. Are you between 18 and 55 years old? Are you outgoing and helpful? Can you speak good English? Do you have any volunteer work experience? If you are interested, please e-mail us at auto-changchun2023@163.com. Welcome to join us! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇启事； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍招募条件； 第二步，介绍联系方式。 [亮点词汇] ①between…and两者之间 ②be interested感兴趣 [高分句型] If you are interested, please e-mail us at auto-changchun2023@163.com.（条件状语从句） 4． LOST I lost a black schoolbag in the library yesterday afternoon. A picture of a bear is on the bag. There are many books, notebooks, a blue pencil-box and a set of keys in the bag. Please call me at 6679-8871. Thanks. Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇启事类作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”写一则寻物启事，内容包括物品外观和里面所装的东西。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明丢失物品的时间和地点； 第二步，介绍物品外观和里面所装的东西； 第三步，说明联系方式。 [亮点词汇] ①in the library 在图书馆 ②a picture of…一幅……的画 ③a set of一套……/一副…… [高分句型] ①There are many books, notebooks, a blue pencil-box and a set of keys in the bag.（使用There be句式） ②Please call me at 6679-8871.（使用祈使句） 5． Dear Eason,   I’m really excited to know that you will come to Xiamen for your holiday. I suggest you can travel along Line 1 of the metro. First, you can visit Xiamen University, which lies in the heart of the city and is a famous tourist attraction. You can enjoy the beautiful campus and taste local snacks. Next, take the metro to Zhongshan Road, where you can go sightseeing and shop for souvenirs. Finally, you can head to Gulangyu Island. It’s known for its stunning scenery and delicious seafood. Traveling by metro is convenient and save time. You can visit multiple attractions in one day without worrying about traffic. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!   Yours,   Chen Lu [总体分析]       ①题材：本文是一封书信作文；       ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；       ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步，表达收到对方来旅游的消息感到兴奋，提出建议；       第二步，具体介绍厦门地铁1号线的旅行路线，包含三个目的地：厦门大学、中山路和鼓浪屿，并简要介绍每个目的地的特色；       第三步，介绍地铁沿线游的好处； 第四步，书写结语，表达期待对方早日到来。     [亮点词汇]   ①lie in坐落在   ②go sightseeing去观光 ③be known for以……闻名 ④worry about担心 [高分句型]       ①I suggest you can travel along Line 1 of the metro.(宾语从句) ②First, you can visit Xiamen University, which lies in the heart of the city and is a famous tourist attraction.(非限制性定语从句)   6． Dear Peter, I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day. And I’d like to share some ideas with you. First, I think it’s a good idea to organize clean-up activities. For example, students can clean the classroom and playground, which can make the school much cleaner and more beautiful. What’s more, you can ask students to repair the broken desks and chairs. It will be great fun. Moreover, you can arrange for students to water the garden. They will feel a strong sense of responsibility to beautify the school. I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给他一些建议的活动，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍你想建议哪些活动以及这样建议的原因； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事 ③a strong sense of responsibility强烈的责任感 [高分句型] For example, students can clean the classroom and playground, which can make the school much cleaner and more beautiful. (which引导的定语从句) 7． Dear Peter, How are you? Welcome to Harbin. Harbin is located in the southwest of Heilongjiang Province. The weather next week is supposed to be nice, so you’ll have plenty of opportunities to enjoy the city. While you’re in Harbin, make sure to visit Sun Island and Central Street. Sun Island is a beautiful park with lots of fun activities, and Central Street is famous for its European-style architecture and delicious food. Remember to be a civilized tourist while you’re here. Keep the city clean by throwing your trash in the proper bins, and be respectful of the local people and their customs. I hope you have a great time in Harbin! Best wishes. Yours, Li Ping [总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，欢迎Peter来到哈尔滨并介绍哈尔滨的地理位置及下周的天气； 第二步，介绍在哈尔滨必去的地方； 第三步，告诉Peter如何在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名文明游客。 [亮点词汇] ① be located in位于 ② plenty of很多，大量 ③ be famous for以……而闻名 ④ be respectful of尊重 ⑤ have a great time玩得开心 [高分句型] While you’re in Harbin, make sure to visit Sun Island and Central Street.（while引导的时间状语从句） 8． Dear Jason, I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Ba Duan Jin. I would like to invite you to our school’s special cultural festival themed “Ba Duan Jin” from July 7 to 12, 2024. During the festival, there will be a talk on Ba Duan Jin, a video about the Shaolin Temple, and sessions to practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements. Ba Duan Jin dates back to the Ming Dynasty and is known for its benefits, such as helping to relax and improve health. I believe you will find it very enjoyable and beneficial.   Hope you will come.   Yours, Li Hua    [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：阐述八段锦主题活动的时间和活动内容； 第二步：阐述八段锦的历史追溯以及练习八段锦的好处； 第三步：表达希望Jason能来参加的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to想要 ②be known for因……而众所周知 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①During the festival, there will be a talk on Ba Duan Jin, a video about the Shaolin Temple, and sessions to practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements.(there be句型) ②I believe you will find it very enjoyable and beneficial.（省略that的宾语从句） 9．： Dear Jim, I’m glad to know that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce my favourite one, the Dragon Boat festival to you. The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It is on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. The Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan. I like the festival because people often get together with their family to make zongzi and enjoy other delicious food on that day. In southern part of China, people often have the Dragon Boat races. We also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. How interesting the festival is and I really like it. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体指出要介绍端午节； 第二步，具体介绍端午节的日期以及来历等； 第三步，最后介绍喜欢端午节的原因以及一些活动等。 [亮点词汇] ① one of...其中之一…… ② in southern part of在……南部 ③ in honor of纪念 [高分句型] ① The Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.（which引导的非限定性定语从句） ② How interesting the festival is and I really like it.（感叹句） 10．Dear Susan,     Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.     There are many rules at my home. I must help with dishes after dinner. I can use smart phones for an hour every week. I have to finish my homework first after school. Before I go to bed, I have to take a shower.     Our school has school rules. We must arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We can’t run or shout in the hallways.     I think the rules are very important for us and we should obey them.     What about you? What rules do you have to follow? Yours Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的家规和校规及自己的感受； 第三步，书写结语，询问对方情况。 [亮点词汇] ①help with帮助 ②go to bed就寝 ③take a shower洗澡 [高分句型] Before I go to bed, I have to take a shower. (before引导时间状语从句) 11． A famous person in the history of Xuzhou Su Shi, also known as Su Dongpo, was a famous poet, writer, and politician in ancient China. He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have been admired for centuries. Su Shi’s contributions to Xuzhou, in particular, are significant and have left a lasting influence on the city. He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou. Su Shi also discovered coal in the area. Besides his achievements, Su Shi was a productive poet. Su Shi’s time in Xuzhou was a period of great creativity and productivity, and his works reflect his love for the city and its people. When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad. Su Shi’s legacy in Xuzhou lives on through his writings, the structures he helped build, and the memories of the people he touched. He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou, and his contributions to the city will never be forgotten. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单阐述苏轼的身份以及成就； 第二步，苏轼在任徐州知州之间的经历； 第三步，说说你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be regarded as被认为 ②admire...for...因……羡慕 ③contribute to对……做贡献 [高分句型] ①When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou, the people were very sad.（时间状语从句） ②He led people to finish the construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion, which helped to control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.（定语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$