内容正文:
[文体一] 祝贺信
祝贺信除了向对方道贺以外,还可表达祝福、期望等,语言应热情洋溢,满怀喜悦。可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因,并展望他/她美好的发展前景等。写作架构如下:
祝贺信点明祝贺事由,表示祝贺肯定对方获得成功的原因再次祝贺,表达美好祝愿
●[开头]——引人入胜
1.Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo taking competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.
2.I'm writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.
3.Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!
●[正文]——精彩不断
4.It's the great efforts which you have made that result in this excellent achievement.The prize is a reward you deserve.
5.As the saying goes,“Everything comes to him who waits.”Finally, you succeeded.
6.Without your perseverance, you wouldn't have made such a great success!
7.I am convinced that your parents are greatly proud of you.
●[结尾]——锦上添花
8.I'm sure you will make greater progress and show a better performance in your study and have a better future.
9.Wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future.
10.Please accept our sincerest congratulations and very best wishes for all the good future.
●典例呈现
(2024·南京市高三二模)假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Peter在中国象棋网络挑战赛(Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition)中荣获一等奖。现在请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬对方的付出;
3.向对方学习。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
●审题谋篇
1.慎审题——确定时态人称
一般现在时和现在完成时为主;第一、二人称为主
2.巧谋篇——列出核心要点
开头:得知对方获得一等奖表示祝贺;
正文:回顾对方的努力,赞扬对方的付出;
结尾:表达向对方学习的愿望。
●佳作背诵
Dear_Peter,
I'm writing to express my sincere congratulations to you on your winning first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition.(点明祝贺事由)
As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” I remember that in the past few years you have sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills (宾语从句).Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress.You really set an example for me and push me to move forward.(赞扬对方的付出)
I'm sure you will make greater progress and I hope you can teach me some chess techniques (宾语从句).(表达美好祝愿;向对方学习)
Yours,
Li_Hua
(2024·山东省新高考联合质量测评高三联考)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jane来信说她在“留学生中国传统文化剪纸竞赛”中获得了第一名。请你给她写一封邮件表示祝贺,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.肯定她的付出并期待深度交流。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear_Jane,
Learning that you have gained the first place in the Chinese Traditional Culture Papercutting Competition for International Students (动词ing形式短语作状语), I'm writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
As the saying goes, “You reap what you sow.”From my view, your efforts paid off.It was your passion and hard work that contributed to your winning (强调句型).Keen on Chinese traditional culture papercutting (形容词短语作状语), you have long been devoted to learning from masters and keeping practicing constantly.What you have committed to counts(主语从句).
I'm sure you will make greater progress and I hope you could share your experience and reflection with me.Once again, congratulations on your splendid achievement.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours_sincerely,
Li_Hua
[文体二] 告知信
告知信通常分为两类,一种是告知某人某事即将发生,另一种是回复某人关于某事的询问。写作架构如下:
●[开头]——引人入胜
1.Here is a piece of good news!/I have a piece of good news to tell you!
2.I am more than delighted to tell you that an important volleyball game will be held in our campus.
3.I, on behalf of all our team members, am writing to inform you to join us in the battle!
●[正文]——精彩不断
4.Please remember to read the attached file and make sure you know about the new class arrangement in advance.
5.What you should pay special attention to is that you'd better arrive in time.
6.The match will be on the 3rd volleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st.
7.In addition, I have to remind you that you are supposed to make some preparations in advance.
●[结尾]——锦上添花
8.If you want to know more about it, please don't hesitate to ask me.
9.If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than glad to help.
10.Looking forward to your reply and your presence.
●典例呈现
(全国Ⅱ卷改编)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:
1.比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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●审题谋篇
1. 慎审题——确定时态人称
一般现在时和一般将来时为主;第一人称为主
2. 巧谋篇——列出核心要点
开头:告知比赛信息;并告知要参加;
正文:比赛前准备工作;
结尾:确保参加,表达期待。
●佳作背诵
Dear Chris,
How are you doing?I am more than delighted to tell you that an important volleyball game will be held in our campus (宾语从句).So,as the captain of the team,I,on behalf of all our team members (插入语),am writing to inform you to join us in the battle!(发出邀请)
Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,it will be on the 3rd volleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st.Besides,we,the Giants (同位语),will confront the Eagles,which is undoubtedly a tough riva l(定语从句).As a result,adequate preparation is urgently needed,including practice,nutrition and a perfect plan (动词ing形式短语作状语).(赛前准备)
If you want to know more about it,please don't hesitate to ask me.Hopefully,you could make it to this wonderful event.We're looking forward to your reply and your presence.(表达期待)
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·广东省深圳市高三调研)假定你是李华,你们班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans,内容包括:
1.交流的目的;
2.告知相关事宜;
3.征求意见。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear_Hans,
I'm Li Hua.I'm so excited about the upcoming virtual lesson to introduce “Traditional Sports Events”.I,on behalf of my class,am writing to inform you some ideas and confirm related details about it.
The lesson will serve as a channel for students to realize traditional sports.So for our part, we are considering introducing several typical sports activities, including martial arts, dragon boat race and so on (动词ing形式短语作状语).To achieve the best effect (不定式作目的状语), interactive forms, such as presentations and live shows, will be adopted.As for the time and way, we'd like to have the lesson scheduled between April 3 and April 7, lasting 3 hours through an online conference application (动词ing形式短语作状语).
Does our proposal work well on your side? Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li_Hua
[文体三] 咨询信
咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。写作架构为:
●[开头]——引人入胜
1.I'm writing to you to ask about how you spent your May Day holiday.
2.I'm writing to ask you some relevant information about the basketball match to be held next week.
3.I was wondering whether you could offer some specific information related to the activity.
●[正文]——精彩不断
4.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?
5.As for the money you charge, I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed?
6.I'd be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for the course in advance.
7.Would you mind telling me some details about the programs that will be included in the festival?
●[结尾]——锦上添花
8.I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
9.I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
10.I sincerely hope that you can take my enquiry seriously.
●典例呈现
(2024·厦门高三模拟)假定你是李华,想参加学校下个月举办的英语演讲比赛,但是缺乏经验。请给你校的外教Mr Smith写信,咨询相关事宜。内容包括:
1.咨询的原因;
2.咨询的内容;
3.期待回复。
Dear Smith,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
●审题谋篇
1.慎审题——确定时态人称
一般现在时和一般将来时为主;第一人称和第二人称为主
2.巧谋篇——列出核心要点
开头:说明具体事情;点明咨询的原因;
正文:咨询的具体信息;
结尾:表达感谢并期待回复。
●佳作背诵
Dear_Smith,
I'm Li Hua,a student of yours (同位语).An English speech contest will be held in our shcool next month.I really want to take part in it but I don't have enough experience,so I am writing to ask for your help(咨询的原因).
You are really good at making speeches,so I wonder if you could tell me what I can do to make my speech more impressive (if和what引导宾语从句,不定式作目的状语).Besides,I am not satisfied with my pronunciation.I really hope you can give me guidance on it (宾语从句).Moreorer,could you check my speech when I will have finished writing it(具体信息)?
I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience(表示感谢并期待回复).
Yours_truly,
Li_Hua
(2024·东北三省四市教研体高三一模)假定你是李华,正在给你的美国笔友Henry写邮件,向他介绍在母亲节那一天你帮妈妈做了些家务并亲自做了小礼物。同时,询问他是如何给他的妈妈庆祝母亲节的。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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[参考范文]
Dear Henry,
How is everything going recently? I'm writing to tell you what I did on Mother's Day.
First of all,it is moms who deserve our most heartfelt love in the world (强调句型),for they not only give birth to us but also devote a lot to us (not only...but also引导的并列结构).Therefore,I decided to help my mom with housework.During that day I washed the dishes as well as swept the floor.Additionally,I presented her with a bunch of carnations and a handmade card by myself,which made her moved to tears (非限制性定语从句).
I am curious to know how you observe Mother's Day for your mom.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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