上册 Unit 3 Family life 课时4 写作-【宝典训练】2024-2025学年九年级全一册英语高效课堂(沪教牛津版（广州深圳沈阳通用）)

Unit 3 Family life 课时4写作 写作指导 本单元作文以家人及家庭关系为主线，主要谈论每个人的不同家庭生活。 在写作过程中要明确以下几点： (1)你的家庭成员：(2)你在家里需要担负的责任：(3)你家里成员之间的关系。 结合话题内容，我们在写作过程中要大量用到课文中有关家庭生活的短语，并学会用一般现在 时态来表达。 每位同学的家庭生活都是不同的，在本单元我们了解了Emily和Je四的家庭生活。你的家庭 生活是什么样子的呢？请根据下面的问题提示，向大家介绍一下你的家庭。 问题提示：l.How many people are there in your family? 2.What possessions does your family have? 3.Do you help with the housework? 4.Do your parents set family rules for you? 5.What do your family members often do together? 6.How do your family members get along well with each other? 本次书面表达要求介绍自己的家庭生活，且给出了问题提示，相对来说降低了对文章的构思要 求，只需按照问题介绍自己的家庭。可用到的本单元词汇和短语有help with,support等。 要求：1.语言通顺，语法正确，逻辑结构清楚；2.80词左右。 参考范文-“There are five加ptni.7阿ar四gaik,网aa杰idc.i西西a a big TV,two computers,a car and a big house.In my family,my mother does the most housework.I sometimes help with the housework.My parents never allow me to come back home too late at night.They also don't allow me to play computer games from Monday to Friday.We ofien take a trip together at the weekend.My famiby members support and love each other. 课时过关 假如你是深圳某初中的学生李华。你的英国笔友Jy将在下个学期来到你的学校交流学习一 个月，你邀请他到你家住。Jey已经接受了你的邀请。请根据要点提示，给Jey写一封邮件，介绍你 的家庭情况和交通条件，并表示对他的欢迎。 1.你和爸爸、妈妈、爷爷、奶奶、和妹妹住在一起，养了一条狗： 家庭情况 2.四个房间，Jerry将住在客房；… 交通 走路上学； …(请补充至少一条)。 》41 宝典训练英语·九年级·全册（牛津版） 要求：1，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可适当发挥： 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名： 3.80词左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。 思路点拨： Dear Jerry, Para.I Beginning Welcome to China!I'm glad that you will live with us during your stay in Shenzhen. Family members: There are six people in my family.They're...and we have a cute dog.His name is... House: 写作思路 Para.2 Body a house with 4 rooms. A guest room with a computer is for you. Transportation: close to school go to school on foot Para.3 Ending I'm looking forward to your arrival in Shenzhen. Best wishes, Li Hua Dear Jerry, Welcome to China!I'm glad that you will live with us during your stay in Shenzhen. You will have a good time here.I'm looking forward to your arrival in Shenzhen. Best wishes, Li Hua 附录学习内容与目标 话题 功能 单词 词组 句型 语法 ●》42《。九年级全册 参考答案 9. American 5. hates 7. described 8.a 6. to come 7. personal 8. going 10. differ 9. invitation 10. full 写作 III.1-5 ABCDA 课时4 6-10 DBCBD 课时过关 课时2 阅读 参考范文: 课时过关 Dear Jerry, 2.a I. 1. but 3. friends Welcome to China! I'm glad that you will live with us 4. badly 5. to laugh 6. saying during your stay in Shenzhen. 7. myself 8. for 9. playing There are six people in my family. There are my 10. annoying grandparents, my parents, my little sister and me. We II.1-5 DADCC 6-10 BBDCA have a cute dog. His name is Bobby. I believe that you 课时3 语法 will love him. We live together in a large house with four 课时过关 rooms. A guest bedroom with a computer has been I.1-5 CCACC 6-10 prepared for you already. You can live in the room on your CCBAA II.1.best 2. impolite own. Because it is close to my school. it is convenient for 3. satisfied 4. asleep 5. watch us to go to school on foot. More importantly, my family are 6. polluting 7. living 8. carefully friendly and have a close relationship. I'm certain that we 9. crowded will get along well with you. 10. importantly You will have a good time here. I'm looking forward III.1. be flooded 2. that 3. Luckily 4. natural to your arrival in Shenzhen. 5. fell 7. falling Best wishes, 6.on 8. the 9. melting Li Hua 10. badly Unit 4 课时4 写作 Problems and advice 课时过关 课时1 词汇 参考范文: 课时精讲 Recently. news about the conflicts between parents 1.(1)to tell (2)telling and children frequently appear on the media. Why are the 2.(1) advantages (2)disadvantages relationship between parents and children becoming so 3.(1)embarrassed (2)embarrassing serious? It's my pleasure to share my opinions with you. 4.(1)Suggestions (2) suggest For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it's 5.(1)eareful (2)careless of great importance for parents to create more chances to 课时过关 talk with their children so that they can understand each I.1. suggest: advise other better. For another, because parents are alwavs strict 2. hate; dislike with their children and expect too much from them. it will 3. laugh at: make fun of cause misunderstanding between them. Therefore, it's 4. regretted: felt sorry about necessary for parents to build up friendly and close 5. failed: didn't pass relationship with their kids before expressing their 6. suppose: think expectations. Besides, parents' bad habits will influence 7. advice: suggestions their children badly. Thus, setting good examples fo II.1. embarrassed 2. regretted children is helpful to gradually develop their good habits. 3. Although/Though 4. braces Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that