建议信写作讲义-2025届高三英语一轮复习

建议信写作指导 假定你是李华，目前在法国某高中做交换生，发现周围很多当地学生对汉语有浓厚的兴趣。请你给校长Mr.Martin写一封邮件，建议学校增设汉语选修课。内容包括： (1)写信目的；(2)增设理由；(3)期待回复。 注意 (1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)可以增加必要的细节以使行文连贯。 选修课：optional course (“宜昌一中、荆州中学”2024年10月联考卷) Dear Mr. Martin, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student in your school. _________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, 【应用文写作】 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信的观点要合情合理，礼貌当先；同时要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力，内容通常包括： 1.说明写信目的; 2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; 3.表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。 【详解】第一步：审好题 1.审体裁： 应用文 2.审格式： 建议信（注意写信格式） 3.审内容：（1）表达建议；（2）增设的理由 （3）期待回复 4.审人称： 以第一人称写作 5.审时态： 主要用一般现在时 第二步：布好局（Outline） 第一段：开门见山说明写作目的（自我介绍和写作目的） 第二段：阐述建议的内容和学习汉语的益处（汉语学习在国外更受欢迎，而且成为了一种重要的职业技能，还有助于了解中国文化，消除中法文化隔阂） 第三段：表达希望和期待回复 （希望建议被认真考虑并得到回复） 第三步：组织好语言 重点词汇：suggest doing sth , growing popularity, due to , the rise of china’s international inflence, open a window into ,contibute to , bridge the cultural gap, take ... into consideration, 连词成句：根据关键词（组），使用复合句及非谓语（虚拟语气、定语从句、主语从句、分词做状语、）等句型结构进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：写好字 （连句成篇） Dear Mr. Martin, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student in your school. I’m writing to suggest including the language of Chinese into our current curriculum as an optional course, given that many students here show ongoing strong interest in it. Known as one of the most spoken languages in the world and with its growing popularity worldwide, Chinese has entered numerous classrooms in foreign countries. Besides, due to the rise of China’s international influence, speaking Chinese fluently has become a highly valued professional skill. Furthermore, learning Chinese helps open a unique window into one of the world’s richest and most ancient civilizations, which, meanwhile, will undoubtedly contribute to bridging the cultural gap between China and France. I hope you can take my suggestion into serious consideration. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua ( 学生习作 ) Practice：假如你是李华，你的网友Tom最近长胖了许多，因此受到很多同学的嘲笑，他感到非常苦恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你根据以下要点给Tom写封电子邮件： 内容包括：1.对他的处境表示理解；2. 提出建议。 注意: 1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 建议信写作模板： Dear Jim, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to____________________(引出主题）. I understand quite well that __________________(表示理解). Here are a few suggestions.  First, it is important to _________________Besides/second, why not _______________________ Finally, it should be a good idea to___________________. (此三句不同的句式提出建议）. As to _____________________, I suggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面）. In addition,(其他建议）_____________________. I’m sure_____________(预测结果，给对方行动的信心和决心）. I’m looking forward to________________________ (表达愿望）. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 常用句型指导： A.陈述已知问题（Show the reader that you know what the problem is): 1. You wrote that you have trouble (in) communicating with your parents. 2. I know/ learn that you are anxious about your child’s campus life. 3. I am aware of your problem that you feel lonely after school. 4. Learning/ Knowing that you are...I am writing to give you some useful/ helpful/ practical/  necessary /workable suggestions on it. 5. As to how to get along well with new classmates, my suggestions are as follows. B.表示理解(Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels): 1. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible/ awful. 2. It is quite common/ normal/ not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to  computer games 3. It is not surprising that many teenagers are addicted to computer games because almost every teenager own his own cellphone. 4. It comes as no surprise (to me) that teenagers spend too much time online and find it hard to  concentrate on their study. C.提出建议，解释原因（Give advice and explain your reasons): As to how to ......, my suggestions are as follows. 1. I highly/ strongly recommend that you (should) hang out with your friends. With the company of your close friends, you are sure to feel not lonely any more. 2. A face-to-face talk with your friend is highly recommended. 3. It is highly recommended that you (should) talk with your parents face to face. 4. Why not join some student clubs? You’d better ... This is helpful not only because you can learn some skills, but also because you get to meet  fellow freshmen. 5. I think it (is) a good idea to try new hobbies when you feel lonely. The hobbies will attract you to the things that you prefer and make you concentrate, which will  certainly ease your loneliness. 6. It would be better if you could ask your teacher for help / turn to your teacher (for help). Teachers have rich experience in... /are expert in dealing with a wide range of student problems, who will help you work out some solutions to the problems. 7. Instead of playing computer games, I think you should learn computer programming. 8. If I were you, I would connect with my parents online. (虚拟语气) 注意用过渡词衔接来： firstly, secondly, thirdly, last but not least. besides, what’s more,   most importantly, D.表达希望（Give your wishes): I do hope my advice can help you out timely. (help sb out 帮助某人罢摆脱困境) I hope you will find my suggestions helpful/ useful. I hope my advice is of great help/use. I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his best friend. I hope you can take my advice into serious consideration/ account. Possible Version： Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you are laugh at by your classmates because you have put on weight recently. I can understand how upset you are. However, the situation is easy to change. Here are some tips to help you: First of all, I think you needn’t care about what others say. Staying healthy is the most important. What’s more, it will be a good idea to keep a balanced diet, such as eating more fruits and vegetables. As the saying goes, “an apple a day keeps the doctor away” Meanwhile, why not participate in more outdoor activities organized by your school ? Not only can it build up your body, but also it’s important for your classmates to know more about you. I hope my tips are of great benefit to you. Yours , Li Hua 市一中Monica自编整理 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$