Unit1 People of Achievement Reading for writing 写作课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册

Introduce someone you admire Reading for writing Guess who he is? Nobel Prize for Physics E=mc² High intelligience The theory of relativity a Jewish lead in What do you know about Albert Einstein? a great scientist one of the smartest men a gentle genius 天才 a strong passion（热情） for science the general theory of relativity 广义相对论 kind and funny man Before reading Read the text carefully and answer the questions in Activity 3. 1.What type of writing is this text? How does the writer develop（展开） the text? 2.Find the descriptions（描述） that what Einstein looked like and what kind of person he was. 3.What rhetorical devices(修辞手法) are used in the passage?Give examples. 4 改变了我们对宇宙认识的人 阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦，也许是现代物理学中最伟大的科学家，被认为是有史以来最聪明的人之一。他对世界做出了许多贡献，其中最著名的是广义相对论和著名的公式E=mc2。爱因斯坦不仅是一个天才，还是一个勇敢而善良的人，受到许多人的喜爱。（爱戴） While reading read for more details be considered(to be/as)+adj./n. 被认为是... 众多的 贡献 make 为...做贡献 最著名的 广义相对论 公式 天才 勇敢的 Para1 1.What kind of person Albert Einstein is in Para1? 2.What are his achievements? 3.What’s the main idea of this paragraph? He was the not only a genius; He was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people. He made numerous contributions to the world, the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E=MC². According to this paragraph,we can get some informations about Einstein. Einstein’s life story and achievements. 由于=because of 尽管 杰出的，优异的 设法做某事 Para2 1879年3月14日，这位性情温和的天才出生于德国。16岁时，他报考了瑞士的大学，但是因为通识部分的成绩低而未被录取，尽管入学考试中的数学和物理成绩优异。在学习了一年之后，他终于通过了考试，于1896年进入大学，1900年毕业。 do sth. 现在分词短语做结果状语 7 2.What’s the main idea of this paragraph? According to this paragraph,we can get some informations about Einstein. 1.What kind of person Albert Einstein is in Para2? He is a clever and persistent man. His early life and education. 专利局 出于对……的强烈热情 杰出的 辞职 full-time:全职 part-time：兼职 光电效应 Para3 寻找教师的工作两年无果后，他在瑞士专利局寻得一份职员的工作。工作期间，出于强烈的求知欲，他任然继续学习。于1905年获得物理学博士学位。同年，这一年后来被称为科学上的奇迹年——他发表了四篇非同寻常的物理学论文。此后，他渐渐闻名于世，被誉为第二个艾萨克·牛顿。四年后他辞去了专利局的工作，进入一所大学做全职研究。1922年，他因解释光电效应而荣获1921年度诺贝尔物理学奖。 (求知欲) 被记录为... 奇迹的 文章，论文 逐渐地 作为...而出名 2.What’s the main idea of this paragraph? According to this paragraph,we can get some informations about Einstein. 1.What’s meaning of this sentence? he gradually became famous throughout the world as the new Isaac Newton. Because his science research was important,just like Newton’s research. His work experience and achievements. Analogy【类比】(Where?) 3.What’s the rhetorical device uesed in this paragraph? Para.3L6 当权，掌权 因此 担任职务 数学 Para4 1933年，形势发生了变化，希特勒在德国上台。身为犹太人的爱伊斯坦发现学术机构纷纷对他关上了门。因此，他不得不逃离德国。在欧洲度过一段时间后，他终于在美国普林斯顿高等研究院谋得研究员一职。此后，他继续在物理学和数学领域获得重大成就。 find+宾语+宾补结构 机构 在....方面取得重大成就 2.What’s the main idea of this paragraph? According to this paragraph,we can get some informations about Einstein. 1.What’s meaning of this sentence? Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions closed to him. 3.What’s the rhetorical device uesed in this paragraph? Metaphor (暗/隐喻) (Where?) [ˈmetəfə(r)] Historically,Jewish were killed during Hitle came to power. His mid-life experiences. Para.4L2 [pɪˌkjuːlɪˈærɪtiz] 怪癖 偶然碰到 it was reported that：据报道 Para5 在大众眼中，爱因斯坦是一个外表有点古怪，但生性善良，风趣幽默的人。他胡须浓密，头发又长又白，有时候会像刚遭了电击一样竖起来。虽然他是个天才，但他有时候也会忘记一些事情，如朋友的生日。尽管怪癖不少，他仍颇受朋友和邻居的喜爱。甚至有一件事，说的是他如何为一名上门求助的小女孩讲解家庭作业。事实上，爱因斯坦经常遇到有人当街阻拦他，请他解释各种事物。 被看作... 外表怪异的 adj. 浓密的 胡子（上唇） 竖起来 好像=as if 电 击 敲击 3.What’s the main idea of this paragraph? According to this paragraph,we can get some informations about Einstein. 4.What’s the rhetorical device uesed in this paragraph? 1.what does Albert Einstein look like? Personification(拟人) [pəˌsɒnɪfɪˈkeɪʃn] Simile(明喻) [ˈsɪməli] 2.what kind of person he is? He was a slightly odd-looking man and had a thick moustache and long white hair. He was a funny man. His appearance and personality. Para.5L2 Para.5L2 据报道 去世 mourned ： [mɔːnd]哀悼 Para6 这样的情形多次发生之后，他最后只好开口说：“请原谅！抱歉！我总是被误认为是爱因斯坦教授”。 1955年4月18日，噩耗传来，爱因斯坦与世长辞，全世界都哀悼一代科学巨星的陨落。 被误认为..... 2.What’s the main idea of this paragraph? According to this paragraph,we can get some informations about Einstein. 1.what’s meaning of the underlined sentences?(The whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.) He is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived,and he made numerous contributions to the world. Einstein’s death. Rhetorical Device Example Analogy (类比) [əˈnælədʒi] Metaphor (暗喻) [ˈmetəfə(r)] Simile(明喻) [ˈsɪməli] Personification (拟人) [pəˌsɒnɪfɪˈkeɪʃn] Following this, he gradually became famous throughout the world ________________________ . Einstein, who was Jewish, found _______________ ___________________ closed to him. He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes _________________ _____________ _____________________________________. as the new Isaac Newton the doors of had just received an electric shock stood on end academic institutions as though he 17 After reading: answer the questions Read the text carefully and answer the questions in Activity 3. 1.What type of writing is this text? How does the writer develop（展开） the text? 2.Find the descriptions（描述） that what Einstein looked like and what kind of person he was. 3.What rhetorical devices(修辞手法) are used in the passage?Give examples. P9 18 1.What type of writing is this text? A novel B. biography C.book review D.news report How does the writer develop the text? A.By giving an example B.By testing some theories C.By analysing cause and effect D.By following the time order. 传记 书评 分析因果关系 19 Read and Think: structure Title Para1: Brief Intriduction Para 2: Educational experience Para 3: Work experience & achievement Para 4: Mid-life experiences Para 5: Appearance & personalityality Para 6: Death beginning Body Ending How does the writer develop the text? In time order. (按时间顺序) chronological [ˌkrɒnəˈlɒdʒɪkl] adj. 按时间先后排列的 Body Activity: Make a timeline of his life Born in Germany 1879 1896 1955 1933 1895 Failed to enter university Entered university 1900 Graduated from university 1902 1905 1922 1909 Took a job as a clerk Earned a doctorate in physics Entered research full-time at a university Awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics Fled Germany Passed away 令我们惊讶的是 体贴 gentle sum up patents circumstance encounters novelists 总之，综上所述 名声 财富 获得 深入的 业务 发明天才 获得 绝不 用在句首时，句子部分倒装 botanical 植物的adj. 第一人称 style文体，体裁 古往今来 P10 课堂篇互动探究 Sun Yat-sen (1866-1925) was widely considered to be the founder and forerunner of modern China. He was only in power for a short time, when he was president of the country in 1912.So it may seem odd to (some people________knowledge of China may be limited) that he is such an important figure.However, his influence is not based on his time in office, but on his continuous struggle for a better society and his concern for all Chinese people. He also put forward many advanced ideas_________brought the Chinese people together,in particular,the Three Principles of the People. These principles were inspired by Lincoln,_____ he admired, and were developed when he was travelling overseas,_______he went to find support for his country.The first principle is about nationalism,_______ indicates that China should never be divided and should not be under any foreign control.The second is about people's rights. It means that all people have great value and should also have the same rights. The third is about people's livelihood, _______means that the government should create opportunities for people to make a good living. whose which/that who/whom where which which 被广泛认为是... 先驱者 掌权，执政 sb. 对某人来说.....似乎很奇怪 以...为基础，根据 关心 提出许多先进思想 尤其，特别 三民主义 民族主义 民生主义 民权主义 课堂篇互动探究 如何写人物介绍 (应用文) Introduce someone you respect（admire） 26 Read and Think: structure Title Para1: Brief Intriduction Para 2: Educational experience Para 3: Work experience & achievement Para 4: Mid-life experiences Para 5: Appearance & personalityality Para 6: Death beginning Body Ending 主题写作—————卓越成就的人物介绍 二、写作思路 （1）一审：体裁、结构和主题 体裁：应用文（介绍类） 主题：人物介绍（尊敬的，伟大的） （2）二定：时态和人称 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 人称：第一和三人称为主 （3）三明确：明确写作要点 人物，贡献或令人尊敬的地方，影响（有启发有教育意义，正能量） 结构：四段 第一段：导入写作目的（人物，原因，举例） 第二段：人物成就或令人尊敬的地方+细节2点 第三段：影响—概括句+细节2点 第四段：总结 An introduction to someone you admire 人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字: 概、貌、育、平、评 1. 概指概况: age, family background, identity(身份） 2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby 3. 育指教育: education background 4. 平指生平: big events, achievements & influence (in time order) 5. 评指评价: evaluation 人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分： 第一部分Beginning： 引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等 第二部分Body： 介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等 第三部分Ending： 人物评价及对作者的影响---人格，贡献，闪光点 注意：运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ， ，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 。 一般现在时 一般过去时 三、素材整理 1.引出人物：--- 简单介绍人物背景 (出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣) 出生于：___________________ 酷爱；对……有强烈的兴趣：_____________________________ 在……方面有天赋：_______________从某大学毕业：__________ be born in have/show a passion for be talented in... When he was a boy, he (对...的热情)maths. ___________(出生于) Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China. Born in graduate from showed a passion for 1.引出人物： The person I admire most is…., Of all the outstanding people, I admire…. the most. There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is.... 2.介绍人物主要经历---重要词汇 做…工作：____________ 把…奉献给…：___________________ 起关键性作用：_______________ 坚定的决心：___________________ 在…获得巨大的成功：___________________ 使某人能够做某事：_____________________ 下定决心做某事：_____________________ work as devote oneself/entire life to... play a crucial role in strong will and determination achieve great success in... enable sb to do sth eg. _______________(从……毕业) Peking University in 1993, he__________ (做……工作) a teacher in Wuhan University. Graduating from worked as / take up a position as make up one’s mind to do / be determined to do sth 2.介绍人物主要经历---重要句型 1. After graduating from…., he/she spend most of his /her time in doing/on… 从……毕业后，他/她大部分时间都花在做…… 2. In order to ..., he made up his mind to do... 为了…，他决定做….. 3. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in... 凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功…… 4. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. 尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了 5. He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to… 他/她全心全意投入…, 并为…做出了巨大贡献… 3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇 为某人赢得好名声：_______________ 高度评价__________________ 做出巨大贡献：________________________ 被授予……：________________ 作为……而闻名：__________________ 被尊称为________________________ 树立好榜样：_________________ 值得我们崇拜和尊重：_________________________________ earn sb a good reputation make great contributions to be awarded... be known/famous as be honored as set a good example deserve our admiration and respect think highly of 3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要句型 As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever. 作为一个伟大的……，他/她将被我们永远铭记。 2. It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning. 正是他的决心激励我在学习有困难时继续前进。 3. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。 The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地点/时间）, _______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一, 表现出对___________(方面）的热情。 在__________(学校）毕业后, 他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）. 为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。 63个字 写英雄/伟人/敬佩的人的模板 Reading for writing 姓名： 袁隆平 出生： 1930年，北京 毕业院校： 西南农学院 职业： 科学家 工作经历： 大学毕业后，他从事农业教学和研究工作 在1975年，他成功培育出了杂交水稻， 成就： 提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿 被誉为“杂交水稻之父” Homework write a passage about the person you respect 【2020高考全国I卷】 你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以身边尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I Respect There are many respectable people around us. __________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 开头： The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice. After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. 中间： 西南农学院： Southwest Agricultural College 他从事农业教学和研究工作 agricultural teaching research 培育出了杂交水稻 breed hybrid rice 杂交水稻之父 the father of hybrid rice After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice. 提高了水稻产量， 有助于消除世界饥饿 improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger 42 Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 结尾： The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 全文：110 Thank you！ 在他们当中，我最尊敬的人是张桂梅，她因为在促进女童教育方面的巨大贡献而家喻户晓。 首先，张贵梅被认为是一位杰出的教育家，她的教育实践对女童教育的发展起着越来越重要的作用。更重要的是，面对贫困的挑战，她致力于帮助女孩进入高中，做出了巨大的贡献。她不仅创办了华坪女子中学，还鼓励无数志愿者加入她的行列，使许多需要帮助的女孩受益。 她对教育和学生的奉献精神令人钦佩，这也激励着我将来成为像她一样的人。 There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhang Guimei, who has become a household name for her great contributions to promoting girl’s education. First of all, Zhang Guimei is considered as an outstanding educator, whose educational practices are playing an increasingly significant role in the development of girls’ education. What’s more, faced with the challenge of poverty, she devoted herself to helping girls enter high school and made great contributions. Not only did she found the Huaping Girls High School, but she encouraged countless volunteers to join her, which benefited a great many girls in need.Her dedication to education and to students is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future. 我最尊敬的人是钟南山，他因为对战胜病毒做出的巨大贡献而成为家喻户晓的人物。(非限制性定语从句) 钟南山被认为是一位杰出的科学家，他的研究成果在科学的发展中发挥着越来越重要的作用。(非限制性定语从句)更重要的是，面对新冠肺炎疫情的挑战，他致力于帮助他人，为全社会做出了巨大贡献。（过去分词作状语）他不仅找到了一个有效的解决方案，而且鼓励无数的志愿者加入他的行列，这使很多需要帮助的人受益。(非限制性定语从句)他对工作和对人的奉献精神令人钦佩，这真正激励了我将来成为像他一样的人。(非限制性定语从句) Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating viruses. First of all, Zhong Nanshan is considered as an outstanding scientist, whose research achievements are playing an increasingly significant role in the development of science. What’s more, faced with the challenge of COVID-19, he committed himself to helping others and made great contributions to the whole society. Not only did he find an effective solution, but he encouraged countless volunteers to join him, which benefited a great many people in need. His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future. $$