内容正文:
Section Ⅴ Writing—写一封表达观点的信
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Chinese Spring Festival Going Global
Nowadays, more and more countries around the world are holding celebrations for Chinese Spring Festival. What's more, not only are these attended and enjoyed by Chinese citizens living abroad, but by many other nationalities, too.
With colourful decorations of lanterns and lamps, shopping centres have been organising events and activities to celebrate Chinese Spring Festival for years, while concerts and other performances are also proving a big success. Tickets for the 2017 Grand Chinese New Year Concert in St Petersburg sold out, with 90% of the audience local Russians. People are also discovering the fun of interacting with the celebrations, rather than simply watching as part of an audience. To celebrate the 2017 festival, over 1,000 Ghanaian junior high school students got up on stage to perform Chinese songs and dances. Students in New York City, meanwhile, have since 2016 been able to enjoy an official day's holiday for Chinese Spring Festival.
It seems that Chinese Spring Festival is becoming a global celebration of joy and love. What do you think of this phenomenon? Write to us to share your opinion!
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学语言
1.修饰语:副词simply
2.连接词:what's more, and, also, rather than,meanwhile
3.高级表达:倒装句、while连接的并列句以及非谓语动词作后置定语
4.句式:It seems that...
5.时态:现在完成进行时,现在进行时,现在完成时
学结构
第一段:引出现象;
第二段:活动介绍、原因分析或双方观点;
第三段:个人观点。
[情景任务写作]
假定你是李华,现在有不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日。请用英语给报社的编辑写封信来分析产生这种现象的原因,并就这种现象可能带来的影响简要阐述自己的看法,表达你自己的观点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:开门见山,引出这种社会现象;
主体:阐述理由,分析产生这种现象的原因和影响;
尾段:总结全文,陈述自己的看法。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①许多人过去可能没有注意到这个事实。(fail to do)
Many people may_have_failed_to_notice_the_fact.
②今天越来越多的中国人喜欢庆祝西方的一些节日。
An_increasing_number_of_Chinese_are_fond_of_celebrating some western festivals today.
③许多中国传统节日失去了它们的吸引力。
A lot of traditional Chinese festivals lost_their_attraction.
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④许多人倾向于在西方节日里寻找快乐。(tend to do)
Many people tend_to_find_joy_in_western_festivals.
3.三仿句式高级表达
⑤请用同位语从句把句①和句②合成一句话
Many_people_may_have_failed_to_notice_the_fact_that_an_increasing_number_of_Chinese_are_fond_of_celebrating_some_western_festivals_today.
⑥请用with复合结构把句③和句④合成一句话
With_a_lot_of_traditional_Chinese_festivals_losing_their_attraction,many_people_tend_to find_joy_in_western_festivals.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
Dear editor,
Many people may have failed to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some western festivals today.
A number of factors account for the phenomenon. On the one hand,due to the policy of reform and openingup, Chinese people tend to know more about western culture and be influenced by it. On the other hand, with a lot of traditional Chinese festivals losing their attraction,many people tend to find joy in western festivals.
In my opinion,while enjoying the atmosphere brought by those western customs,we might also lose our own tradition and identity.
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩素材积累]
常用开头句:
1.Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not.
近来,……关于是否……进行了一次热烈的讨论。
2.Having read your article concerning..., I am writing to express my opinion about...
读过你的关于……的文章后,我想写信表明我对……的观点。
3.I was very much concerned to read that...
读过……后,我非常担心。
4.People hold different opinions about...
人们对……持不同的观点。
常用中间句:
1.I am in favour of/support...
我同意/支持……
2.I am against/disagree...
我反对/不支持……
3.In my opinion/In my view/Personally, I think.../As far as I am concerned...
在我看来/就我而言……
4.First of all, it would not be a good idea to...
首先,……不会是个好主意。
5.Consequently, I strongly object to the existence of...
因此,我强烈反对……的存在。
6.In my opinion, everything has its strengths and weaknesses.
在我看来,万事都有优缺点。
7.firstly; secondly; besides (this); in addition (to this); what's more; furthermore; moreover; in a word; in short; even worse...
首先;其次;除此以外;另外;而且;此外;而且;总而言之;简言之;更为糟糕的是……
8.Only in this way can we...
只有这样,我们才能……
常用结束句:
1.To sum up/Summing up/To conclude/In conclusion...
总的来说……
2.All the above considered, I believe that...
综上所述,我相信……
3.I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter.
如果你们能调查此事,我将不胜感激。
[学以致用]
某网站就“中国人该不该过洋节”进行了一次讨论。请你用英语写一篇关于这个话题的文章,介绍你们班学生们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:洋节 foreign festivals 地球村 global village
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[参考范文]
Recently, our class held a discussion about whether Chinese people should celebrate foreign festivals or not. Opinions are divided on this issue.
60% of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals. Besides, people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals.
However, 35% of the students argue that it's a natural trend to celebrate foreign festivals. As we all know, with the development of science and technology, the earth has, in fact, become a global village. Those festivals that were once foreign to us are now familiar to us.
As far as I'm concerned, if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones, it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate.
40分写作限时练(二)
(时间:45分钟 满分:40分)
(本栏目内容,在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订!)
Ⅰ.应用文写作(共15分)
(2024·山东日照期中)
包括全世界中华儿女在内,世界上越来越多的人庆祝春节,甚至有的国家将春节定为法定节假日。假定你是李华,请你针对这种现象给校英文报社投稿,内容包括:
1.表达你对此现象的看法;
2.说明你的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文:
It seems that more and more countries are holding celebrations of Chinese Spring Festival. The reasons are as follows.
First, millions of Chinese spend their holiday overseas during the Spring Festival, bringing huge tourism benefit to the destinations, which greatly promotes the spread of Chinese Spring Festival. Second, most people realize they must learn more about Chinese culture if they want to cooperate with their Chinese partners. Third, due to its unique cultural charms, the Spring Festival is best known.
I think this phenomenon is a reflection of China's rapid development. I believe more Chinese culture will be accepted by the world in the future.
Ⅱ.读后续写(共25分)
(2024·山东济宁期中)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My brother Joe and I no longer live in the same state, but I make sure to give Joe a call every Christmas. In fact, I will never forget a Christmas when I was seven and Joe was five. I've kept a secret about that Christmas for 20 years. Now hearing Joe's voice makes me feel guilty (内疚的) about it all over again. I think he probably doesn't even remember it.
When we were kids, Joe almost drove me “crazy”! If Mom brought home my favorite yogurt, Joe would make sure to eat it before I got a chance. When our parents gave us each our own basketball, Joe insisted on playing with mine instead of his own.
That Christmas when I was seven, I was determined to teach him a lesson. At that time I was old enough that I no longer believed in Santa, but I knew Joe did. I couldn't stand him thinking Santa had put him on the “nice” list when I knew he'd been naughty (淘气的) all year.
One day before Christmas, I put on my winter jacket and headed over to our neighbor's backyard. It was filled with rocks. To me they really looked like coal (煤炭). I was sure that they'd look like coal to Joe too. I filled a lot of the rocks into the pockets of my winter jacket, brought them up to my room and hid them under my bed. Then I waited.
That morning, I got up early, went downstairs secretly and put the rocks into the red stocking with Joe's name on it. I watched Joe take down his heavy stocking, lay it on the living room floor.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式作答。
Looking at the gift inside, Joe's smile disappeared suddenly.________________________
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I said on the phone, “Hey, Joe, do you remember that Christmas morning when you were five... your stocking...”_______________________________________________________________
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参考范文:
Looking at the gift inside, Joe's smile disappeared suddenly. His face turned red. He didn't cry or complain. He stayed completely silent. He wouldn't even look at anyone else in the room. As I watched, my own expectation turned to something like regret. Joe put his whole stocking aside, hiding it so our parents wouldn't see how “Santa” had treated him. I'd never told anyone what I'd done. But it still troubled me, even all these years later. I must tell him the truth when I called him this Christmas.
I said on the phone, “Hey, Joe, do you remember that Christmas morning when you were five... your stocking...” Joe said, “Coal! Of course I remember! Wow, you really frightened me that time.” To my relief, my brother burst out laughing. “I was embarrassed!” he added. “I waited until everyone had left the room. Then I took the rocks outside. I didn't want Mom and Dad to know I was naughty!” “I guess if either of us should get coal in a Christmas stocking that year it must be me,” I said. It felt so good to say it, even if Joe never mentioned it. It turned out Joe's forgiveness — even all these years later — was the best stocking present I could have wished for.
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