03.写作策略-意义连贯策略-2025年中考英语一轮复习书面表达精讲精练(通用版)

03 写作策略-意义连贯策略 ( 知识积累 ) 初中英语写作中，意义连贯的目的在于确保文章内部各部分内容之间逻辑清晰、衔接自然，使读者能够顺畅地理解作者的思路和意图。这种连贯性不仅有助于提升文章的可读性，还能够增强文章的说服力和表达效果。其重要性在于，意义连贯是评判一篇作文质量高低的重要标准之一，它直接关系到读者对文章内容的理解和接受程度，也是作者思维能力和语言组织能力的综合体现。因此，在初中英语写作教学中，注重培养意义连贯的能力对于提升学生的写作水平具有重要意义。 英语写作中实现意义连贯的须注意以下几点：（1）‌明确中心思想‌：确保全文围绕一个中心思想展开，各段落主题明确，与中心思想紧密相连，避免无关内容的插入；（2）‌合理组织结构‌：文章结构清晰，段落间过渡自然，采用时间顺序、空间顺序、比较、因果等连贯方法，使文章条理分明；（3）‌运用衔接手段‌：通过连接词、替代、省略、照应和词汇衔接等语法和词汇手段，实现句子和段落之间的紧密衔接，确保文章流畅连贯；（4）‌注重逻辑思维‌：在写作过程中，培养学生的逻辑思维能力，确保句子和段落之间的逻辑关系严谨，避免生硬堆砌‌。 英语写作中常用的过渡衔接词 结构 过渡词 开启下文 a proverb says...正如谚语……;to begin with首先; as we all know众所周知;in general/generally speaking 一般而言 承接前后 first首先;second其次;next其次,然后;since then自那以后; at the same time同时;in fact事实上;of course当然;finally最终 转折关系 but但是;however 然而;still 仍然; to one’s surprise令某人惊奇的是;on the other hand另一方面 因果关系 as a result结果是;in this way这样;thanks to由于;therefore因此; because of因为 递进关系 in addition另外;what’s more 更重要的是;last but not least最后但同样重要的是 总结全文 in a word总之;on the whole 总的来说; in summary总之;all in all总而言之 书面表达的行文连贯策略举例 策略1：中心明确 篇章中心明确首先取决于是否有一个鲜明的主题句。段落主题句是段落的主旨所在，它概括了主题思想，是段落的灵魂，是为整篇文章的中心服务的，具有高度概括和具体得当的特征。一个段落要有一个主题句，段落内的其他句子必须从属于这一主题句，称为支撑句。一个段落通常还有一个结尾句与主题句相呼应，这就是段落的统一性。 主题句一般出现在段首，也可出现在段末。大多数段落的主题句位于段首，这类段落属于演绎式段落，也是学生常用的一种方法，即“主题句+支撑句”的模式。使用这种方法的好处在于能够较好地把握全文的结构，有助于确定段落的主线，使各个支撑句围绕段落主题自然展开，保持段落的一致性与连贯性。主题句在段尾，可以使语气或气氛逐渐加强。在这种段落中，通常先把论据、材料、细节逐渐展开，最后自然而然地归纳出主题。这种段落属于归纳式段落，即由结尾的主题句总结本段的主旨，即“支撑句+主题句”的模式。 写英语文章的主题句要注意四点： ◆不要是一个不完整的句子； ◆不应该是个问句； ◆不要太宽泛或太狭隘； ◆不要用I think，In my opinion等作为主题句的开头。 特别需要注意主题句不能写得太笼统，也不能涉及面太窄。如果主题句限定范围太宽，其内容就无法在一个段落中阐述清楚。如果限定范围太窄，又不利于段落的发展。段落主题句所限定的内容必须符合写作的目的，有利于文章的展开。 【例1】判断下列主题句存在的问题 ①Beijing is famous for its long history, its large population, and its historical sights. ②English food is terrible. ③Pollution is a serious problem. ④He speaks English. ⑤I bought a car last week. 【分析】主题句①将三个不同的观点揉在一起，如果作为一个段落的主题句则不符合要求，该主题句可分解为三个主题句，由三个段落分别来完成。主题句②和③过于概括；而主题句④和⑤则过于具体。 策略2：指代清晰 段落句子的连贯（Coherence）是一个完整篇章的另一个重要条件。一个好的篇章应尽量避免结构的混乱和前后逻辑上的含混不清，换句话说，篇章的每一个部分都必须意思连贯、结构紧凑、衔接正确、表意清楚。指代清晰是表达连贯的重要方面。例如：下面这个句子就是学生常犯的错误：Students should learn to do everything om your own, and not always rely on your teacher's help.句中的人称代词your指代不清，因而句子缺乏连贯性。人称代词your应改为their。 【例2】用合适的代词替换划线部分 Dad once owned a Morris Oxford. The Morris Oxford①was very dear to Dad②.Mum, however, disliked the car. Mum③ said the car④was too old. Mum asked Dad to sell the car but Dad⑤told Mum ⑥the car was priceless. Then, months later, Mum did something wonderful. It was the day before Dad's birthday. She spoke to my sister Jenny and me quietly. She asked Jenny and me⑦ to take Dad out for the day. Jenny and I⑧ did as she said. A surprise awaited Dad, Jenny and me ⑨when Dad, Jenny and I⑩returned home. Mum was at the gate with two men. She was giving the men⑪some money. In the driveway was Dad's Morris Oxford. It was gleaming white and shining. 【答案】①It ②him ③She ④it ⑤he ⑥her ⑦us ⑧We ⑨us ⑩we ⑪them 策略3：时态连贯 语篇结构与句子的时态是密切相关的，动词时态的使用决定着每个句子的正确与否。学生在写文章的过程中要学会结合语篇结构和内容综合地运用时态。英语文章中的动词在整个语篇结构中与上下文有着一定的关系。写作训练就为学生学习和掌握时态提供了语篇环境，在写作中学习时态使学生不仅知道某个时态结构的表层含义，而且懂得该结构应在何种情形下使用和怎样使用。但是需要强调的是：不要把微技能训练等同于讲解时态规则和分析句子结构，从而把写作课变为专门的时态语法课；而是要在语篇环境下学习时态、感悟时态、达成表达的连贯一致。 【例3】根据下列标题判断写作文体，并为其选择合适的时态。 ①Deep in my memory ②This time next year ③A problem I had ④I am not ... any longer ⑤How to protect myself ⑥I will never forget him/her 【说明】时态的选择对于整篇文章起着至关重要的作用，能反映出学生是否审题正确。这种小活动的技能训练能帮助学生审清题目，根据标题所提供的关键词和关键信息来选择合适的时态。 ( 写作示例 ) 　(2021·临沂中考)在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面,一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以 “ One Thing I’m Proud of ” 为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文,记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。 要求:1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分; 2.不少于60词。 提示:1.What is the thing you’re proud of? 2.Why are you proud of it? One Thing I’m Proud of ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 【审题布局】 1.定人称:第一人称为主　　　2.定时态:一般过去时和一般现在时 3.定要点:(1)引出主题:how I became good at English   (2)开始情况:be like a bad dream; not understand...  (3)举例说明:talked with me; gave some advice; reviewed; read aloud...  (4)陈述结果:be good at...; got an “A”...  (5)发表感想:everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard  4.定思路:首先点明主题——值得骄傲的事情;然后进行具体陈述,可用具体事例来说明;接着叙述结果;最后发表自己的感想。 【参考范文】 One Thing I’m Proud of Now I still remember how I became much better at English. At first, every English class used to be like a bad dream for me.I could hardly understand my teacher. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, and kept diaries in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English as much as I could every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I became good at English and got an “A” in the final exam. I am really proud of this experience, because I realize that everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard. ①副词hardly表程度,明确地表达了刚开始学英语时的状况。 ②词组from time to time及even on the way to school进一步表明作者学习英语的勤奋和用心。 ③Practice makes perfect用在这里恰到好处,不但表达了作者的努力,同时也告诉读者一个道理。 ④最后一句为复合句,句式结构正确、合理 ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·湖南衡阳·模拟预测）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。 have labor classes (劳动课) learn living skills take part in after-class activities plant trees, grow vegetables... do housework clean up rooms, wash clothes... your suggestions 1...; 2...; ... 要求： 1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名； 2. 80词左右； 3. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。 A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·河南郑州·三模）高铁驰骋、航天梦圆、5G领先……在国际舞台上，中国的声音越来越响亮，祖国妈妈的每一次突破都让身为孩子的我们倍感骄傲。Amazing China杂志社正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. Describe the development of science and technology in China. 2. Express your feelings. 注意： 1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)； 2.短文中不得泄露个人信息。 My Country, My Pride I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·山东潍坊·二模）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于My First Try的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。 注意: 1. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容; 2. 不要出现考生本人信息; 3. 80 词左右。 Teens Around the World Subject: My First Try Hey, guys! Everyone has experienced many attempts (尝试) during the growth. What unforgettable experience did you try for the first time? What happened at that time? What was your feeling or what did you learn from it? Looking forward to your replies.                                                                                                                                 Eric, Canada I will never forget my first time to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China 4．（2024·广东深圳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请根据提示，结合自己小区的实际，以“Building a greener community”为题，用英文写一份倡议书。 参考词汇：垃圾分类sort out the rubbish；电动车motorbike 小区的现状 1. 乱扔垃圾； 2. 乱摆放单车和电动车； 3. 树倒下了，没有去维护、种植。 具体提议和做法 1. 垃圾分类，扔到正确的垃圾桶； 2. 单车和电动车摆放到专门地方。 …… (自行补充一至两点) 号召和呼吁 小区是我家，每个人行动起来，共建绿色小区 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·湖北·模拟预测）近年来，学习汉语言文化的热潮在各地涌现，作为新时代的青少年，学好母语，传承民族文化是一种使命。假设你是李华，你所就读的外国语学校也在举办”关爱母语”的主题活动， 请根据以下问题，以“We Should Learn Chinese Well”为题写一篇英文发言稿。 Why is young people’s language competence becoming poorer nowadays? What is changing young people’s communication habits? Why is it important to learn Chinese well? What are your suggestions? 参考词汇：mother tongue (母语) Internet memes (表情包) 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 We Should Learn Chinese Well Dear teachers and classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 6．（2024·黑龙江牡丹江·一模）（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名，校名和老师名，否则不赋分。） 本学期你校刚成立了英语配音社团（English Dubbing Club），假如你是社团负责人，请根据以下提示信息设计一个英文宣传海报文案并发布在学校公众号上，词数50左右。 提示词：dub v. 配音 *招募条件：喜欢看英文电影、对配音感兴趣的 *活动意义：提升英文听说技能 *活动时间：每周四下午4: 30—5: 30 *报名方式：dubbingclub@163.com Welcome to Our Dubbing Club _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We can’t wait to see you! 7．（2023·湖南怀化·一模）禁止手机带入校园。随着教育部下发通知，要求中小学生原则上不允许将手机带入校园，当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机（smart phones）。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。 活动内容 1. Spend too much time playing computer games. 2. doesn’t finish their homework on time 3. hurt one’s eyesight 4. be bad for health. 建议 1. keep away from smart phones and work hard 2. stay with our family or friends if you are free 3. take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as... Girls and boys, With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. _______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 8．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）每个人都有自己喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么？为什么喜欢它呢？请“My Favourite Sport”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动，并说明原因。 写作要点： 1. 最喜欢的运动； 2. 喜欢此项运动的原因。 写作要求 1. 不得出现真实姓名； 2. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，有条理； 3. 字数至少70字。 My Favourite Sport ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 03 写作策略-意义连贯策略 ( 知识积累 ) 初中英语写作中，意义连贯的目的在于确保文章内部各部分内容之间逻辑清晰、衔接自然，使读者能够顺畅地理解作者的思路和意图。这种连贯性不仅有助于提升文章的可读性，还能够增强文章的说服力和表达效果。其重要性在于，意义连贯是评判一篇作文质量高低的重要标准之一，它直接关系到读者对文章内容的理解和接受程度，也是作者思维能力和语言组织能力的综合体现。因此，在初中英语写作教学中，注重培养意义连贯的能力对于提升学生的写作水平具有重要意义。 英语写作中实现意义连贯的须注意以下几点：（1）‌明确中心思想‌：确保全文围绕一个中心思想展开，各段落主题明确，与中心思想紧密相连，避免无关内容的插入；（2）‌合理组织结构‌：文章结构清晰，段落间过渡自然，采用时间顺序、空间顺序、比较、因果等连贯方法，使文章条理分明；（3）‌运用衔接手段‌：通过连接词、替代、省略、照应和词汇衔接等语法和词汇手段，实现句子和段落之间的紧密衔接，确保文章流畅连贯；（4）‌注重逻辑思维‌：在写作过程中，培养学生的逻辑思维能力，确保句子和段落之间的逻辑关系严谨，避免生硬堆砌‌。 英语写作中常用的过渡衔接词 结构 过渡词 开启下文 a proverb says...正如谚语……;to begin with首先; as we all know众所周知;in general/generally speaking 一般而言 承接前后 first首先;second其次;next其次,然后;since then自那以后; at the same time同时;in fact事实上;of course当然;finally最终 转折关系 but但是;however 然而;still 仍然; to one’s surprise令某人惊奇的是;on the other hand另一方面 因果关系 as a result结果是;in this way这样;thanks to由于;therefore因此; because of因为 递进关系 in addition另外;what’s more 更重要的是;last but not least最后但同样重要的是 总结全文 in a word总之;on the whole 总的来说; in summary总之;all in all总而言之 书面表达的行文连贯策略举例 策略1：中心明确 篇章中心明确首先取决于是否有一个鲜明的主题句。段落主题句是段落的主旨所在，它概括了主题思想，是段落的灵魂，是为整篇文章的中心服务的，具有高度概括和具体得当的特征。一个段落要有一个主题句，段落内的其他句子必须从属于这一主题句，称为支撑句。一个段落通常还有一个结尾句与主题句相呼应，这就是段落的统一性。 主题句一般出现在段首，也可出现在段末。大多数段落的主题句位于段首，这类段落属于演绎式段落，也是学生常用的一种方法，即“主题句+支撑句”的模式。使用这种方法的好处在于能够较好地把握全文的结构，有助于确定段落的主线，使各个支撑句围绕段落主题自然展开，保持段落的一致性与连贯性。主题句在段尾，可以使语气或气氛逐渐加强。在这种段落中，通常先把论据、材料、细节逐渐展开，最后自然而然地归纳出主题。这种段落属于归纳式段落，即由结尾的主题句总结本段的主旨，即“支撑句+主题句”的模式。 写英语文章的主题句要注意四点： ◆不要是一个不完整的句子； ◆不应该是个问句； ◆不要太宽泛或太狭隘； ◆不要用I think，In my opinion等作为主题句的开头。 特别需要注意主题句不能写得太笼统，也不能涉及面太窄。如果主题句限定范围太宽，其内容就无法在一个段落中阐述清楚。如果限定范围太窄，又不利于段落的发展。段落主题句所限定的内容必须符合写作的目的，有利于文章的展开。 【例1】判断下列主题句存在的问题 ①Beijing is famous for its long history, its large population, and its historical sights. ②English food is terrible. ③Pollution is a serious problem. ④He speaks English. ⑤I bought a car last week. 【分析】主题句①将三个不同的观点揉在一起，如果作为一个段落的主题句则不符合要求，该主题句可分解为三个主题句，由三个段落分别来完成。主题句②和③过于概括；而主题句④和⑤则过于具体。 策略2：指代清晰 段落句子的连贯（Coherence）是一个完整篇章的另一个重要条件。一个好的篇章应尽量避免结构的混乱和前后逻辑上的含混不清，换句话说，篇章的每一个部分都必须意思连贯、结构紧凑、衔接正确、表意清楚。指代清晰是表达连贯的重要方面。例如：下面这个句子就是学生常犯的错误：Students should learn to do everything om your own, and not always rely on your teacher's help.句中的人称代词your指代不清，因而句子缺乏连贯性。人称代词your应改为their。 【例2】用合适的代词替换划线部分 Dad once owned a Morris Oxford. The Morris Oxford①was very dear to Dad②.Mum, however, disliked the car. Mum③ said the car④was too old. Mum asked Dad to sell the car but Dad⑤told Mum ⑥the car was priceless. Then, months later, Mum did something wonderful. It was the day before Dad's birthday. She spoke to my sister Jenny and me quietly. She asked Jenny and me⑦ to take Dad out for the day. Jenny and I⑧ did as she said. A surprise awaited Dad, Jenny and me ⑨when Dad, Jenny and I⑩returned home. Mum was at the gate with two men. She was giving the men⑪some money. In the driveway was Dad's Morris Oxford. It was gleaming white and shining. 【答案】①It ②him ③She ④it ⑤he ⑥her ⑦us ⑧We ⑨us ⑩we ⑪them 策略3：时态连贯 语篇结构与句子的时态是密切相关的，动词时态的使用决定着每个句子的正确与否。学生在写文章的过程中要学会结合语篇结构和内容综合地运用时态。英语文章中的动词在整个语篇结构中与上下文有着一定的关系。写作训练就为学生学习和掌握时态提供了语篇环境，在写作中学习时态使学生不仅知道某个时态结构的表层含义，而且懂得该结构应在何种情形下使用和怎样使用。但是需要强调的是：不要把微技能训练等同于讲解时态规则和分析句子结构，从而把写作课变为专门的时态语法课；而是要在语篇环境下学习时态、感悟时态、达成表达的连贯一致。 【例3】根据下列标题判断写作文体，并为其选择合适的时态。 ①Deep in my memory ②This time next year ③A problem I had ④I am not ... any longer ⑤How to protect myself ⑥I will never forget him/her 【说明】时态的选择对于整篇文章起着至关重要的作用，能反映出学生是否审题正确。这种小活动的技能训练能帮助学生审清题目，根据标题所提供的关键词和关键信息来选择合适的时态。 ( 写作示例 ) 　(2021·临沂中考)在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面,一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以 “ One Thing I’m Proud of ” 为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文,记述一件令你感到自豪的事情。 要求:1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分; 2.不少于60词。 提示:1.What is the thing you’re proud of? 2.Why are you proud of it? One Thing I’m Proud of ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 【审题布局】 1.定人称:第一人称为主　　　2.定时态:一般过去时和一般现在时 3.定要点:(1)引出主题:how I became good at English   (2)开始情况:be like a bad dream; not understand...  (3)举例说明:talked with me; gave some advice; reviewed; read aloud...  (4)陈述结果:be good at...; got an “A”...  (5)发表感想:everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard  4.定思路:首先点明主题——值得骄傲的事情;然后进行具体陈述,可用具体事例来说明;接着叙述结果;最后发表自己的感想。 【参考范文】 One Thing I’m Proud of Now I still remember how I became much better at English. At first, every English class used to be like a bad dream for me.I could hardly understand my teacher. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me some useful advice. I began to review words from time to time, even on the way to school. I read aloud to practice pronunciation. I watched English videos, and kept diaries in English. Whenever I met new words, I looked them up in a dictionary. I kept using English as much as I could every day. Practice makes perfect. About two months later, I became good at English and got an “A” in the final exam. I am really proud of this experience, because I realize that everyone can achieve their goals if they work hard. ①副词hardly表程度,明确地表达了刚开始学英语时的状况。 ②词组from time to time及even on the way to school进一步表明作者学习英语的勤奋和用心。 ③Practice makes perfect用在这里恰到好处,不但表达了作者的努力,同时也告诉读者一个道理。 ④最后一句为复合句,句式结构正确、合理 ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·湖南衡阳·模拟预测）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。 have labor classes (劳动课) learn living skills take part in after-class activities plant trees, grow vegetables... do housework clean up rooms, wash clothes... your suggestions 1...; 2...; ... 要求： 1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名； 2. 80词左右； 3. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。 A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·河南郑州·三模）高铁驰骋、航天梦圆、5G领先……在国际舞台上，中国的声音越来越响亮，祖国妈妈的每一次突破都让身为孩子的我们倍感骄傲。Amazing China杂志社正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. Describe the development of science and technology in China. 2. Express your feelings. 注意： 1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)； 2.短文中不得泄露个人信息。 My Country, My Pride I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·山东潍坊·二模）Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个关于My First Try的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。 注意: 1. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容; 2. 不要出现考生本人信息; 3. 80 词左右。 Teens Around the World Subject: My First Try Hey, guys! Everyone has experienced many attempts (尝试) during the growth. What unforgettable experience did you try for the first time? What happened at that time? What was your feeling or what did you learn from it? Looking forward to your replies.                                                                                                                                 Eric, Canada I will never forget my first time to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua, China 4．（2024·广东深圳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请根据提示，结合自己小区的实际，以“Building a greener community”为题，用英文写一份倡议书。 参考词汇：垃圾分类sort out the rubbish；电动车motorbike 小区的现状 1. 乱扔垃圾； 2. 乱摆放单车和电动车； 3. 树倒下了，没有去维护、种植。 具体提议和做法 1. 垃圾分类，扔到正确的垃圾桶； 2. 单车和电动车摆放到专门地方。 …… (自行补充一至两点) 号召和呼吁 小区是我家，每个人行动起来，共建绿色小区 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·湖北·模拟预测）近年来，学习汉语言文化的热潮在各地涌现，作为新时代的青少年，学好母语，传承民族文化是一种使命。假设你是李华，你所就读的外国语学校也在举办”关爱母语”的主题活动， 请根据以下问题，以“We Should Learn Chinese Well”为题写一篇英文发言稿。 Why is young people’s language competence becoming poorer nowadays? What is changing young people’s communication habits? Why is it important to learn Chinese well? What are your suggestions? 参考词汇：mother tongue (母语) Internet memes (表情包) 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 We Should Learn Chinese Well Dear teachers and classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 6．（2024·黑龙江牡丹江·一模）（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名，校名和老师名，否则不赋分。） 本学期你校刚成立了英语配音社团（English Dubbing Club），假如你是社团负责人，请根据以下提示信息设计一个英文宣传海报文案并发布在学校公众号上，词数50左右。 提示词：dub v. 配音 *招募条件：喜欢看英文电影、对配音感兴趣的 *活动意义：提升英文听说技能 *活动时间：每周四下午4: 30—5: 30 *报名方式：dubbingclub@163.com Welcome to Our Dubbing Club _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We can’t wait to see you! 7．（2023·湖南怀化·一模）禁止手机带入校园。随着教育部下发通知，要求中小学生原则上不允许将手机带入校园，当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机（smart phones）。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。 活动内容 1. Spend too much time playing computer games. 2. doesn’t finish their homework on time 3. hurt one’s eyesight 4. be bad for health. 建议 1. keep away from smart phones and work hard 2. stay with our family or friends if you are free 3. take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as... Girls and boys, With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. _______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 8．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）每个人都有自己喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么？为什么喜欢它呢？请“My Favourite Sport”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动，并说明原因。 写作要点： 1. 最喜欢的运动； 2. 喜欢此项运动的原因。 写作要求 1. 不得出现真实姓名； 2. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，有条理； 3. 字数至少70字。 My Favourite Sport ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some living skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in after-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need to try to do some housework at home, like cleaning up rooms, washing clothes. We can also go to the park to clean up and do volunteer activities to protect the environment. In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何培养劳动精神，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对最近出台的指导方针的认同； 第二步，从上劳动课、参加课后活动、家务等方面具体介绍如何培养劳动精神； 第三步，书写结语，表达劳动精神教育的必要性。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②do volunteer activities做志愿者活动 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] ①we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some living skills at school every week. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. (and连接的并列句) 2． My Country, My Pride I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing historical sites like the Great Wall, Forbidden City, and Terracotta Warriors. They all show the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people. In modern times, the wide application of high-speed rail and new energy cars has made people’s life more convenient. WeChat Pay allows us to shop without carrying cash. The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍自己的国家，注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我来自一个伟大的国家，它有一个美丽的名字——中国。”来引出下文对中国的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国的历史和文化、中国的科技发展、中国人”三方面入手，重点介绍中国； 第三步，书写结语。表达对祖国的爱，努力学习为祖国做贡献。 [亮点词汇] ①historical sites历史遗迹 ②be proud of为……感到自豪 ③contribute to为……做贡献 [高分句型] ①The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. (现在分词作状语) 3． I will never forget my first time to be a volunteer. It was a Sunday afternoon. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing, feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand. Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When I saw them taken good care of and they brought people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride. I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. Li Hua, China [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍一次尝试； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍介绍第一次尝试的经历； 第三步，书写结语。讲述尝试后的成长收获。 [亮点词汇] ①be responsible for负责 ②at the same time 同时 ③call on号召 [高分句型] ①When I saw them taken good care of and they brought people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride. (时间状语从句) ②I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. (宾语从句) 4． Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. And I think first we should build a greener community first. Our community has many problems now. First, it is not as green as before. Many people throw rubbish everywhere. Second, some people put bikes or motorbikes as they like, so our community looks a mess. Then, after the typhoon, many trees were down. But we don’t repair them or plant more trees. It is time for us to take action and solve these problems. First, we’d better sort out the rubbish at home, then we put the rubbish into the right rubbish bins in our community. I think it is easy for us to do that. Second, we can find an area and let all the bikes and motorbikes be here. Please put our bike or motorbike in the right area in order. Third, trees are very important to our environment. We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. The community is our home. Everyone should take action and build a greener and more beautiful community. Let’s look forward to a greener community! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍小区现状； 第二步，介绍关于创建绿色社区的具体提议和做法； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望有一个绿色社区。 [亮点词汇] ①take action采取行动 ②important重要的 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①And I think first we should build a greener community first. (宾语从句) ②We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. (定语从句) 5． We Should Learn Chinese Well Dear teachers and classmates, Nowadays, many young people’s language competence is getting poorer. One reason is that we spend too much time on the Internet, where Internet memes and short messages have become our way of communicating. These often lack proper grammar and depth. Our communication habits are changing. Instead of reading books or writing letters, we prefer quick texts and videos. This fast-paced life is affecting our language skills. Learning Chinese well is important. It helps us understand our roots, appreciate ancient literature, and communicate with our elders. My suggestions are: read more books, especially classical ones; and join language clubs to practice speaking and writing. Let’s value our mother tongue and make it shine! Thank you for listening! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“如今，很多年轻人的语言能力越来越差。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——年轻人语言能力下降的原因、改变交流习惯的方式、学好中文的原因及建议等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“感谢您的聆听。”的谢意。 [亮点词汇] ①Instead of代替 ②getting poorer变得更差 ③communicate with与……交流 [高分句型] ①Learning Chinese well is important. (动名词作主语） ②One reason is that we spend too much time on the Internet, where Internet memes and short messages have become our way of communicating. (表语从句和定语从句) 6． Welcome to Our Dubbing Club Do you enjoy English films? Are you interested in dubbing? Are you free from 4: 30 p.m. to 5: 30 p.m. on Thursday? If you say yes, then join us for dubbing! Here, you can improve your English listening and speaking skills. You can discover the joy of dubbing. You can also make interesting friends. For more information, you can e-mail us at dubbingclub@163.com. We can’t wait to see you! [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中所给的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以问问题的形式引出活动； 第二步，具体介绍招募条件，活动意义，时间以及报名方式等信息； 第三步，书写结语（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ① from...to... 从……到…… ② e-mail sb at+电子邮件 发邮件给某人到…… [高分句型] If you say yes, then join us for dubbing! (条件状语从句) 7． Girls and boys,     With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. The students often spend so much time in playing games that they feel very tired. Some students don’t finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health. Some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.     To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes. First, we should keep away from smart phones and work hard. Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on. Third, take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs.     That’s all. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示，介绍活动内容； 第三步，给出建议并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time in doing sth.花时间做某事 ②on time按时 ③do harm to伤害 ④keep away from远离 ⑤take an active part in积极参与 [高分句型] Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on.(if引导条件状语从句) 8． My Favorite Sport I like sports very much, such as running, skating, playing basketball and so on. My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. It is also a good way to lose weight. If you want to keep fit, you can have a try. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well. I usually spend an hour swimming in the swimming pool every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish. And I’m sure you will feel very happy. My favorite swimming player is Sun Yang. I hope I will become a swimming player when I grow up. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，点出最喜欢的运动； 第二步，介绍喜欢此项运动的原因； 第三步，谈谈未来的打算。 [亮点词汇] ①strong and healthy身强体壮 ②look like看起来像 ③grow up长大 [高分句型] ①My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.（原因状语从句） ②And I’m sure you will feel very happy.（宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$