01.写作策略-词句优化策略-2025年中考英语一轮复习书面表达精讲精练(通用版)

01 写作策略-词句优化策略 ( 知识积累 ) 初中英语写作中，词句优化的重要性不言而喻。它不仅能够提升学生的语言表达能力，使文章更加流畅自然，还能够增强文章的表现力和感染力，从而更好地传达作者的思想和情感。通过精选词汇、巧妙运用修辞手法和灵活变换句型，学生的写作能够展现出更高的语言水平，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象，从而在考试中获得更好的成绩。因此，词句优化是初中英语写作中不可或缺的一环，对于提升学生的整体英语素养具有重要意义。 词句优化技巧的运用是提升文章质量的关键。通过精心选择词汇、灵活运用句式结构、以及恰当使用修辞手法，可以使文章表达更加准确生动，增强读者的阅读体验。具体而言，学生应学会替换简单词汇为更具体、形象的同义词，以增加文章的丰富度和表现力；同时，通过变换句型，如使用复合句、疑问句或感叹句等，打破单一句式，使文章节奏多变，更具吸引力；此外，适当运用比喻、拟人等修辞手法，能够为文章增添文采，使描述更加形象逼真，从而提升整体写作水平。 书面表达中词汇使用升级策略举例 词性 普通词汇 高级词汇 形容词 good great, perfect,excellent, fantastic, outstanding, wonderful important be of great importance helpful be of great help, rewarding clever intelligent, bright, wise honest truthful, sincere pretty/beautiful attractive, charming hopeful full of hope 副词 very extremely,pretty sometimes at times, once in a while 动词 should be supposed to want would like, be willing to expect look forward to like be interested in, be fond of, be crazy about finish achieve, complete use make good use of solve work out, deal with focus on pay attention to, concentrate on 书面表达中句型结构升级策略举例 (一)主系表结构 【句法结构】主语+系动词+表语 【典型例句】The story is very interesting. 这个故事很有趣。 【技巧提示】常见的系动词有be, look, seem, appear, sound, feel, taste, smell, grow, get, become, turn等,后面要接名词、形容词、介词短语等作表语。 【句型仿写】这首歌听起来很甜美。 This song sounds very sweet.  (二)主谓结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(不及物动词)+(状语) 【典型例句】Lily is singing. 莉莉在唱歌。 He runs quickly. 他跑得很快。 【技巧提示】谓语动词为不及物动词,后面可不带任何成分,但多数情况下跟状语性质的修饰语。 【句型仿写】雨停了。 The rain has stopped./The rain stops.  (三)主谓宾结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语 【典型例句】I don’t know the answer. 我不知道答案。 We study English at school. 在学校我们学习英语。 【技巧提示】及物动词本身意义不完整,因此后面必须跟宾语才能使句意完整。可作宾语的词有:名词、代词、不定式、动名词、从句等。 【句型仿写】我享受与朋友的谈话。 I enjoy talking with my friends.  (四)双宾语结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语(人)+直接宾语(物) 【典型例句】Pass me the paper, please. = Pass the paper to me, please. 请把纸给我。 Father made him a new kite. = Father made a new kite for him. 爸爸给他制作了一个新风筝。 【技巧提示】这类动词有:give(给), bring(带来), teach(教), show(给……看), ask(要求), send(送), make(为……做), lend(借出), tell(告诉)等。通常间接宾语放在前面,有时也可以把间接宾语移到直接宾语的后面,但要请介词to, for来帮忙。后常接介词to的动词有:give, bring, show, tell, lend, throw, pass等;后常接介词for的动词有:get, make, find, sing, cook, buy等。 【句型仿写】我婶婶给我买了一个礼物。 My aunt buys a present/gift for me./My aunt buys me a present/gift.  (五)复合宾语结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾语补足语 【典型例句】Miss Gao asks us to listen carefully in class. 高老师让我们上课时认真听讲。 The boy found his football under the chair. 这个男孩在椅子下面找到了他的足球。 【技巧提示】常跟复合宾语的动词有tell, ask, have, get, let, make, keep等及一些感官动词如find, see, hear, watch, listen, feel等。 【句型仿写】这项工作使我精疲力竭。 This work makes me quite tired and exhausted.  (六)there be结构 【句法结构】There be+代词或名词(短语)+地点/时间状语 【典型例句】There is a bird in the tree. 树上有一只鸟。 There are several children swimming in the pool. 泳池里有几个孩子在游泳。 【技巧提示】be动词随时态而改变,并与主语的数保持一致。“There be + sb. doing sth.+地点/时间状语”意为“有某人在某地(时)正做某事”。 【句型仿写】桌上有两支钢笔和一块橡皮。 There are two pens and an eraser on the desk.  (七)祈使句结构 【句法结构】1.动词原形+宾语+其他 2.Be + 表语 +其他 3.Let + 宾语 +动词原形 +其他 【典型例句】Open the door, please! 请开门! Be careful,please! 请小心! Let’s play volleyball.让我们打排球吧。 【技巧提示】祈使句的谓语动词一律用动词原形,其否定结构一般是在句首加Don’t。 【句型仿写】请勿践踏草坪。 Please don’t step on the grass./Don’t step on the grass,please./Please keep off the grass.  (八)感叹句结构 【句法结构】1. What (+a/an)+形容词+名词(+主语+谓语)! 2. How+形容词/副词(+主语+谓语)! 【典型例句】What a beautiful girl she is! 她是个多么漂亮的女孩啊! How beautiful (these flowers are)! (这些花)多美啊! 【技巧提示】感叹句一般用how或what开头。how作状语,修饰形容词、副词或句子;what作定语,修饰名词(名词前可有形容词或冠词)。 【句型仿写】这座城市多美丽啊! What a beautiful city (it is)!/How beautiful the city is!  (九)并列句结构 【句法结构】1. 祈使句+or/and +陈述句 2. 简单句+连词+简单句 【典型例句】Run faster, and you can catch up with them. 跑得再快点,你就能赶上他们。 Life is limited, but there is no limit to learning. 生命是有限的,但学习是无限的。 【技巧提示】常见的并列连词but, and, or, so, either... or, neither ... nor, not only ... but also, while等。 【句型仿写】他很穷,然而人却很聪明,心地又善良。 He is very poor,but he is clever and kind.  (十)复合句结构 【句法结构】1. 主句+ when/while/if/because/so that等+状语从句 2.主句 + that /if/whether/疑问词+宾语从句 3. ……先行词+ that/which/who等+定语从句…… 【典型例句】When I got home, my mother wasn’t in. 我到家时,妈妈不在。 I am sorry that you failed in the examination. 你考试不及格我感到很难过。 Can you tell me if/whether they will come to see me? 你能告诉我他们是否来看我吗? 【句型仿写】汤姆跑得那么快,因此他取得了第一名。 Tom runs very fast so that he wins the first place./Tom runs so fast that he wins the first place.  ( 写作示例 ) 　 (2022·温州中考)假如你是陈华,你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社。她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动,写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动(见下表)回复邮件,提出你对这些活动的看法和理由,并为她补充至少一项活动。 Activities for the Chinese music club: ●Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music ●Share stories of Chinese singers 要求: 1.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校等信息; 2.词数:110词左右。 【写作示例】 【审题布局】 框架 要点 升格/扩写 开头 引出话题 说出观点 Here is my idea. 扩写具体事件:Here is my idea about your activities. 主体 说看法 和原因 看法一 I think it’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese music. 扩写例子和原因:I think it’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese music, especially some classic pieces. This leads to a better understanding of Chinese culture. 看法二 Sharing the stories of singers may help you know about their songs better. 扩写原因:Sharing the stories of singers may help you know about their songs better. It’s also fun to sing a few songs of those famous singers. 补充活动 You can learn to play Chinese musical instruments. 补充例子和原因:You can learn to play Chinese musical instruments, like the erhu or the pipa. Playing them can be quite relaxing. 结尾 总结全文 中国文化会 吸引更多人 I’m sure you will be attracted by Chinese music and Chinese culture as well. 用状语提升:Through these activities, I’m sure you will be attracted by Chinese music and Chinese culture as well. 【参考范文】 Dear Tracy, Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know that you’ve set up a Chinese music club in your school.As I know,you’ve arranged activities for the club members next term.Here is my idea about your activities. I think it’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese music, especially some classic pieces. This leads to a better understanding of Chinese culture. The second activity, sharing the stories of singers may help you know about their songs better. There are many excellent Chinese singers whose life stories are interesting and inspiring. It’s also fun to sing a few songs of those famous singers. What’s more, you can learn to play Chinese musical instruments, like the erhu or the pipa. Playing them can be quite relaxing. Through these activities, I’m sure you will be attracted by Chinese music and Chinese culture as well.Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun. Yours, Chen Hua ①it is+ adj./n. to do.为高级句型,符合英语表达特点。 ②especially起突出强调作用,使表达更具体、清晰。 ③定语从句为高级句式,使表达更高级。 ④What’s more意为“另外,而且”,用于转换话题,使语言表达更流畅。 ⑤through为介词,用介词短语作状语,使语言表达更清晰、完美 ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）善于合作是一种能力。在校园生活中，你一定参加过各种社团活动吧，比如参加球赛，清洁教室，准备派对等。假如你是李明，你的学校英文广播站开展“Enjoy Teamwork”为题的征文活动，请根据以下思维导图，分享一次你的团队活动经历。 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。 Enjoy Teamwork Teamwork is important for teenagers. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山西晋中·三模）自我评价（self-evaluation）是一种对自己进行评估、反思和总结的行为，它对个人的成长和发展有重要的作用。一个人如果能够客观地认识和评价自己，就能正确地对待和处理生活和学习中的问题以及和他人的关系，并能扬长避短，让自己变得更好。 某校以“正确评价自己”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容包括：1. your idea about yourself； 2. an experience you evaluated yourself correctly； 3. your understanding of self-evaluation。 要求：1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·河北邯郸·二模）请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。（80词左右） 提示： 1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一； 2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家； 3. 如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）； 4. 我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 The Population Problem ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。 要点提示： 1. 课程内容建议： ①……  ②……  ③…… 2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。 要求： 1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。 提示词： 开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏南京·三模）假如你是刘明，你在英国的网友Peter得知你即将初中毕业，给你写了一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Peter回一封电子邮件。(部分信件内容省略) I know you will finish your junior high school. How’s your friendship? Can you tell me in details? What is your opinion of friendship? Please share with me.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 注意：1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3)词数80左右，内容涵盖所有要点。 6．（2024·河南郑州·一模）你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green school Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。 要求： 1) 可在思维导图内容提示基础上适当拓展信息； 2) 文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等个人信息； 3) 词数100左右。 My Green School Library ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·河北保定·二模）假设你是王林，你校最近开办了一个“英语角”，你想邀请你的朋友韩梅一起参加，请你结合下列海报，写一封邮件给她。COME TO OUR ENGLISH CORNER!!! Time: 3:30 p. m.—6:30 p. m. every Friday Place: Room 203 in Boai Building Games, music and movies are waiting! Come and join us into a world of fun and friendship! 注意： 1. 邮件须包含海报中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数：80个左右,开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Han Mei, Would you like to come to the newly-opened English corner with me? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Wang Lin 8．（2024·江苏南京·二模）某英文报 Kids Voice 栏目正在征稿，请你根据要求用英语写一篇文章投稿， 谈谈你的想法。     Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic.     1. What do you think about following suit to make friends?     2. How can teenagers make true friends?     Support your ideas with your experience as an example. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数 80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 01 写作策略-词句优化策略 ( 知识积累 ) 初中英语写作中，词句优化的重要性不言而喻。它不仅能够提升学生的语言表达能力，使文章更加流畅自然，还能够增强文章的表现力和感染力，从而更好地传达作者的思想和情感。通过精选词汇、巧妙运用修辞手法和灵活变换句型，学生的写作能够展现出更高的语言水平，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象，从而在考试中获得更好的成绩。因此，词句优化是初中英语写作中不可或缺的一环，对于提升学生的整体英语素养具有重要意义。 词句优化技巧的运用是提升文章质量的关键。通过精心选择词汇、灵活运用句式结构、以及恰当使用修辞手法，可以使文章表达更加准确生动，增强读者的阅读体验。具体而言，学生应学会替换简单词汇为更具体、形象的同义词，以增加文章的丰富度和表现力；同时，通过变换句型，如使用复合句、疑问句或感叹句等，打破单一句式，使文章节奏多变，更具吸引力；此外，适当运用比喻、拟人等修辞手法，能够为文章增添文采，使描述更加形象逼真，从而提升整体写作水平。 书面表达中词汇使用升级策略举例 词性 普通词汇 高级词汇 形容词 good great, perfect,excellent, fantastic, outstanding, wonderful important be of great importance helpful be of great help, rewarding clever intelligent, bright, wise honest truthful, sincere pretty/beautiful attractive, charming hopeful full of hope 副词 very extremely,pretty sometimes at times, once in a while 动词 should be supposed to want would like, be willing to expect look forward to like be interested in, be fond of, be crazy about finish achieve, complete use make good use of solve work out, deal with focus on pay attention to, concentrate on 书面表达中句型结构升级策略举例 (一)主系表结构 【句法结构】主语+系动词+表语 【典型例句】The story is very interesting. 这个故事很有趣。 【技巧提示】常见的系动词有be, look, seem, appear, sound, feel, taste, smell, grow, get, become, turn等,后面要接名词、形容词、介词短语等作表语。 【句型仿写】这首歌听起来很甜美。 This song sounds very sweet.  (二)主谓结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(不及物动词)+(状语) 【典型例句】Lily is singing. 莉莉在唱歌。 He runs quickly. 他跑得很快。 【技巧提示】谓语动词为不及物动词,后面可不带任何成分,但多数情况下跟状语性质的修饰语。 【句型仿写】雨停了。 The rain has stopped./The rain stops.  (三)主谓宾结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语 【典型例句】I don’t know the answer. 我不知道答案。 We study English at school. 在学校我们学习英语。 【技巧提示】及物动词本身意义不完整,因此后面必须跟宾语才能使句意完整。可作宾语的词有:名词、代词、不定式、动名词、从句等。 【句型仿写】我享受与朋友的谈话。 I enjoy talking with my friends.  (四)双宾语结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语(人)+直接宾语(物) 【典型例句】Pass me the paper, please. = Pass the paper to me, please. 请把纸给我。 Father made him a new kite. = Father made a new kite for him. 爸爸给他制作了一个新风筝。 【技巧提示】这类动词有:give(给), bring(带来), teach(教), show(给……看), ask(要求), send(送), make(为……做), lend(借出), tell(告诉)等。通常间接宾语放在前面,有时也可以把间接宾语移到直接宾语的后面,但要请介词to, for来帮忙。后常接介词to的动词有:give, bring, show, tell, lend, throw, pass等;后常接介词for的动词有:get, make, find, sing, cook, buy等。 【句型仿写】我婶婶给我买了一个礼物。 My aunt buys a present/gift for me./My aunt buys me a present/gift.  (五)复合宾语结构 【句法结构】主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾语补足语 【典型例句】Miss Gao asks us to listen carefully in class. 高老师让我们上课时认真听讲。 The boy found his football under the chair. 这个男孩在椅子下面找到了他的足球。 【技巧提示】常跟复合宾语的动词有tell, ask, have, get, let, make, keep等及一些感官动词如find, see, hear, watch, listen, feel等。 【句型仿写】这项工作使我精疲力竭。 This work makes me quite tired and exhausted.  (六)there be结构 【句法结构】There be+代词或名词(短语)+地点/时间状语 【典型例句】There is a bird in the tree. 树上有一只鸟。 There are several children swimming in the pool. 泳池里有几个孩子在游泳。 【技巧提示】be动词随时态而改变,并与主语的数保持一致。“There be + sb. doing sth.+地点/时间状语”意为“有某人在某地(时)正做某事”。 【句型仿写】桌上有两支钢笔和一块橡皮。 There are two pens and an eraser on the desk.  (七)祈使句结构 【句法结构】1.动词原形+宾语+其他 2.Be + 表语 +其他 3.Let + 宾语 +动词原形 +其他 【典型例句】Open the door, please! 请开门! Be careful,please! 请小心! Let’s play volleyball.让我们打排球吧。 【技巧提示】祈使句的谓语动词一律用动词原形,其否定结构一般是在句首加Don’t。 【句型仿写】请勿践踏草坪。 Please don’t step on the grass./Don’t step on the grass,please./Please keep off the grass.  (八)感叹句结构 【句法结构】1. What (+a/an)+形容词+名词(+主语+谓语)! 2. How+形容词/副词(+主语+谓语)! 【典型例句】What a beautiful girl she is! 她是个多么漂亮的女孩啊! How beautiful (these flowers are)! (这些花)多美啊! 【技巧提示】感叹句一般用how或what开头。how作状语,修饰形容词、副词或句子;what作定语,修饰名词(名词前可有形容词或冠词)。 【句型仿写】这座城市多美丽啊! What a beautiful city (it is)!/How beautiful the city is!  (九)并列句结构 【句法结构】1. 祈使句+or/and +陈述句 2. 简单句+连词+简单句 【典型例句】Run faster, and you can catch up with them. 跑得再快点,你就能赶上他们。 Life is limited, but there is no limit to learning. 生命是有限的,但学习是无限的。 【技巧提示】常见的并列连词but, and, or, so, either... or, neither ... nor, not only ... but also, while等。 【句型仿写】他很穷,然而人却很聪明,心地又善良。 He is very poor,but he is clever and kind.  (十)复合句结构 【句法结构】1. 主句+ when/while/if/because/so that等+状语从句 2.主句 + that /if/whether/疑问词+宾语从句 3. ……先行词+ that/which/who等+定语从句…… 【典型例句】When I got home, my mother wasn’t in. 我到家时,妈妈不在。 I am sorry that you failed in the examination. 你考试不及格我感到很难过。 Can you tell me if/whether they will come to see me? 你能告诉我他们是否来看我吗? 【句型仿写】汤姆跑得那么快,因此他取得了第一名。 Tom runs very fast so that he wins the first place./Tom runs so fast that he wins the first place.  ( 写作示例 ) 　 (2022·温州中考)假如你是陈华,你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社。她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动,写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动(见下表)回复邮件,提出你对这些活动的看法和理由,并为她补充至少一项活动。 Activities for the Chinese music club: ●Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music ●Share stories of Chinese singers 要求: 1.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校等信息; 2.词数:110词左右。 【写作示例】 【审题布局】 框架 要点 升格/扩写 开头 引出话题 说出观点 Here is my idea. 扩写具体事件:Here is my idea about your activities. 主体 说看法 和原因 看法一 I think it’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese music. 扩写例子和原因:I think it’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese music, especially some classic pieces. This leads to a better understanding of Chinese culture. 看法二 Sharing the stories of singers may help you know about their songs better. 扩写原因:Sharing the stories of singers may help you know about their songs better. It’s also fun to sing a few songs of those famous singers. 补充活动 You can learn to play Chinese musical instruments. 补充例子和原因:You can learn to play Chinese musical instruments, like the erhu or the pipa. Playing them can be quite relaxing. 结尾 总结全文 中国文化会 吸引更多人 I’m sure you will be attracted by Chinese music and Chinese culture as well. 用状语提升:Through these activities, I’m sure you will be attracted by Chinese music and Chinese culture as well. 【参考范文】 Dear Tracy, Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know that you’ve set up a Chinese music club in your school.As I know,you’ve arranged activities for the club members next term.Here is my idea about your activities. I think it’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese music, especially some classic pieces. This leads to a better understanding of Chinese culture. The second activity, sharing the stories of singers may help you know about their songs better. There are many excellent Chinese singers whose life stories are interesting and inspiring. It’s also fun to sing a few songs of those famous singers. What’s more, you can learn to play Chinese musical instruments, like the erhu or the pipa. Playing them can be quite relaxing. Through these activities, I’m sure you will be attracted by Chinese music and Chinese culture as well.Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun. Yours, Chen Hua ①it is+ adj./n. to do.为高级句型,符合英语表达特点。 ②especially起突出强调作用,使表达更具体、清晰。 ③定语从句为高级句式,使表达更高级。 ④What’s more意为“另外,而且”,用于转换话题,使语言表达更流畅。 ⑤through为介词,用介词短语作状语,使语言表达更清晰、完美 ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）善于合作是一种能力。在校园生活中，你一定参加过各种社团活动吧，比如参加球赛，清洁教室，准备派对等。假如你是李明，你的学校英文广播站开展“Enjoy Teamwork”为题的征文活动，请根据以下思维导图，分享一次你的团队活动经历。 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。 Enjoy Teamwork Teamwork is important for teenagers. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山西晋中·三模）自我评价（self-evaluation）是一种对自己进行评估、反思和总结的行为，它对个人的成长和发展有重要的作用。一个人如果能够客观地认识和评价自己，就能正确地对待和处理生活和学习中的问题以及和他人的关系，并能扬长避短，让自己变得更好。 某校以“正确评价自己”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容包括：1. your idea about yourself； 2. an experience you evaluated yourself correctly； 3. your understanding of self-evaluation。 要求：1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·河北邯郸·二模）请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。（80词左右） 提示： 1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一； 2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家； 3. 如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）； 4. 我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 The Population Problem ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）深圳中小学已独立开设劳动教育必修课，假如你是校学生会主席李华，请代表广大学生给校长写一封关于提升劳动教育课程的信件，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议和理解。 要点提示： 1. 课程内容建议： ①……  ②……  ③…… 2. 开设课程的意义：（至少写3点意义）。 要求： 1. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，行文连贯，标点正确，书写规范。 提示词： 开设run；课程course；木工woodworking；屋顶农场rooftop farm；光荣的glorious Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·江苏南京·三模）假如你是刘明，你在英国的网友Peter得知你即将初中毕业，给你写了一封电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Peter回一封电子邮件。(部分信件内容省略) I know you will finish your junior high school. How’s your friendship? Can you tell me in details? What is your opinion of friendship? Please share with me.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 注意：1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3)词数80左右，内容涵盖所有要点。 6．（2024·河南郑州·一模）你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green school Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。 要求： 1) 可在思维导图内容提示基础上适当拓展信息； 2) 文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等个人信息； 3) 词数100左右。 My Green School Library ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·河北保定·二模）假设你是王林，你校最近开办了一个“英语角”，你想邀请你的朋友韩梅一起参加，请你结合下列海报，写一封邮件给她。COME TO OUR ENGLISH CORNER!!! Time: 3:30 p. m.—6:30 p. m. every Friday Place: Room 203 in Boai Building Games, music and movies are waiting! Come and join us into a world of fun and friendship! 注意： 1. 邮件须包含海报中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； 3. 词数：80个左右,开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Han Mei, Would you like to come to the newly-opened English corner with me? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Wang Lin 8．（2024·江苏南京·二模）某英文报 Kids Voice 栏目正在征稿，请你根据要求用英语写一篇文章投稿， 谈谈你的想法。     Some teenagers have difficulty in finding a true friend. They make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to. Share your ideas about the topic.     1. What do you think about following suit to make friends?     2. How can teenagers make true friends?     Support your ideas with your experience as an example. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数 80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Enjoy Teamwork Teamwork is important for teenagers. I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of my excessive belief in my own ability. After that, I realized it was a team sport and that I should work together with my teammates. Teamwork simplifies tasks. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life. I encourage everyone to actively participate in team activities for better outcomes. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍团队合作经历； 第二步，介绍看法和发表呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②because of由于 ③participate in参与 [高分句型] After that, I realized it was a team sport and that I should work together with my teammates.（宾语从句） 2． Everyone should have a clear understanding of themselves. As for me, I think I’m a caring and thoughtful girl who always puts myself in others’ shoes. I always think about others’ feelings and needs when dealing with problems. Actually, I was a bit selfish two years ago. I still remember what happened after the final exam of Grade 7. I thought I did very well after the exam. So I couldn’t wait to check answers with my best friend. I kept talking about the answers so excitedly that I didn’t notice the expressions on her face. Suddenly, she shouted at me and ran away. Just then, I realized I was not caring and thoughtful enough. It was always one of my shortcomings. Therefore, I made up my mind to improve myself. Later, I said sorry to my friend and began to think more about others. So I have more close friends. From this experience, I realized the importance of self-evaluation. We should have a proper and objective evaluation of ourselves. Not only can it help us a lot with our studies and lives, but it can also make us learn from mistakes and get better and better. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你对自己的看法； 第二步，讲述你正确评价自己的经历； 第三步，介绍你对自我评价的理解。 [亮点词汇] ① put oneself in others’ shoes设身处地为别人着想 ② deal with处理 ③ make up one’s mind下定决定 [高分句型] ① As for me, I think I’m a caring and thoughtful girl who always puts myself in others’ shoes.（宾语从句；who引导的定语从句） ② I kept talking about the answers so excitedly that I didn’t notice the expressions on her face.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） 3．例文： The Population Problem The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. It has become a serious problem. In many less developed areas, some parents prefer boys to girls. As a result, many girls can’t go to school. I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’ s population. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山引出话题，人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“中国是世界上人口最多的国家”和“如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题并举例说明”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，写我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。 [亮点词汇] ①one of………之一 ②in the world在世界上 ③about大约 ④not only…but also不仅……而且…… ⑤prefer…to…更喜欢……而不是…… ⑥As a result结果 ⑦is known as被称为 ⑧one-child policy一胎政策 [高分句型] I think we should do something to control the population. (省略了that的宾语从句) 4．例文 Dear headmaster, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to share some suggestions on running the course. First, the school can offer paper-cutting and woodworking classes. Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. We can also invite parents to join in these activities. Through this course, we students can not only learn some life skills but also take part in social activities. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colourful and meaningful! Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，表明写信的目的是提供一些开设课程的建议； 第二步，具体介绍课程内容的建议； 第三步，介绍开设课程的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①hold some competitions举办一些比赛 ②take part in参加 ③invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事 ④meanwhile同时 [高分句型] ①Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. (and连接的并列句) ②Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. (动名词作主语) 5．例文 Dear Peter, I am very glad to receive your letter. I made many friends in junior high school. We study and play together every day. When we are in trouble, we help each other. There are many kinds of friends. However, what is true friendship? As the popular saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those who never desert you when you are in trouble. They will offer you practical help sincerely and unselfishly even at the cost of their own interests. What’s more, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and to avoid doing what is wrong or illegal. It is lucky enough for everyone to have some true friends. What is your opinion? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Liu Ming [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示中”内容要点齐全这一点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表明很开心收到邮件，告知自己的情况； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习、校园活动、生活”几个方面重点介绍自己初中学习生活的细节； 第三步，书写结语。表达期望收到回信的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① in trouble 处于麻烦中 ② at the cost of 付出……代价 ③ stick to 坚持 [高分句型] ①When we are in trouble, we help each other.（when引导的时间状语从句） 6．例文 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. It is built in the shape of a big ball with a bright colour so that everyone can recognize it from a long distance. The library is built with green materials which do no harm to the environment. On the top of it, there are solar panels to collect solar energy, which can produce electricity for the library to run. It has big windows around it to let the sunlight in. Therefore, during the daytime, it’s bright enough for us to read inside. There are millions of books inside the library for us to borrow and read. In addition to the reading rooms, there is also a computer room. I’m sure it will be a wonderful place for us to read and study. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，需要适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍绿色图书馆的外观； 第二步，具体阐述环保材料和能源的使用； 第三步，最后在图书馆内可以进行的活动。 [亮点词汇] ①in the shape of以……形状 ②so that以便 ③in addition to除了 [高分句型] ①The library is built with green materials which do no harm to the environment. (定语从句) ②I’m sure it will be a wonderful place for us to read and study. (宾语从句) 7．例文 Dear Han Mei, Would you like to come to the newly-opened English corner with me? The English corner is held in Room 203 in Boai Building from 3:30 p.m. to 6:30 p.m. every Friday. There will be games, music and movies. We can have a lot of fun and make new friends. I think it will be a great opportunity for us to improve our English. I hope you can come with me. I’m looking forward to your reply. Wang Lin [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括海报中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：邀请朋友参加英语角； 第二步，介绍英语角的地点、时间以及活动内容等； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth. 想要做某事 ②look forward to 期待 [高分句型] ①I think it will be a great opportunity for us to improve our English. (宾语从句) ②The English corner is held in Room 203 in Boai Building from 3:30 p.m. to 6:30 p.m. every Friday. (一般现在时的被动语态) 8．例文 It isn’t wise to follow suit to make friends. Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. Even worse, you might forget who you really are while doing so. Secondly, you may do something terrible to others when following suit, like hurting others’ feelings. As for how to make true friends, I think being honest and polite is the best policy. Besides, be glad to offer your time and help when others are in need. When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. Now, we are best friends. Last but not least, you should develop some hobbies which will help you find friends with similar interests. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起引出话题； 第二步，讲述模仿他人交友是并不明智的； 第三步，讲述如何交到真正的好朋友。 [亮点词汇] ①Even worse更糟糕的是 ②be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事 ③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ④Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①Firstly, following suit is against being yourself, which will make you unhappy. （which引导非限定性定语从句） ②When my classmate Jack failed his math test, I helped him review the lessons every day. （when引导时间状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$