Unit1 Growing Up写作提高训练- 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题（外研版2019选择性必修第二册）

Unit1 Growing Up写作提高训练 - 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题 （外研版2019选择性必修第二册） 一、书信写作 1．你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.书的题目和作者；2.书的主要内容；3.你的推荐理由。 注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假定你是校英文报School Weekly的编辑李华，你们计划向全校学生征集以“Growing pains and gains”为主题的英语短文刊登在报纸上。请你用英语写一篇征稿启事并发布在校园网上，内容包括： 1.征稿目的； 2.稿件要求及投稿方式； 3.表达期待。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请根据下列提示写一篇书评。 1. 书名：《哈利波特》； 2. 对该书的简要介绍； 3. 你的评价。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．请你根据下面要点提示写一篇关于《黑暗物质》的书评。 1. 最伟大的幻想小说之一；由英国作家菲利普·普尔曼创作； 2. 1995年出版，已销售1,800万册，翻译成40多种文字； 3. 主人公分别是女孩Lyra、男孩Will； 4. 你对该书的评价。 注意：1.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Chis在电子邮件中表示对中国的网络小说很感兴趣，想要了解更多。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.你了解的中国网络小说情况； 3.谈谈你的看法。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假设你是李华。上周你的笔友John送给你一本书Little Prince作为礼物，你想回赠一本中文书，希望通过这本书能让John对中国文化有更深的理解。请你给John写封邮件。 内容包括： 1. 表达你的感谢之情。 2. 简单介绍你回赠的书。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear John, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Bob要在暑假期间回国，打算为他父母准备一本中文书籍作为礼物，特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。内容包括： 要点： 1.推荐的书籍及简介； 2.推荐理由； 3.表达祝福。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Bob, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 书籍简介； 2. 对你的影响。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。 The Most Influential Book to Me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，收到了正在学中文的外国朋友Chris送给你的马克·吐温写的一本书The Adventures of Tom Sawyer(汤姆索亚历险记)，作为回赠，你想送一本能体现中国文化的书，请给Chris写封电子邮件，内容包括: 要点： 1.对他表达感谢和对这本书的喜欢； 2. 简单介绍你赠送的这本书； 3. 希望他了解中国文化。 注意: 1.词数不少于100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，你的英语好友杰克来信说他最近汉语学习进步很大，想读一部汉语作品。请你用英语给他写一封回信，向他推荐一本书。 注意：1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 二、书面表达 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 1. The most important change in a person’s life is the change of his or her attitude. Right attitudes produce right actions. Have you ever met someone who gave you a different view of life? On a Sunday morning, I saw something very interesting as I went to the greengrocer’s. To get there, I had to cross a bridge over railway tracks. The bridge was pretty high. A set of steep steps had to be climbed; then the bridge flattened out (变平), followed by coming down another set of steps. On my way back from the greengrocer’s, I saw an elderly gentleman running up the steps. After watching him run up the steps so fast, I thought that he could be in a rush. Before I knew it, he had crossed the bridge, and then he ran back to where he started. To my surprise, he did not stop. He turned around, and then went up and down the bridge again. He was not struggling, and seemed to enjoy going up and down the bridge. Being a fitness fanatic (热衷于健美的人) myself, I admired his ability to Cross the bridge so quickly. My curiosity got the better of me, and I came up to him to have a chat with him. “Excuse me, sir. Are you training for an event?” I asked. He stopped. “No, not training for an event. Well, I am training for life,” he said with a broad smile on his face as sweat rolled down his cheeks. I told him that I had been looking for a role model of fitness, and that I hoped to be as strong as he is when I get to his age. He said that everyone has a choice about what they do with their life. “I am not different,” he added. With much admiration, I asked, “What drives you to maintain good health?” Then he told me the accident he met with when he was young. Paragraph 1: “I used to be a cyclist,” he said. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. I pulled the car into the garage and got out, just like every night for the past 16 years. The difference was that I wouldn’t have a job to take in the morning. I used to be a VP in technology for a national bank until it was closed. I’d put my heart and soul into my job. Not only did I work long hours, but I was on call 24 hours a day, including weekends and holidays. My kids joked that, though they were the teenagers, I was the one who was glued to the cellphone and had to be told not to text at the dinner table. My wife, Michelle, went back to work full­time once my job was threatened. But our kids would be going to college—our son, TJ, was a high school senior, and the girls, Sarah and Tara, were in ninth grade—and I wanted to give them the education and opportunities they deserved. God, if I can’t provide for my family, I asked, what good am I? A ray of light streamed through the window, as if beckoning(召唤) me. I opened the door and stepped out into our yard. The lawn, the maple tree planted when I was young and the flower beds were overrun with weeds.They needed pruning(修剪)． Treasure this time. The thought came out of nowhere. But clear, clear as it could be, I shook my head. I couldn’t get distracted by random thoughts. The clock was ticking. I needed to get busy finding a new job. I went up to the house. “I’m sorry, Dad,” TJ said. “I know how much your job meant to you.” His concern was mirrored in the girls’ faces. Then Michelle added, “It’s going to be okay. We’ll get through this together. Maybe you should consider this time as a break.You deserve one.” A break? Was she kidding? There was no time to rest. If anything, I needed to work even harder. Paragraph 1： The next morning I got up before everyone else and opened my laptop. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Just a few hours here and there, the new lawn began to take shape and so did I． ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. As a teacher, my daily routine includes driving to a new school almost every day so I’m usually unable to predict the day’s events, good or bad! On one particular day, I was teaching in a very difficult class. Some of the schoolboys didn’t finish their homework on time and that really annoyed me. I was managing behaviour all morning and by lunchtime I knew I needed coffee to even consider surviving the afternoon. So on my lunchtime, I drove to a nearby plaza to get a cup of coffee. There I had a wonderful time and forgot the unpleasant experience in the morning. Upon returning to the car, I realized I had locked my keys and my phone inside! I had about 15 minutes to get back to the school which was a good 4-or-5-minute drive away. I considered rushing back, but it was winter, and I thought a dirty fall on ice would only make the situation much worse. So I ran into a Mcdonald’s which was in the same plaza and asked the man at the counter to call me a cab. The man happened to be the manager of the restaurant. I briefly explained my situation to him, and I could tell by the look, that he empathized. He hurried to the back to use the phone while I paced in the restaurant. I had less than 10 minutes to get back to my school at this point. The manager returned, only to tell me that the cab company had put him on hold and then the line got disconnected, and that he was now on hold again, but had not yet been able to request the cab yet. My expression, I am sure, began to resemble some combination of hopelessness and fear. 注意:续写词数应为150左右。 Without a thought, the manager grabbed his coat and offered to drive me to the school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The manager’s calm behaviour and kind nature made me think ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 8 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit1 Growing Up写作提高训练 - 2024-2025学年高二英语专项提高训练必刷好题 （外研版2019选择性必修第二册） 一、书信写作 1．你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.书的题目和作者；2.书的主要内容；3.你的推荐理由。 注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself. I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you. The book was written by a famous Chinese writer, Lu Yao. It centers on the life and destinies of three families of Sun, Tian and Jin in a village. It pictures the tough process of building up a better and wealthier life during the very beginning of reform and openness in China. Reading the book, you will be greatly moved by the courage and spirit of the main characters. That’s why I make this recommendation. I am looking forward to your view of this book. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请考生按要求给他回信推荐中国文学作品。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非常：more than → very 著名的：well-known → famous 描绘：picture → depict/describe 艰难的：tough → difficult 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you. 拓展句：I recommend a well-known Chinese book to you, whose title is The Ordinary World. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself. (运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句和从属连词because引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】That’s why I make this recommendation. (运用了连接副词why连接的表语从句) 2．假定你是校英文报School Weekly的编辑李华，你们计划向全校学生征集以“Growing pains and gains”为主题的英语短文刊登在报纸上。请你用英语写一篇征稿启事并发布在校园网上，内容包括： 1.征稿目的； 2.稿件要求及投稿方式； 3.表达期待。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Contributions Wanted To help us appreciate our unforgettable growing times, we are looking for good English articles on the theme of “Growing pains and gains”. You are expected to share your stories during the process of growing up within 400 words. All the articles should be original and positive. And every one of you is welcome to send your articles to schoolweekly@163.com before September 17. The excellent ones will be published in our newspaper. If you have any questions, feel free to contact us at 012-3889146. Looking forward to your brilliant works. School Weekly 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是校英文报School Weekly的编辑李华，你们计划向全校学生征集以“Growing pains and gains”为主题的英语短文刊登在报纸上。请你用英语写一篇征稿启事并发布在校园网上，内容包括：征稿目的；稿件要求及投稿方式；表达期待。 【详解】1.词汇积累 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 出版，发行：publish→come out→issue 杰出的：brilliant→outstanding 联系：contact→reach 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To help us appreciate our unforgettable growing times, we are looking for good English articles on the theme of “Growing pains and gains”. 拓展句：In order that help us appreciate our unforgettable growing times, we are looking for good English articles, whose theme is “Growing pains and gains”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To help us appreciate our unforgettable growing times, we are looking for good English articles on the theme of “Growing pains and gains”.（运用了不定式作目的状语） 【高分句型2】If you have any questions, feel free to contact us at 012-3889146.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） 3．请根据下列提示写一篇书评。 1. 书名：《哈利波特》； 2. 对该书的简要介绍； 3. 你的评价。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Harry Potter is a series of fantasy novels by British writer J. K. Rowling. It is popular all over the world. Harry Potter tells us stories about Harry Potter, a kind, brave and strong boy who is never afraid of any difficulties. He has two close friends, who always help him and never leave him, no matter how bad the conditions are. In the end, Harry Potter overcomes all difficulties and lives a happy life. In my view, Harry Potter is easy to understand and interesting to read. It’s a good book that all teenagers love. 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇《哈利波特》的书评。 【详解】1.词汇积累 勇敢的：brave→courageous 受欢迎的：popular→welcome 最后：in the end→finally 在我看来：in my view→in my opinion 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Harry Potter is a series of fantasy novels by British writer J. K. Rowling. 拓展句：Harry Potter is a series of fantasy novels which is written by British writer J. K. Rowling. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Harry Potter tells us stories about Harry Potter, a kind, brave and strong boy who is never afraid of any difficulties.（由who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】He has two close friends, who always help him and never leave him, no matter how bad the conditions are.（由who引导的定语从句和no matter how引导的让步状语从句） 4．请你根据下面要点提示写一篇关于《黑暗物质》的书评。 1. 最伟大的幻想小说之一；由英国作家菲利普·普尔曼创作； 2. 1995年出版，已销售1,800万册，翻译成40多种文字； 3. 主人公分别是女孩Lyra、男孩Will； 4. 你对该书的评价。 注意：1.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dark Materials by the English writer, Philip Pullman, is one of the greatest fantasy novels. Published in 1995, it has sold 18 million copies and has been translated into more than 40 languages. The heroine is a girl called Lyra and the hero a boy Will. In the first book, Lyra’s father, a scientist, makes it possible that the children enter other worlds, where they have many extraordinary adventures and play an important part in a war that could destroy the universe. In my opinion, it’s an exciting novel both adults and children will enjoy. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据要点提示写一篇关于《黑暗物质》的书评。 【详解】1.词汇积累 超过：more than →over 被称为：called →named 喜欢：enjoy→ be fond of 就某人而言：in one’s opinion →as far as sb. be concerned 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Dark Materials by the English writer, Philip Pullman, is one of the greatest fantasy novels. 拓展句：Dark Materials is written by the English writer, Philip Pullman, who is one of the greatest fantasy novels. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Published in 1995, it has sold 18 million copies and has been translated into more than 40 languages.（运用了过去分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】In the first book, Lyra’s father, a scientist, makes it possible that the children enter other worlds, where they have many extraordinary adventures and play an important part in a war that could destroy the universe.（运用了it作形式宾语，that引导宾语从句以及where引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Chis在电子邮件中表示对中国的网络小说很感兴趣，想要了解更多。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.你了解的中国网络小说情况； 3.谈谈你的看法。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Chris, Glad to receive your email, I'm writing to show you my opinions about Chinese online fictions. Chinese online fictions are becoming increasingly popular since its first appearing on various platforms and social media, especially among the youth from the post-1990 to post-2000. With its increasing popularity, a great number of popular writers, including Tangjia Sanshao and Cuttlefish That Loves Diving, are put on the top list. I like reading online fictions because I find the fantasy and romance stories stimulating. They have fascinating characters, absorbing plots and thrilling adventures. In my opinion, these works are well worth reading. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的外国朋友Chis在电子邮件中表示对中国的网络小说很感兴趣，想要了解更多这一情况，给他回一封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 各种各样的：various→ all kinds of 大量的：a great number of → a lot of 以我来看：in my opinion→ as far as I'm concerned 激励人的：stimulating→inspring 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I'm writing to show you my opinions about Chinese online fictions. 拓展句：I'm writing to show you my opinions, whose theme is about Chinese online fictions. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I like reading online fictions because I find the fantasy and romance stories stimulating.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句。） 【高分句型2】With its increasing popularity, a great number of popular writers, including Tangjia Sanshao and Cuttlefish That Loves Diving, are put on the top list.（运用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。） 6．假设你是李华。上周你的笔友John送给你一本书Little Prince作为礼物，你想回赠一本中文书，希望通过这本书能让John对中国文化有更深的理解。请你给John写封邮件。 内容包括： 1. 表达你的感谢之情。 2. 简单介绍你回赠的书。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear John, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear John, I hope this email finds you well. I want to express my heartfelt thanks for the book Little Prince you gifted me last week. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. In order to express my appreciation, I would like to give you a Chinese novel that I believe will provide you with insights into Chinese culture. The book I have chosen for you is Dream of the Red Chamber, a classic masterpiece that showcases the richness of Chinese literature and traditions. I hope this book will offer you a glimpse into our culture. Let’s continue to stay in touch and share our love for literature and culture. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周你的笔友John送给你一本书Little Prince作为礼物，你想回赠一本中文书，希望通过这本书能让 John对中国文化有更深的理解。要求考生给John 写封邮件表达感谢之情并简单介绍回赠的书。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 表达：express→extend 感谢：thanks→gratitude 保持联系：stay in touch→keep in touch 喜爱：enjoy→be fond of 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I want to express my heartfelt thanks for the book Little Prince you gifted me last week. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 拓展句：I want to express my heartfelt thanks for the book Little Prince you gifted me last week, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to express my appreciation, I would like to give you a Chinese novel that I believe will provide you with insights into Chinese culture. (运用了不定式作目的状语和that引导定语从句) 【高分句型2】I hope this book will offer you a glimpse into our culture. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句) 7．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Bob要在暑假期间回国，打算为他父母准备一本中文书籍作为礼物，特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。内容包括： 要点： 1.推荐的书籍及简介； 2.推荐理由； 3.表达祝福。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Bob, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Bob, I'm glad to hear that you are going back home during this summer holiday and you want to bring a Chinese book for your parents that symbolizes the Chinese culture. I think Cao Xueqin's A Dream of Red Mansions is the one that cannot be missed. Regarded as one of the most significant novels in Chinese literature, the novel exposes the readers to the fall of a large wealthy family. Drawing on his own experiences, Cao Xueqin gives a detailed description of what life was like at that time. Readers can have a better understanding of the cultural and historical elements in it. Hope my recommendation can be of great help to you. Have a good vacation and remember me to your parents. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Bob写一封信，回复的内容是向他推荐书籍并且对书籍的内容进行简单介绍，同时阐述推荐的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 回家：go back home→return home 重要的：significant → important/essential/vital 希望：hope→ expect 美好的：good → amazing/nice/fabulous 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Readers can have a better understanding of the cultural and historical elements in it. 拓展句：Readers can have a better understanding of the cultural and historical elements ,which are included in the book. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I think Cao Xueqin's A Dream of Red Mansions is the one that cannot be missed.（运用了that引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Regarded as one of the most significant novels in Chinese literature, the novel exposes the readers to the fall of a large wealthy family.（运用了过去分词作状语，表示被动关系） 8．你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 书籍简介； 2. 对你的影响。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯。 The Most Influential Book to Me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Most Influential Book to Me Among the books I’ve read, the Little Prince influences me most. It’s about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets a boy — the little prince from another planet. The little prince tells the pilot stories of his magical journey from his little planet and of his encounters with different grown-ups. Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways. I’ve realized the importance of company and learned to open my heart and love the people around me. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题，根据要求写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 ①影响：influence→ affect ②旅途：journey→ tour ③重要性：importance→ significance ④喜欢：love→ be fond of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’ve realized the importance of company and learned to open my heart and love the people around me. 拓展句：I’ve realized that company is important and learned to open my heart and love the people around me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets a boy — the little prince from another planet.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句和until引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句） 9．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，收到了正在学中文的外国朋友Chris送给你的马克·吐温写的一本书The Adventures of Tom Sawyer(汤姆索亚历险记)，作为回赠，你想送一本能体现中国文化的书，请给Chris写封电子邮件，内容包括: 要点： 1.对他表达感谢和对这本书的喜欢； 2. 简单介绍你赠送的这本书； 3. 希望他了解中国文化。 注意: 1.词数不少于100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Chris, Having got the book you sent me, I can’t help writing this email to express my gratitude to you. This book, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, written by Mark Twain, enjoys great popularity around the world. Not only does it help me improve my English but also inspires me a lot. I know your Chinese has improved a lot these days. I will send you a book, the name of which is History as Mirror. After reading this book, I think you will know more about Chinese history and be a Chinese expert. In my opinion, to learn a language is to learn its culture. As you know, Chinese culture is profound, which makes learning Chinese a tough job. Wish you great progress in Chinese study. Best wishes and keep in touch! Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友James写封邮件，表达对朋友所赠之书的喜欢，以及回赠给朋友书的简单介绍。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：convey→express 感激：appreciation→gratitude 了解更多：have a better understanding of→konw more about 在我看来：as far as I am concerned→in my opinion 2.句型拓展 同义句 原句：I will send you a book, the name of which is History as Mirror. 拓展句：I will send you a book, called History as Mirror. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Having got the book you sent me, I can’t help writing this email to express my gratitude to you. （运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2]Not only does it help me improve my English but also inspires me a lot.（运用了部分倒装） [高分句型3]I will send you a book, the name of which is History as Mirror. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 10．假如你是李华，你的英语好友杰克来信说他最近汉语学习进步很大，想读一部汉语作品。请你用英语给他写一封回信，向他推荐一本书。 注意：1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you’ve made great progress in learning Chinese. As you requested, I’d like to recommend the book” A Dream of Red Mansions” to you, which is a well-known masterpiece in the world of literature. Written about 250 years ago by Cao Xueqin, the novel has attracted countless readers. It mainly describes the daily life and declining fortunes of a large family. At the heart of the novel is a tragic love between Jia Baoyu, LinDaiyu and Xue Baochai. Cao devoted all his feelings to the characters in the book, giving them special looks ,voices and emotions. The novel is really worth reading and I believe you will enjoy it. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语好友杰克写一封回信，向他推荐一部汉语作品。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→pleased 著名的：well-known→famous 吸引：attract→draw 无数的：countless→too many 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Written about 250 years ago by Cao Xueqin, the novel has attracted countless readers. 拓展句： The novel，which was written about 250 years ago by Cao Xueqin, has attracted countless readers. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As you requested, I’d like to recommend the book” A Dream of Red Mansions” to you, which is a well-known masterpiece in the world of literature.（运用了as和which引导非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】At the heart of the novel is a tragic love between Jia Baoyu, LinDaiyu and Xue Baochai.（运用了倒装句） 【高分句型3】Cao devoted all his feelings to the characters in the book, giving them special looks ,voices and emotions.（运用了现在分词作状语） 二、书面表达 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 1. The most important change in a person’s life is the change of his or her attitude. Right attitudes produce right actions. Have you ever met someone who gave you a different view of life? On a Sunday morning, I saw something very interesting as I went to the greengrocer’s. To get there, I had to cross a bridge over railway tracks. The bridge was pretty high. A set of steep steps had to be climbed; then the bridge flattened out (变平), followed by coming down another set of steps. On my way back from the greengrocer’s, I saw an elderly gentleman running up the steps. After watching him run up the steps so fast, I thought that he could be in a rush. Before I knew it, he had crossed the bridge, and then he ran back to where he started. To my surprise, he did not stop. He turned around, and then went up and down the bridge again. He was not struggling, and seemed to enjoy going up and down the bridge. Being a fitness fanatic (热衷于健美的人) myself, I admired his ability to Cross the bridge so quickly. My curiosity got the better of me, and I came up to him to have a chat with him. “Excuse me, sir. Are you training for an event?” I asked. He stopped. “No, not training for an event. Well, I am training for life,” he said with a broad smile on his face as sweat rolled down his cheeks. I told him that I had been looking for a role model of fitness, and that I hoped to be as strong as he is when I get to his age. He said that everyone has a choice about what they do with their life. “I am not different,” he added. With much admiration, I asked, “What drives you to maintain good health?” Then he told me the accident he met with when he was young. Paragraph 1: “I used to be a cyclist,” he said. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: “I used to be a cyclist,” he said. “Competing in cycling events is what I loved and enjoyed. “Then he told me why he stopped cycling. While cycling one day, he was hit by a car. The doctor told him that he might never walk again. He refused to believe that. So, he was determined not to let the accident prevent him from walking again. Paragraph 2: His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. His love for life and for fitness is what makes him cross the bridge many times. Moved by his story, I told him that it was an honor to meet a role model like him and that I wanted to make friends with him. He agreed happily. I shook his hand, thanked him for having a chat with me, and let him continue with his exercise. As I walked away, my admiration for him grew even more because of his attitude to life. 【分析】本文是记叙文。文章讲述了作者偶遇在桥上锻炼的老者，通过与他的交流和聆听他的故事，作者大受启发，对生活的态度也得以改变。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“‘我以前是骑自行车的，’他说。”可知，第一段可描写这一位上了年纪的绅士所述往事。 ②由第二段首句内容“他的决心得到了回报，他又能走路了”可知，第二段可描写听完老者故事后，作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：老人讲述往事——骑车被撞可能失去行走能力——决心与命运斗争——付出得到回报——与老者道别和感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①参加自行车比赛：competing in cycling events/contesting in cycling events ②被车撞倒了：was hit by a car/was knocked over by a car ③他决定不：he was determined not to/he made his mind not to 情绪类 ①被他的故事感动：Moved by his story/touched by his story ②愉快同意：agreed happily/agreed gladly 【点睛】[高分句型1] Then he told me why he stopped cycling.(运用了why引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] While cycling one day, he was hit by a car.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句和状语从句的省略) [高分句型3] Moved by his story, I told him that it was an honor to meet a role model like him and that I wanted to make friends with him.(运用了过去分词作原因状语和that引导的宾语从句) 2. I pulled the car into the garage and got out, just like every night for the past 16 years. The difference was that I wouldn’t have a job to take in the morning. I used to be a VP in technology for a national bank until it was closed. I’d put my heart and soul into my job. Not only did I work long hours, but I was on call 24 hours a day, including weekends and holidays. My kids joked that, though they were the teenagers, I was the one who was glued to the cellphone and had to be told not to text at the dinner table. My wife, Michelle, went back to work full­time once my job was threatened. But our kids would be going to college—our son, TJ, was a high school senior, and the girls, Sarah and Tara, were in ninth grade—and I wanted to give them the education and opportunities they deserved. God, if I can’t provide for my family, I asked, what good am I? A ray of light streamed through the window, as if beckoning(召唤) me. I opened the door and stepped out into our yard. The lawn, the maple tree planted when I was young and the flower beds were overrun with weeds.They needed pruning(修剪)． Treasure this time. The thought came out of nowhere. But clear, clear as it could be, I shook my head. I couldn’t get distracted by random thoughts. The clock was ticking. I needed to get busy finding a new job. I went up to the house. “I’m sorry, Dad,” TJ said. “I know how much your job meant to you.” His concern was mirrored in the girls’ faces. Then Michelle added, “It’s going to be okay. We’ll get through this together. Maybe you should consider this time as a break.You deserve one.” A break? Was she kidding? There was no time to rest. If anything, I needed to work even harder. Paragraph 1： The next morning I got up before everyone else and opened my laptop. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Just a few hours here and there, the new lawn began to take shape and so did I． ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The next morning I got up before everyone else and opened my laptop. To find a new job, I searched job sites, and companies with big technical departments, and e­mailed friends with connections. Then Michelle and the kids were up; the house was bustling. However, by midmorning the quiet of the house was driving me crazy. I walked to our yard to clear my head. My gaze fell on the overgrown lawn. At least that was a problem I could do something about. Then I settled into a new routine. I still applied for jobs, but I took a break to do things I’d neglected. Just a few hours here and there, the new lawn began to take shape and so did I. With the physical labor, the extra weight and concern dropped off, and I felt healthier. Maybe God had answered a prayer I hadn’t even said. He gave me this time to treasure, to be the husband and father my family needed. And I also had the chance to find a healthy balance between work and home—a balance that even after I land a new position with a great company, I will be sure to keep. 【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述了作者曾经工作非常忙碌，没有时间休息和陪伴家人，但后来作者因为公司倒闭而失业了，他的内心感到很焦虑。在找工作没有头绪的时候，作者发现自己可以修剪草坪，体力劳动让作者心中的重负减轻了不少，作者决定好好平衡工作和家庭。 【详解】1. 段落续写 由续写第一段首句内容“第二天早上，我比其他人先起床，打开了我的笔记本电脑。”和第二段首句内容“仅仅几个小时后，新草坪就开始成形了，我也是。”可知，第一段可以描写一大早作者通过电脑找新工作，后来家人离开后作者难以忍受屋子里的寂静，于是出门透透气，发现了杂草丛生的草坪，他决定在申请工作的时候顺便修剪一下草坪。 由续写第二段首句内容“仅仅几个小时后，新草坪就开始成形了，我也是。”可知，第二段可以描写作者通过体力劳动减轻了心里的重负，意识到这或许是上天给自己的一个机会去珍惜家人，让他能够平衡家庭和工作。 2. 续写线索 早起找工作——家人起床后屋子里熙熙攘攘——家人离开后屋子里的安静让人发狂——出门清理思绪——发现杂草丛生的草坪——决定在找工作的间隙修剪草坪——草坪变得整洁有形——减轻重负——意识到这是一个平衡家庭和工作的好机会 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①起床：get up/get out of bed/rise/be up ②习惯于：settle into/be accustomed to/get used to ③申请：apply for/make an application for 情绪类 ①把某人逼疯：drive sb. crazy/ drive sb. mad/ drive sb. insane ②担心：concern/worry 【点睛】【高分句型1】I still applied for jobs, but I took a break to do things I’d neglected.(使用了but连接并列句、不定式作目的状语和省略关系词的定语从句) 【高分句型2】And I also had the chance to find a healthy balance between work and home—a balance that even after I land a new position with a great company, I will be sure to keep. (使用了不定式作后置定语、that引导定语从句和after引导时间状语从句) 3. As a teacher, my daily routine includes driving to a new school almost every day so I’m usually unable to predict the day’s events, good or bad! On one particular day, I was teaching in a very difficult class. Some of the schoolboys didn’t finish their homework on time and that really annoyed me. I was managing behaviour all morning and by lunchtime I knew I needed coffee to even consider surviving the afternoon. So on my lunchtime, I drove to a nearby plaza to get a cup of coffee. There I had a wonderful time and forgot the unpleasant experience in the morning. Upon returning to the car, I realized I had locked my keys and my phone inside! I had about 15 minutes to get back to the school which was a good 4-or-5-minute drive away. I considered rushing back, but it was winter, and I thought a dirty fall on ice would only make the situation much worse. So I ran into a Mcdonald’s which was in the same plaza and asked the man at the counter to call me a cab. The man happened to be the manager of the restaurant. I briefly explained my situation to him, and I could tell by the look, that he empathized. He hurried to the back to use the phone while I paced in the restaurant. I had less than 10 minutes to get back to my school at this point. The manager returned, only to tell me that the cab company had put him on hold and then the line got disconnected, and that he was now on hold again, but had not yet been able to request the cab yet. My expression, I am sure, began to resemble some combination of hopelessness and fear. 注意:续写词数应为150左右。 Without a thought, the manager grabbed his coat and offered to drive me to the school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The manager’s calm behaviour and kind nature made me think ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Without a thought, the manager grabbed his coat and offered to drive me to the school. Without hesitation, I followed him into his car and made it back into my classroom with 2 minutes to spare before the bell! Upon arriving at the school, I thanked this man endlessly. The manager’s calm behaviour and kind nature made me think he was probably a wonderful manager to work for, and also a wonderful human being to have on this earth. This experience makes me realize that out of every seemingly hopeless situation, there is the opportunity for acts of kindness to happen, which can have an unimaginable impact on those who receive them. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一名老师，这天在外面喝咖啡的时候，不小心把钥匙和手机锁在车里了，快要赶不上上课了，这是多亏了善良的麦当劳的经理开车送作者，作者非常感谢对方。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“经理不假思索地抓起外套，提出开车送我去学校”可知，第一段可描写经理要送作者去学校，作者感谢经理。 ②由第二段首句内容“经理冷静的行为和善良的本性让我觉得……”可知，第二段可描写作者对经理行为的感悟和感激。 2.续写线索：经理提出开车送作者——作者回到学校——感谢经理——作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①影响：have an impact on/influence ②提出：offer/propose ③到达：arrive/reach 情绪类 ①感谢：thank/show gratitude to ②绝望的：hopeless /desperate 【点睛】[高分句型1] Upon arriving at the school, I thanked this man endlessly. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] This experience makes me realize that out of every seemingly hopeless situation, there is the opportunity for acts of kindness to happen, which can have an unimaginable impact on those who receive them. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句和that引导宾语从句) ( 20 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$