专题07 书面表达-【好题汇编】备战2025年高中学业水平合格考英语真题分类汇编（江苏专用）

专题06 完形填空 (江苏专用) 高频话题01 旅游观光 Passage 1 (2023•江苏)假如你是苏华，刚刚收到外国笔友Mike的邮件 TO: suhuajschina@123.com FROM: mikenewzealand@123.com Dear SU Hua, How is everything going? Last year I read an article about the history and development of Jiangsu in an English magazine, and I love it. I will leave school next term and I am eager to visit Jiangsu, especially Nanjing, its capital city. Could you tell me something more about Nanjing? Thank you very much. Regards, Mike 请根据邮件，用英文写一封回信，内容要点如下： (1)历史悠久：曾经是六朝古都。 (2)景色优美：名胜众多、如中山陵、玄武湖。 (3)美食丰富：盐水鸭等很受欢迎。 (4)教育发达：拥有很多名校。 注意： (1)包含所有要点，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 (2)词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 参考词汇： 朝代 dynasty 中山陵Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum 盐水鸭 salted duck ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2023•江苏)假设你是李华，打算高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周，现在就此事发e-mail 给伦敦的朋友Bob，主要内容： 1.询问当地的天气情况以及你要的准备的东西； 2.询问当地的景点以及收费情况； 3.请Bob帮你在宾馆预定一个房间； 4.询问Bob 当地的法规以防出错。 Dear Bob, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 高频话题02 语言学习 Passage 1 (2024•江苏南通)假定你是李华，上周你的英国朋友 Allen 来你校进行了学习交流，现已回国。他给你发来邮件说他对英语课堂上老师用英汉双语授课的方法提出异议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.对这一异议作出解释； 2.提出你自己的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 邮件的开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Allen, In your e-mail, you expressed disagreement about our teachers speaking both English and Chinese in English classes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 (2023•江苏)假如你是李津, 你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站. 请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件. 推荐网站：www. edchinese. com 网站内容： 1. 网络课程：中文情景对话、中国风俗、成语； 2. 其它：中文电影、中文歌曲、唐诗等； 3. 有在线教师答疑解惑. 费用：全部免费 注意：1. 词数不少于100词； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯. Dear Edward, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 高频话题03 学校活动 Passage 1 (2023•江苏苏州)假如你是校学生会主席李华，为庆祝建国74周年，你校决定举办一场学生书画作品展，主题为“我心中的祖国”，现向全校同学征集作品。请你代表学生会写一则通知，内容包括： 1)展览的时间、地点、主题等； 2)参赛作品要求； 3)报名注意事项。 注意：写作词数应不低于80词。 Notice ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students’ Union Passage 2 (2023•江苏)假如你是李华，2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：1. 参与人员、 时间；2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 A Visit to the City Museum ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 (2023•江苏)假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的题为“how to be a good student” 的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容如下： 1. 努力学习； 2. 积极锻炼身体； 3. 和同学友好相处。 注意： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Good afternoon, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Passage 4 (2022•江苏)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件，推荐科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Thomas, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Passage 5 (2023•江苏)假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节，你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert)，老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信，邀请她参加并表演个节目。 内容要点： (1)时间: 1月20晚8:00； (2)地点:学校操场； (3)节目类型：唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。 注意:1.词数80左右: 2.开头和结尾已经给出，不算词数: 3.可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高频话题04 人生规划 Passage 1 (2023•江苏)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括： 1.你的人生规划; 2.解释原因; 3.请他提出建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jackson, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 高频话题05 中国体育文化 Passage 1 (2023•江苏)假设你是李华，你校将于下周五晚八点在体育馆举行一场中国功夫(Kungfu)的表演。你想邀请外教Michael一起观看演出。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 具体时间和地点； 2. 邀请原因； 3. 表演简介。 注意： 1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现考生的真实个人信息； 4. 词数100左右。 Dear Michael, I am glad to hear that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2022•江苏南通)假定你是李华，你校为了弘扬中华文化，计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛，请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加，内容包括： 1. 大赛举办的目的； 2. 大赛的时间和规则； 3. 你邀请的理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear George, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 (2012•江苏徐州房山高级中学)假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 1、该人物是谁； 2、该人物的主要贡献； 3、该人物对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数不少于100； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Lihua 高频话题06 公益活动 Passage 1 (2020•江苏苏州)假定你是李华,得知近期你市将举办中英青少年历史体验夏令营活动( China and Britain History Summer Camp For Teenagers)。请你给活动的负责人Mr. Clark写一封邮件,申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.表达意愿。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 高频话题07 人生规划 (2023•江苏)假如你是李华，你的朋友 Robert来信说要来中国学汉语，想了解你校情况。你回信告知：你校建于1950年，校园环境优美，有教学楼、图书馆、音乐舞蹈室、游泳池和运动场，而且你校的老师都优秀，对学生很有耐心。 内容要点： (1)听说 Robert要来你校学习，你很高兴。 (2)简单介绍你校情况。 (3)期待早日在中国见到 Robert。 注意：1、词数80左右。 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3、开头和结尾已给出，不算字数。 Dear Robert, I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 高频话题08 其他 (2019•常州)As bike-sharing booms in China, a guideline was released by the government to promote a new form of the sharing economy - this time involving vehicles. Car-sharing, which provides an alternative for people to travel in cities, will be the new innovation in a service model. The released guideline focuses on legal status, insurance and regular maintenance of cars before they join sharing services. It encourages the development of car-sharing, which is expected to reduce the liking to individually buy vehicles and ease traffic congestion amid a surge in recent years of private-car ownership. “However, there is a long way to before the purpose of the guideline comes true,” said Xia Xueluan, a professor of sociology. “First, a car costs at least 100.000 yuan, almost 500 times that for a shared bicycle. Besides, shared cars also take the same spaces as other private cars, so parking will be another problem.” “Meanwhile, traditional car rental companies are competing with the emerging car-sharing business. It’s estimated the charges will be almost the same for both forms of cars rentals,” Xia said. “How to survive fierce competition will remain a challenge for car-sharing providers,” he added. 【写作内容】 1. 用约30个词概括上述文章的主要内容； 2. 请你就共享汽车的话题发表观点。 (1)为什么要发展共享汽车； (2)如何才能更好地发展共享汽车。 【写作要求】 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句: 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称: 3. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 9 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题06 完形填空 (江苏专用) 高频话题01 旅游观光 Passage 1 (2023•江苏)假如你是苏华，刚刚收到外国笔友Mike的邮件 TO: suhuajschina@123.com FROM: mikenewzealand@123.com Dear SU Hua, How is everything going? Last year I read an article about the history and development of Jiangsu in an English magazine, and I love it. I will leave school next term and I am eager to visit Jiangsu, especially Nanjing, its capital city. Could you tell me something more about Nanjing? Thank you very much. Regards, Mike 请根据邮件，用英文写一封回信，内容要点如下： (1)历史悠久：曾经是六朝古都。 (2)景色优美：名胜众多、如中山陵、玄武湖。 (3)美食丰富：盐水鸭等很受欢迎。 (4)教育发达：拥有很多名校。 注意： (1)包含所有要点，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 (2)词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 参考词汇： 朝代 dynasty 中山陵Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum 盐水鸭 salted duck ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you and know your interest in Nanjing. Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties. Its rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating. The city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, with numerous famous attractions like Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum and Xuanwu Lake, which offer tranquil and picturesque settings for visitors. When it comes to food, Nanjing is a paradise for foodies. The local specialty, salted duck, is incredibly popular, known for its delicate taste and unique preparation. Moreover, Nanjing is home to many prestigious educational institutions, reflecting its advanced educational system. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful experience exploring Nanjing. If you need any more information or travel tips, feel free to ask. Looking forward to your visit! Best regards, Su Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以苏华的身份回复外国笔友Mike的邮件，介绍南京的历史、景色、美食和教育情况。 【详解】词汇积累 迷人的：fascinating → attractive/absorbing 旅游景点：famous attractions → scenic spots 难以置信地：incredibly → unbelievably 简单句变复合句 原句：Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties. Its rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating. 拓展句：Nanjing boasts a long history, once serving as the capital for six dynasties, whose rich cultural heritage is truly fascinating. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]The city is renowned for its breathtaking scenery, with numerous famous attractions like Dr. Sun Yat-sen’s Mausoleum and Xuanwu Lake, which offer tranquil and picturesque settings for visitors. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]When it comes to food, Nanjing is a paradise for foodies.(运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型3]If you need any more information or travel tips, feel free to ask. (运用了从属连词if引导条件状语从句) Passage 2 (2023•江苏)假设你是李华，打算高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周，现在就此事发e-mail 给伦敦的朋友Bob，主要内容： 1.询问当地的天气情况以及你要的准备的东西； 2.询问当地的景点以及收费情况； 3.请Bob帮你在宾馆预定一个房间； 4.询问Bob 当地的法规以防出错。 Dear Bob, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Bob, I’m happy to tell you that I will visit London after my entrance examination in July. So I am writing to ask you a favor. First, I don’t know whether it will be good weather in July in London. Would you please keep me informed of it during the week, so that I can bring with me suitable clothes. Besides, is it convenient for you to prepare me a list of places of interest and their fees. I want to enjoy traditional cultures and customs in London. What’s more, I would appreciate it if you can order a room in a hotel for me. What’s the most important is that it will be better if I can learn much about local generations and rules before arriving in London. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.   Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本文是应用文。要求考生给伦敦的朋友Bob发e-mail询问有关高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周的相关情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴：happy → glad 参观：visit → pay a visit to 通知：keep sb. informed of sth. → inform sb. of sth. 此外：Besides → What’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Besides, is it convenient for you to prepare me a list of places of interest and their fees. I want to enjoy traditional cultures and customs in London. 拓展句：Besides, is it convenient for you to prepare me a list of places of interest and their fees with which I could enjoy traditional cultures and customs in London more freely. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m happy to tell you that I will visit London after my entrance examination in July.(由that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】First, I don’t know whether it will be good weather in July in London.(由whether引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型3】Would you please keep me informed of it during the week, so that I can bring with me suitable clothes.(由so that引导的结果状语从句) 【高分句型4】What’s more, I would appreciate it if you can order a room in a hotel for me.(由if引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型5】What’s the most important is that it will be better if I can learn much about local generations and rules before arriving in London.(由what引导的主语从句，that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 高频话题02 语言学习 Passage 1 (2024•江苏南通)假定你是李华，上周你的英国朋友 Allen 来你校进行了学习交流，现已回国。他给你发来邮件说他对英语课堂上老师用英汉双语授课的方法提出异议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.对这一异议作出解释； 2.提出你自己的看法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 邮件的开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Allen, In your e-mail, you expressed disagreement about our teachers speaking both English and Chinese in English classes. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Allen, In your e-mail, you expressed disagreement about our teachers speaking both English and Chinese in English classes. I’m writing to give you some explanations. Undoubtedly, lessons taught only in English provide students with a good English-learning environment, which enables them to learn more quickly and efficiently. However, this method only works for students with a high level of English proficiency. For students with poor English grades, this method may make it difficult for them to follow the teachers. Consequently, they will lose interest in learning English. In this sense, the bilingual teaching method is more effective. Personally, whichever teaching method is adopted depends largely on the students. We should focus more on learning outcomes of the teaching rather than the teaching methods. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示给英语课堂上老师用英汉双语授课的方法提出异议的英国朋友 Allen 回一封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 无疑地：undoubtedly → without doubt 提供：provide → offer 然而：however → nevertheless 因此：consequently → as a consequence 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Consequently, they will lose interest in learning English. In this sense, the bilingual teaching method is more effective. 拓展句：Consequently, they will lose interest in learning English, in which sense, the bilingual teaching method is more effective. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Undoubtedly, lessons taught only in English provide students with a good English-learning environment, which enables them to learn more quickly and efficiently.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Personally, whichever teaching method is adopted depends largely on the students.(运用了whichever引导的主语从句) Passage 2 (2023•江苏)假如你是李津, 你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站. 请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件. 推荐网站：www. edchinese. com 网站内容： 1. 网络课程：中文情景对话、中国风俗、成语； 2. 其它：中文电影、中文歌曲、唐诗等； 3. 有在线教师答疑解惑. 费用：全部免费 注意：1. 词数不少于100词； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯. Dear Edward, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】 Dear Edward, I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I'd like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It's a good website for non‐Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners. Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all these are free of charge. I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time. Yours, Li Jin 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你根据要求，推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：pleased → delighted 此外：besides → what’s more 提供：provide → supply 吸引人的：attractive → charming 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. 拓展句：Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses which include Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】It's a good website for non‐Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help.(运用了whom限制性定语从句) 高频话题03 学校活动 Passage 1 (2023•江苏苏州)假如你是校学生会主席李华，为庆祝建国74周年，你校决定举办一场学生书画作品展，主题为“我心中的祖国”，现向全校同学征集作品。请你代表学生会写一则通知，内容包括： 1)展览的时间、地点、主题等； 2)参赛作品要求； 3)报名注意事项。 注意：写作词数应不低于80词。 Notice ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Students’ Union 【答案】One possible version: Notice To celebrate/mark the 74th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition is scheduled for this Friday in the library. The themed exhibition will serve as a platform for students to extend love to the party and our country. All the entries should be centred around the theme ‘Motherland in My heart’. Contents, such as praising people’s diligence and representing the fast development of our country, are highly recommended. Anyone interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union. The deadline for submission is Wednesday. Students’ Union 【语篇解读】这是一篇应用文。学校将举办一场学生书画作品展，主题为“我心中的祖国”，现向全校同学征集作品。要求考生代表学生会写一则通知。 【详解】词汇积累 充当：serve as → act as 表扬：praise → commend 代表：represent → stand for 快速的：fast → rapid/speedy 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Anyone interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union. 拓展句：Anyone who is interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】To celebrate/mark the 74th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition is scheduled for this Friday in the library. (运用了不定式作目的状语和be scheduled for高级表达) 【高分句型2】Anyone interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union.(运用了过去分词作定语) Passage 2 (2023•江苏)假如你是李华，2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：1. 参与人员、 时间；2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 A Visit to the City Museum ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Visit to the City Museum On March 20th, all the students in Class 7, Grade 12 paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey. With the guidance of the museum staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest. They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where they practiced some traditional crafts. This immersive experience was highly spoken of by every student, who gained a deeper insight into magnificent Chinese culture and consequently took more pride in our time-honored civilization. 【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生为校英文报写一篇新闻报道，报道2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆的情况。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 原来是：turn out → prove to be 欣赏：appreciate → enjoy 幸运的：lucky → fortunate 获得：gain → obtain 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the guidance of the museum staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest. 拓展句：The students, who were guided by the museum staff, walked from one exhibition hall to another and appreciated the delicate artworks made by our ancestors with keen interest. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]On March 20th, all the students in Class 7, Grade 12 paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.(whhich引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where they practiced some traditional crafts.(where引导的限制性定语从句) Passage 3 (2023•江苏)假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的题为“how to be a good student” 的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容如下： 1. 努力学习； 2. 积极锻炼身体； 3. 和同学友好相处。 注意： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Good afternoon, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】 Good afternoon, everyone! What are the qualities of a good student? I think he or she should have the following qualities. First, a good student should work hard and use the knowledge acquired to solve problems. Because our knowledge is to be used to bring benefit to the mankind. Second, a good student should exercise regularly to keep fit. If we aren’t healthy, we can do nothing. Third, a good student should have good behavior. He would like to help others. His behavior shows the good quality. People like to make friends with him because he is friendly. It’s more important than knowledge. Whoever has these qualities will be a good student. Thank you! 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“how to be a good student”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 【详解】1 词汇积累 我认为：I think→In my view 解决：solve→figure out 利益：benefit→profit 展现：show→display 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Second, a good student should exercise regularly to keep fit. 拓展句：Second, a good student should exercise regularly so that he can keep fit. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]If we aren’t healthy, we can do nothing.(if引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2]Whoever has these qualities will be a good student.(whoever引导的主语从句) Passage 4 (2022•江苏)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件，推荐科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Thomas, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Thomas, Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件，推荐科普类图书和文学类图书，并分别说明推荐理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 购买：buy → purchase 建议：suggestion → tip 提供：offer → provide 鼓励某人做某事：encourage sb. to do sth. → inspire sb. to do sth. 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts a through fascinating stories and language. 拓展句：Classic works, which were written by masters, present great thoughts a through fascinating stories and language. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]What we need most are popular science books.(运用了what引导的主语从句) [高分句型2]That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books.(运用了why引导的表语从句) Passage 5 (2023•江苏)假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节，你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert)，老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信，邀请她参加并表演个节目。 内容要点： (1)时间: 1月20晚8:00； (2)地点:学校操场； (3)节目类型：唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。 注意:1.词数80左右: 2.开头和结尾已经给出，不算词数: 3.可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Alice, How is it going? I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival. By the way, you’re particularly expected to sing, dance and play some musical instruments or perform anything you’re good at. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信；假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节，你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert)，老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信，邀请她参加并表演个节目。内容要点：(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00；(2)地点:学校操场；(3)节目类型：唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：take part in our concert in the open air(参加露天音乐会)；for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.(为了庆祝即将到来的春节)；particularly expected to sing, dance(特别期待唱歌、跳舞)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句和一般将来时态的被动语态；I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.句中使用if引导的从句。 高频话题04 人生规划 Passage 1 (2023•江苏)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括： 1.你的人生规划; 2.解释原因; 3.请他提出建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jackson, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jackson, I’m writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. I think working for a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting. Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do. What do you think of my life plan? Any suggestions are welcome. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 将来：in the future → hereafter 擅长：be good at → be skilled in 当然：of course → certainly 考虑：think of → think about 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. 拓展句：Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people, so I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do. (运用了what连接的表语从句) 高频话题05 中国体育文化 Passage 1 (2023•江苏)假设你是李华，你校将于下周五晚八点在体育馆举行一场中国功夫(Kungfu)的表演。你想邀请外教Michael一起观看演出。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 具体时间和地点； 2. 邀请原因； 3. 表演简介。 注意： 1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现考生的真实个人信息； 4. 词数100左右。 Dear Michael, I am glad to hear that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Michael, I am glad to hear that you’ve been interested in Chinese Kungfu culture. I am writing to invite you to watch a performance in our school stadium at 8: 00 p. m. next Friday. Chinese Kungfu has a long history in China, and it plays an important role in Chinese traditional sports culture. It not only serves as a means of self-defense, but also does good to people’s health. Up to now, Chinese Kungfu has millions of fans at home and abroad. Several Kungfu masters have been invited to come and perform that day. Thus, you should not miss this performance. I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience .I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Michael写封信，邀请他一起观看下周五晚八点在体育馆举行的一场中国功夫的表演。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 难忘的：unforgettable → memorable 在……起重要作用：play an important role in → play an important part in 到目前为止：up to now → so far 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Chinese Kungfu has a long history in China, and it plays an important role in Chinese traditional sports culture. 拓展句：Chinese Kungfu, which has a long history in China, plays an important role in Chinese traditional sports culture. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I am glad to hear that you’ve been interested in Chinese Kungfu culture. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience .(运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了引导词that) Passage 2 (2022•江苏南通)假定你是李华，你校为了弘扬中华文化，计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛，请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加，内容包括： 1. 大赛举办的目的； 2. 大赛的时间和规则； 3. 你邀请的理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear George, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear George, I am writing to tell you a piece of good news. In order to promote Chinese culture, our school is going to hold a classical Chinese poetry translation contest. Students who are interested can choose a poem and translate it into English. The deadline is May 28th, and the results will be announced on June 6th. Excellent works will be displayed on the school website. You are crazy about classical Chinese poetry, so it is a great opportunity for you to take part in the contest. If you’re interested, please let me know and I can help you sign up. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】这是一篇提纲类写作。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校为了弘扬中华文化，计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛，请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加，内容包括：1. 大赛举办的目的；2. 大赛的时间和规则；3. 你邀请的理由。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)：a piece of good news(一则好消息)；in order to (为了)；Chinese poetry translation contest (中国古诗英语翻译大赛)；be crazy about (着迷于)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Students who are interested can choose a poem and translate it into English.运用了who引导的定语从句；If you’re interested, please let me know and I can help you sign up.运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 Passage 3 (2012•江苏徐州房山高级中学)假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 1、该人物是谁； 2、该人物的主要贡献； 3、该人物对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数不少于100； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Lihua 【答案】 Dear Jim, It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world. So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信，介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物，内容包括：1、该人物是谁；2、该人物的主要贡献；3、该人物对你的影响。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激励：inspire → motivate 至于，关于：as for → with regard to 值得做：be worthy of being done → be worth doing 事实上：in fact → as a matter of fact 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. 拓展句：As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, who was a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now.  (运用了动名词的被动式作宾语) [高分句型2]He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 高频话题06 公益活动 Passage 1 (2020•江苏苏州)假定你是李华,得知近期你市将举办中英青少年历史体验夏令营活动( China and Britain History Summer Camp For Teenagers)。请你给活动的负责人Mr. Clark写一封邮件,申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3.表达意愿。 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Ms. Clark, I have learned that China and British History Winter Camp For Teenagers will be held and you are in need of volunteers, so I am writing this letter with the hope of being one of them. I'm Li Hua and I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese. Besides, as a history lover, I once worked as a tour guide and was highly praised for my vivid and precise introduction of the places of interests in our city. Young and energetic, I'm so keen on communicating with foreign friends that I'm convinced I am qualified for the job. As a president of the Students' Union, I can appeal to the after-class clubs in my school to be in support of the project if necessary, which I'm definite will contribute a lot to a more lively and meaningful visit here for the foreign friends. I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. I will devote myself to what I am supposed to do. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给活动的负责人Ms. Clark写一封邮件，申请做志愿者。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) in need of; with the hope of; as well as; be highly praised for; be keen on; be qualified for; appeal to; in support of; contribute…to…; be supposed to; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. I have learned that China and British History Winter Camp For Teenagers will be held and you are in need of volunteers, so I am writing this letter with the hope of being one of them. 2. Besides, as a history lover, I once worked as a tour guide and was highly praised for my vivid and precise introduction of the places of interests in our city. 3. Young and energetic, I'm so keen on communicating with foreign friends that I'm convinced I am qualified for the job. 4. As a president of the Students' Union, I can appeal to the after-class clubs in my school to be in support of the project if necessary, which I'm definite will contribute a lot to a more lively and meaningful visit here for the foreign friends. 5. I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1. 表并列补充关系：Besides, as well as 2. 表因果关系：so 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Young and energetic, I'm so keen on communicating with foreign friends that I'm convinced I am qualified for the job.(so...that...引导的结果状语从句中包含宾语从句) [高分句型2]As a president of the Students' Union, I can appeal to the after-class clubs in my school to be in support of the project if necessary, which I'm definite will contribute a lot to a more lively and meaningful visit here for the foreign friends.(含有which引导的非限制性定语从句) 高频话题07 人生规划 (2023•江苏)假如你是李华，你的朋友 Robert来信说要来中国学汉语，想了解你校情况。你回信告知：你校建于1950年，校园环境优美，有教学楼、图书馆、音乐舞蹈室、游泳池和运动场，而且你校的老师都优秀，对学生很有耐心。 内容要点： (1)听说 Robert要来你校学习，你很高兴。 (2)简单介绍你校情况。 (3)期待早日在中国见到 Robert。 注意：1、词数80左右。 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3、开头和结尾已给出，不算字数。 Dear Robert, I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Robert, I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment. On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance. Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise. The teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students. Looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回信Robert告知学校基本情况。 【详解】第一步: 审题 体裁: 应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构: 总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。 2.简单介绍你校情况。 3.期待早日在中国见到 Robert。 第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组) look forward to；in our spare time；be patient with;as soon as possible. 第三步: 连词成句 I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment. On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance. Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise. he teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步: 润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句，如： On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance.运用了where引导的定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 高频话题08 其他 (2019•常州)As bike-sharing booms in China, a guideline was released by the government to promote a new form of the sharing economy - this time involving vehicles. Car-sharing, which provides an alternative for people to travel in cities, will be the new innovation in a service model. The released guideline focuses on legal status, insurance and regular maintenance of cars before they join sharing services. It encourages the development of car-sharing, which is expected to reduce the liking to individually buy vehicles and ease traffic congestion amid a surge in recent years of private-car ownership. “However, there is a long way to before the purpose of the guideline comes true,” said Xia Xueluan, a professor of sociology. “First, a car costs at least 100.000 yuan, almost 500 times that for a shared bicycle. Besides, shared cars also take the same spaces as other private cars, so parking will be another problem.” “Meanwhile, traditional car rental companies are competing with the emerging car-sharing business. It’s estimated the charges will be almost the same for both forms of cars rentals,” Xia said. “How to survive fierce competition will remain a challenge for car-sharing providers,” he added. 【写作内容】 1. 用约30个词概括上述文章的主要内容； 2. 请你就共享汽车的话题发表观点。 (1)为什么要发展共享汽车； (2)如何才能更好地发展共享汽车。 【写作要求】 1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句: 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称: 3. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 This report is mainly about a guideline for the promotion of car-sharing, which shows government’s will to reduce traffic congestion. Meanwhile, some difficulties are also put forward as a reminder. Despite the current problems like parking difficulties and economic factors, personally I believe the benefits car-sharing brings obviously outweigh those defects. To the society, congestion together with pollution can be remarkably eased with less private cars. To individuals, apart from the saved money, the convenience of getting around without being stuck to the same car is also a cool thing. For a healthy car-sharing development, the most important is to make sure everyone obeys the rule when using shared cars. Parking won’t be a headache when users return cars in order. As for the survival of the new industry, government can subsidize those submitting to the guidelines. When good examples are followed and vicious competition is prohibited, problems will be solved. 【语篇解读】本篇书面表达是读写任务，要求写一个30词的概要并就共享汽车的话题发表观点。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求用约30词写一个概要，并就共享汽车的话题发表观点：(1) 为什么要发展共享汽车；(2) 如何才能更好地发展共享汽车。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：car-sharing(共享汽车)，promotion(振兴)，traffic congestion(交通堵塞)，ease(减轻)，parking(泊车)，economic(经济上的)，benefit(益处)，outweigh(超过)，defect(缺点)，prohibit(禁止)及remarkably(显著地)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意该要的词数要求、主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有put forward(提出)，apart from(除了)，get around (出行)，submit to(服从)，make sure(确保)，together with(连同)以及in order(秩序井然)，而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“This report is mainly about a guideline for the promotion of car-sharing, which shows government’s will to reduce traffic congestion.”，状语从句“Despite the current problems like parking difficulties and economic factors, personally I believe the benefits car-sharing brings obviously outweigh those defects. To the society, congestion together with pollution can be remarkably eased with less private cars.”及“When good examples are followed and vicious competition is prohibited, problems will be solved.”，宾语从句“For a healthy car-sharing development, the most important is to make sure everyone obeys the rule when using shared cars.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 ( 15 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$