2025届高考英语读后续写专题之友情类尴尬时刻的援手：开启友谊之门讲义

【续写试题】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。 I was lacking in everything needed to start a new friendship.My parents moved to the town when they decided to look for new jobs but they didn’t realize I was really hurt when I said goodbye to my old friends. It felt awful to be a new student in the school and when my classmates were chatting, what I could do was to be caught up in my thoughts watching the clouds outside the window. I was not good at math or history; nor was I good at drawing or dancing. I was shy and timid(胆小). I had a few friends back at my hometown and it seemed that they were the only ones who I could be friends with for my whole life. I felt I had achieved a point of saturation(饱和) with regard to having friends and I could make no further addition to my friend list. I was ashamed of myself, so I believed I deserved no notice from others until Emily came to my world.Emily was fearless, outspoken and easy-going. She was everything I was not and I was too shy to come out of my shell. I met Emily in school almost every day and yet I never talked to her. We were in the same class but we were like poles apart. How I wished I could be like her or at least be a friend of hers!It was another ordinary day.I wandered to the bus stop in the morning and waited for the school bus. Birds were singing songs with their friends but who could I sing songs with? I got on the bus and went straight to my usual seat, complaining in a low voice about getting up early and going to school like every other day, and about how things were going to be the same all over again. Little did I realize something different would happen that day. Para. 1: When I got up to get off the bus, my schoolbag was stuck in the armrest(扶手). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2: I got noticed by Emily, who brought me courage to start a new friendship! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 “我” 随父母搬到新城镇后，因离开旧友而痛苦，在新学校很孤独。“我” 觉得自己没什么特长，性格害羞胆小，朋友寥寥，甚至认为自己此生不会再有新的朋友了。同学 Emily 勇敢、直率又随和，“我” 非常希望能和她成为朋友，却因害羞不敢靠近。在一个平常的上学日，“我” 像往常一样抱怨上学的枯燥，没想到这一天会有不同寻常的事情发生。 伏笔与回应 1. 伏笔：“我” 对新环境的不适应和孤独，为后文 Emily 的出现及友谊的开始做铺垫。 回应：Emily 帮助 “我” 摆脱书包被卡住的尴尬，成为友谊的开端。 2. 伏笔：“我” 对 Emily 的欣赏和渴望成为朋友的想法，为后续两人关系发展设下伏笔。 回应：Emily 的帮助使 “我” 有了开启新友谊的勇气。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：尴尬、惊喜。因书包被卡住而尴尬，看到是 Emily 帮忙时的惊喜。 · 故事线：书包卡在扶手，“我” 挣扎无果，Emily 帮忙解决，她的微笑和话语让 “我” 心动。 · 主旨升华句：“A helping hand in embarrassment can be the start of a beautiful friendship.”（尴尬时刻的援手可能是美好友谊的开端。）“Even the smallest act of kindness can break the ice of loneliness.”（即使是最微小的善举也能打破孤独的坚冰。） 第二段 · 情感线：感激、勇敢。对 Emily 充满感激，因她获得开启新友谊的勇气。 · 故事线：Emily 之后常和 “我” 交流、邀 “我” 一起玩，“我” 在她的鼓励下变得外向，体会到新友谊的美好。 · 主旨升华句“Friendship can bloom from the simplest of encounters.”（友谊可以从最简单的相遇中绽放。）“Courage to make friends often comes from a kind gesture.”（结交朋友的勇气往往来自一个善意的举动。）“True friendship has the power to transform our lives.”（真正的友谊有改变我们生活的力量。） 写作示范一 Para. 1: When I got up to get off the bus, my schoolbag was stuck in the armrest (扶手). I tugged at it helplessly, feeling the eyes of other students on me. My cheeks burned with shame. Just as I was on the verge of panicking, Emily appeared. With a gentle pull, she freed my bag. "There you go," she said with a warm smile. I looked into her eyes, filled with gratitude and surprise. In that moment, the distance between us seemed to shrink. Para. 2: I got noticed by Emily, who brought me courage to start a new friendship! From that day on, she would greet me in the hallways and include me in conversations. She introduced me to her friends during lunch breaks. With her by my side, I slowly shed my shyness. I learned that reaching out can lead to beautiful connections, and that every new friend can be a new beginning. 写作示范二 Para. 1: When I got up to get off the bus, my schoolbag was stuck in the armrest (扶手). I was in a panic as I pulled hard, but it only got more stuck. The bus driver was starting to get impatient. Suddenly, Emily's hand reached over. She effortlessly loosened the bag and handed it to me. "Are you okay?" she asked with concern. I nodded, my heart racing from the ordeal and her unexpected kindness. Para. 2: I got noticed by Emily, who brought me courage to start a new friendship! After that incident, Emily would often approach me. She shared her snacks with me and asked me to join her study group. Her friendly nature made it easy for me to open up. I realized that sometimes, all it takes is one kind act to change our perception of friendship. I became more confident and started to embrace this new friendship and the new possibilities it brought. 【范文】 Para. 1: When I got up to get off the bus, my schoolbag was stuck in the armrest. I didn’t notice it and stood up with all my strength. Unfortunately, my schoolbag was torn apart and all the contents fell on the ground. I knelt down to pick them up. Suddenly, I saw a hand passing me some of the books. I looked up and found it was Emily who was helping me. With her help, I put all the contents back to my schoolbag. After we got off the bus, I began to talk with her and was surprised to find that we had much in common. Para. 2: I got noticed by Emily, who brought me courage to start a new friendship! One day when I told her that I admired her and how I wished to be a friend of hers, she said, “We have already been friends.” I felt so happy that I even sang a song. Hearing my song, she thought highly of it and asked me to teach her to sing it. She made me realize how unique I was and at last I came out of my shell. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$