2025届高考英语读后续写专题之学校生活类--牛仔裤的尴尬与温暖:从嘲笑到互助 讲义

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my first hour math test. I was confident of getting good grades. Then I left my house. Ten minutes later, I was settled with my friends on the school bus. We were busy chatting about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, Fat Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped over someone's foot accidentally and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor. Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan struggled to his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. I read two more chapters of To Kill a Mockingbird in English class. It wasn't long before there went the lunch bell. I met my friends from the cheerleading team in the dining hall. Then I couldn't help but notice Ryan a few tables away, sitting all alone. He caught me looking. I smiled at him quickly and looked away. When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night's football game. After a little practice, we nailed the cheer, so we decided we only needed to go through it one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans split down the middle of my backside. I froze. I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing, and I saw them pointing at my torn jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Then I saw Ryan running towards me._____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 周一早上 “我” 一切顺利,充满信心地准备迎接数学考试。在上学巴士上,胖瑞恩不小心摔倒,大家哄堂大笑,他很尴尬。上午 “我” 数学考得不错,英语课也进展顺利。午餐时 “我” 看到瑞恩独自坐着,之后在庭院练习啦啦队动作时,“我” 的牛仔裤撕裂,成为众人笑柄,“我” 尴尬得想哭。 伏笔与回应 1. 伏笔:巴士上瑞恩摔倒被大家嘲笑,与 “我” 后来出丑形成呼应。 回应:为瑞恩帮助 “我” 理解他的尴尬做铺垫。 2. 伏笔:午餐时 “我” 对瑞恩尴尬处境的短暂关注,为后续情节发展设下伏笔。 回应:瑞恩过来帮助 “我”,两人产生情感共鸣。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线:惊讶、感激。对瑞恩的出现感到惊讶,在尴尬时刻得到帮助后的感激。 · 故事线:瑞恩脱下外套帮 “我” 遮挡,陪 “我” 离开,“我” 对他的行为十分感动。 · 主旨升华句:“Kindness is a light that shines brightest in embarrassing darkness.”(善良是在尴尬黑暗中最闪耀的光。)“Empathy makes us reach out when others are in distress.”(当别人处于困境时,共情让我们伸出援手。) 第二段 · 情感线:友好、温暖。对瑞恩充满友好,两人之间有温暖的氛围。 · 故事线:“我” 找到瑞恩,感谢他,并表示理解他之前的尴尬,两人关系变得亲近。 · 主旨升华句:“Understanding others' pain can heal our own wounds.”(理解他人的痛苦能治愈我们自己的伤口。)“A helping hand bridges the gap of humiliation.”(援助之手能弥合羞辱带来的鸿沟。)“True friendship grows from shared moments of vulnerability.”(真正的友谊从共同的脆弱时刻中成长。) 写作示范一 Paragraph 1: Then I saw Ryan running towards me. He quickly took off his jacket and handed it to me. "Here, wrap this around you," he said. I was shocked but took it gratefully. With his help, I managed to cover myself and walk away from the embarrassing situation. I thanked him, and he just smiled and said he knew how it felt. His kindness in that moment was like a warm breeze on a cold day. Paragraph 2: That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan. I walked up to him and gave him a big hug. I told him how much his gesture meant to me earlier and that I was sorry for laughing at him on the bus. He said it was okay, and we both realized that we had a new understanding of each other. From then on, we became good friends. 写作示范二 Paragraph 1: Then I saw Ryan running towards me. Before I could react, he had already placed his large jacket around my waist, shielding my torn jeans. "Don't worry, it's okay," he said softly. His eyes were full of concern, not a hint of mockery. I was so touched that tears welled up again, but this time they were tears of gratitude. With his support, I left the courtyard with my dignity intact. Paragraph 2: That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan. I went over to him with a big smile. "Thank you so much for today," I said. I told him that his kindness had turned my embarrassment into a beautiful moment of connection. He blushed and said he was just glad to help. We stood there, sharing a moment of genuine friendship, knowing that our bond had grown stronger through our shared experiences of humiliation and kindness. 参考答案 Paragraph 1: Then I saw Ryan running towards me. He quickly took off his sweatshirt and handed it to me. "You can tie this around your waist," he said. I was stunned for a moment, then took it and wrapped it around myself. I thanked him, and he just smiled and said he knew how it felt to be embarrassed. His kindness in that moment made me feel so ashamed of laughing at him earlier on the bus. Paragraph 2: That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan. I walked up to him and returned his sweatshirt. I apologized again for laughing at him. He said it was no big deal. We talked for a while, and I realized that he was a really nice guy. From that day on, I made sure to be kinder to everyone, because you never know when you might be the one in an embarrassing situation. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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