Unit 4 Looking good feeling good 应用文写作讲义-2024-2025学年高中英语译林版（2020）必修第一册

高一英语必修一Unit4 Looking good feeling good 应用文写作训练 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jennifer来信说她因为外貌问题而苦恼。请你请你给她写一封邮件安慰她，并提出三个建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一 谋篇布局 （一）审题 体裁：建议信； 时态：一般现在时 人称：第二、三人称 写作要点：安慰对方、提出三个建议 （二）写作提纲： Para1: 开门见山，引入主题 Para2：提出三条建议 Para3：总结并表达祝愿 二 遣词造句 A 话题相关短语 为你的外貌感到苦恼 feel upset about your appearance 提供如下建议 give you following suggestions 学会接受自己的独特 learn to embrace your uniqueness 注重内在的品质 attach great importance to inner qualities 保持一种健康的生活方式 maintain a healthy lifestyle 有规律地锻炼来强身健体 take regular exercise to build up your body 专注你的优势 focus on your strengths 为你所做之事感到自豪 take pride in what you do well 与积极乐观的人为伍 surround yourself with positive people B 完成句子 1 我很抱歉地得知你为外貌感到苦恼。 I’m really sorry to learn that you feel quite upset about your appearance. 2 真正重要的是一个人的内在美。 What truly counts is the beauty within. 3 你的善良、自信和个性更为重要。 Your kindness, confidence and personality is of greater importance. 4 你要学会接纳自己，专注于让你独特的事。 You should learn to embrace yourself and focus on things that make you unique. 5 积极参加一些户外活动。它们能够给你带来快乐、提升信心。 Participate in some outdoor activities. They can bring you joy and boost your confidence. 6 有必要保持一种健康的生活方式。 It’s necessary to maintain a healthy lifestyle. 7 你可以通过有规律的锻炼来强身健体。 You can build up your body by taking regular exercise. 8 当你专注于自我提升，你会感到更自信和满足。 When you focus on self-improvement, you’ll feel more confident and fulfilled. 三 句式升格 1是你的善良、自信和个性更为重要。（强调句） It is your kindness, confidence and personality that is of greater importance. 2 你要学会接纳自己，专注于让你独特的事。(非谓语充当状语) You should learn to embrace yourself, focusing on things that make you unique. 3 积极参加一些户外活动。它们能够给你带来快乐、提升信心。(定语从句) Participate in some outdoor activities that bring you joy and boost your confidence. 4 只有通过有规律的锻炼，你才能强身健体。（倒装句） Only by taking regular exercise can you build up your body. 四 建议信常用句式 The opening paragraph： 1. I am sorry to learn that you feel upset about your physical appearance. 2. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some suggestions for you. 3. I am more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to improve overall health. 4. I would like to make some constructive suggestions/ offer you the following suggestions, hoping to help you. The concluding paragraph： 1. I sincerely hope that my advice is of great help to you. 2. I firmly believe if you follow my suggestions, you can make it. 3. I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress soon. 五 范文 Dear Jennifer, I’m really sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling upset about your appearance. I can understand how you feel. Therefore, I’m writing to give you some suggestions that might be of some help. First, try to accept yourself as you are and be kind to yourself. Second, focus on developing hobbies and interests that make you feel good. Last but not least, surround yourself with supportive people who will uplift you. Please remember that what truly matters is the beauty within. I hope you can take my suggestions into account. Yours, Li Hua 亲爱的Jennifer， 听说你因为外貌而感到苦恼，我感到非常难过。我能理解你的感受。因此，我写信给你，想给你一些可能有所帮助的建议。 首先，试着接受真实的自己，对自己要友善。其次，专注于发展那些让你感觉良好的爱好和兴趣。最后，围绕自己身边是支持你、鼓励你的人。 请记住，真正重要的是内在的美。我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。 祝好， 李华 六 优秀习作 Dear Jennifer, I was deeply saddened to hear about your struggle with your appearance. Please remember that true beauty comes from within, and it’s the qualities like kindness, confidence, and a positive attitude that make a person truly attractive. Your appearance is only one small part of who you are. To help you feel better, I’d like to share three suggestions with you. To begin with, you should learn to embrace yourself, focusing on the things that make you unique. Besides, engage in outdoor activities that bring you joy and boost your confidence. Last but not least, it’s better to surround yourself with people who support and appreciate you, as their encouragement will help you see yourself in a more positive light. True beauty is about who you are, not just how you look. I hope my suggestions will be of help to you. 亲爱的Jennifer, 我听说你在为外貌而苦恼，我感到非常难过。请记住，真正的美丽来自内心，像善良、自信和积极的态度才是让一个人真正迷人的品质。外貌只是你的一小部分，真正重要的是你的人格和内在。 为了帮助你感到更好，我想和你分享三条建议。首先，你应该学会接纳自己，专注于那些使你独特的特质。其次，参与一些能够带给你快乐和提升自信的户外活动。最后，最好与那些支持和欣赏你的人为伴，因为他们的鼓励将帮助你从更积极的角度看待自己。 真正的美丽在于你是谁，而不仅仅是你看起来如何。我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。 祝好， 李华 七 单元话题巩固练 假定你是李华，你的同学Sarah因为节食减肥而生病了，请根据下列要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件，鼓励她加强锻炼，早日恢复健康。 要点如下：1.表达安慰；2.给出建议。词数：100左右；开头已经给出。 Dear Sarah, I’m sorry to hear that__________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua One possible version: Dear Sarah, I'm sorry to hear that you’re ill due to dieting. You know good health is of great importance to us students. Here I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to keep fit in a proper way. First of all, a healthy diet helps a lot, so it's better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables with rich vitamins and fiber. Second, regular exercise is of crucial importance as it helps us build up our body. Most importantly, you’d better keep a positive attitude since a cheerful state of mind is equally important to our health. I hope you can recover soon. Yours Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$