内容正文:
Grade Nine Teaching Plan
Topic
How to live a healthy life
Teaching
blocks
Type
Editing
Designer
Teacher
Date
Teaching
Objectives
Contents &Skills:
Students can master the skills of editing using the rubrics.
Key Points:
To learn editing skills.
Difficult Points:
Ss can edit a composition according to the rubrics.
WPD Goals:
1. Ss can appreciate others’ compositions
2. Ss can learn to cooperate with team members.
Resources
and
Materials
Whiteboard & Handout
Procedure
Step 1. Free Talk
Step 2. Lead-in:
Tr and Ss review the rubrics of editing.
Step 3. Editing
1. Peer-editing: Let Ss work in pairs to edit one composition on the whiteboard according to the rubric.
2. Tr-editing: Tr edits the same composition on the whiteboard together with Ss to set an example.
3. Peer-editing: Let Ss work in groups to practise editing the other composition on the whiteboard.
4. Tr summarizes how to edit a composition.
5. Self-editing: Ss read their own compositions, and edit by themselves according to the rubric.
Step 4. Rewrite
Ss rewrite their compositions.
Activity
Tr help Ss have a review through questions.
Pair-work
Group work
Individually
Time
4’
5’
8’
8’
1’
5’
9’
Homework: Rewrite the composition
Blackboard Design: Students’ compositions
Feedback:
Writing Rubric Editors:_______________
Aspect
Expectations
Score
Meaning(4’)
1. It is on topic. (1’)
2. It has clear purpose or point of view. (1’)
3. It uses enough information to develop ideas. (1’)
4. It has personal ideas.(1’)
Form (4’)
1. It has a clear opening.(1’)
2. Supporting ideas support the main idea. (1’)
3. Supporting details support supporting ideas. (1’)
4. The conclusion is linked to the opening. (1’)
Style (4’)
1. Language is clear.(1’)
2. Words are varied. (1’)
3. It has both simple sentences and complex sentences. (1’)
4. It shows a variety of sentence beginnings (1’).
Conventions
(4’)
1. spelling
How much do the mistakes interfere with the meaning?
2. punctuation
3. sentence structure (1’)
4. grammar (e.g. agreement, tenses …). (1’)
Total:______/ 16 _
Maple Leaf Middle School ESL Program—Writing Rubric (Students’ Edition), October 2013 ©Maple Leaf Educational Systems
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