读后续写--存钱罐的抉择：梦想与善良的较量 讲义-山东省济宁市2022-2023学年高二下学期4月期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据具体内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was my birthday that day, and my grandfather gave me a gift—a piggy bank. It had an opening through which one could put money in, but the opening was not big enough to reach in and get the money out. The only way to get the money was to break the piggy hank open. My grandfather explained that was the whole idea. And he added. “The piggy bank would help save your money so that, at the end of the year, you might have enough for that bike you dreamed about.” He asked if I would put some of the money he gave me into the piggy bank. I agreed immediately and promised sincerely, “I wouldn’t break it open until I could afford my dream bike.” Whenever my grandfather gave me some pocket money, he would say, “This is for spending. But you can save some and put it in the piggy bank if you want to save it up.” When he gave me larger amounts, it was clear for me to save the extra money in the piggy bank. For some time, this worked fine. I loved shaking the piggy hank and hearing the sound of the coins. As it became heavier, I grew more excited, dreaming about buying my new bike, and all the adventures I could have on it. Whenever I wanted to take some money from the piggy bank to buy delicious ice-creams or beautiful presents. I would imagine riding my bike on the street, and thinking of that, my thoughts about buying those things went away. So for almost three years. I had only put money into the piggy hank without taking any out. I thought I wouldn’t break my piggy hank for anything. Bat one day something unexpected happened. I saw a piece of news on the television that a serious earthquake had happened in a nearby province. As many houses were destroyed, a lot of children became homeless. Seeing their shabby clothes and crying faces. I was sleepless that night. Staring at my piggy bank. I was thinking about what I could do with it. 注意： 1．续写词数应为50左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next morning. I took out my piggy bank and shook it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing the noise. my grandfather came over. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 生日时爷爷送我一个存钱罐，只能存钱，取钱需打破它，目的是帮我存钱买梦想的自行车。爷爷给零花钱时会提醒我可以存起来。一段时间里我不断存钱，每当我想取钱买零食或礼物时，想到自行车就忍住了。这样坚持了近三年，然而有天看到附近省份地震的新闻，许多孩子无家可归，我盯着存钱罐，开始思考该怎么做。 伏笔与续写回应 1. 伏笔：存钱罐只能打破取出钱，以及我一直坚定存钱买自行车的决心。续写中我摇动存钱罐，暗示要打破原计划取钱帮助受灾儿童，打破了之前只为买自行车存钱的设定。 2. 伏笔：爷爷对我存钱的引导和关注。续写中爷爷听到声音过来，根据后文爷爷的微笑和点头，可知爷爷对我的善举是支持的，回应了爷爷在我存钱过程中的重要角色这一伏笔。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：纠结、坚定。我摇动存钱罐，内心在买自行车的梦想和帮助受灾儿童之间纠结，但最终决定帮助他人，体现出善良战胜私欲的坚定。 · 故事线：描述我摇动存钱罐时的心理活动，想到受灾儿童的惨状，决定打破存钱罐取钱捐赠。 · 续写示范：The next morning. I took out my piggy bank and shook it. The coins inside jingled, reminding me of both my bike dream and the suffering children. With a deep breath, I made up my mind to break it to help those in need. 第二段 · 情感线：得到理解的欣慰、自豪。爷爷过来后，我向他说明计划，爷爷的反应让我感受到被认可，为自己的决定自豪。 · 故事线：讲述爷爷过来后我和他的交流，爷爷对我的支持使我更加确定自己的行为是正确的。 · 续写示范：Hearing the noise. my grandfather came over. I told him I wanted to break the piggy bank to donate the money for the earthquake - stricken children. He smiled, patted my head, and said he was proud of me for this kind choice. 情感线 1. 从收到存钱罐时的期待、存钱过程中的坚定，到看到地震新闻后的纠结，再到决定捐钱时的善良战胜私欲的坚定和得到爷爷认可后的欣慰自豪，情感丰富且层层递进，展现了成长和善良的主题。 2. 情感变化推动了故事发展，让读者更关注我的选择和背后的原因。 故事线 1. 故事围绕存钱罐展开，从爷爷送存钱罐、我存钱的过程，到因地震新闻产生动摇，再到决定打破存钱罐帮助他人，情节完整、逻辑清晰。 2. 每个环节紧密相连，突出了在面对困难时人性的善良和在成长中价值观的选择这一主题。 主旨升华句 1. "Sometimes, the real value of our savings lies not in fulfilling our own dreams, but in reaching out to those in distress."（有时候，我们储蓄的真正价值不在于实现自己的梦想，而在于向那些处于困境的人伸出援手。） 2. "A piggy bank can hold not only money but also the test of our hearts when faced with the choice between self - interest and kindness."（存钱罐不仅能存钱，在面对私利和善良的抉择时，还能考验我们的心灵。） 3. "In the rattle of the coins within the piggy bank, we can hear the call of our conscience to help those less fortunate."（在存钱罐里硬币的响声中，我们能听到良心呼唤我们去帮助那些不幸的人。） 4. "The decision to break the piggy bank shows that true wealth is measured by the compassion we have for others in times of crisis."（打破存钱罐的决定表明，真正的财富是由我们在危机时刻对他人的同情心来衡量的。） 5. "Our piggy bank journey teaches us that dreams can wait when humanity needs us to act with love and generosity."（我们的存钱罐之旅告诉我们，当人道需要我们怀着爱和慷慨行动时，梦想可以等待。） 两篇写作示范 范文一 The next morning. I took out my piggy bank and shook it. The sound of the coins seemed to be urging me to make a decision. I knew that the bike was important to me, but the plight of those children was even more urgent. I had to sacrifice my dream for now. Hearing the noise. my grandfather came over. I told him about my thoughts. He looked at me with kind eyes and said, "You've grown up, my child. Your kindness is more precious than any bike." I felt a warm glow inside, knowing I had made the right choice. 范文二 The next morning. I took out my piggy bank and shook it. The sound of the coins was both exciting and tormenting. The bike I had dreamed of for so long seemed to be within reach, but the thought of those poor children made my heart ache. After a long hesitation, I knew what I had to do. I picked up a small hammer, ready to break the piggy bank. Hearing the noise. my grandfather came over. He saw the hammer in my hand and the determined look on my face. I told him my plan to help the children. He nodded with a smile, his eyes glistening with tears. He said, "My child, you have a heart of gold. This is a far more precious gift than a bike." I felt a sense of peace and pride wash over me as I smashed the piggy bank open. 参考范文： The next morning, I took out my piggy bank and shook it. “There should be a lot of money in it. This is years of my savings,” I said to myself. I was about to break it and withdraw money when my mina came back to the bike I wanted to buy, and I hesitated. However, thinking of the look in the eyes of the children hoping for help in the earthquake, I grabbed the piggy bank and threw it to the ground. Suddenly, the piggy bank broke into pieces and the coins rolled all over the floor. Hearing the noise, my grandfather came over. I explained to him what had happened. Having known my thought, he fondly touched my head and said, “Good boy, you did the right thing. Grandpa is proud of you.” He continued, “My dear grandson, you deserve that bicycle. As a bonus, let’s buy that bike together now.” “Thank you, Grandpa,” I was overwhelmed with happiness. From that day on, you would always see me riding my bike on the street, leaving my hearty laughter behind. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$