内容正文:
应用文写作
假定你是李华, 上周五你们班与新西兰姊妹学校通过线上交流展开了一次关于“奥运精神”的活动。请你给新西兰的朋友 Chris 写一封邮件, 分享这次活动的经历, 内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 收获与感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I hope you're doing well. _____________________________________________________________________________
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Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段
开头问候语后,介绍活动的基本情况,包括活动的主题(奥运精神)、开展形式(线上交流)和参与人员(两个学校的班级)。
第二段
阐述在活动中的收获,比如对奥运精神内涵(如团结、拼搏、友谊等)更深刻的理解,还可以提及同学们分享的精彩奥运故事和案例。同时表达自己的感受,如活动氛围的热烈,被奥运精神所鼓舞等。
第三段
简单结尾,表达期待对方的回应。
语言积累
1. “The online exchange activity about the Olympic spirit was really inspiring.”(这次关于奥运精神的线上交流活动真的很鼓舞人心。)
2. “We had a great discussion on the core values of the Olympics.”(我们对奥运的核心价值观进行了精彩的讨论。)
3. “Through this activity, I have a deeper understanding of unity in the Olympic spirit.”(通过这次活动,我对奥运精神中的团结有了更深刻的理解。)
4. “The stories shared during the activity vividly demonstrated the perseverance of the athletes.”(活动中分享的故事生动地展现了运动员们的坚韧不拔。)
5. “The Olympic spirit of friendship was palpable throughout the event.”(在整个活动中,奥运的友谊精神显而易见。)
6. “We all felt the power of the Olympic spirit, which inspired us to pursue our dreams.”(我们都感受到了奥运精神的力量,它激励我们追求梦想。)
7. “This activity broadened our horizons about the rich meaning of the Olympic spirit.”(这次活动拓宽了我们对奥运精神丰富内涵的视野。)
8. “The heated discussion among us made the concept of the Olympic spirit more concrete.”(我们之间热烈的讨论使奥运精神的概念更加具体。)
9. “The online environment didn't stop us from deeply exploring the Olympic spirit.”(线上环境并没有阻止我们深入探索奥运精神。)
10. “I was deeply touched by the Olympic spirit during this cross - school activity.”(在这次跨校活动中,我被奥运精神深深打动。)
写作示范
范文一
Dear Chris,
I hope you're doing well. Last Friday, our class and your school's class held an online exchange activity about the "Olympic spirit". We shared our thoughts and stories related to the Olympics.
During the activity, I gained a lot. I got a deeper understanding of the Olympic spirit, especially the values of hard work and friendship. The examples of athletes shared by classmates inspired me. I felt the strong power of this spirit, which made the event really exciting.
Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文二
Dear Chris,
I hope you're doing well. Our online activity on the "Olympic spirit" last Friday was amazing. Both classes actively participated in the discussion.
I learned that the Olympic spirit is not just about winning medals. It's about the unity of different countries and cultures. The stories of how athletes overcame difficulties left a deep impression on me. The activity was filled with passion, and I was truly inspired to be more persistent in my own pursuits.
Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文三
Dear Chris,
I hope you're doing well. We had an online event with your class last Friday focused on the Olympic spirit. We talked about how the Olympics bring people together.
I have new insights from this activity. I understand better that the Olympic spirit is a source of motivation for people all over the world. The athletes' pursuit of excellence and the spirit of mutual respect among them are what we should learn. It was an unforgettable and inspiring experience.
Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
Yours,
Li Hua
A possible version:
Dear Chris,
I hope you're doing well. Last Friday, our class had an online exchange with our sister school in New Zealand about the Olympic Spirit. It was an insightful event where we learned and shared a lot together. During the event, we first watched several videos that showcased moments of incredible perseverance and teamwork. Following that, we engaged in lively discussions, where we exchanged our thoughts on the key moments and the values they represented. Some students even shared inspiring stories about their favorite athletes, further enriching the conversation.
Personally, I feel this event has not only strengthened my friendship with our sister school, but it has also deepened my understanding of the Olympic Spirit. After this online exchange, I started to reflect on how I can incorporate these values into my own life.
Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
Yours,
Li Hua
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