读后续写--暴风雪中的守护：马克斯与艾玛的生死情谊 讲义-江苏省常州市2023-2024学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the heart of a bitter winter, snow blanketed the land, turning the world into a frosty wonderland. In a small village nestled amidst the icy landscape, an unusual tale unfolded, starring a dog named Max and a group of villagers. Max, a loyal and spirited companion, belonged to a lovely girl named Emma. Together, they braved the harsh winters, finding comfort in their unwavering (坚定的) bond. One fateful evening, as the icy winds howled outside, a sudden snowstorm struck the village. Snow piled high, making the roads dangerous and act of seeing nearly impossible. The village's power supply was cut off, leading the world into darkness. In the midst of the storm, Emma found herself lost in the freezing wilderness. She had gone out to fetch firewood for her family while M ax was kept at home, but the snowstorm had disoriented (使..失去方向) her, leaving her in severe danger. Emma's parents, consumed with worry, desperately searched for her. "Emma! Emma!" her mother called out her daughter's name madly but got no response. Emma very probably lost her consciousness on such a cold night. More and more villagers joined the search. They combed through the dark woods, their breath forming misty clouds. The wind howled mournfully(哀伤地), echoing everyone's worry. Max, sensing the urgency and the bond between humans, sprang into action. With his keen sense of smell and great determination, he set out to find the lost girl. Through the biting cold and swirling snow, Max followed Emma's scent(气味),not frightened by the freezing temperatures.注意: (1)续写词数应为 150个左右; (2)所给开头两段如下: Para 1: As Max searched the frozen landscape, he encountered numerous challenges _______________________________________________________________________ Para2: As the two figures emerged from the storm, everyone watched in awe(敬畏) _______________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 在一个寒冬，大雪覆盖了一个小村庄。小女孩艾玛在暴风雪中外出取柴后失踪，村庄停电，道路危险且能见度极低。她的父母焦急万分，众多村民加入搜寻。艾玛的狗马克斯感知到情况危急，凭借对主人的忠诚和自身敏锐的嗅觉以及坚定的决心，在严寒和暴风雪中出发寻找艾玛。 几处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：恶劣的暴风雪天气。回应：续写中马克斯会因大雪阻碍行动，如深陷雪堆、被强风阻碍前进方向等，但它克服这些困难继续寻找。 2. 伏笔：村民们在黑暗中焦急搜寻。回应：当马克斯带着艾玛出现时，村民们的紧张转为惊喜和敬畏。 3. 伏笔：马克斯和艾玛之间坚定的情谊。回应：马克斯在寻找过程中尽管面临诸多挑战，但对主人的牵挂使它不放弃，最终成功找到艾玛。 续写要点 1. 情感线 1. 第一段：马克斯在搜寻过程中展现出焦虑（担心主人安危）、坚韧（面对恶劣环境不放弃）的情感。环境的艰难和对主人的担忧交织，但它凭借本能和对主人的爱坚持寻找。 2. 第二段：村民们看到马克斯和艾玛出现时，先是震惊（没想到马克斯能找到艾玛），随后是欣慰（艾玛有救了）、感动（被马克斯的忠诚打动）和敬畏（对这种跨越物种的情感力量）。 2. 故事线 3. 第一段：马克斯在冰封的大地上搜寻，遇到了重重困难。厚厚的积雪常常没过它的身体，让它举步维艰，每走一步都要耗费巨大的力气。狂风夹杂着雪花不断地抽打在它的脸上，几乎要把它吹倒。但它的鼻子始终贴近地面，循着艾玛那微弱的气味，在黑暗和寒冷中艰难前行。 3. 第二段：当马克斯带着昏迷的艾玛从暴风雪中缓缓走出时，大家都屏住了呼吸。随后，人群中爆发出惊叹声和欢呼声。艾玛的父母急忙跑过去，接过艾玛，眼中满是泪水，他们紧紧地抱住马克斯，感激之情溢于言表。其他村民也围了过来，眼中充满了对这只忠诚狗狗的敬畏。 3. 主旨升华句 3. Love and loyalty are the most precious treasures in the world, which can create miracles even in the harshest environment.（爱与忠诚是世界上最宝贵的财富，即使在最恶劣的环境中也能创造奇迹。） 3. The bond between humans and animals is like a lighthouse in the storm, guiding us to find hope.（人与动物之间的情谊就像风暴中的灯塔，指引我们找到希望。） 3. In the face of difficulties, the power of true friendship can break through all the barriers.（面对困难时，真正的友谊力量可以突破所有障碍。） 3. A loyal heart can be a warm sun in the cold winter, melting the ice of despair.（一颗忠诚的心可以成为寒冬里的暖阳，融化绝望的坚冰。） 3. The connection between a pet and its owner is a sacred bond that withstands the test of nature.（宠物和主人之间的联系是一种经受得住自然考验的神圣纽带。） 写作示范1 Paragraph 1: As Max searched the frozen landscape, he encountered numerous challenges. The snowdrifts were so high that he had to struggle to move forward, his small body often disappearing beneath the white mounds. The icy wind cut through his fur, making him shiver violently, but he never wavered. The scent of Emma was faint, yet it was like a guiding star to him. He pressed on with all his might, his eyes fixed on the task of finding his beloved friend. Paragraph 2: As the two figures emerged from the storm, everyone watched in awe. Emma's parents rushed towards them with tears streaming down their faces. The villagers broke into applause and cheers. Max had dragged Emma through the snow, her body cold but alive. The sight of the dog's loyalty and determination touched everyone's heart. In that moment, they realized the depth of the bond between the girl and her dog, a bond that had conquered the fierce snowstorm. 写作示范2 Paragraph 1: As Max searched the frozen landscape, he encountered numerous challenges. The snow was falling so thickly that it was like a white curtain blocking his vision. He had to constantly shake the snow off his face to keep his sense of smell sharp. The freezing temperature was numbing his paws, making each step painful. But every time he thought of Emma, a new burst of energy filled him. He dug through snowbanks and fought against the wind, following the faint scent that was his only hope. Paragraph 2: As the two figures emerged from the storm, everyone watched in awe. The villagers fell silent for a moment, then erupted into shouts of joy. Emma's mother sobbed with relief as she took her daughter in her arms. Max stood beside them, exhausted but with his tail wagging weakly. The sight of them was a testament to the power of love and loyalty. This dog had braved the worst of nature to save his friend, showing that the bond between them was unbreakable and truly inspiring. 参考答案 As Max navigated the frozen landscape, he encountered numerous challenges. The snow weighed heavily on his small body, slowing his progress. His paws grew numb with cold, and his fur became covered with ice. Finally, after hours of searching, Max discovered Emma beneath a snow covered tree. With a burst of excitement, Max barked joyfully, awakening the girl from her unconscious state. He gently nudged her with his nose. Emma, shivering from the cold, clung to Max’s warm fur as he carefully guided her back home. As the two figures emerged from the storm, all the villagers watched in awe. In a flash, the girl’s mother recognized her daughter, frightened but alive. Overwhelmed, the mother collapsed to her knees, hands trembling as she reached out to her, "Thank God! You are back!" Max circled around the reunited mother and daughter, tail wagging joyfully. The villagers, witnessing this heart warming reunion, let out collective sighs of relief. Their faces were illuminated by smiles that melt away the cold. Max had not only saved Emma but had also ignited a sense of unity within the community, making the bitter winter a season of hope and gratitude. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$