读后续写--匿名的资助：感恩与善良的交织之链 讲义-江苏省徐州市2023-2024学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sara gazed thoughtfully at her parents while holding a letter. She was accepted to pursue the Electrical Engineering degree programme at University Pertanian Malaysia. All her hard work and sacrifices had paid off. But she knew, being the eldest of 6 siblings, her family could not afford to pay the university entrance fees. Her father was only a settler working on a palm oil estate. Though she was determined to decline the offer, Sara went to visit Ms. Chang with the letter. Ms. Chang was one of the most dedicated teachers that Sara knew. From a humble beginning, she supported herself at the Teachers' Training College by teaching tuition. So shed understood how hard poor students struggled to continue their study. For years, not only did she bring reference books to the students, but she often took them out for lunch and assured them they would succeed in life. "Congratulations Sara, I am so proud of you,” Ms. Chang said excitedly. "But I'm afraid I have to reject the offer, because my family is unable to bear the cost of enrolling me there," Sara replied in a low tone. Ms. Chang looked at her intently and told her not to worry about finance. There would always be a way. A few days later, when Sara was hesitating about declining the offer, her high school principal, Mr. Salim, called her to his office. To her astonishment, Mr. Salim handed her an envelope, in which Sara saw a large sum of cash. It was more than what she needed. But when Sara asked Mr. Salim where the money was from, he just told her that the person wanted to remain anonymous（匿名的）. With the money in the envelope, Sara became a freshman of the university. One month later, she received another sum of money. She called her father, "Dad, you don't have to send money to me. I can manage on my own. " Her father was stunned, "But I didn't." From then on, Sara received the same sum of money every month. "Who is the kind soul that is making all this contribution?" she was always wondering. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Time flew and Sara graduated at last. With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. 文章大意 Sara 收到大学录取通知但因家境贫寒无法承担学费，打算放弃。她向富有同情心的张老师倾诉，张老师让她别担心费用。之后校长给了 Sara 一个装有足够学费的信封，捐款人匿名。入学后 Sara 每月还能收到一笔钱，她以为是父亲所寄，询问后发现不是，这让她对匿名资助者充满好奇。在大学期间，这些资助帮助她顺利完成学业。 几处伏笔及续写回应 1. 伏笔：张老师理解贫困学生的艰难，暗示她可能会帮助 Sara。回应：最后揭示是张老师匿名资助，解开伏笔。 2. 伏笔：校长知道匿名捐款人的身份，为后文 Sara 询问校长获得线索埋下伏笔。回应：Sara 从校长处拿到地址，找到恩人。 3. 伏笔：Sara 一直好奇捐款人是谁，推动故事发展。回应：最终找到答案，满足了读者的好奇心。 续写要点 1. 情感线 1. 第一段：毕业时，Sara 既有对大学生活结束的感慨和对未来的期待，更有对匿名资助者的感激和急切寻找答案的心情。她对过去的经历心怀感恩，希望能当面感谢恩人。 2. 第二段：站在张老师家门口时，Sara 充满疑惑和期待，见到张老师后恍然大悟，内心被深深触动，对张老师的善举充满崇敬和感动，同时也有因这份恩情带来的温暖和幸福。 2. 故事线 3. 第一段：Sara 顺利毕业，在回顾大学生活时，决定要找出一直资助自己的人。她找到校长询问，校长给了她一个地址。拿到地址后，Sara 怀着激动又紧张的心情准备去探寻真相。 3. 第二段：Sara 来到地址所指的地方，发现是张老师家。她敲门，张老师开门后，Sara 通过交流明白了多年来是张老师默默资助自己。她向张老师表达了深深的感激和敬意，两人分享了感人的时刻。 3. 主旨升华句 3. Kindness is a gift that keeps on giving, lighting the path of those in the dark.（善良是一份不断给予的礼物，照亮黑暗中人们的道路。） 3. The most beautiful act in life is to be an anonymous angel for someone in need.（人生中最美好的行为是成为有需要之人的匿名天使。） 3. True generosity lies not in the amount of money given, but in the love and hope it brings.（真正的慷慨不在于给予金钱的数量，而在于它带来的爱和希望。） 3. A helping hand in times of difficulty can plant the seeds of a beautiful future in one's heart.（在困难时刻伸出的援手能在一个人的心中播下美好未来的种子。） 3. When we are blessed with kindness, we should pass it on like a torch to brighten the world.（当我们被善意眷顾时，我们应该像火炬传递一样将它传递下去，照亮世界。） 写作示范1 Paragraph 1: Time flew and Sara graduated at last. She walked across the stage with pride, her heart filled with a mix of emotions. As she looked back on her college years, the mystery of the anonymous donor lingered in her mind. She knew she owed her success to this kind soul. With a determined heart, she visited Mr. Salim. After explaining her eagerness to know the truth, Mr. Salim handed her an address. With that piece of paper in her hand, Sara felt she was one step closer to uncovering the beautiful secret. Paragraph 2: With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. Her heart pounded as she knocked. When the door opened, and she saw Ms. Chang's warm smile, the realization hit her. Tears welled up in her eyes as Ms. Chang nodded, confirming her suspicion. In that moment, Sara understood the depth of Ms. Chang's kindness. She hugged Ms. Chang tightly, feeling an indescribable sense of gratitude. This encounter made her vow to be a source of kindness in others' lives. 写作示范2 Paragraph 1: Time flew and Sara graduated at last. She held her diploma close, feeling a profound sense of accomplishment. However, the enigma of the anonymous contributor haunted her thoughts. Every month's financial support had been like a warm embrace during her tough college days. She decided to seek the truth. She approached Mr. Salim, who had always been supportive. To her delight, Mr. Salim provided an address after some hesitation. Sara's heart swelled with hope as she prepared to solve this long - held mystery. Paragraph 2: With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang's house. She was nervous and excited. When the door opened, Ms. Chang appeared with a surprised look. As they started talking, the truth unfolded. Sara was overcome with emotion. Ms. Chang's selfless act had been the cornerstone of her education. She felt an intense connection to this amazing teacher. With tears streaming down her face, Sara thanked Ms. Chang from the bottom of her heart, realizing that this was a lesson in love and kindness she would cherish forever. 参考答案 Time flew and Sara graduated at last. It remained a riddle who the kind soul was. As she got a well-paid job and accumulated a large sum of money, Sara decided to pay back the anonymous helper. She went back to her high school and met Mr. Salim, who revealed the truth at her request. It was Ms. Chang, now a retired teacher, who was making all the contribution. Sara was in a flood of tears. She couldn’t wait to visit her. With the address Mr. Salim gave her, Sara stood at the gate of Ms. Chang’s house. The memory of her last talk with Ms. Chang brought tears to her eye. “Without Ms. Chang’s help, I would not be where I am.” As she was lost in thought, the door opened and a kind, grey-haired lady greeted her. Sara choked up when she recognized Ms. Chang. She was so grateful that she hugged her teacher tightly. However hard Sally tried, Ms. Chang wouldn’t accept the money. “Pay it forward,” she said in earnest. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$