2025届高考英语读后续写专题之人与自然类---从抵触到热爱：山林徒步的奇妙蜕变 讲义

题目： 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Edun did not want to go on a hike. She especially did not want to go on a long hike in the mountains that led to a tiny cabin（小木屋）with no electricity and no running water. She wanted to stay home reading a book instead while wrapped in a warm blanket. “Ready?” Mom asked cheerfully after breakfast. Edun looked out of the window and only saw rain, lots of it. “We should go another day,” Edun suggested. “Maybe a hundred years from now.” She worried she would get tired on the hike. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. Mom said it was time to stop worrying and get into the car. Edun’s brother, Will, was waiting in the garage, who wore a camera around his neck. Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He’d started hiking when he was two and loved it. Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didn’t like how it felt against her skin. After about half an hour’s drive, they parked at a trailhead（登山口）. The rain had stopped but the ground was still dripping wet. “We’ll be there by afternoon!” Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away. Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch — “Fox sparrow!” — then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight. Edun rested under a pine tree. “You can’t force me to walk,” Edun said. “You’re right,” said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too, “But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150词左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail.                                          Paragraph 2: Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin.  文章大意 Edun 不想去山里徒步旅行，尤其是要去一个没电没水的小木屋，但在妈妈的坚持下还是出发了。她的哥哥 Will 很喜欢徒步，已经爬过很多山。天气下雨，Edun 穿着不舒服的雨具。到达登山口后，雨停了但地面还是湿的，Will 很快就跑远了，Edun 不想走，在树下休息，妈妈告诉她前方可能有惊喜。 几处伏笔及续写回应 1. 伏笔：Edun 不想去徒步担心无聊，妈妈说前方有惊喜。回应：在续写中 Edun 看到了美丽的风景，体会到了徒步的乐趣。 2. 伏笔：Will 带着相机，喜欢爬山。回应：可能在后续中 Will 会用相机记录下美好的画面。 续写要点 1. 情感线：从 Edun 的不情愿转变为期待和兴奋，最后感受到满足和快乐。 2. 故事线：Edun 开始跟着妈妈走，看到了美丽的风景，包括各种动植物等，最后到达小木屋。 3. 主旨升华句： 1. Sometimes, we need to step out of our comfort zone to discover the beauty around us. 2. The journey that we resist at first may turn out to be a wonderful adventure. 3. Nature has the power to change our minds and bring us unexpected joys. 4. What seems boring at first can become the most memorable experience if we are willing to explore. 5. In the process of exploration, we find not only the beauty of nature but also the courage within ourselves. 写作示范1 Paragraph 1: Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. The air was fresh and filled with the sweet fragrance of wildflowers. As they walked, Edun spotted a colorful butterfly fluttering among the bushes. It was so beautiful that she forgot her tiredness. She also heard the chirping of various birds, which seemed to be singing a harmonious song for them. The sunlight peeked through the leaves, creating beautiful patterns on the ground. Edun began to enjoy the hike and wondered what other surprises awaited her. Paragraph 2: Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. It was surrounded by tall trees and a small stream flowed nearby. The sound of the flowing water was like music to Edun's ears. Will was already there, taking pictures of the amazing scenery. Edun realized that this place was far from boring as she had imagined. She felt a sense of accomplishment and couldn't wait to explore more around the cabin. This experience taught her that new adventures could bring great joy. 写作示范2 Paragraph 1: Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. The wet ground made a squelching sound under her boots, which was not as annoying as she thought. As they moved forward, Edun noticed small mushrooms popping up among the fallen leaves, their caps glistening with raindrops like tiny jewels. The trees on both sides of the trail seemed to form a green tunnel, and the sunlight filtering through the leaves created a magical, dappled effect. She started to feel a sense of curiosity and excitement growing within her. Maybe this hike wouldn't be so bad after all. Paragraph 2: Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. It stood there quietly in a clearing, almost blending with the surrounding nature. A family of rabbits hopped around nearby, their fluffy tails disappearing and reappearing among the grass. The cabin had a rustic charm with its wooden exterior. Edun felt a strange sense of belonging. She realized that if she had stayed at home, she would have missed this beautiful sight. This journey had opened her eyes to the wonders of nature and made her understand that sometimes, we should embrace the unknown. 参考范文：  Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. They passed a waterfall, tiny yet clear. The trickling of water made Edun feel better. To her amazement, as they walked on, there was always something to look for in the wet green woods: animal tracks, wildflowers, little creeks. Soon they caught up with Will, who eagerly showed them the photos he took of the Fox sparrow resting on a branch. Together they went on, strolling past scratchy bushes, climbing over gray rocks and hiking through dwarf trees. Edun loomed above those little trees, exclaiming, “Look, Mom, I’m a giant.” Unknowingly they had already done most of the climb.  Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. Edun and Will started racing up the hill. Finally, there they were in the  small but cozy cabin. Through its window, Edun saw faraway meadows and lakes, and many more mountains, a whole new world emerging before her eyes. That night, everybody stayed up late to see the stars. So many stars clustering up there, Edun proposed, “I need to take a picture of them.” “Click!” The camera froze the moment. Radiant with a smile, Edun approached Mom and hugged her, whispering, “Mom, thank you for having me come!”  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$