应用文写作--投稿--刚刚结束了一场以“美丽的祖国”(Beautiful Motherland) 为主题的摄影比赛，你的作品荣获一等奖 讲义-2025届云南省云南师大附中高三上学期周测英语试题

24年11月云南师大附中高三周测应用文写作 假定你是李华，你校刚刚结束了一场以“美丽的祖国”(Beautiful Motherland) 为主题的摄影比赛，你的作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历。内容包括:     1、介绍你的作品     2、你的感想 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作提纲  一、开头段 点明主题：介绍此次摄影比赛的主题是 “美丽的祖国”，并说明自己在比赛中获得一等奖，引出下文对作品和感想的阐述。 示例：Our school recently held a photography competition themed "Beautiful Motherland", and I'm overjoyed to share that my entry won the first prize. This has been an incredibly rewarding experience for me. 二、主体段（介绍作品） 作品名称与核心画面：描述作品名称，详细描绘作品中的主要元素和场景，展现祖国景色之美。 示例：My photograph, "A Paradise in the Mist", showcases a breathtaking view of a mountain valley in the early morning. The entire valley is blanketed in a thin layer of mist, like a dreamy fairyland. The rising sun's rays pierce through the mist, highlighting the colorful wildflowers and the ancient trees that stand tall as silent guardians. 色彩与氛围营造：提及画面中的色彩搭配以及由此营造出的氛围。 示例：The gentle hues of pink and orange from the sunrise blend with the green of the foliage, creating a harmonious and warm atmosphere. It gives the viewer a sense of tranquility and makes them feel as if they are right there in this idyllic corner of the motherland. 三、结尾段（感想部分） 个人情感表达：阐述获奖时的激动心情。 示例：When I learned that my photo won, I was filled with excitement and pride. It felt like all the efforts I put into capturing this beautiful moment were recognized. 对祖国的新认识与感悟：通过这次比赛和作品创作，谈谈对祖国之美的更深理解。 示例：This experience has made me realize that our motherland is a treasure trove of countless beautiful landscapes. Every inch of the land holds a unique story waiting to be told through our lenses. 对未来的展望：表达自己在摄影方面的进一步期望，比如继续用镜头展现祖国之美。 示例：I'm determined to continue exploring and photographing more of the motherland's beauty. I hope to share these precious images with more people and let them see the amazing charm of our country. 题目分析 很明显，从摄影比赛的宏大主题（“美丽的祖国”Beautiful Motherland）不难看出这是一次“自信”类写作任务。既然要自信，考生最好选取锦绣山河来描述。街头巷尾的小景象很难给到“壮阔秀丽”的画面感。 考生可以考虑选择一些标志性的自然奇观，例如雄伟的长白山、壯观的九寨沟瀑布群、辽阔的青海湖等等。这些场景不仅视觉上具有冲击力，还蕴含着深厚的文化内涵，能够充分展现祖国的自然之美，符合本次作文的写作背景基调设定。 语法上，提醒大家一点：介绍作品内容应该使用一般现在时。 词汇方面，本次写作的挑战是考生平是否有和主题（风景）相关的英文词汇储备，比如： majestic 雄伟的(用于形容山川的宏伟气势) spectacular 壮观的(用于描述震撼人心的美景) vast 辽阔的(表达地域的广阔，如青海湖的辽阔) pristine 原始纯净的(形容未经破坏的大自然) glorious sunrise 壮丽的日出(描述清晨光辉照亮山川) serene 静谧的(用于描述如九寨沟湖面的宁静) snow-capped peaks 白雪覆盖的山峰(形容如长白山顶的雪景) natural wonder 自然奇观(泛指任何标志性的自然景观) breathtaking beauty 令人叹为观止的美(突显自然美的震撼) verdant 葱郁的(描述茂密的森林或绿地) crystal-clear 清澈透明的(形容水质纯净)   写作示范（127words）   My Experience in the “Beautiful Motherland” Photography Contest I am thrilled to share that my photo won first prize in our school’s “Beautiful Motherland” photography contest. I captured this shot of Shangri-La’s Snow Mountain during a family trip last winter vacation. The photo shows the stunning “Golden Sunrise on the Snowy Peaks,” where the morning light illuminates the mountain in a golden glow, highlighting the breathtaking beauty of our country. This experience taught me the importance of patience and attention to detail. I spent hours waiting for the perfect moment to capture the light at just the right angle, and the effort felt worthwhile when I saw the final result. Winning this prize has encouraged me to keep exploring the beauty of our motherland through photography. I hope to inspire others to appreciate and protect these natural wonders of our country. 写作亮点 选材得当是这篇作文的第一大亮点。他选取的云南香格里拉著名的“日照金山”完全符合“美丽的祖国”的主题。 语言方面，展现出了“精炼文字”的小作文基本功。比如，他介绍自己的作品一共只用了30个单词（The photo shows the stunning “Golden Sunrise on the Snowy Peaks,” where the morning light illuminates the mountain in a golden glow，highlighting the breathtaking beauty of our country）. 在表达感想上，做到了既紧扣主题又不过度放大主题。和一下子就把一张普通的照片上升到伟大民族复兴和国家繁荣富强高度的同学不一样，施老师保持了必要克制和理性以及就事论事，他的获奖感受主要是“Winning this prize has encouraged me to keep exploring the beauty of our motherland through photography”。他拍照获得的经验主要是“This experience taught me the importance of patience and attention to detail.” 词汇和表达推荐 capture  (verb) 捕捉，拍摄 a shot of  (noun phrase) 一张……的照片 stunning  (adjective) 惊艳的，极美的 Golden Sunrise on the Snowy Peaks  (noun phrase) 日照金山 illuminates (verb) 照亮，使……明亮 glow  (noun) 光辉，光亮 breathtaking beauty (noun phrase) 令人惊叹的美 worthwhile (adjective) 值得的 photography (noun) 摄影 下水文1 My photo titled "Sunrise over the Great Wall" won the first prize in the photography competition with the theme of "Beautiful Motherland" in our school. In the photo, the sun is just rising, casting a golden glow on the ancient Great Wall. The bricks and the surrounding mountains are bathed in this warm light, showing the magnificent beauty of the combination of history and nature. I'm really excited and honored. This experience makes me realize that a good photograph can capture the essence of our motherland's beauty. It also encourages me to explore more and record more beautiful moments of our country with my camera. I hope more people can feel the charm of our motherland through my photo. 下水文2 I'm Li Hua. I'm extremely delighted that my work won the first prize in the "Beautiful Motherland" photography contest in our school. My photo is named "The Glittering Yangtze River at Night". In this picture, the Yangtze River winds its way under the moonlight. The river surface reflects the lights of the city on both banks, like a long and gorgeous ribbon. The boats on the river are dotted here and there, adding a sense of vitality. This award means a lot to me. It not only validates my photography skills but also deepens my love for our motherland. Through my lens, I can freeze these beautiful moments. It makes me understand that every corner of our country is filled with unique charm. I'll keep on photographing to show the infinite allure of our great motherland to more people. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$