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高一英语应用文训练 感谢信与告别演讲
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢; 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助; 3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
审题与段落:
1) 体裁:感谢信。
2) 人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称You
3) 时态:Alex即将返国,用一般将来时;回顾Alex对“我”的帮助,用一般过去时
其余的用一般现在时
4) 要点:
Para1:根据写作背景(Alex即将回国),点明写信目的(表达对Alex的感激之情)
Para2: 回顾Alex在“我”学习英语时的帮助(可适当增加细节,遇到什么样的问题,Alex是如何帮助我解决这些问题的等等)。 注意时态的运用(一般过去时和一般现在时);
Para3:再次表示感谢并送出临别的祝福。
Version 1:
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help in my English learning. .
Undoubtedly, it was your continuous support that really encouraged me when I was faced with difficulties. Whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my oral English by correcting my pronunciation. But for your selfless assistance, I couldn’t have made such great progress.
Thanks again for your generous help. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
Version 2:
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re returning to your motherland soon, I’m writing to express my deepest gratitude for your help in my English learning.
I can still remember that my English was poor when you first came to our class. It was because of your assistance that my English has improved so much. You’ve introduced me plenty of practical tips, especially in oral English, so that I can communicate with others fluently now. But for your generous help, I couldn’t have gained confidence in speaking English.
Thanks again for your kind help and I hope you can have a nice trip home!
Yours,
Li Hua
感谢信常用句型
Para1:
1. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
2. I’m writing to express/convey/extend my sincere/heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you for your timely/generous help/assistance/what you have done for me.
Para2:
1. It is you who help me out and give me the courage to move forward.
2. It is your enthusiasm, generosity as well as devotion that inspire us and arouse our thirsty for English.
Para3:
1. It’s kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.
2. Thanks again for your kind help./ Again, I would like to express our sincere thanks to you.
巩固练习:告别演讲
假定你是李华,你在英国一所高中的交流学习即将结束。请你写一篇发言稿在班级做一个告别演讲。
内容包括:1、表示感谢;2、你的收获;3、你的期望
写作要求:1 词数80左右;2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,发言稿的开头已经给出。
Good morning, everyone!________________________________________________________
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一:谋篇布局
审题:发言稿
人称:第一、第二人称
对象:英国一所高中的学生
段落:三段式 Para1开场白 Para2感谢和收获 Para3表达期望
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! As you know, my stay here is coming to an end. I really hate to say goodbye to you all because my experience here is such a wonderful and unforgettable one.
Before going back to my homeland China, I want you to know how much I appreciate your kindness and enthusiastic help. Not only have I made great progress in my study but I also have made many good friends, both of which are due to your generous help. What I have gained here is far beyond my previous expectation. I hope our friendship will last wherever we are and I am looking forward to meeting you in China one day.
Thanks again and best wishes to you all!
二:Para2 表达感谢与收获
(一) 表达感谢
1. I would like to express my deepest gratitude to all my teachers for their unwavering support and dedication throughout my time here. Without your guidance, I wouldn't have made such progress.
我想向所有的老师表达我最深的感激之情,感谢你们在我在这里的整个学习期间给予的坚定支持和辛勤付出。没有你们的指导,我无法取得如此大的进步。
2. I am truly grateful for the friendships I have formed here; your kindness and support have made my experience unforgettable, and I will carry these memories with me always.
我非常感激在这里结交的友谊;你们的友善和支持让我的经历变得难以忘怀,我将永远珍惜这些回忆。
3. Thank you all for making this experience so special. From the bottom of my heart, I appreciate everything you have done for me, whether through your encouragement, guidance, or simply your company.
感谢大家让这段经历如此特别。从内心深处,我感谢你们为我所做的一切,无论是通过鼓励、指导,还是你们的陪伴。
(二) 我的收获
1. Improved Language Skills
During my stay here, my English has improved significantly, not only in terms of vocabulary and grammar but also in my ability to communicate more confidently in both spoken and written forms. 在这里的学习让我显著提高了我的英语水平,不仅在词汇和语法方面有所进步,而且在口语和写作交流中也变得更加自信。
2. Cultural Understanding and Appreciation
I have gained a greater understanding of British culture, customs, and traditions, which has helped me appreciate the diversity of the world and recognize the value of cultural exchange.
我对英国的文化、习俗和传统有了更深入的了解,这帮助我更好地欣赏世界的多样性,也认识到文化交流的重要价值。
3. Critical Thinking and Problem-Solving Skills
The way of learning here has encouraged me to think more critically and approach problems in creative and effective ways, which will be valuable for my future studies and career.
这里的学习方式鼓励我更加批判性地思考问题,尝试用创造性和有效的方式解决问题,这将对我未来的学业和职业发展大有裨益。
4. Increased Independence and Confidence
Living and studying abroad has taught me how to manage my time and take on responsibilities more effectively, and I have become more independent and confident.
在异国他乡的生活和学习教会了我如何更有效地管理时间和承担责任,这使我变得更加独立和自信。
5. Lasting Friendships and Connections
I have made lifelong friends here and these connections will continue to enrich my life, offering new perspectives and opportunities in the future.
我在这里结交了终生的朋友,这些友谊和联系将继续丰富我的生活,未来为我提供新的视角和机会。
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