Unit 4 课时5 写作-【宝典训练】2024-2025学年新教材七年级上册英语高效课堂(沪教版2024)

Unit 4 The Earth 课时5写作 例文星视 ● 你们班准备开一个主题为“保护地球，从我做起”的班会，你想在会上以“What should we do to protect the Earth?”为主题进行发言。你认为我们只有一个地球，我们应该好好爱护她，但地球上的污 染越来越多，所以保护地球非常重要。 写作要点：1.节约纸和笔： 2.不乱扔垃圾； 3.离开房间要关灯：洗完手要关水龙头： 4.步行，骑自行车或乘公交车。 写作要求：60~80词。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考范文】 What should we do to protect the Earth? We have only one Earth,so we should love and take good care of her.But there is much pollution on the Earth.It is important to protect the Earth.But what can we do?I hope we start with small things and do the following things together:First,save paper and pens.Second,we; shouldn't throw rubbish here and there.Third,remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and remember to turn off the taps when we finish washing hands.Fourth,we can walk,ride a bike or take a bus when we go out. The Earth is our home.Let's try our best to protect her! 【写作素材参考】 waste浪费 reduce减少 pollution污染 prevent阻止 plastic塑料 protect保护 bum燃烧 government政府 rubbish垃圾 produce产生 ocean海洋 chemical化学品 overfishing过度捕捞 temperature温度 energy能量；能源 water pollution水污染 coal煤 tum.…into.把…变成…。 harmful有害的 stop doing sth..停止做某事 beautiful美丽的 cut down减少；砍伐 ●》954 宝典测综英语七年级·上册（牛津版】 clean up清理；打扫 : as a result结果 global warming全球变暖 had better do sth.最好做某事 greenhouse effect温室效应 (be)full of/(be)filled with充满；装满 plant trees植树 make a contribution to为…做贡献 take action采取行动 play a part in在…中起作用 课时过关 以“How to make Shenzhen more beautiful?”为题，写一份关于环境污染的调查报告，并给出保护环 境的措施，80词左右。 写作要点：1.深圳有哪些污染： 2.这些污染是什么导致的： 3.我们可以做哪些事情来保护环境。 【参考词汇】短语：stop.from,dirty water,hrow..into,yone's best,public transport（公共交通) 句式：.should do something to..,keep..clean,it is important for..todo.… (一)造句训练 1.随着社会的发展，深圳出现了各种各样的污染问题；比如，水污染、空气污染和噪音污染。 2.人们乱丢垃圾导致了土地以及水的污染。 3.许多汽车和工厂产生大量废气，使空气污染变得越来越严重。 4.人们大量砍伐树木、建造房子，许多地方出现严重的噪音污染。 5.我们应该将垃圾分类(sot),养成良好的习惯。 6.我们应尽可能地乘坐公共汽车或者骑车上学。 7.此外，我们可以多种树，节约用水、用电。 ●p964 Unit 4 The Earth (二)连句成文 How to make Shenzhen more beautiful? 评分标准 内容 结构 语法与词汇 表达与书写 创新性 完整性：作文内容 语法准确性：作文 篇章结构：作文是 是否涵盖了题目 中是否出现严重 要求的所有要点， 否具有明确的开 的语法错误，如主 头、主体和结尾， 表达清晰度：句子 观点新颖性：作文 是否完整表达了 谓不一致、时态错 各部分之间是否 是否简洁明了，易 中是否提出了新颖 作者的观点或故 误等。 过渡自然。 于理解。 独特的观点或 事情节。 词汇丰富性：是否 段落划分：段落划 连贯性：句子之 看法。 深度与广度：作文 使用了丰富多样 分是否合理，每个 间、段落之间是否 表达创新性：是否 内容是否具有深 的词汇，包括同义 段落是否围绕一 衔接紧密，是否使 使用了创新性的表 度和广度，能否展 词、反义词等，以 个中心意思展开。 用了适当的连接 达方式或修辞手 开深入的讨论或 及准确的短语和 句子结构：句子结 词和过渡句。 法，使作文更具吸 描绘生动的场景。 成语。 构是否多样化，是 书写工整，段落 引力。 逻辑性：内容是否 拼写与标点：拼写 否使用了适当的 分明。 条理清晰，各段落 是否正确，标点符 从句和复合句。 之间是否有明确 号使用是否规范。 的逻辑关系。 ●p97《●七年级上册 参考答案 二、1. freezing 2. deserts 3. deepest 4. wonderful is a nice place to live in. But there are many kinds of pollution. 5. height 6. to 7. Other 8. lovely 9. provides 10. the On the one hand. people throw rubbish evervwhere and it makes 三.1-5 DBACC the land very dirtv. On the other hand. many factories produee much 课时3 语法 waste. It pollutes the river and kills many fishes. It also pollutes the 课堂10分钟 air. So we must take action at once. 一.1. are 2. is 3. are 4. are 5. am First, we should throw less rubbish and put rubbish into the 6. is 7. Is 8. is 9. are 10. are rubbish bins. Then, we should plant more trees. We shouldn't eut 二、1. There is a bus near the hill. down trees or destroy them. After that, we should not put dirty water 2. There are some women doctors in the hospital. into rivers. At last, we should use public transport. 3. There isn't a piece of bread on the table. I think Shenzhen will be more beautiful if we ean take these 4. Is there a picture and a clock on the wall? aetions. 5. Are there any pigs on your farm? No, there aren't. Unit 5 Off to space 三、1. There is a lot of pollution on Earth, and it's important for us to 课时1 词汇 protect the planet for our future. 课时精讲:4. expression 5. breathe 2. here are some plastic bottles in the black trash bin. Please put them in the blue trash bin 课堂10分钟 一.1. weight 3. There are some fish bones in the red trash bin. You should put 2. breath 3. experimental 4. preparation 5. opportunity them in the green trash bin. 6. introduce 4. There are some broken glass pieces in the blue trash bin. You 7. experienced 8. poet 9. express should put them in the red trash bin. 10. determine 5. Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility. Let's do 二.1. collection:eolleeting 2.leave 3. kilometres our best to sort waste properly. 4. tie 5. lower 课时4 听说 6. weigh: weight 7. breathe 8. adventare 9. experimental 一,略 10. prepared: preparation 二.1. This afternoon. 2. A pair of shoes. 三.1. can't wait 2. took :hours to complete the task 3. Draw./He wants to draw there. 3. tie;to 4. so that 5. as many:as 4. In the kitchen. 5. Tea. /A cup of tea 课时2阅读 6. 38 dollars. /She should pay 38 dollars. 课时精讲 7. Class Four./He is in Class Four 8. Help others./Help other people 1. takes (2)I spend three hours practising spoken English. 9. Yes. he does. 10. By the river. (4)eosts: cost 三、 There are many things we can do to proteet our Earth. First. 【小试牛刀】(1)A;(2)C;(3)A:(4)C we can ride bicycles and use public transport more often. This 2. C 3. amazed 4. A 5. different helps fight air pollution. Second, we can plant more trees to 6. A;(1)put on;(2) wears;(3)dress;(4)B 7. difficult make the Earth more beautiful. Third, we throw away a lot of 课堂10分钟 rubbish every day, We can recycle as much as we can. Fourth. 一.1. space station 2. do exercise we can take our own shopping bags to the supermarket. Fifth. 3. take photos 4. get into orbit we can turm off the lights if we don't use them. Sixth, we can 5. thousands of 6. one of... save the water as mueh as we can. 7. travel into space 8. take sh. to... 1. What did you do to proteet the Earth? /What things have you 9. can't wait to do sth. lo. tic...to... done to protect the Earth? 11. so that.. 12. have to =must 13. strange stranger 2. Why is there much pollution on the Earth? 14. take as many photos as I can 15.float away 课堂10分钟 1-5 FABDC 二.1.students 2. will leave 4. floating 3. from 5.to 课时5 写作 6.s0 7.todo 8. weaker 9.a 课时过关 10. wonderful 三.1-5 CBDBC (一]1. With the development of society. there are many kinds of 课时3 语法 pollutions in Shenzhen, such as water pollution, air pollution and noise pollution. 课堂10分钟: 一.1.will: arrive 2. People throw rubbish everywhere and it makes the land and 2. won't write 3. will: take part in water dirty. 4. are going to 5. am not going to he 3. Many cars and factories produce much waste gas. It causes 6. Is; going to make 二.1.to have the air pollution to beeome worse and worse. 2. will walk/am going to walk 3. goes;will go 4. People cut down a large number of trees and build houses. It 4. swimming 5.is flying causes serious noise pollution in many places. 6. did: picked 5. We should sort the rubbish and form good habits. 7. will visit/is going to visit 8. is going to be/will be 9. goes 6. We should try our best to use the publie buses or ride a bike 10. am planning to go to school. 三.1. Where are you going to travel tomorrow? 7. What's more, we can plant more trees, save water and 2. Li Ming is going to swim at the seaside/beach this weekend electricity as well. 3. If my bike weren't broken, I would go for a picnic by bike. (二) How to make Shenzhen more beautiful? 4. The storn is coming. Let's go home as soon as possible! Shenzhen is a wonderful city. Many people visit it every vear. It 5. Will you visit the Moon Garden?