Unit 2 课时5 写作-【宝典训练】2024-2025学年新教材七年级上册英语高效课堂(沪教版2024)

七年纸上册参考普案 6.After school I often join musie elubs and I play wonderful talks to some students and correets papers.She often has a music with my friends. meeting on Wednesdays.In the aftemoon,she teaches a lesson 7.My school life is exciting and colourful,and I like my school and plays table tennis with her students.Then she walks home at life. 6:00p.m 课时2阅读 1.How many elasses does Ms Li teach in the morning? 课时精讲 2.When does Ms Li go to bed at night?/What time does Ms Li go to sleep at night? 1.I have a lot to say about the new movie I watched last night. 2.(1)You can solve this maths problem by drawing pictures. 课堂O分钟：I一5 CAFDB (2)to keep 课时5写作 3.How interesting the school activities are!/What interesting 课时过关判 school activities they are! (-)1.I am a junior high school student.I get up at 7:00.After I 4.I like to study from 8:00 in the morning to 5:00 in the afternoon. wash my face and brush my teeth,I have breakfast at 7:30. 5.I enjoy spending my free time reading books in the library. 2.I usually go to school on foot.I must get to school to read 6.After school.what club did you join in? English before 8 o'clock. 7.This is my colourful school life,I look forward to your reply. 8.(1)or(2)of 3.I spend about 2 hours doing my homework every day. 4.I usually have lunch at 12 o'clock.Then I have an afternoon 课堂0分钟 nap for about two hours to prepare for the lessons in the 1.brush teeth 2.listen to music 3.do the dishes 4.do some reading 5.I have a lot of hobbies,such as playing basketball.reading 5.do the housework 6.teach us by playing games books and playing chess. 7.a great way to do sth.8.do morning exereise 6.I usually go to chess club to leam to play the game of go at 9.junior high school 10.take part in/join in 14:30. 11.look forward to 12.after-school activities 7.I often have supper at 18:00.After supper,I spend 2 hours 13.go swimming reading books before I go to bed. 14.have a good time/enjoy oneself 8.Although I feel very busy every day.I think my school life is 15.It's exeiting to do sth. very interesting. 二，1.started 2.and 3.a (二)Dear Tim, 4.playing 5.with 6.foods I am very happy to receive your letter.Now let me tell you 7.usually 8.interesting 9.activities 10.to be something about my daily life. 三，1一5 ABDCC I am a junior high school student.I get up at 7:00.After I 课时3语法 wash my face and brush my teeth,I have breakfast at 7:30.I 课堂0分钟] usually go to school on foot.I must get to school to read English before 8 o'clock.I spend about 2 hours doing my homework every 一1.studies 2.rides 3.unusual day.I usually have lunch at 12 o'clock.Then I have an afteroon 4.ended 5.playing 6.rang nap for about two hours to prepare for the lessons in the afternoon.I 7.goes 8.teeth 9.Twice 10.yourselves have a lot of hobbies,such as playing basketball,reading hooks and 1.They don't swim in this swimming pool in summer. playing chess.I usually go to the club to learn to play the game of 2.That blue bird flies here every moming. go at 14:30.After that I play basketball with my elassmates.I often 3.Do they take a bus to school every day? have supper at 18:00.Before I go to bed at 21:30.I read my 4.When does Ann go to violin lessons? favourite books. 5.How often do your parents visit your grandfather? Although I feel very busy every day.I think my schoul life is My deskmate is Li Ming,and his school life is very busy.He very interesting. gets up at 6:30 every morning,and he usually goes to school by Thank you for reading my email bus.Li Ming is an excellent student.He is good at almost all Yours sincerely, the subjeets.Because his home is far away from the school.so Li Hua he has lunch at the school.He finishes his homework at noon every day.and then starts his lunch break.Every afternoon,he Unit 3 The Seasons takes part in after-school activities actively.He is good at 课时1词汇 playing basketball,so he joined the basketball club this term. 课时精讲 After school,Li Ming has to help his parents with the housework and then start reviewing his lessons.He usually falls asleep at 1.deeply 2.sandy 3.features 4.southern 5.across 10p.m.He sets a good example for us. 6.alive 7.following 8.divided 9.decision 10.traditional 课时4听说 课堂0分钟 略 一，l.sand 2.southern 3.clearly 1.Table tennis./Jack likes table tennis best. 4.loud 5.peace 6.reasonable 2.Once a week./He plays it once a week. 7.divided 8.following 9.decision 10.cultural 3.Australia.4.English.5.Go swimming. 6.Tim's sister. 7.At 6:30./She always gets up at 6:30. .1.followers 2.alive 3.brightly 4.peaceful 8.Her mother./Judy's mother.9.By bus. 5.going 6.exciting 7.reasonable 8.through 10.Yes,she is./Yes,Judy is good at Chinese 三，I,In spring,the weather starts to get warm, Ms Li is Mary's English teacher.Every morning.she gets up 2.It is exciting to take a trip during the springtime. at 6:00 a.m.She usually goes jogging before breakfast.She 3.It is hot in summer.Many people like to go to the beach and always walks to school and arrives at eight o'elock.At noon,she swim in the sea.宝典训综英语·七年级·上册（牛津版） 课时5写作 例文星现 假如Ly是你的同学，请写一篇日记，以时间的顺序介绍Ly的校园生活。80词左右。 写作要点：1.主要作息时间及内容； 2.课余爱好及特长： 3.人物评价 参考范文 Monday September 16th Sunny Lily's School Life Lily is a junior high school student.She gets up at 6 a.m.every day.She does exercise from 6:15 a.m.to 6:30 a.m.and then has breakfast.She walks to school at 7:30 a.m.Classes begin at 8:00 a.m.At noon she has lunch at school.Classes are over at 5:00 p.m.She is good at English and P.E.She often goes swimming or plays badminton after school.Then she does her homework carefully.Sometimes she helps her mother cook supper.She always eats healthy food. She seldom eats sweets or cakes.At last she goes to bed at 10:30 p.m. Her school life is very interesting.She is a good student.We all would like to make friends with her. 【写作素材参考】 finish完成 physics物理 seldom不常：很少 chemistry化学 colourful丰富多彩的 history历史 activity活动 eography地理 spend花（时间）：度过 biology生物 meal一顿饭 labour劳动 cook烹饪 IT(Information Technology)信息技术 helpful有帮助的 daily lives日常生活 housework家务 brush one's teeth刷牙 meaningful有意义的 0 to school去上学 idy整理 full of energ精力充沛的 spare空闲的 have classes上课 exercise锻炼 do one's homework做作业 busy忙碌的 listen to music听音乐 practise练习 the breaks between classes Chinese语文 课间休息 maths数学 have a pienic去野餐 English英语 as usual和平常一样 ●》624 Unit 2 School life review lessons复习功课 make full use of充分利用 once a week一周一次 do some cleaning打扫卫生 take part in参加 play the piano弹钢琴 preview lessons预习功课 play the game of go下围棋 do some reading阅读 课时过关 ● 假如你是李华，你交了一个外国笔友Tm,向你询问你的日常生活，请你根据下表回信，介绍自己 的日常生活，80词左右。 写作要点：1.主要作息时间及内容； 2.课余爱好及特长； 3.我对校园生活的评价。 7:00 起床，刷牙，洗脸 7:30-8:00 早餐 8:00-8:30 读英语 8:30~10:30 写作业 11:30~14:00 午饭，休息 14:30~17:30 在社团学习围棋，与同学打篮球 18:00 晚饭 19:00-21:00 阅读 21:30 睡觉 (一)造句训练： 1.我是一名初中生。我7：00起床，然后刷牙、洗脸，7：30吃早餐。 2.我通常走路上学。我必须在8点前到达学校读英语。 3.我每天大约花两个小时写作业。 4.我通常在12点钟吃午饭，然后我会休息大约2个小时以准备下午的课程。 5.我有很多课余爱好。比如打篮球、看书、下棋。 6.我通常在14：30去社团学习围棋。(the game of go围棋) ●p634● 宝典训练英语·七年级·上册（牛津版） 7.我经常下午6点吃晚饭，晚饭后我会花两个小时读书，然后再去睡觉。 8.虽然我每天都很忙碌，但是我觉得我的校园生活很有趣。 (二)连句成文： Dear Tim, Thank you for reading my email. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 评分标准 内容 结构 语法与词汇 表达与书写 创新性 完整性：作文内容 语法准确性：作文 篇章结构：作文是 是否涵盖了题目 中是否出现严重 否具有明确的开 要求的所有要点， 的语法错误，如主 头、主体和结尾， 表达清晰度：句子 观点新颖性：作文 是否完整表达了 谓不一致、时态错 各部分之间是否 是否简洁明了，易 中是否提出了新颖 作者的观点或故 误等。 过渡自然。 于理解。 独特的观点或 事情节。 词汇丰富性：是否 段落划分：段落划 连贯性：句子之 看法。 深度与广度：作文 使用了丰富多样 分是否合理，每个 间、段落之间是否 表达创新性：是否 内容是否具有深 的词汇，包括同义 段落是否围绕一 衔接紧密，是否使 使用了创新性的表 度和广度，能否展 词、反义词等，以 个中心意思展开。 用了适当的连接 达方式或修辞手 开深入的讨论或 及准确的短语和 句子结构：句子结 词和过渡句。 法，使作文更具吸 描绘生动的场景。 成语。 构是否多样化，是 书写工整，段落 引力。 逻辑性：内容是否 拼写与标点：拼写 否使用了适当的 分明； 条理清晰，各段落 是否正确，标点符 从句和复合句。 之间是否有明确 号使用是否规范。 的逻辑关系。 ●>644e