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(新科技的出现与应用;新科技/人工智能利弊谈;个人隐私与网络安全;航天科技发展)
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九全 Unit6发明 九上Unit4惊奇的科学
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开头句
1.Wearenowlivinginaninformationage,in
whichTV,celphonesandtheWebarewidely
used.
2.Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtech
nology,artificialinteligencebecomesmoreand
morepopularinourdailylife.
3.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology
hasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.
中间经典选段[选自2024中考真题优秀范文]
角度1 新科技的出现与应用
★Theelderlyassistantrobotistalandlooks
verycutewithbigeyes.Helookslikeafriendly
person,makingiteasierfortheelderlytoaccept
him.Therobotisofgreatuse.First,hecangive
theelderlymedicineontimewhentheelderlyare
il.Hewilalsocalforhelpatonceiftheelderly
meetdanger.Besides,therobotcandosomecook
ingandsweepthefloorfortheelderly,which
makestheirlifeeasier.Lastbutnotleast,heis
goodatcommunicatingwiththeelderly.Hecantel
storiesandjokes,bringingjoyandlaughterintothe
lifeoftheelderly.
★ThepowerfulappisnamedEnglishTalent,
whichnotonlyexplainsalthelanguageknowledge
thatyouarelearningintextbooksbutalsoincludes
plentyofdailyEnglishconversations,fascinating
Englisharticles,Englishmovies,Englishsongsand
soon.
角度2 新科技/人工智能的利弊
★ArtificialInteligencecanchatwithpeople,
whichcanhelpsolvepeoplesproblems.Forexam
ple,itcanhelpthestudentsdohomeworkcorectly
andsolvethesubjectproblems.Besides,itcande
signpicturesinashorttime.However,italsohas
manydisadvantages.Ifwealwaysdependonit,it
wilmakeuslazyinmind.Itsappearancewilre
ducepeoplesjobopportunities.
角度3 个人隐私与网络安全
★Firstofal,protectourpersonalinforma
tion.Dontgiveawayourpersonalinformationlike
ournamesoraddresses.Second,wemustntclick
onanystrangelinksoremailsinordertoavoid
moneyloss.Third,nevermeetstrangerswechat
withonlineandneverbelievewhatthestrangerssay
online.Onlywhenwefolowtherulesabovecanwe
buildahealthyandsafeonlineworld.
角度4 航天科技发展
★Lastweekend,ourschoolorganizedavisit
totheScienceandTechnologyMuseum.Isawmany
modelsofplanes,satelitesandrocketsthatIhad
neverseenbefore.Chinahadgreatachievementsin
spaceexploration.
结尾句
1.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoderntechnology
bringsusconvenienceandcomfortinlife.
2.Alinal,justasthesayinggoes,eachcoinhas
twosides.AIproductshavebothadvantagesand
shortcomings.IbelievethatifweuseAIina
corectway,itwilbringusamoreconvenient
lifeinthefuture.
俗语/谚语
1.Everycoinhastwosides.事物都有两面性。
2.Technologyisadoubleedgedsword.科技是把
双刃剑
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话题写作培优册
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随着科技的迅速发展,我们逐渐走向了一个数字化和智能化的时代。你校英文刊正在开展以
“SmartProductsinOurLife”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享一个智能产
品对我们生活的帮助和影响[如:智能手机、聊天机器人(chatingrobots)、扫地机器人、智能灯具、智
能音箱等]。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:本文是一篇 ;
②时态:讲述科技对我们的生活带来的帮助和影响时,以 为主,介绍科技未来的发展时用
;
③人称:介绍新的智能产品时用第 人称,介绍“我”对于智能科技产品的使用体验时用第
人称。
二、构思框架
第一段 引入话题:引入智能产品并指出它们对生活产生的影响
参考句型:①Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,wecan爥;②communicatewithsb.;
③bringgreatconvenienceandprogresstosb./sth.
例:Peoplegiveorderstosmartlights.Somesmartlightscanworkbythemselves.(用if引导
的条件状语从句升格)
第二段 具体阐述智能产品给我们生活带来的利与弊
参考句型:①dependonsth.;②loseonesabilitiestodosth.
例:Somestudentswillosetheirabilitiestodothingsbythemselves.Somestudentsdependon
smartproductsverymuch.(用so爥that爥引导的结果状语从句升格)
第三段 结语:要正确使用智能产品
参考句型:①justas爥;②Ibelievethat爥
例:Weusesmartproductscorectly.Smartproductswilbringusamoreconvenientlifeinthe
future.(用if引导的条件状语从句升格)
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三、分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
SmartProductsinOurLife
Nowadays,wecanseealkindsofsmart
productsinourlife.Forexample,smartphones
canmakeworkandstudymorequickly.And
chatingrobotscancommunicatewithpeople
whilecleaningrobotscanhelpwiththehouse
work.Theyalbringmanybenefitstooursocie
ty.
However,becauseoftheuseofsmart
technology,manyworkerswillosetheirjobs.
Also,somestudentsdependonsmartproducts,
Ithinktheywillosetheirabilitiestodothings
bythemselves.
Alinal,smartproductshavebothad
vantagesanddisadvantages.Aslongasweuse
themcorectly,itwilbringusamoreconve
nientlifeinthefuture.
SmartProductsinOurLife
Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,we
canseealkindsofsmartproductsinourdailylife.Forexam
ple,smartphonescanmakeworkandstudymoreeficient.
Andchatingrobotscancommunicatewithpeoplewhileclean
ingrobotscanhelpthewithhousework.Whatsmore,some
smartlightscanworkbythemselvesifpeoplegiveordersto
them.Theyalbringgreatconvenienceandprogresstoourso
ciety.
However,withsmarttechnologybeingwidelyused,
manyworkerswillosetheirjobs.Also,somestudentsdepend
onsmartproductssomuchthattheywillosetheirabilitiesto
dothingsbythemselves.
Alinal,justaseverycoinhastwosides,smartprod
uctshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ibelievethatif
weusethemcorectly,itwilbringusamoreconvenientlife
inthefuture.
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一、句子升格练习
1.正是科学的发展创造了许多更好的发明,它们
帮助我们生活得更好。(用Itis+被强调部分
+that爥升格)
2.Theelectriccarseemstobefaster.(用Ifind+
that从句升格)
3.Newenergyvehiclesarecheap.Newenergyvehi
clesareenvironmentalyfriendly.(用notonly爥
butalso爥升格)
4.Electricitycanbegotindiferentways.Electric
carsarepopularwithmanypeople.(用because
引导的原因状语从句升格)
二、书面表达
从生物的结构、科幻小说的涌现、太空奥秘
的探索、“嫦娥六号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再
到智能家居的日益普及,从古至今,人类对科学
的追求从未止步。你校英文刊正在开展以“Sci
enceShapesOurLife”为题的征文活动,请你用英
语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿,分享你对这句话的
理解及你的一次亲身经历。
要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
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云南英语(课标版)
Lastmonth,ourteacheraskedustomakeabook
report.Ourteammembersdecidedtoworktogethertodothe
task.Ilikereadingnovelsandalwayshaveabeter
understandingofthecharacters,soIoferedtopickoutthe
excitingpartsofthenovel.MyfriendAmysearchedforsome
informationaboutthewriterwhileothermembersreadsome
reviewsonline.Throughtheteamwork,thereportgotgreat
success.
Fromthisexperience,Ibelievethatworkingtogethernot
onlybringsushappinessbutalsoleadsustosuccess.
说明文范文
ManyHandsMakeLightWork
ThereisanoldsayinginChina,“Unityisstrength.”It
telspeopletheimportanceofteamwork.Bydiscussingwith
membersintheteam,wecancomeupwiththebeterideas.
Buthowtobeagoodteammember?Herearesomeadvicefor
you.
First,thereisnodoubtthatcommunicationcanhelpus
knowmoreaboutourteammates.Weshouldlistentoother
peopleactivelyandexpressourselvesbravely.Second,work
togetheronprojects.Wheneverybodyaddsfuel,theflames
risehigh.Finaly,trustyourteammates.
Alinal,teamworkplaysanimportantroleinourdaily
life.Letsworktogethertocreateabrighterfuture.
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写作剖析
一、①记叙文 ②一般过去时;一般现在时 ③三;一
二、第一段 TraditionalChinesestoriesplayanimportantrole
inChineseculture.;第二段 Theturtleinsistedonpuling
himselfslowlytotheend,thoughhewasquitetired.;第
三段 Ishouldtakeeachtaskseriouslynotonlyinmy
study,butalsoinmylifeinthefuture.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival,whichhas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustomforhundredsof
years.
2.IliketheWaterFestivalbecausepeoplecansplashwater
oneachothertoexpresstheirbestwishes.
3.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandafulmoon
aresymbolsofbeingtogether.
4.Nomaterhowpeoplecelebratetheholiday,thespiritis
stilthesame.
二、记叙文范文
MyFavoriteFestival
MyfavoritefestivalistheWaterFestival,whichhas
beenhandeddownasanationalcustom forhundredsof
years.IliketheWaterFestivalbecausepeoplecansplash
wateroneachothertoexpresstheirbestwishesandhopeto
washawaydiseases.
Duringthefestival,wecanwatchtraditionalcelebra
tionssuchasdragonboatracing,raising,watersplashingand
soon.DaiandWapeoplealsodresseduptocelebratethe
WaterFestivalwithtourists.
说明文范文
MyFavoriteFestival
WheneverIamaskedaboutmyfavoritefestival,Itel
peoplethatitisMidAutumnFestival.Itsbecausethefesti
valbringsfamiliestogether.
Eatingmooncakesisthemostimportanttraditionofthis
festival.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandaful
moonaresymbolsofbeingtogether.Intheevening,families
havedinnertogetherandthengoouttoadmirethefulmoon.
Besides,myfamilyandIareusedtogoingonatrip.Itofers
usagoodchancetorelaxbecausepeoplearesmalerthanon
otherpublicholidays.
Nomaterhowpeoplecelebratetheholiday,thespiritis
stilthesame.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;一般将来时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Somesmartlightscanworkbythemselvesifpeo
plegiveorderstothem.;第二段 Somestudentsdepend
onsmartproductssomuchthattheywillosetheirabili
tiestodothingsbythemselves.;第三段 Ifweusesmart
productscorectly,theywilbringusamoreconvenient
lifeinthefuture.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisthedevelopmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyin
ventionsthathelpuslivebeter.
2.Ifindthattheelectriccarseemstobefaster.
3.Newenergyvehiclesarenotonlycheapbutalsoenviron
mentalyfriendly.
4.Electriccarsarepopularwithmanypeoplebecauseelec
tricitycanbegotindiferentways.
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二、 ScienceShapesOurLife
Inthepastfewyears,sciencehasdevelopedathigh
speedandplayedanimportantroleinourdailylives.Itisthe
developmentofsciencethatcreatesmanyinventionsthathelp
uslivebeter.
Recently,myfamilydecidedtoknowthenewoftrans
portationbyorderinganewenergyvehicle.Ifindthatthee
lectriccarseemstobefasterandsmoothercomparedwiththe
traditionalcar.Whatsmore,newenergyvehiclesarenoton
lycheapbutalsoenvironmentalyfriendly.Electriccarsare
popularwithmanypeoplebecauseelectricitycanbegotin
diferentways,suchassolarpowerandwindenergy.
Inthefuture,Ihopewecanhavemoretechnologylike
this.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourcountry.We
shouldstudyhardandtryourbesttomakeitstronger,beter
andmorebeautiful.
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写作剖析
一、①说明文 ②一般现在时 ③三;一
二、第一段 Itisveryimportantforustogetclosetonature.;
第二段 Getingclosetonaturecanhelpustorelax,
whichmakesusknowourselvesandtheworldaroundus
beter.;第三段 Weshouldspendsometimeenjoyingthe
beautyofnatureandprotecttheenvironment.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting
potatoesinthefield.
2.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearnedalot
andenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.
3.Welearnedhowtogrowvegetablesandpickfruits,which
washelpfultoourlifeinthefuture.
二、记叙文范文
MySchoolTrip
LastSaturday,ourclasstookaschooltriptothefarm.
Aftergetingofthebus,wewalkedalongthemountainroad
forhalfanhourbeforewereachedthefarm.Thescenery
alongthewaywasverybeautiful.
Whenwearivedatthefarm,thefarmerwascolecting
potatoesinthefield.HetookustotheFruitFarmandtaught
ushowtopickapples.Wepickedmanyapplesandate
some.Iveneverhadsuchdeliciousapples.Then,wewent
fishingbytheriver.Wecaughtsomefishandgavethemto
thefarmer.Thefarmershowedushowtofeedthechickens
afterthat.
Afterhavingabigdinneronthefarm,wewentbackto
school.AlthoughIfeltalitletiredafterthetrip,Ilearneda
lotandenjoyedmyselfonthefarm.Ilookforwardtovisiting
thefarmagain.
说明文范文
MySchoolTrip
Ihadawonderfulschooltripwithmyclassmateslast
month.Wewenttoafarmandhadfun.Duringthetrip,we
learnedalot.Herearesomeofmythoughtsaboutit.
Firstly,weexperiencedlifeinperson.Welearnedhow
togrowvegetablesandpickfruits,whichwashelpfultoour
lifeinthefuture.Secondly,wegotclosetonatureandtook
infreshair.Thatmadeusgetaclearmind.Thirdly,weun
derstoodtheimportanceofteamworkandcooperation.By
workingtogether,welearnedhowtohelpandencourageoth
ersandalsomademorefriends.
Inmyopinion,aschooltripisverygoodforus.Ihope
wewilhavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactiv
ities.
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一、①说明文 ②一般现在时;现在完成时 ③一
二、第一段 Thatswhyweshouldtryourbesttoprotectthe
earth.第二段Letsalworktogethertospreadtheimpor
tanceofenvironmentalprotectiontotheworldandencour
ageotherstojoininit.;第三段Lovetheearthasitisour
onlyhome.
三阶 写作实战
一、1.Itisimportantforustocreateanenvironmentaly
friendlysociety.
2.Itcannotonlyreducerubbishpolutionbutalsorecycle
rubbish.
3.Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter
life.
二、 RubbishSortingStartswithMe
Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheim
portanceofrubbishsorting.Itcannotonlyreducerubbish
polutionbutalsorecyclerubbish.Itisimportantforusto
createanenvironmentalyfriendlysociety.
Firstofal,wecanlearntheknowledgeofrubbishsor
tingthroughbooksandtheInternet.Besides,wecanjoinin
volunteerservicetohelppeoplesorttheirrubbish.Second,
weshouldthrowalkindsofrubbishindiferentcoloredrub
bishbins.Third,wecanmakeoldclothesintoshoppingbags
andwasteintoart.Themostimportantthingistoreducethe
useofplasticbags.
Ifalofustryourbesttosortrubbish,welleadabeter
life.Alofuscandoourparttoprotecttheenvironmentand
encourageotherstosorttheirrubbish.Letspultogetherand
takeactionfromnowon.
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